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| The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Fatalveli(m): 12:44pm On Feb 02, 2015 |
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| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Fatalveli(m): 12:46pm On Feb 02, 2015 |
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| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by zyzxx(m): 12:56pm On Feb 02, 2015 |
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| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Fatalveli(m): 12:27pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
zyzxx:welcome. Tags. Man on fire, d9ty7, dyoung, kingphilips, techno, twomansquad, laykorn, saw, stuff, divepen, coolval, feemblez, donphil, sexysaphire, candy, tiffany, repogirl, almacherish  , iceberylin, cybershow, thronekid, kinwayne, tattesco and em, I actually don't have a computer in my cerebrum. But ya'll are all invited!I'll update once I've charged my cell. |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by kinwayne(m): 2:24pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
Following bomber to bomber..... *in zeddicus zul zoranders voice* Ride on boss! |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Fatalveli(m): 4:22pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
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| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Fatalveli(m): 4:23pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
kinwayne:Wlcm bro 1 Like |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by almacherish(f): 4:25pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
Am here.... Tnx Fatalveli: |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Nobody: 5:01pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
Fatalveli:Wait, Wait, Wait Broh, we'r writing now? Reply ASAP! |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by stuff46(m): 6:12pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
Fatalveli: dnt really get the mention cause of the 46 buh iam here Btw who be twomansquad? And hope the story never end? |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by tattesco(m): 7:55pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
Fatalveli:I don take a seat o. |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Nobody: 8:33pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
Fatal. This proves to interesting sir. Ride on. Ayamlaykorn |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Fatalveli(m): 8:51pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
laykorn:Wlcm bro. Wlcm @ tattesco. I sight you bro @stuff Almacherish . I'm crushing on you ooo, I envy ugonna. Abeg go update your story |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Cybershow(m): 9:04pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
Kai e dae interestin o..i dn show wit 100 crete of boil egg abeg join me if u want o Fatalveli:Kai e dae interestin o..i dn show wit 100 crete of boil egg abeg join me if u want o |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by almacherish(f): 5:12am On Feb 06, 2015 |
Lol tnx hun Fatalveli: |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Fatalveli(m): 2:54pm On Feb 06, 2015 |
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| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Fatalveli(m): 4:32pm On Feb 08, 2015 |
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| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Cybershow(m): 6:04pm On Feb 08, 2015 |
Fatalveli i luv it..bt y d short update |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by defemidefemi(m): 6:22pm On Feb 08, 2015 |
"I de go wit u fear not u need not to look back now u cant c me u can only hear my voice 'in writing'." |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by stuff46(m): 9:05pm On Feb 08, 2015 |
My bro fear not, all this your fetish believe's are now history, by the coming of his son, Our Lord Jesus Christ he has given us life, in abundance without any but... Its been long i wanted to see a writer working on one the tribes of Nigeria, its really good that you know the culture and way of life in the village. All this our writers na just insurgence, love, family, vengence, crime, et cetera na him them dey write. ( my guy chop knuckle for this). My observations so far, Tautology is in this work. Have came across words just that am not good in maping them out. Your preference of words and grammer- In Nigeria bah, we recognise on British english and in your story its based on 9ja so i don't understand your usage of the word 'gonna'. We know that you have been to the US just understand that you are back in 9ja (pigin is allowed because its our official language ).So see to my observation and tell me what you think about it. 2 Likes 1 Share |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Fatalveli(m): 10:30pm On Feb 08, 2015 |
Yeah you know em' maybe I'm probably 'gonna' do something about it. And as for the tautology, I'd like you to point it out precise... And tanx for tha comment and em' you know the critics; it seems to be really em' helpful. gotcha |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by kaliyu97(m): 3:24am On Feb 09, 2015 |
I dey enjoy this ur story  |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by StormAngel(f): 7:34pm On Feb 17, 2015 |
Fatalveli u really are a gud writer. *spreads mat* |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Fatalveli(m): 8:51pm On Feb 17, 2015 |
StormAngel:Thanks ma'am, update dropping tomorrow. And I must say you give a new definition to the word *beauty* its really having an effect on me chai |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Maryofficial(f): 10:46pm On Feb 17, 2015 |
Scary.... But interesting though |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by StormAngel(f): 11:30pm On Feb 17, 2015 |
Fatalveli:  thanks dear. |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Fatalveli(m): 5:03am On Feb 18, 2015 |
StormAngel:U're most welcome sweetie |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by harjibolar10(m): 11:11am On Feb 18, 2015 |
Oga oya come update o Im here now, you always gat a nice work doing you know Keep em coming |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Nobody: 6:02pm On Feb 18, 2015 |
Fatalveli:O ya na, come update biko. I hope he returns from this journey. |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by IbnAdama: 8:37am On Feb 19, 2015 |
Bring it on man, I'm feeling you |
| Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by LarrySun(m): 10:12am On Feb 19, 2015 |
Nice story. However, you need to interprete those incantations. Your punctuation marks should be carefully chosen, too. The name 'Orisaye' reminds me of the half-mad woman in the play 'Women of Owu'.  |
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