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When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by bibijay123(f): 8:20pm On Jul 27, 2016
Amaka was a beautiful and classy christian lady who had everything going for her. A job in a top shot company with her own office and personal assistant. Her major and only flaw was her dictatorial fiance .Micheal. He was a business man and a choir master in the church they both attended. Her few friends wonder what she saw in him, he dictates what she wears, how she wears them, her friends are not good enough he always says. He finds fault with every thing she does. One fateful evening, Micheal called her and informed her of a three day crusade going on in his neighborhood. She told him she was tired maybe she would attend it tomorrow

Micheal insisted that she should get dressed and come, knowing how persistent he could be she grumpily agreed to attend the crusade that evening.

She quickly showered and got dressed. She picked her car keys and headed out. On the way her car broke down.

She checked her wrist watch and saw that the time was 7.30 pm. She came down from the car and checked the bonnet of the car but couldn't seem to know what was wrong with it. She attempted to re _start the car several times but got frustrated and came out of the car slamming the door angrily.


She stood looking at the car. The car had chosen to break down in a remote area leading to her fiance' s hood. There was no one around she could ask for help so she decided to take a short cut route.

She called Micheal to inform him of the unfortunate development and he advised her to take the short cut route.

She ended the call and was about to walk towards the route when she paused. She thought she heard a sound. She became scared and was about to break into a run when she heard the sound again. This time it was clearer. She stood rooted to the spot in shock unable to believe what she just heard. She mentally willed her legs to move but they refused to comply.

She saw herself moving towards the sound. Its force was greater than her strength, she wanted to flee and put it all behind her. She wanted to pretend she didn't just hear the cry of a baby but the sound of that little helpless voice like a magnet drew her towards the little bush it was coming from.


She walked further, almost breaking into a run following the sound of the little voice. She saw something wrapped in a rags laying in a cartoon. She gently lifted the bundle into her arms. Afraid she might drop him or her.

She looked around but there was no one in sight. She gently placed the bundle on her shoulder and walked as fast as her legs could carry her to Micheal ' s house.

All the way there she wondered if she was doing the right thing. She knew nothing about babies, she doesn't even know who the one she held belonged to or why the mother dumped the poor thing in the first place. A sudden dark thought popped into her head and she tried desperately to push it back to where ever it had come from. What if she was arrested and accused of murdering the mother and stealing the baby. No that's just too dark a thought.


The gateman opened the gate for her, looking at the child sleeping soundly on her shoulder with curiosity shining in his eyes but he dared not ask. Speaking or even thinking of speaking to his boss' s woman would be the end of his employment.


He opened the gate for her and went back to his little room. Amaka was about to search for Micheal 's keys in her handbag when she remembered that she had left them at home. She thought of asking the gate man if he had a spare key. Just the thought of it sent a chill down her spine. Micheal would have a fit if he knows she dallied (his word)with his help.


She brought out her phone and sent him text messages. Asking him to hurry back that she was at his place. She waited for his reply but when none came, she dialed his number, she heard it rang for some minutes before she saw number busy on the screen of her phone.


The baby whimpered and she patted it on the back. She sat down on the door steps and waited for her Fiance to come. He would know what to do.


At 9.30 pm, Micheal drove in to the compound. She kept up happily. He would do the right thing she thought. He knows the right steps to be taken in this situation.

She walks towards him but stopped short at the expression on his face as he stepped out of the car. She didn't give him a chance. She hurriedly told him what happened.

He looked at her like she had grown four heads. He walked towards her, and she stepped back in fright. " Take that thing back to wherever you picked it from!" She didn't understand. She thought maybe she didn't hear him well but he continued angrily " Take that filthy thing in your hand back to whoever you picked it from or we are done!"


She couldn't believe her ears. How could he be so cruel and unfeeling, she knew he never made an idle threat. She was 34, all her siblings are happily married with kids. She couldn't afford to do anything to jeopardize her relationship with Micheal.

She was torn. She could easily race back and dump the baby where she picked him from or she could try to help the baby and then what? She owe this child nothing! She wants to be addressed as a Mrs too but what did the bible say about helping others?

Micheal walked past her almost knocking her down. He opened his door and slammed it heavily the sound woke the sleeping baby. The poor thing cried out loud. Amaka stood there uncertain what to do next. To take the baby back to the dump or try to help and risk losing Micheal?


Story continues......

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Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by CivilzedTyger(m): 9:43pm On Jul 27, 2016
Well done Bibi, I'm with you on this one

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Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by Ekugbeh(m): 10:03pm On Jul 27, 2016
Is that all
Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by SweetieConstie(f): 11:59pm On Jul 27, 2016
Nice one, ma'am... Keep the updates coming! smiley





Following keenly...
Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by SweetieConstie(f): 11:59pm On Jul 27, 2016
Nice one, ma'am... Keep the updates coming! smiley





Following keenly...
Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by bibijay123(f): 12:41am On Jul 28, 2016
SweetieConstie:
Nice one, maa'm... Keep the updates coming! smiley




Following keenly...



Thanks babe

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Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by bibijay123(f): 12:42am On Jul 28, 2016
Ekugbeh:
Is that all



No sir! More to come
Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by bibijay123(f): 12:42am On Jul 28, 2016
CivilzedTyger:
Well done Bibi, I'm with you on this one



Thanks boss
Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by Nobody: 12:09pm On Jul 28, 2016
bibi dont stop just yet na embarassed.... continue na...
Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by Anugod(f): 12:34pm On Jul 28, 2016
Following like fast and furious

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Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by emerged01(m): 1:22pm On Jul 28, 2016
Haha! You never finished, " The Devil has the money", hope you are going to finish all these stories? It is better you do one after the other because me no go forgive u if no finish o.
Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by bibijay123(f): 7:00pm On Jul 28, 2016
emerged01:
Haha! You never finished, " The Devil has the money", hope you are going to finish all these stories? It is better you do one after the other because me no go forgive u if no finish o.


Loool noooo.this story is a two episode shrt story. I wrote it weeks ago n it is completed.
Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by bibijay123(f): 7:01pm On Jul 28, 2016
slyIsaac:
bibi dont stop just yet na embarassed.... continue na...


Its only two episodes boo. I want to hear various views before i post the concluding part
Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by mzlizabelle(f): 7:52pm On Jul 28, 2016
I've been a silent reader of your works for a while now. bibijay123, babe you are good. The fact that your updates are always in time too.... here's a big hug from me. keep it up.

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Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by emerged01(m): 7:52pm On Jul 28, 2016
bibijay123:



Loool noooo.this story is a two episode shrt story. I wrote it weeks ago n it is completed.

Oh good! You are great!
Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by bibijay123(f): 8:03pm On Jul 28, 2016
mzlizabelle:
I've been a silent reader of your works for a while now.
bibijay123, babe you are good.
The fact that your updates are always in time too.... here's a big hug from me.
keep it up.



Thanks babe!
Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by lumzybo: 6:21pm On Jul 29, 2016
It seems our dear Michael knows smtin abt the "dumped" baby. Cos how culd he be so sure the baby was picked from a dumpsite.

...still I follow

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Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by jacy67(f): 9:31pm On Jul 30, 2016
bibijay123, we de wait o Abi na only me waka come? smiley

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Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by bibijay123(f): 11:31pm On Jul 30, 2016
jacy67:
bibijay123, we de wait o
Abi na only me waka come? smiley



Loool. Will post the concluding part tomorrow.
Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by orijintv(m): 10:18pm On Jul 31, 2016
Bibi ... Ur tumao is almost ova o grin
Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by bibijay123(f): 9:04am On Aug 01, 2016
orijintv:
Bibi ... Ur tumao is almost ova o grin


Loool grin. Sorry abt the delay!

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Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by jacy67(f): 1:54pm On Aug 04, 2016
bibijay123:


Loool grin. Sorry abt the delay!
2moro don pass madamsad
Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by bibijay123(f): 2:55pm On Aug 04, 2016
jacy67:
2moro don pass madamsad

i go post am.
Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by Nobody: 4:26am On Aug 06, 2016
Halo bae, pls ride on.................
Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by dovetark: 6:37am On Aug 06, 2016
Reserved
Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by amiibaby(f): 6:37am On Aug 06, 2016
Wow this story is supper
Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by linusbnn(m): 6:42am On Aug 06, 2016
Following
Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by Thisis2raw(m): 6:43am On Aug 06, 2016
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Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by Thisis2raw(m): 6:44am On Aug 06, 2016
Nice one
Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by Vendoor(f): 6:50am On Aug 06, 2016
Very cheesy
I Like it, following
Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by fairygeh(f): 6:50am On Aug 06, 2016
Lovely story, I feel however that such stories should be completed before it's taken to frontpage.
Re: When Tears Brings Yes ( A Short Story) by ayooladee(f): 6:51am On Aug 06, 2016
kiss

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