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Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by Ghyft(f): 2:07pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
Ghostie:ghostie Asakel......nice name sha |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by Nobody: 2:16pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
Alex sat on her bed on monday morning with her laptop on her lap. She had already received a lot of calls and text messages and gifts from families and friends that morning but she hadnt received any call or text message from Nosa. She knew he was planning something nice for her birthday and she also wanted to make their date special. She picked her phone and dialed Bobby's number. Bobby was both Alex and betty's close friend,they graduated from the same university. He owned 'L.carters' a very unique and chic resturant in V.I which was always bubbling day and night with customers. "hey bobby?" "hi Lexi? Watsup now? Happy birthday! Was about to call you just now sef" only Bobby called her 'lexi' because he felt the name suited her perfectly. "tanks Bobby, its been a while. How have you been and how's the resturant coming up?" "very fine o,we thank God. How are we spending your birthday na? You should come around sometime lexi" he suggested. "yeah well i was actually calling to make reservations for 2o'clock for two people would that be possible"she inquiried "woah a reservation for me and the beautiful Lexi, so awesome!" bobby teased as Alex chuckled "very funny bobby" "request granted Lexi! I really want to see the lucky guy that has succeded in stealing your heart" he said smiling as Alex chuckled again. "thanks a lot Bob" "no problem, and happy birthday once again lexi" "thanks bud, see ya at 2" alex said and hung up. Hmmm a lady calling to make reservation for her and her boyfriend on her birthday? How odd or maybe romantic.. Bobby thought to himself shrugging. At least he would get to see her again after such a long time. Smiling, he dropped his phone and turned to face his business. Alex stood up from the bed and raced to her wardrobe and stood akimbo in front of it, trying to decide what to wear. She picked a beautiful pink dress and placed it on her bed. Just then her phone rang, it was Nosa.. "hey babe watsup?" alex blurted grin sheepishly "am good, umm Alex, sorry we cant hang out today, i have an impromptu meeting with the chairman at Abuja very early tomorrow, so i have to leave today" "but what about today? Dont you have any plans for us?" "we can make plans during the weekend Alex" "but dont you know what today is?" "yeah independence day" Nosa replied bemused Alex stared at the name on the phone to be really sure she was speaking with the right person then she replied. "okay Nosa, have a safe flight" "alright then, will call you later" he said then hung up. Impossible, how can he forget my birthday?, has it gotten to this? Alex asked noone in particular. Just then her door rang, Alex face brightened, "oh so Nosa was just trying to prank me huh?" she said giggling as she raced to get the door. Alex gasped with wide eyes as she opened the door and saw someone holding a very big box.... "Happy birthday Alexandra" #to be continued... |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by IKJ1000000(m): 2:28pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
Adex097:*comfortably sitting on z SUV*Gud one mehlena,i dy folowfolow o |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by odizeey(m): 2:30pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
I don hate nosa now,Daniel abeg toast dis girl well for me joor,na wetyn I dey tlk b dis,gals wen lyk money,at d end una go c say na love mata pass |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by Nobody: 2:41pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
odizeey: I don hate nosa now,Daniel abeg toast dis girl well for me joor,na wetyn I dey tlk b dis,gals wen lyk money,at d end una go c say na love mata passshuuuu? Lol....U dey provoke o |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by Nobody: 2:44pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
IKJ1000000:tank a lot bro.. Keep follwn |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by IKJ1000000(m): 2:48pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
Mehlena: #continuation...desperate daniel |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by Eazybuhfocuz(m): 3:44pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
Interesting.........diz iz wonderful prof...........*gbosa gbosa 4 my sharp guy daniel* |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by Asakel(m): 4:26pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
Nosa 4get her birthday? Jesus iz Lord o. . If dat person nah be Daniel or her landlord eh...me nah read again. . Wait o....landlord knw im tenants birthday? Lol! |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by Nobody: 5:33pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
Must be Betty |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by MsSpaqs(f): 6:25pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
Hmm...Nice story but u dnt have 2 begin ur story with # continuation,am sure evryone reading the story knws it is.It's just an opinion tho do watever suits you best. |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by odizeey(m): 6:36pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
Ms Spaqs: Hmm...Nice story but u dnt have 2 begin ur story with # continuation,am sure evryone reading the story knws it is.It's just an opinion tho do watever suits you best.I will beat u o |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by Asakel(m): 6:47pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
odizeey: I will beat u oAbeg beat am. If u nid sledgy lemme know. Lol! |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by chistar01(m): 6:47pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
Mehls, nice update. Try and compile your posts before updating. The posts are too short individually, compilng them makes your work look more organised, professional and easy to read... Also, work more on your spacing, its fair but I think it can be better... Just a thought. PEACe |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by odizeey(m): 6:57pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
Asakel:bring am mk I break d head |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by Mickey7(m): 7:03pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
Asakel:shut it! U too Odizeey |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by Nobody: 7:05pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
"happy birthday Alexandra" Daniel said grinning as he entered and dropped the box on the table. "wow Daniel! Thank you" Alex was still surprised "how do you know where i live?" "do u really want me to bore you about how i got to know?"he asked raising a brow. "can i sit?" "ofcourse please sit" she gazed at him. That was the first time she would see him without wearing a suit. He wore a pair of sneakers, jeans and a white shirt. He was cleanly shaven and looked more handsome...she noticed she had been staring and quickly looked away when his eyes met hers. "Alex! You horrible!" he said trying to portray a disgusted look. "really?" she remembered that she wasnt wearing any makeup and was wearing just a t-shirt and shorts. "oh! I look like frankenstein right?" she said, her cheeks flushed, as she watched him roared uncontrolably with laughter on the sofa holding his stomach.. After managing to get himself together, he said stil grinning "nah... am just kidding,You look very beautiful" "thank you" her cheeks flushed with embarrasment. She felt comfortable, she always did when she was with him. "so where is your boyfriend" he said scanning every corner of her room with his eyes "abeg i no fit fight o, tell me now so that i can find my square root" he teased, he had no intention of leaving, boyfriend or no boyfriend. "he is not here joh.." she said giggling "what's in the big box"she asked nodding at the box on the table "well lets find out" he said and leaned towards the table taking the cover off revealing a very big beautiful pink, blue and white two-step cake decorated with bits of rose flowers. "woah! So beautiful" Alex gasped as she gazed wide eyed at the cake. "you like it?" "what!? I love it! Thanks Daniel" "i have never gotten any gift like this before" she blurted before realising what she said. "your boyfriend never got you one before" he said, that was more like a statement than a question. "he is a busy man" she said sadly "but are you happy Alex? He wont be here today right?" Alex didnt reply, she simply shook her head and looked away biting her lip. "hey! Why dont we go somewhere and just have fun. You cant spend this wonderful day locked up here" he suggested "that would be cool" she said smilling "do you have any place in mind? Its your day just name your favourite place and we are off" he said snapping his fingers. "yeah i think i do. Let me go and change" she answered chuckling carrying the cake to her fridge. "wait before you go, let me sing you a birthday song"he offered grinning and started singing. Now i was her turn to laugh, he might be perfect and all,but he had a terrible voice. Alex had never laughed so hard in such a long time, Daniel is really something she thought to herself as she made her way to her bedroom to change. ***************** Betty walked briskly into the ever busy resturant, she looked very smart and elegant in her black dress and a black purse. She reached the counter and greeted one of employees,"hi, how are you. Is your manager in?" "no, he just stepped out he would be back soon. Would you like to leave a message" "no thanks, i would be back" she said and walked away. As she stepped into her car, she spotted Daniel and Alex walking into the resturant giggling. Betty simple shook her head,narrowed her eyes and bit her lip. Although Alex was her bestfriend,she felt Alex was playing games. 'but she doesnt know am a professional in games playing" betty said to herself and then drove off. TBC... |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by Nobody: 7:09pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
chistar01: Mehls, nice update. Try and compile your posts before updating. The posts are too short individually, compilng them makes your work look more organised, professional and easy to read... Also, work more on your spacing, its fair but I think it can be better... Just a thought.got it! Tanks a lot chistar |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by Nobody: 7:10pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
Ms Spaqs: Hmm...Nice story but u dnt have 2 begin ur story with # continuation,am sure evryone reading the story knws it is.It's just an opinion tho do watever suits you best.noted. Tank u. |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by Mickey7(m): 7:21pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
chistar01: Mehls, nice update. Try and compile your posts before updating. The posts are too short individually, compilng them makes your work look more organised, professional and easy to read... Also, work more on your spacing, its fair but I think it can be better... Just a thought.I dnt think I agree with you.not everyone luvs to read lengthy posts...I think the length is ok.it makes it very easy to follow.besides u dnt want her to bore odizeey with long posts,do u? ... Thumbs up Mehlena.you started the story like a pro. the dialogues relates well to the(nigerian) setting..overall,nice one |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by Nobody: 7:23pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
Mickey7: I dnt think I agree with you.not everyone luvs to read lengthy posts...I think the length is ok.it makes it very easy to follow.besides u dnt want her to bore odizeey with long posts,do u? ...lol. I sight ya jawe. thanks a lot 1 Like |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by odizeey(m): 7:29pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
Chai Alex don enta o Dis one na nollywood o,genevieve n omotola |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by odizeey(m): 7:31pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
Mickey7: I dnt think I agree with you.not everyone luvs to read lengthy posts...I think the length is ok.it makes it very easy to follow.besides u dnt want her to bore odizeey with long posts,do u? ...Mickey u r ryt,d guy want mk mhelena story quick finish so him market go move.hahaha |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by Mickey7(m): 7:39pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
odizeey: Mickey u r ryt,d guy want mk mhelena story quick finish so him market go move.hahahakai..u too funny |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by IKJ1000000(m): 7:47pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
more update pls |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by Melancholy(m): 7:54pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
Hmm...i pray it ends well btw this good friends |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by Nobody: 7:55pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
odizeey: Mickey u r ryt,d guy want mk mhelena story quick finish so him market go move.hahahai no dey there o...am sure he means well. |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by odizeey(m): 7:56pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
Mehlena: i no dey there o...am sure he means well.u dey dere o |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by Nobody: 7:57pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
odizeey: Chai Alex don enta ololz |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by Asakel(m): 8:51pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
Mickey7: shut it! U too OdizeeyU will shut it. |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by sconp: 9:25pm On Oct 25, 2013 |
Fflwn |
Re: >>one Last Minute....<< by Asakel(m): 7:10am On Oct 26, 2013 |
Hmmmph! Ah jez read da last piece now....and i'm SMH. |
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