hfinest1:
babe.... na December we dey go o.... for this long wait.... BTW, where u dey see davidflo wey e come promise to update

Skimpledawg:

Na dream u see am? Abeg gv us address of d place

I see am for road.

Amusaopeyemi:
What if Davidflo has been kidnapped or something?

9c storyline

Na wa oh......re u guys sure davidflo is still alive :-if u still dey alive oya come tell us who offend u way u no want give us tori again,,, we go give the person general beating

tomzee2:
Na wa oh......re u guys sure davidflo is still alive :-if u still dey alive oya come tell us who offend u way u no want give us tori again,,, we go give the person general beating

General beating

The moderator of this section should probably lock all the threads with un-finished stories, I can't imagine you opening a literature thread and not finishing it in a record time! Nobody wants to start something without finishing. imagine the psychological torture we the reader will be going through trying to figure out what will happen next and what will end the story. Y'all should probably ask flow1759 and the rest how they finished like 3 stories here on nairaland with less hassle, whatever is happening carry your readers along and that's why I actually like read flow's stories. So please let's work on it. Cheers!!!

moscyt:
The moderator of this section should probably lock all the threads with un-finished stories, I can't imagine you opening a literature thread and not finishing it in a record time! Nobody wants to start something without finishing. imagine the psychological torture we the reader will be going through trying to figure out what will happen next and what will end the story. Y'all should probably ask flow1759 and the rest how they finished like 3 stories here on nairaland with less hassle, whatever is happening carry your readers along and that's why I actually like read flow's stories. So please let's work on it. Cheers!!!

You know STILL I always FLOW

olashas:

General beating

don't tell me u re the offender, if u re the one let me start by giving u a kiss first

Good Job Davidflo, keep it coming.

Lanceslot:
Good Job Davidflo, keep it coming.

Coming where? We've been waiting for him for drop an update for the past 2months.

Amusaopeyemi:

Coming where? We've been waiting for him for drop an update for the past 2months.

lol.. Fine girl, I mean he should keep it coming for people like me who visits this thread once in 7 months....

Lanceslot:
lol.. Fine girl, I mean he should keep it coming for people like me who visits this thread once in 7 months....

lols bros I think I will start doing ur style oh coming once in 12month

My first paper went well; it was predictably a collection of past questions with figures and scene changes. I expected an A but with the educational system, anything was possible.
The most memorable thing about the exam was the girl I saw sitting two rows from me. I sighted her earlier in a Benz waltzing into the venue; the guy driving looked like her driver. She was extremely light skinned with full hair. Immediately she stepped out, I concluded she was out of my league. For the first time in my life, I didn’t think Oge was the finest girl in the world anymore. During the exams, I kept stealing glances at her, the way her jean clung tightly to her lap and the voluptuous shape her bum portrayed giving her master piece of a body the required foundation.
I finished before she did and decided to at least know her name before I left; Unfortunately Bauchi and Odogwu were waiting for me as I stepped out of the hall.
“My good man, why say na you first finish your paper?” Bauchi asked, taking the question paper from me, “No go fail again o”.
Odogwu let out something that should have been laughter but sounded more like broken drum, I eyed him in my mind.
“So we dey go Lekan house now, are you ready?” Bauchi asked.
I still didn’t see my usefulness in the matter, I was skinny as fvck, and I had no street credibility, why in hellz name would Bauchi want me to join them?
“Bros, I just finished my paper, you for allow me reach house na”.
“Blasphemy!” Bauchi shouted.
Odogwu shook his big ugly head like an overfed monkey.
“Nna my guy, you must not fear what it is we are going to do to the skaliwaaaaaag,” I decided there and then that Odogwu was what was wrong with the society.
Bauchi passed me a small bottle of dry gin and told me to finish it in as few gulps as possible. I wanted to decline but couldn’t, so I took it and grimaced as it burnt through my oesophagus down to my stomach.
The fine girl that I had been looking at approached us; her driver was waiting at the other side of the compound. As she walked by, she smiled with the confidence that only a girl who know she was stunning could.
The more I looked at her, the less interested I was in going with the guys. All I wanted was to track her down and ask for her name.... Just her name.
Lekan lived at the other side of the estate, in a place called Agboroko. It was a developing area as most of the houses were unpainted bungalows. We passed by a group of Rastafarians smoking weed and singing songs in patwa by the road side. I was getting more scared. His house looked like the finest in the area, he even had a Gulf 3 packed outside, that was Bauchi’s dream car. I preferred BMWs. I was told to knock, I did so.
A dark, chubby looking guy with bald head opened the door.
“Who you dey find?” he asked.
His breath reeked of Ogogoro, one could smell the illicitness from miles away.
“Lekan dey house?”
“Yea, who you be?”
“Tell am say, Fifi”.
He looked at me, a puzzled expression was spread across his face then he went back in. When Lekan came to the door, I looked at his face and forgave Kiki of all her transgression. He was so fine, I knew if I was female, I would be his biatch.
“Dem say u dey find me?”
He didn’t get a reply from me before Bauchi appeared from the corner and shoved him had, that he fell on his back into his house. Odogwu immediately stepped in, I reluctantly followed.
The chubby guy that opened the door earlier rushed out from one of the rooms but by then, Odogwu had a gun pressed against the sprawled fine guy called Lekan.
“Who una be?” Lekan asked, eyes closed like he was expecting a shot.
“Wetin concern you and Kiki, you know sabi say she don get husband?”
“Is that what this is about?” Lekan asked.
Odogwu hit him with the butt of the gun, I wondered what had piqued him. A steady stream of blood flowed from his broken lips.
The chubby guy knelt down beside his friend.
“You go free Kiki?” Bauchi asked
“Yes,” he replied.
“The next time we come here, na to scatter your head for floor o,” Odogwu chipped in.
Bauchi and Odogwu spent the next half hour threatening him while I sat on the couch feeling sorry for the poor guy.
On our way back to the house, after collecting sworn promises from Lekan to stay clear of Kiki, I realised that in as much as I admired Bauchi and knew in my heart that he loved Kiki, I didn’t want to be like him. I made up my mind to discuss with Kiki about evicting him.



Thanks for the birthday wishes.

Unbelievable!
Welcome back

Finally

Kiki was with Ezekiel when we got back into the flat, Odogwu had parted ways as we entered the estate.
“How was your paper, Twinnie mi?” Kiki asked, walking up to me, excitedly.
“It went well,” I replied.
“Hope you prayed before you started and after the papers? It’s important that Jesus takes control of your answers,” Ezekiel said without an inch of care.
I ignored him and walked to my room. I heard Bauchi greet Kiki but she didn’t reply, afterwards he entered the room and undressed. He wasn’t looking at me, he looked sad and defeated, I felt bad for him.
“You know say tomorrow na Kiki birthday?” he finally said.
“Are you serious?”
“Yes, her birthday was supposed to be special, now she doesn’t even talk to me.”
“You should get her a gift,” I suggested.
He was lost in his thoughts for a while.
“You think I messed up going to Lekan’s house?”
There are times I really liked Bauchi, most times had to do with his selfless nature, the way he became a gentleman when Hanatu was around or how he treated the goat with respect, I even liked how he pranked Ezekiel every once in a while but the issue with Lekan was low and reproachable.
“You should apologise to him, Kiki is not your property”, I said.
“True, my good man,” he replied soberly.
“And you should apologise to Kiki before she finds out.”
He walked up to me to give me a hug.
“You are like the brother I never had,” he said.
“Bros?”
“Yes, my good man?”
“I want you to leave. Kiki doesn’t want you and I don’t either.”
He was speechless for a while, I expected him to let go off me but he didn’t. He isn’t held me tighter.
“But I am sorry,” he said.
“I’m sorry too,” I replied.
I freed myself from him and walked out to meet Kiki who was cooking Okra soup in the kitchen.
“I just told Bauchi to leave, I should have waited to tell you but I had my mind made up,” I said to her.
“You are sure that is what you want?”
“Yes,” I said.
“Are you sad?” she asked.
“Very”.
“What did he do to you?”
“Sorry I can’t say”
Bauchi met us in the kitchen with his bag packed. The images of Odogwu with the gun were still very clear.
“My Good man, thanks for the hospitality,” he said.
“You are welcome, bros” I said.
“Kiki, I hope you think of me.”
She turned her back to him. In the background Ezekiel was singing out songs of praise.
“Fifi, take care of her,” he said this and left. By his side was the goat we had grown to love.

Shey I tell una sey Davidflo go update 2day una no gree, shey una don ciyam naw??..



Abeg 1000gbosa's for dat woged Op, welcome baq man..

Op you do well by updating

next update should be 24th of august. HMMMMMMMM

Niwdog:
Op you do well by updating

Feed me more[b]Feed me more[/b]Feed me more

Jah bless davidflo

moscyt:
next update should be 24th of august. HMMMMMMMM

Lmao

u kept ur. promise to. ur crush? huh, *winks* thanks for the update

Nice one mate. Once I read an update, I forget my anger at the previous starvation.

nd the next update comes up in a week time

Hurklan:
nd the next update comes up in a week time

y nt b honest wif ur sef?


in 3 weeks time

at last David update.. thank you Jesus.. thanks to u too..

davidflo:


By his side was the goat we had grown to love.

I like dis line.


Keep it comin, davidflo

Labaski

so bauchi is leaving i guess fifi is now afraid of him

Onemansquad:
so bauchi is leaving
i guess fifi is now afraid of him

Any idea about when David Will return