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| Re: ... by Dygeasy(m): 12:56pm On Jul 22, 2013 |
Eze Promoe:We Are Saying The Same Thing. |
| Re: ... by HumbledbYGrace(f): 4:14pm On Jul 22, 2013 |
Eze Promoe: Ehen, HumbledbyGRACE, its your turn to update!Crying baby ranaway...don't pull me out of my hole abeg. |
| Re: ... by HumbledbYGrace(f): 4:16pm On Jul 22, 2013 |
Dygeasy: We Are Saying The Same Thing.Bola, that is not what I have in mind, would you mind if I modify that? Then Mynd will hide it if you ask him to. |
| Re: ... by Mynd44: 4:19pm On Jul 22, 2013 |
Stop derailling this thread. Last warning |
| Re: ... by HumbledbYGrace(f): 4:20pm On Jul 22, 2013 |
Mynd_44: Stop derailling this thread.grrrrr! Sorry |
| Re: ... by EzePromoe: 4:24pm On Jul 22, 2013 |
HumbledbYGrace: Crying baby ranaway...don't pull me out of my hole abeg.I don't want to derail. PM me! |
| Re: ... by Dygeasy(m): 5:38pm On Jul 22, 2013 |
HumbledbYGrace: Bola, that is not what I have in mind, would you mind if I modify that? Then Mynd will hide it if you ask him to.Oh My! Are You Back Or Something? Wait, Do You Wanna Modify/Rewrite Chapter 9? Well, Fine. There's No Way I Could Have Known What You Have In Mind. Just Decide Quick. Chapter 10's Loading!!! |
| Re: ... by HumbledbYGrace(f): 7:08pm On Jul 22, 2013 |
Dygeasy: Oh My! Are You Back Or Something?Nnae, give me maybe 10 to 11hours. Is it too much? Pls |
| Re: ... by Dygeasy(m): 7:13pm On Jul 22, 2013 |
HumbledbYGrace: Nnae, give me maybe 10 to 11hours. Is it too much?Fine Then! |
| Re: ... by HumbledbYGrace(f): 7:20pm On Jul 22, 2013 |
Dygeasy: Fine Then!thanks though something is bothering me, I wrote the first chapter focusing on me and it still going to like that and I might have a problem with the way other writers have created me to be. |
| Re: ... by Dygeasy(m): 8:07pm On Jul 22, 2013 |
HumbledbYGrace: thanks though something is bothering me, I wrote the first chapter focusing on me and it still going to like that and I might have a problem with the way other writers have created me to be.Ideally The Story Is Meant To Be Like That. The Writer After You Will Build On Your Own Post And Direct It The Way He Wants Then The Next Does The Same Thing. Not Writers Doing The Story Haphazardly And Revolving Events The Way He Wants And Then The Next Chapter Creates His Own Plot From Another Angle. So Far There Hasn't Been A Direct Relation Between The Posts And Events In The Story. Its A Collaboration. We Need To Justify The Reason For The Collaboration. My Opinion! |
| Re: ... by Neduzze5(m): 8:11pm On Jul 22, 2013 |
Dygeasy: Ideally The Story Is Meant To Be Like That. The Writer After You Will Build On Your Own Post And Direct It The Way He Wants Then The Next Does The Same Thing. Not Writers Doing The Story Haphazardly And Revolving Events The Way He Wants And Then The Next Chapter Creates His Own Plot From Another Angle. I thought there's another thread for all these chit chats here and there. Person go open thread, see two pages gone already only for it to be chats. Na wa oh |
| Re: ... by Ivynwa(f): 11:50pm On Jul 22, 2013 |
Flows have got flowy ideas but how come his ideas don't flow far from his udeme drinks? 1 Like |
| Re: ... by UjSizzle(f): 8:22am On Jul 23, 2013 |
Dygeasy: Ideally The Story Is Meant To Be Like That. The Writer After You Will Build On Your Own Post And Direct It The Way He Wants Then The Next Does The Same Thing. Not Writers Doing The Story Haphazardly And Revolving Events The Way He Wants And Then The Next Chapter Creates His Own Plot From Another Angle.I don't think the story should revolve around the life of just one character. Like the Game of Thrones story?? Different things can be happening at the same time in the university, with a number of lead characters. You can each build your stories around these characters, but with a focal point eventually. Like said earlier u need to have a chat with your writers..it's kinda obvious you guys haven't talked. Just my opinion. |
| Re: ... by EzePromoe: 11:27am On Jul 23, 2013 |
This is just like a seasonal film, and could last as long as indefinite. But in a story like this, we have only one lead character and that is Seun, or maybe a supporting character (Mukina), others are ...... *searching for words* |
| Re: ... by Ajibel(m): 1:03pm On Jul 23, 2013 |
You writers need to come up with a plot. Lots of inconsistencies and no definite theme. As at chpt 7, we readers ought to be able to visualize where the story is headed with twists, suspense and thrills if possible. The story is still nice only cuz of the individual brilliance of each writers buh as a team, the story is heading towards being a crap and if this continues, boredom from readers is inevitable. I'm sorry if i sound harsh buh you need the criticism so you can do better. Suspend any updates for now and work on the loopholes, create a perfect plot which every writer would have in mind and try not to be too offensive in your description of a Nl'er  -Seyi Pythonian 4 Likes 1 Share |
| Re: ... by Nobody: 1:48pm On Jul 23, 2013 |
too many comments and just few chapters#unfollows thread# |
| Re: ... by EzePromoe: 4:40pm On Jul 23, 2013 |
idnoble135: too many comments and just few chapters #unfollows thread#Make sure you don't view as guest  |
| Re: ... by yemi2plus(m): 10:23am On Jul 24, 2013 |
Three days gone and stil no updates. |
| Re: ... by HumbledbYGrace(f): 10:37am On Jul 24, 2013 |
yemi2plus2: Three days gone and stil no updates.life goes on |
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