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Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 1:11pm On Dec 07, 2016
Prologue
CHIOMA.
I stared intently into his eyes. I didnt know if believing him was a good idea. But then, i loved this man. I couldnt do without him.

I closed my eyes then opened them again. Tears filled my eyes 'Chuks, why do you keep doing this to me?'

'i'm so sorry'

'why do you continue cheating on me? What have i done to deserve all this ill-treatment from you? Why?'

'i was seduced, i swear'

I started crying again.

Crying was all i did nowadays. No matter how much i try to stop myself, the tears never stopped flowing.

'baby please...' he said moving closer to me, he wrapped his hands around my shoulder 'she seduced me. It was never my intention'

I cried even harder.

'this is the third time you are sleeping with my best friends!' i cried slapping my laps 'when will you change? What do they have that i dont have? Eh, Chuks?'

'i'm so sorry'

'how many time? How many times do you have to apologise to me for the same mistake? Why do you have to always destroy the friendship between my friends and i?'

'i'm so sorry...' his voice was shaky now 'if i have to apologise over and over again, then i will have to do so over and over again. But please, forgive me'

I stood up. I looked at him again and i made my decision 'i've made my decision Chuks...' i moved away from him 'i want a divorce'

TBC

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Re: Red Ashes by xaviercasmir(m): 1:35pm On Dec 07, 2016
really intresting. Pls countinue
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:11pm On Dec 07, 2016
xaviercasmir:
really intresting. Pls countinue
Tanz alot Xaviercasmir. Kip followin 4 more
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:13pm On Dec 07, 2016
Osaze, dnt jst read, bt also comment, tanz alot

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 5:41pm On Dec 07, 2016
To be continued later

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 8:50pm On Dec 07, 2016
Update removed by author

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Re: Red Ashes by xaviercasmir(m): 10:48pm On Dec 07, 2016
that Nathan of a boy behave as if he was the center of the universe. I don'nt know his reseason on why he was doing what he did.
Your story line is good with simple English that is easy to understand.
KEEP IT UP AND MORE UPDATE PLEASE

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:24am On Dec 08, 2016
xaviercasmir:
that Nathan of a boy behave as if he was the center of the universe. I don'nt know his reseason on why he was doing what he did.
Your story line is good with simple English that is easy to understand.
KEEP IT UP AND MORE UPDATE PLEASE
Tank 4 d nyc words Xavier, kip followin 4 more. More updates cum up in d evnin. Pls, invite ur friends
Re: Red Ashes by abefe99: 10:26am On Dec 08, 2016
this is interesting pls more update
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 12:18pm On Dec 08, 2016
abefe99:
this is interesting pls more update
Tanx Abefe99, i promise u more interestin updates
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:21pm On Dec 08, 2016
Update removed by author

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Re: Red Ashes by xaviercasmir(m): 2:51pm On Dec 08, 2016
like i said before, Nathan is a jerk.
more ink to your pen. AND MORE UPDATE PLS
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 4:50pm On Dec 08, 2016
xaviercasmir:
like i said before, Nathan is a jerk. more ink to your pen. AND MORE UPDATE PLS
more update u shall get Xavi honey
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 8:19pm On Dec 08, 2016
Update removed by author

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Re: Red Ashes by xaviercasmir(m): 10:09pm On Dec 08, 2016
the truth is bitter but it must told. that one man foolishness does not mean that all men are foolish. NICE STORY PLEASE MORE
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:04am On Dec 09, 2016
xaviercasmir:
the truth is bitter but it must told.
that one man foolishness does not mean that all men are foolish.
NICE STORY PLEASE MORE
Tanx dear.
Pls dnt just read, also comment. I'm seein a 188 views n just 1 person is commenting. You dont know how far your comments go 2 encourage a person.
Comment, criticise (constructive pls, make una no go kill my career ova nite....lollz)
Thanks for readin Red Ashes

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:19am On Dec 09, 2016
Update deleted by author

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Re: Red Ashes by xaviercasmir(m): 10:14am On Dec 09, 2016
thats why some men treats ladies like a trash. Upon all the sign that shows that he does not love you as much as you do. You still say that you love him. when he sees the one he truly love,he will leave as asap.
NICE WORK AND KEEP IT UP

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 1:39pm On Dec 09, 2016
Bibijay123 Jefferyjamez Skarlett Twaci Missuniverse Jagugu88li
U guys shuld check dis story out oo, tanx alot

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Re: Red Ashes by Twaci(f): 1:51pm On Dec 09, 2016
Nice one Chumzypinky!

Kinda hard to connect the characters...they are slowly falling into place though.

Nathan is a aśs though undecided

Fire on!
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:17pm On Dec 09, 2016
Update deleted by author

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Re: Red Ashes by jagugu88li(f): 2:19pm On Dec 09, 2016
Present Sir!

What am I being called for?
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:20pm On Dec 09, 2016
Twaci:
Nice one Chumzypinky!

Kinda hard to connect the characters...they are slowly falling into place though.

Nathan is a aśs though undecided

Fire on!

Lollz Twaci, dont worry, they will gradually fall into place in subsequent updates. Thanks for following.
And please make sure to drop another wonderful story by next yr. I cant wait to read your story again.
Thanks for reading and commenting, you dont know how much it meant to me. Thanks a bunch honey.

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Re: Red Ashes by Twaci(f): 2:22pm On Dec 09, 2016
Chumzypinky:

Lollz Twaci, dont worry, they will gradually fall into place in subsequent updates. Thanks for following.
And please make sure to drop another wonderful story by next yr. I cant wait to read your story again.
Thanks for reading and commenting, you dont know how much it meant to me. Thanks a bunch honey.
You are welcome dear kiss

And thank you smiley kiss
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:23pm On Dec 09, 2016
jagugu88li:
Present Sir!

What am I being called for?
You are under arrest Jagugu. Make sure you report to the station and admit to your crimes in order to get a lighter sentence. Lollzzz
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:24pm On Dec 09, 2016
Twaci:
You are welcome dear kiss
And thank you smiley kiss
Yea
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:24pm On Dec 09, 2016
Twaci:
You are welcome dear kiss
And thank you smiley kiss
Yea
Re: Red Ashes by dominique(f): 2:41pm On Dec 09, 2016
Bookmarked
Re: Red Ashes by MerceeD(f): 3:15pm On Dec 09, 2016
Following
Re: Red Ashes by bibijay123(f): 4:25pm On Dec 09, 2016
Thanks for the mention,following cheesy

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Re: Red Ashes by Julietogbo(f): 4:45pm On Dec 09, 2016
Nice one following this story 100%
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 5:35pm On Dec 09, 2016
dominique:
Bookmarked
Kip followin dear. I luv ur name by d way

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