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I'm Me by Pranaya(f): 2:04pm On Oct 22, 2016
I'm me whether I like it or not
I'm me the daughter of who I am
I'm me the way that I should be
I'm me the world should understand

Many doubts i've had in myself
Many doubts I've had in my abilities
Doing nothing than to second guess
Trying hard not to be the second best

Comparison here Comparison there
Why can't you be like them they all ask
Dwelling on their questions
Searching for answers

I push myself beyond limits
Trying hard to be like them
Their strengths, I observed
And did all I could

Forgetting I'm doing it for a world that is never satisfied
With all my strengths gone and weaknessess shown
I tell myself enough of second guessing

I'm me whether I like it or not
I'm me the daughter of who I am
I'm me the way that I should be
I'm me the world should understand.
22/10

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Re: I'm Me by TheOtherRoom: 11:41pm On Dec 23, 2016
I'm me whether I like it or not
I'm me the daughter of who I am
I'm me the way that I should be
I'm me the world should understand

Indeed, these doubts wear a half reflection
Of apprehensive dust upon my abilities.
Self did nothing than to second guess
Self Trying hard not to be the second best

Comparison here Comparison there
"Why can't you be like them'' ? Society asked.
Morality is an axe but my mind is eternal waters
What shall ye cut ?
A woman ingrained in the wind ?

I push myself beyond limits then became a full mirror
My wings sparkled at the helm
I tasted wisdom, Found strength and bowed to Self
And did all I could to conquer Self

Forgetting I'm doing it for a world that is never satisfied
A world Always Hungry for masculine touch
I tell myself enough of second guessing
I am the best there could be

I'm me whether I like it or not
I'm me the daughter of who I am
I'm me the way that I should be
I'm me the world should understand.

Cc. Pranaya

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Re: I'm Me by Pranaya(f): 12:22am On Dec 24, 2016
TheOtherRoom:
I'm me whether I like it or not
I'm me the daughter of who I am
I'm me the way that I should be
I'm me the world should understand

Indeed, these doubts where a half reflection
Of apprehensive dust upon my abilities.
Self did nothing than to second guess
Self Trying hard not to be the second best

Comparison here Comparison there
"Why can't you be like them'' ? Society asked.
Morality is an axe but my mind is eternal waters
What shall ye cut ?
A woman ingrained in the wind ?

I push myself beyond limits then became a full mirror
My wings sparkled at the helm
I tasted wisdom, Found strength and bowed to Self
And did all I could to conquer Self

Forgetting I'm doing it for a world that is never satisfied
A world Always Hungry for masculine touch
I tell myself enough of second guessing
I am the best there could be

I'm me whether I like it or not
I'm me the daughter of who I am
I'm me the way that I should be
I'm me the world should understand.

Cc. Pranaya
Wow! I love this kiss
Re: I'm Me by AndyAustin(m): 10:14pm On Dec 30, 2016
This really beautiful, I sweeeaar. Different versions of a poem! otherroom, Pranaya, u guys nailed it!

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Re: I'm Me by Pranaya(f): 10:20pm On Dec 30, 2016
AndyAustin:
This really beautiful, I sweeeaar. Different versions of a poem! otherroom, Pranaya, u guys nailed it!
thanks
Re: I'm Me by AndyAustin(m): 10:29pm On Dec 30, 2016
Pranaya:
thanks
More grease to ya elbow...U welcome

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Re: I'm Me by AndyAustin(m): 9:32am On Dec 31, 2016
#Pranaya, you and OtherRoom caused this o!

You make me worth less
Amidst those beauties, glorious about you
I think you are flawless
Gracefully unique in all you do

I've been lured to wish a switch
To walk in your shoes, see through your eyes
It's a shame, I became a bi!tch
Jaundiced with discontent, I skipped to realize

I'm me, a child of my own mother
I'm me, the way I should be
The world better understand, I can't be no other
Like it or not I'm me, I'm me, I'm me!

Elastically, I've been stretched to go farther
To be this and that, by a world that has no limit
I've reached my breaking point, I can't go no further
It's only natural to be me, now I rightly dig it

I've gone through life differently
I can't even be who I was yesterday, how can I be you?
I've been white, green, pale, red, blue...
I think I'm the best ever there is, possibly

I'm me, the child of my own beautiful mother
I'm me, just the way I should be
The world better know, I can't be no other
I'm me, I'm me, fu!ck it I am me!!!

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Re: I'm Me by Pranaya(f): 9:37am On Dec 31, 2016
AndyAustin:
#Pranaya, you and OtherRoom caused this o!

You make me worth less
Amidst those beauties, glorious about you
I think you are flawless
Gracefully unique in all you do

I've been lured to wish a switch
To walk in your shoes, see through your eyes
It's a shame, I became a bitch
Jaundiced with discontent, I skipped to realize

I'm me, a child of my own mother
I'm me, the way I should be
The world better understand, I can't be no other
Like it or not I'm me, I'm me, I'm me!

Elastically, I've been stretched to go farther
To be this and that, by a world that has no limit
I've reached my breaking point, I can't go no further
It's only natural to be me, now I rightly dig it

I've gone through life differently
I can't even be who I was yesterday, how can I be you?
I've been white, green, pale, red, blue...
I think I'm the best ever there is, possibly

I'm me, the child of my beautiful mother
I'm me, just the way I should be
The world better know, I can't be no other
I'm me, I'm me, Bleep it I am me!!!
Awwweww. Andyaustin this is beautiful all the way. A very nice version I must say. Otherroom where art thou?

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Re: I'm Me by AndyAustin(m): 9:51am On Dec 31, 2016
Pranaya:
Awwweww. Andyaustin this is beautiful all the way. A very nice version I must say. Otherroom where art thou?
It's a privilege, ma. But there's something about yours...so inspiring! Thanks for the inspiration.

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Re: I'm Me by Pranaya(f): 2:03pm On Dec 31, 2016
AndyAustin:

It's a privilege, ma. But there's something about yours...so inspiring! Thanks for the inspiration.
Also a privilege sir. You're most welcome

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Re: I'm Me by GasAndOilTheory(m): 9:00am On Jan 03, 2017
AndyAustin you made too much changes. To b honesty I think other room made it professional...
Kudos to u guyies
cc Lalasticlala

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Re: I'm Me by AndyAustin(m): 1:06pm On Jan 03, 2017
GasAndOilTheory:
AndyAustin you made too much changes. To b honesty I think other room made it professional...
Kudos to u guyies
cc Lalasticlala
Thanks much bro. Honestly, I think those two above me are professionals and for the record, they nailed it real hard! Thanks much for the comment.

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Re: I'm Me by TheSociopath(m): 2:56pm On Mar 29, 2018
Hey, howdy. Just tried to read up on your diary and it's hidden. How's that?

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Re: I'm Me by SpikenardSlim(m): 7:20am On Apr 08, 2018
Pranaya:
I'm me whether I like it or not I'm me the daughter of who I am I'm me the way that I should be I'm me the world should understand
Many doubts i've had in myself Many doubts I've had in my abilities Doing nothing than to second guess Trying hard not to be the second best
Comparison here Comparison there Why can't you be like them they all ask Dwelling on their questions Searching for answers
I push myself beyond limits Trying hard to be like them Their strengths, I observed And did all I could
Forgetting I'm doing it for a world that is never satisfied With all my strengths gone and weaknessess shown I tell myself enough of second guessing
I'm me whether I like it or not I'm me the daughter of who I am I'm me the way that I should be I'm me the world should understand.
22/10
Re: I'm Me by Paulpeterparker: 7:59am On Apr 08, 2018
just my story

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Re: I'm Me by QTEST007(m): 8:04am On Apr 08, 2018
Amazing guys

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Re: I'm Me by remi1444: 8:57am On Apr 08, 2018
Godmother whollaaaaa... I know coming online to see your work in FP will give you mini goosebump.

Pranaya where art thou?

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Re: I'm Me by advocatebaba(m): 9:26am On Apr 08, 2018
*****
Re: I'm Me by Nobody: 10:01am On Apr 08, 2018
And here I thought poetry never made frontpage

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Re: I'm Me by Oluwason(m): 11:36am On Apr 08, 2018
Wow, this is indeed beautiful! Kudos to guys.

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Re: I'm Me by Pentools(m): 1:32pm On Apr 08, 2018
Pranaya:
I'm me whether I like it or not
I'm me the daughter of who I am
I'm me the way that I should be
I'm me the world should understand

Many doubts i've had in myself
Many doubts I've had in my abilities
Doing nothing than to second guess
Trying hard not to be the second best

Comparison here Comparison there
Why can't you be like them they all ask
Dwelling on their questions
Searching for answers

I push myself beyond limits
Trying hard to be like them
Their strengths, I observed
And did all I could

Forgetting I'm doing it for a world that is never satisfied
With all my strengths gone and weaknessess shown
I tell myself enough of second guessing

I'm me whether I like it or not
I'm me the daughter of who I am
I'm me the way that I should be
I'm me the world should understand.
22/10

Nice one pranay...
I smell battle against esteems and comparisons, just know you winning already....
My fav writer once said when it comes knocking don't worry or shed tears about it, just write about it, on that note I wish u more ink to your pen.

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Re: I'm Me by Nobody: 1:53pm On Apr 08, 2018
I'm me, unapologetically me
I'm me, as me as could be
I'm me, chin up, head high
I'm me, I soar in the sky.

I wasn't always this way, you know,
Sometimes ago, I felt so low
I struggled to accept who I really was,
I was so ashamed of my flaws.

I sought love and acceptance from the wrong folks,
I sought care and comfort from wolves in sheep's clothes,
Heartbroken, battered, bruised and scorned,
Left high and dry, my past I sourly mourned.

Depressed, I turned to addiction
Believe me friend, it was no fiction,
I lost so much and suffered, because I failed to see,
Who I was, what I am, the real me.

I am perfect, even in my imperfections,
I'm beautiful, I'm the peak of God's creation,
I stopped looking for validation in the wrong directions,
And then, i learnt to forgive my past indiscretions.

I'm me, unapologetically me,
I'm me, Just as me as could be,
I'm me, never looking down on me
I'm me, foot loose, I am free.

Gayle Zoe

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Re: I'm Me by Larrysung(m): 1:59pm On Apr 08, 2018
Truly I am me And me is not trying to be you Only me can be me The world I live in is trying to be used!
lol.. just felt like dropping a Limerick

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Re: I'm Me by alexvic12: 3:04pm On Apr 08, 2018
Beautiful.
I love the expressions here.

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Re: I'm Me by Pranaya(f): 3:07pm On Apr 08, 2018
remi1444:
Godmother whollaaaaa... I know coming online to see your work in FP will give you mini goosebump.

Pranaya where art thou?
Jesus! Like I can't believe it shocked shocked shocked I wrote it years back.. Dearie I'm surprised

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Re: I'm Me by Kingsunnyaleke: 3:46pm On Apr 08, 2018
Good work
Re: I'm Me by TheOtherRoom: 12:52am On Apr 09, 2018
Pranaya:
Jesus! Like I can't believe it shocked shocked shocked I wrote it years back.. Dearie I'm surprised
fame found you I guess

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Re: I'm Me by Pranaya(f): 6:13pm On Apr 09, 2018
Chi59:
I'm me, unapologetically me
I'm me, as me as could be
I'm me, chin up, head high
I'm me, I soar in the sky.

I wasn't always this way, you know,
Sometimes ago, I felt so low
I struggled to accept who I really was,
I was so ashamed of my flaws.

I sought love and acceptance from the wrong folks,
I sought care and comfort from wolves in sheep's clothes,
Heartbroken, battered, bruised and scorned,
Left high and dry, my past I sourly mourned.

Depressed, I turned to addiction
Believe me friend, it was no fiction,
I lost so much and suffered, because I failed to see,
Who I was, what I am, the real me.

I am perfect, even in my imperfections,
I'm beautiful, I'm the peak of God's creation,
I stopped looking for validation in the wrong directions,
And then, i learnt to forgive my past indiscretions.

I'm me, unapologetically me,
I'm me, Just as me as could be,
I'm me, never looking down on me
I'm me, foot loose, I am free.

Gayle Zoe
Wow.. Nice one.. Me likey smiley smiley

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Re: I'm Me by Pranaya(f): 6:13pm On Apr 09, 2018
Kingsunnyaleke:
Good work
thanks
Re: I'm Me by Pranaya(f): 6:13pm On Apr 09, 2018
Pentools:


Nice one pranay...
I smell battle against esteems and comparisons, just know you winning already....
My fav writer once said when it comes knocking don't worry or shed tears about it, just write about it, on that note I wish u more ink to your pen.
Thanks smiley smiley

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