kingsline:

please be fast about the update

already done sir!

chistar01: lol.. Hehehe.. It worked!. Oya ayaf updated! Come and read

Good boy
u left us again wanting more

simplifier:
Good boy
u left us again wanting more

lol, oliver twist :p

This suspense wey this guy dey put us too much na, abi wetin i talk. Me no lik dis one ooooo, just try one day break record, drop like 10updates non stop without leavin ur in suspense. Maybe sunday will be better cos me knw say u no dey go church.

*chop and clean mouth* btw chistar01 is dis story fiction

valdes00: Maybe sunday will be better cos me knw say u no dey go church.

lol, who tell you say i no like to dey go church? Incase you dont know, im a born again christain oh. *winks*

this chista of a player stop this suspence before I send amadioha after you niw

Nice one Chistar...professionally,you should really take it easy with the rush to update cos it tends to increase the rate of semantic errors(spellings) in your work. You write very well I must say . KEEP THE GOOD WORK COMING!!!

Always interesting...

@kingsline, calm down oh!, just so you know, amadioha got nothing on the God i serve. LMAO!! :p

@gentleDamsel, ill definitely yield to your advice not because of you are right, which of course you are but because you are like the only person that has gotten the right spelling of my name in a while, 'CHISTAR' i dunno why people see that and spell 'Christar, chestar, chister, chista' the list goes on, Not like im complaining tho. Thanks for the advice.

@Naktel, lol, you think so?

chistar....dis suspence too much o, anyway nice one and keep it up.

saintbeejay: chistar....dis suspence too much o, anyway nice one and keep it up.

Thanks bro

David rapéd sandra?

yemi2plus2: David rapéd sandra?

lol, when we reach there, you go know.

chistar01: lol, when we reach there, you go know.

dats flow1759 in d makin.

I doubt if this story is real,because the suspence is just too much,everything happening in split seconds,try to reduce the exergerations,and be more realistic,I know you want to get your audience attention but please reduce the amount of suspence that occur at a time so that it can be realistic,nice write up by the way....you are a good story teller,am dead sure you are a sanguine from your write up.

Dapo777: I doubt if this story is real,because the suspence is just too much,everything happening in split seconds,try to reduce the exergerations,and be more realistic,I know you want to get your audience attention but please reduce the amount of suspence that occur at a time so that it can be realistic,nice write up by the way....you are a good story teller,am dead sure you are a sanguine from your write up.

lol, thanks for reading and making an observation, but as i stated in the 'introduction' and i quote - 'Secondly, you may want to ask 'is this a true or fictional story?' well, ill let you decide what you want to belive *winks*, afterall, as the saying go ..'no be my mouth you go hear say president dey sh*t too'.

I'll try reducing the way i end each update in a high jump. And sure im preety sanguine about the story.

Thanks once again, your comment is highly valued

Nduking92: dats flow1759 in d makin.

lol..

chistar01: lol..

wait guys, av nt seen any trace of flow here nor anywher in d past weeks.. Anyone know wats up wt him? I do c him on 2go though

@opeano, since you see him on 2go, why not ask him directly?

Morning guys!!!

hmmmm........well i'm just speechless!!!!! more heat to your armpit bro but you knw i'm still waiting for more updates sha

NEW UPDATE IN A BIT

Emm...#coughs#.There's nothng wrong wt a lil bit of suspence here n there @ least d updates ar regular n we dnt av 2 wait 4 long.Its d suspence dat keeps us comin bk 4 mre

Dapo777: I doubt if this story is real,because the suspence is just too much,everything happening in split seconds,try to reduce the exergerations,and be more realistic,I know you want to get your audience attention but please reduce the amount of suspence that occur at a time so that it can be realistic,nice write up by the way....you are a good story teller,am dead sure you are a sanguine from your write up.

Hehehe.. I'm seeing over 10 people viewing this topic and patiently waiting.. LOL.. Let me pull you guys legs alittle.. IM not updating until its exactly 10:00am ..:p *tonugue out*..

Sorry,pls update o

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Chistar..i tink i shld warn u, dis incomplete acts of urs.. Even storybooks dey get Act 1, scene 1, dis scene was nt even complete and u want us to believe dats true suspense abi...oya good boi, biko, add more

Nice ..but to be sincere u only lusting after amaka u dont love her..stop confusing lust for love

opeano: Chistar..i tink i shld warn u, dis incomplete acts of urs.. Even storybooks dey get Act 1, scene 1, dis scene was nt even complete and u want us to believe dats true suspense abi...oya good boi, biko, add more

Lmao! Its not a novel or story book nah. Its mor like a diary of the past, abi diary dey get chapter? No worry i'll update in due time.

Black vampire: Nice ..but to be sincere u only lusting after amaka u dont love her..stop confusing lust for love

hmm, you think?

you are only feeling that way about Amaka because you have not tested her wait till test it you will definately snap out of it

@chistar.. I seek for permission to quote a part from this your last update.