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Re: Red Ashes by wizsolzy(m): 10:16am On Jan 13, 2017
Ooohh I fiy cry cry embarassed lipsrsealed undecided Is dis one update?
Re: Red Ashes by heemah(f): 10:29am On Jan 13, 2017
Madam Chumzy, dis food no reach at all.
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:41am On Jan 13, 2017
Make una no vex abeg. I'm nt feelin 2 wel... I ddnt evn go 2 work 2day, i took d day off because of d illness, bt i'l make sure i drop multiple updates btw nw and 6pm, tanx 4 ur understanding...
Re: Red Ashes by wizsolzy(m): 10:43am On Jan 13, 2017
Chumzypinky:
Make una no vex abeg. I'm nt feelin 2 wel... I ddnt evn go 2 work 2day, i took d day off because of d illness, bt i'l make sure i drop multiple updates btw nw and 6pm, tanx 4 ur understanding...

The hangover of za oza rum....i close my eyes now

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Re: Red Ashes by samyfreshsmooth(m): 10:56am On Jan 13, 2017
I jxt siddon here dy sip my alomo-zobo dy wait 4 d multiple update from nw till 6pm


oh and u're doing a great job ma'am and i love ur kids names.........
Re: Red Ashes by Becky5152(f): 12:11pm On Jan 13, 2017
cry
Chumzypinky:
Make una no vex abeg. I'm nt feelin 2 wel... I ddnt evn go 2 work 2day, i took d day off because of d illness, bt i'l make sure i drop multiple updates btw nw and 6pm, tanx 4 ur understanding...
sorry
Re: Red Ashes by hatchetman(m): 1:12pm On Jan 13, 2017
Chumzypinky:

i'm in luv wit ,my husband dhooor! If u lyk jam, transformer
ah cannor drag u 4rm ur husband na..perhaps ah lyk my tinS fresh..*wink*
Re: Red Ashes by hatchetman(m): 1:15pm On Jan 13, 2017
dis update short pas pant oo... NYC 1 SHA..and may GOD GIVE U QUICK RECOBARY..and 4rm work wey i learn 4 chemist..minimize ur oza rum goin..

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Re: Red Ashes by iiru: 1:52pm On Jan 13, 2017
well done .ma. wishing Gods healing
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 2:26pm On Jan 13, 2017
Chumzypinky:
Make una no vex abeg. I'm nt feelin 2 wel... I ddnt evn go 2 work 2day, i took d day off because of d illness, bt i'l make sure i drop multiple updates btw nw and 6pm, tanx 4 ur understanding...

#clearsthroat you sure say you never swallow frog. Kikiki. Geh well soon dear
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:00pm On Jan 13, 2017
I've stil not forgottn my promise oo. Abeg, body neva gree me do anything, bt i mst surely drop something b4 Six...tanx
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:00pm On Jan 13, 2017
Prettyhurts:


#clearsthroat you sure say you never swallow frog. Kikiki. Geh well soon dear
lol, if i swallow e gud na. Na eight i wan born and i mst born dem complete b4 i clock 30 *winks*

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Re: Red Ashes by Azeequeen(f): 3:03pm On Jan 13, 2017
MozB:


hahahahahah... Lwkm. No be me oo. Af done nothing to anybody o! Abeg where is Chumzypinky? Come and help me tell this Queen its not me o. Na another Mozb.
Are u sure?
Re: Red Ashes by Azeequeen(f): 3:04pm On Jan 13, 2017
MozB:


hahahahahah... Lwkm. No be me oo. Af done nothing to anybody o! Abeg where is Chumzypinky? Come and help me tell this Queen its not me o. Na another Mozb.
You sure sha?
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 3:05pm On Jan 13, 2017
Chumzypinky:

lol, if i swallow e gud na. Na eight i wan born and i mst born dem complete b4 i clock 30 *winks*

Kikiki kikiki, more grease to your hoohaa

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Re: Red Ashes by Azeequeen(f): 3:07pm On Jan 13, 2017
Aunty Chumpzypinky,this one wey u dey the other room,you n your husband bad gan o...Sha no forget us

I know Mabel is going to regain her memory
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:41pm On Jan 13, 2017
KAKA.

The silence in the room was killing. Infact, the only thing that could be heard were my sobs.
Though his back was turned to me, i could tell he was seething in anger.

'Casmir i'm sorry...' i sobbed. I knew my "sorry" wasnt going to help matters but that seemed like the only thing to say at the moment.

He turned to me and i winced at his red eyes. There were gathered tears in there and i felt like a monster. Why did MozB have to come back to my life? Why was my case always different? Why couldnt i be happy for once?

'why did you do this Kamsi?' he asked in a fierce whisper. I cringed.

'Cas please... I'm really sorry...'

He walked towards me and grabbed my arm 'why did you tell me? Why didnt you keep it to yourself?'

'Cas.... I couldnt keep it away from you. I did something unforgiveable, and...'

'you knew it was unforgiveable and yet you went ahead and slept with him! Kamsi how could you?' the tears were dropping from his eyes now.

I felt really bad 'Cas i'm sorry. It was just a moment of weakness...one i'll live to regret for the rest of my life'

'or were you trying to have your pound of flesh?'

'what?'

He left my arm, he sat on his desk and covered his eyes with his palms. He sobbed loudly. Infact, he was crying like a baby.

We both cried.

'Kamsi...' he looked at me 'say the truth... You just wanted to pay me back...pay me back for cheating on you right?'

'Xaviercasmir.....that isnt true...'

'thats just the simple truth Kamsi...now i understand how you felt when you caught me with another woman. But what i cant seem to get is why you chose to tell me. Why didnt you keep it to yourself?'

'i could never hide such a thing from you. What happens when you find out from someone else? Besides i needed to tell you before the wedding. I wouldnt want you regretting your marriage to me later on when you find out i cheated on you three weeks to our wedding... I just wanted you to know that whatever i did not tell you never happened. Casmir, its your choice now. Everything is in your hands. If you're going to cancel the wedding, then its all good, if you're going to continue with the wedding, even better..but i'm going to respect whatever choice it is you make' I dabbed my eyes with my handkerchief.

He turned his back to me again 'Kamsi, you're wicked. You're very wicked!'

My heart broke at those words.

I stood up and placed my hand on his shoulder but he shrugged it off.

I turned and walked back to the window, i stared at the busy streets and everything flashed before my eyes. I was going to lose everything. Maybe i made a mistake. I should never have told him. I should have buried it in my book of secrets. I slapped my forehead. I have lost everything. There was nothing i could do. Words could never explain how i felt at that point in time. And God knows that if i had left that place that way i was, i would have committed suicide at once.

I felt a palm on my shoulder and i froze. Then i was hugged from behind.

I turned 'Xav...' he covered my lips with his cutting off my words.

I was shocked and dumbfounded.

'i forgive you Nicki Minaj...' i froze.

'what are you saying?'

'for telling me about what you've done, i respect you. Because i would never have done what you did. I would never have...had your type of bravery. Thank you Kaka'

I melted in his arms. I felt like dying. I made up my mind that i was never ever going to do anything to hurt him again, never.

I started crying.

He kissed my forehead 'dont cry. Dont cry. You've made your mistakes. I've made mine as well. I'm not calling off the wedding. I love you and i'm getting married to you. There's nothing anyone is going to do about that. Thats how much i love you Nicki. I love you so much. I love you so much it hurts. I might not be the best man that can be, i might not give you all the happiness in the world but...'

I kissed him. I couldnt bear hearing any of his words. I couldnt believe he was forgiving me just like that.

He looked at me and a tear dropped down from his eyes 'i trust you Kamsi. And promise me...promise me that its never going to happen again...'

'i promise you Xaviercasmir. Its never going to happen again'

'i in turn promise that i'm never going to cheat on you ever again...i make this promise before God and man'

'i love you Cas...' i couldnt stop the tears from pouring.

'i love you more...'

We kissed again.

TBC

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:42pm On Jan 13, 2017
Prettyhurts:

Kikiki kikiki, more grease to your hoohaa
badoo, wetin be Hoohaa?

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Re: Red Ashes by kajsa08: 3:49pm On Jan 13, 2017
hmmmm.
"I sobbed", "I cringed", "we both cried", "we kissed".
m only seeing the letter 'k' for kiss.
chai!
**grabs husband n kisses him passionately**.
chumzypinky, thanks for this scene.
Re: Red Ashes by mofy1(f): 4:00pm On Jan 13, 2017
If nah me I nor go talk. tongue
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 4:33pm On Jan 13, 2017
kajsa08:
hmmmm. "I sobbed", "I cringed", "we both cried", "we kissed". m only seeing the letter 'k' for kiss. chai! **grabs husband n kisses him passionately**. chumzypinky, thanks for this scene.
abeg no spoil we virgins 4 ds thread oo

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 6:12pm On Jan 13, 2017
CHIOMA.

'my God!! What is all this?' i sighed 'will you just stop stalking me and go away?' i barked angrily.

'i'm not going to leave again Chioma...' Chuks said pleadingly 'i'm even going to go on my knees right here if i have to, just to show you how much you really mean to me Chi'

'and if you go down on your knees, its still your shame...please i'm so going to embarass you in a way you wouldnt expect, i promise you that!' i hissed and looked around. There were few people here and there, mostly cleaners and chefs. I sighed, what was this embarassment for?

I made to leave but he blocked me 'i can explain Chioma. Why not give me a listening ear for christ sakes? I'll tell you everything...i promise henceforth that i'll never hide anything from you again...' he sighed 'i've done things that i'm not proud of Chioma. I've done things that aint pleasant at all, things i regret doing. I just wish i could turn back the hands of time. I just wish i can right all my wrongs, i just wish things could go back to the way they once were....'

'i wish for the exact same thing. I also wish things will go back to the way they once were. I just wish you could just disappear again. I am really sick and tired of seeing your ugly face day in day out. You are of no use to me Chuka Igho. Please, stay the hell out of my life!' i retorted.

'you dont mean that Chioma. We both know that you cant do without me....'

I snorted 'thats where you get it all wrong. As long as i have my daughter and my hotel with me, i am happy. I dont need a bloodsucking pest like you in my life! Grab that?' I made to walk away again.

He held my hand 'Chioma, you cant live without me'

I snatched my hand from his grip 'i can. I've been doing that for over 20yrs now' i walked away.

****

CHUKS.

My phone rang the instant Chioma walked away. I groaned when i saw the caller. My enemies were really at work.

'Pamela, what is all this? Why do you keep calling me everytime? Havent you recieved the money i sent to you for the kids' upkeep yet? What is your problem?' i barked immediately i picked it up.

'ahn-ahn calm down na. Cant i call my hubby hubby again? When are you coming down to Togo?'

'you are mad! You're crazy! What is wrong with you? Will i still send you money and visit you? Visit you for what?'

'baby arent you missing me?'

'missing what exactly? What is there to miss about you?' i was highly irritated.

She chuckled 'you know what you're missing now. Just come sha. Junior has been pestering me..he wants to see his dad. What kind of a father are you if you cant even make out time to visit your kids?'

'you're there for them, arent you?'

'i'm not enough. They need their father as well'

'if they need a father, then get them a father, as for me, i am not available, do you understand?'

'what do you mean?'

'get them another father, thats what i said, dimwit!' i hung up, angry that i had lost Chioma.

I was about going when i sighted Kainene from afar. My face brightened in a smile.

She was talking with a tall fair guy. I walked towards her 'hey Nene'

Her face changed from a smile to a frown 'who are you?'

'eh?' i was shocked to the bone. Did she just ask who i was?

'who's he?' the guy asked her.

Then i turned to look at the guy. There was something familiar about him, one i couldnt place.

'no one i know...' she tugged at his arm 'lets get out of this annoying place. We need to see your mum at the hospital you know' She eyed me and walked away with the guy.

I was filled with anger. So Chioma had succeeded in turning my daughter against me, to the extent she behaves like she doesnt even know me. I was going to make sure i had my pound of flesh!

I didnt care anymore. I just wanted my daughter back. Chioma stated that her hotel and daughter mattered to her the most right? Good and fine!

Lets see what happens when she loses both of them....

TBC

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Re: Red Ashes by heemah(f): 6:29pm On Jan 13, 2017
Xavier is really a brave man. Seriously, 1 out of 20 men can do such. This Chuks useless sha.
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 6:38pm On Jan 13, 2017
Jesus! So this guy's apology is a gamble. You accept it and all goes well, you don't and he comes for you with all his might. Chuks simply is intentionally unaware of his backstabbing ways.

I tire

Mabel.......mxxxxm
Re: Red Ashes by samyfreshsmooth(m): 7:06pm On Jan 13, 2017
dis shuck of a guy is really a bloodsucking backstabbing (both words can go 2geda, or can't they?) dork right from his birth (or birth of d story)

i hate guys like chuck


And i dont fancy girls like kaka at all....she too dy truthful and she fit make me commit suicide cos of guilt wen i yagabash anada lele
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:13pm On Jan 13, 2017
samyfreshsmooth:
dis shuck of a guy is really a bloodsucking backstabbing (both words can go 2geda, or can't they?) dork right from his birth (or birth of d story)

i hate guys like chuck


And i dont fancy girls like kaka at all....she too dy truthful and she fit make me commit suicide cos of guilt wen i yagabash anada lele
c ur mouth lyk Toto...

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Re: Red Ashes by samyfreshsmooth(m): 7:19pm On Jan 13, 2017
Chumzypinky:

c ur mouth lyk Toto...

LOL

ah mama no spoilt me o....am jxt a humble loyal broda o.....*with an american accent* by d way wat the f**k is toh-toh
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:48pm On Jan 13, 2017
samyfreshsmooth:


LOL

ah mama no spoilt me o....am jxt a humble loyal broda o.....*with an american accent* by d way wat the f**k is toh-toh
Toh-toh is d place u arrived frm nigga
Re: Red Ashes by samyfreshsmooth(m): 7:56pm On Jan 13, 2017
Chumzypinky:

Toh-toh is d place u arrived frm nigga

hmmmm i stand 2 counter that though....i didnt come out of the tohtoh....i came directly from d womb cool
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 8:12pm On Jan 13, 2017
samyfreshsmooth:


hmmmm i stand 2 counter that though....i didnt come out of the tohtoh....i came directly from d womb cool
wer u folo cum frm?
Re: Red Ashes by Azeequeen(f): 8:14pm On Jan 13, 2017
I just feel like giving this Chuks a maddening,resounding,ear-deafening,brain-stopper slap...His apologies are not even genuine. That's rubbish,nonsense,balderdash,shenanigan etc. I no even know wetin I want type again
Is it by force?
Re: Red Ashes by samyfreshsmooth(m): 8:49pm On Jan 13, 2017
Chumzypinky:

wer u folo cum frm?

i dont knw if i shuld b saying dis 4 security reasons (lol)

i shuld be accused of derailing ur thread if i answer bt since its ur thread and u ask i'll tell u

i came out directly 4rm d womb through dat cantesian operation (no mind me if i get am wrong, its nat my fault, ama small 400 engineering student and i hate anything dat has too much biology written all over it grin )

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