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Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 7:31am On Dec 31, 2013 |
sкчscrαρεr™:awwww thanks bro. The sky is just your starting point (even though I must confess that I haven't checked out your story in a while sкчscrαρεr™:11? Lol .. I appreciate. Hope u won't miss CELL 6 - Origin oh , cause we go fight if I don't see clemzy in the comment box after each update |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by VivyGift(f): 8:08am On Dec 31, 2013 |
chistar01: posted . Thanks BTW Seen. On a scale of 10, I will give u 8. U did a marvellous job. Can't wait for CELL 6 - Origin! Wen shd we expect it? |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 8:16am On Dec 31, 2013 |
Vivy Gift:an 8? Yey!! ... CELL 6 should start somewhere between the second and third week of January |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by VivyGift(f): 8:39am On Dec 31, 2013 |
chistar01: an 8? Yey!! ... CELL 6 should start somewhere between the second and third week of January Kk now lemme start counting down. Until then, enjoy urself nd happy new year in adv |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Heyzee200(m): 8:56am On Dec 31, 2013 |
satisfied!weldone@chistar bravo!!! |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Sheenor: 10:45am On Dec 31, 2013 |
Thank you mr chistar!.......... |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by skyscraperTM(m): 12:05pm On Dec 31, 2013 |
chistar01: awwww thanks bro. The sky is just your starting point (even though I must confess that I haven't checked out your story in a while 11? Lol .. I appreciate.Of course I won't miss it. Just post the link here when you've started. By the way, My story has already ended. |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by asoebi(m): 1:23pm On Dec 31, 2013 |
Sincerely I'll rate the story 9/10...... * Good character plot * Good story line * Fairly constant Update timing * Wonderful, Creative & Imaginative ending...... In-fact good customer service... Looking out for your new thriller series and with what I have read from you so far, I can only sit tight, relax and wait for another hum, hum.... chai I'am short of words....................................................................... another BOMB!! |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by adegwurulez(m): 2:16pm On Dec 31, 2013 |
nice story, nice ending.. Not good at rating sha but u did a great job |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by ayando(m): 9:15pm On Dec 31, 2013 |
This is my first post n I will thank you for doing a wonderful job. Looking forward to your next story. Cheers |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by kennybelle: 11:09pm On Dec 31, 2013 |
All thanks goes to u sochistar, love ur story, ur dedication to to it n ur summary @ d end. Though u made my @ miss some beats with d suspense @ d last scene. Thanks 4 killin no one except d kidnappers, Thank u loads. |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Nobody: 2:56am On Jan 01, 2014 |
a job well done.am a silent reader but i cant help lauding you after reading this.KUDOS |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by PrinceAdepoju(m): 4:12am On Jan 01, 2014 |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Eniqurl(f): 6:16am On Jan 01, 2014 |
Nice beqinninq, lovely endinq. Ur jez 2 qud. HAPPY NEW YEAR! |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Missmossy(f): 11:57am On Jan 01, 2014 |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Missmossy(f): 11:59am On Jan 01, 2014 |
Wow!!! Nice one Chistar,this last update is just so alluring. Do continue the good work,you rock!!! 1 Like |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by linpok: 1:08pm On Jan 01, 2014 |
congrats on d successful completion of d story....more greese to ur elbow.. Happy New Year Mr Chistar |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by ARareGem(f): 9:02pm On Jan 01, 2014 |
Finally had time to read it. Interesting. Chistar01, you entertain with your writing and whether you know it or not, what you write has a strong hold on the mind of your readers. So do well to pass the right message through your words. Endeavour to do your part through your talent. The harvest is ripe, but the labourers are few. Se you understand? And ehen, biko, try to avoid sex implicit and explicit scenes/episodes so that I don't have to skip any part. I rate it 7. Happy new year. |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 7:26am On Jan 02, 2014 |
ARareGem: 0. Finally had time to read it. Interesting.0. lol... Firstly! Thanks 4 ur loyal followership, correct me if m wrong but I think u've been reading my stories since My complicated love story, so big thank u to dat. 1. Hmmmm... Yea, I know that and its great to know that people actually read my stuffs and enjoy it. 2. I didn't know dz until recently when I got mails and people requesting to add me on instant messengers (whatsapp, bbm n d rest) so dat I can advice dem on relationship issues and stuffs like dat. They seem to believe that because I write romance stories, I should have a clear view of how romance should be and how to solve any problem. Sadly, they aren't entirely right. My stories are just a figment of my imagination. Anyway, if anyone want to talk to me about "relationship" issues, feel free to email me, if I can help, I'll help, if not... Sorry in advance. 3. I don't exactly get this, but I think I get the broad idea. 4. Lol, I'm sorry about this but in my opinion, its very difficult to right romance stories without explict contents. I mean, I can choose to avoid it or don't give to much details but there are people who like it and look forward to such stuffs in stories. So I guess this is a problem I as a writer face: "how much s3x is enough s3x in a story?" I try my best to minimize the s3x contents to three or less episodes at most and so far, so goo so I guess ill stick to dat and don't worry, there is always a warning and I try to write it in a way that even if you skip the episode, u don't miss any important detail in the story. 5. Chai, a 7? That's errr... An A1 right? Yey!!! . Happy new year to u too, hope u had madt fun cause I sure did!!!! |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 7:34am On Jan 02, 2014 |
aso ebi: Sincerely I'll rate the story 9/10......all this for me? Dude u making my head swell oh, if its bursts ehn ... I comment my reserve. Thanks for your comments and everything, I really appreciate. kennybelle: All thanks goes to u sochistar, love ur story, ur dedication to to it n ur summary @ d end. Though u made my @ miss some beats with d suspense @ d last scene. Thanks 4. killin no one except d kidnappers, Thank u loads.lol, what good is a story if its totally predictable and dere isn't suspence in it? . Lemme tell u a secret, at a point, I wanted to kill John but then Jummy would have to remain single and that would spoil the plot since I wanted to ladies to have a happy ending. Eni~girl:yey!!! My favourite person . Thanks babes, how are u doing anyway? ayando: This is my first post n I will thank you for doing a wonderful job. Looking forward to your next story. Cheersthanks sir, don't worry, the next story is already knocking on your door. A big shout out to everyone who made dz story a success. I can't mention names but u all know yourselves and a big thank you to yemi2plus for just being there sha even though he is still facing a ban, he still sent me an email once on twice on how he thinks the story should go or should have gone, thanks bro. Happy new year you all and is it just me or is 2014 already looking bright already? |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by carexy(f): 11:36am On Jan 02, 2014 |
chistar01: awwwwwwww... Thanks babes . Hope u won't miss 'CELL 6 - Origin'?lets go their..*winkz* |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Sanguine(f): 4:21pm On Jan 02, 2014 |
Chister Chister SoChister!! I've been silently following you all along, just wanted to stay lowkey. . But now I just thought to drop one or two of my silent thoughts. I Read your Complicated love story... Ol'boy you be badt guy oo. . And this B¤I¤T¤C¤H (this NL word processor abi wetin call chhanged it to 'naughty lady'! )... I've just three words to describe it and that's ''off the hook''. It was totally off the hook!! What more can I say... I was actually predicting that Richard (Zainab's Ex) would have a hand in the kidnap. . I wish I could write a 'makesenseful' story. . Thumbs up! I hear 2014 is a leap year . You, we are not just gonna leap, you, we are gonna leap in leaps and bounds. And it's sure gonna be a real roller coaster ride all the wayyyy!! CHEEEERSS!! |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by zeekz(m): 5:24pm On Jan 02, 2014 |
nice story Now check dis out https://www.nairaland.com/1577527/ever-been-threatened-because-girl |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by ARareGem(f): 12:37am On Jan 03, 2014 |
Chistar, spread the gospel with your writing. For sure, I've been having fun since 1st January. It's now time to get serious sef. Rather, thank you for entertaining us. In MzChistar's voice- Peace. |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by kayojosephy(m): 10:22pm On Jan 03, 2014 |
is it to late? but i av to drop it cos i started just 2 days ago and i must confess,u are marvellously marvellous...dats breathtaking |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Daniel2802(m): 8:47am On Jan 04, 2014 |
My guy you always keep up to my expectations.The sky is your stepping stone. |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Ghyft(f): 9:16am On Jan 04, 2014 |
HMMMMMMMMM.....WHAT MORE CAN I SAY??!!!!!!?!! |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Balley(f): 7:42am On Jan 05, 2014 |
Sochistar, gud wrk bro.... |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by alabig(m): 10:07pm On Jan 06, 2014 |
Nice radiance, you get the brain, you get the hand, you get the pen....don't stop half way for the development of this story. It should be on the hands of the best directors and producers. Thanks for your critical and thrilling story, just remind me of prison break. Thumbs up!!! |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by felipemadero(m): 1:10am On Jan 07, 2014 |
ARareGem: Finally had time to read it. Interesting.if i slap u now ehn!.ar u tryna take the pomp off the literary pageantry? |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by PrincessB1(f): 11:42am On Jan 07, 2014 |
woww great write up kip it up |
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 2:20pm On Jan 07, 2014 |
YaY!!! Just finished designing the cover for CELL 6 - Origin!!! What do you guys think?
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