Ngozi is really over reacting, she should calm down jare.... Clement....I'm nt really sure he will find anything in his wardrobe cos Kelvin is a very sharp guy..... Nd about dat man in deir custody, I dnt think he will confess ooo. In fact dey just start work ni.

D9ty7.... I really gbadun ur style.... Always updating.... U dey try oooo.... Seriously, u are different frm other writers. Thanks 4 d updates.... We really appreciate it.

toykathy:
Condemn ke?? Why wud I condemn somthn i cant make? I appreciate evry writer on this forum cuz we dnt pay them yet they give us their best. I'm just saying a gud writer like u shud b included.
Cc: Larrysun, sir pls include D9ty7 in ur collaboratn. Thz.

I would be glad to have D9ty7 there too. Like he said already, he may collaborate with another writer to come up with a chapter.

D9ty7, if you would like to be a part of it, tell me which writer you would like to write the chapter with and I'll inform the person.

Thank you, sir.

God bless you, Toykathy.

Well done bro..

tecno4life:
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*catches dem*
don't run don't run
just kindly drop comment and critisms

Lol ok am not running. I started reading this story fully dayb4 yesterday nd just got to dz page now coz I was busy that have not commented
This story z wow I so much love it. Buh I felt sorry for that boy whose twin bro was killed when he got stucked in that room. And he couldn't leave the dead boy behind. That part was touching,infact tears dropped from my eyes (...lol). I so much love ur story nd the suspense too. God bless u and ur work.

Larrysun sir, u just put a smile on my face and may God almighty make u smile and grant ur special heart desire. Thank u too and God bless.
Cc D9ty7, oya fast fast give d name abeg.

LarrySun:
I would be glad to have D9ty7 there too. Like he said already, he may collaborate with another writer to come up with a chapter.

D9ty7, if you would like to be a part of it, tell me which writer you would like to write the chapter with and I'll inform the person.

Thank you, sir.

God bless you, Toykathy.

D9ty7:
You guys have really been wonderful today
Vibra, Adewealth027, tecno4life, Adeh39, kingphilip, Emmykul4love, codedbaby, femyodsky, Viktormartince, crystalsaint, kocvalour, Ogbarmey, stuff46, d4real890, Emzypaz, Flakeey, handmaid, haydot95, and others. Including those who didn't comment.
I love you all. More update later in the evening. Presently, loads of works are piling on my small table.
Nothing stops me from dropping something tonight.

Oga, its ViktorMartins oh! Well done!

D9ty7, you need to pay for using half my username in your story oh! Ngozi is simply excepting Tobi to beg her cos he has been playing the dumb part since! That relationship might not work oh!

Onemansquad:
is lyk dis Ngozi is mad oo so police force has taken over her head
infact tecno4life gv me dt ma cane i nid 2 cane her

oga d9ty7 i sight u jor expetn mor frm u 2moro

*brings thr holy cane*
here it is oga

ViktorMartins:
D9ty7, you need to pay for using half my username in your story oh! Ngozi is simply excepting Tobi to beg her cos he has been playing the dumb part since! That relationship might not work oh!

* in igbo man's voice*
ISE!!!
May d gods put an end 2 their marriage

Following.....

--continuation--
Exams will be starting on Monday, the exams that'll decide their
future, their chances of getting a
job after their youth service. Even
though, her grades have been
good, she can't take chances of
failing the exam. She walked into the lecture hall
quite early and sat down in the
front like she has always done. She
brought out her phone when the
population began to increase and
plugged in her earpiece. She tuned to a radio station. And was
humming to the songs being aired.
Just then someone tapped her
from behind and handed a folded
paper to her, the guy turned back
at once and walked towards the exit. She unfolded the paper and
saw it written boldly with a red ink, "YOU ARE NEXT." she looked at the retreating figure
of the guy, he wasn't a member of
the class, she had never seen him
on campus before. She considered
going after him to ask what the
content of the paper meant. She stood up, tucked her phone in her
bag and ran after the guy.
"Excuse me." She called but got no
reply.
Just then the guy entered a Nissan
Amanda and the car drove off. She made a mental note to copy the
plate number, but she had no pen
on her. She managed to cram the
number plate. Just as she tried
turning back, the lecturer whose
class they are having just drove into the lecture complex.
She quickly walked into the hall
without turning back. Immediately
she got to her seat, she scribbled
the plate number on one of her
books, she typed it on her phone with the aim of saving it in her
diary.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Rachel was watching film in the
living room when her ringing
phone caught her attention. She stood up and walked into her
room to pick the call. Tak of the
delvil, lo and behold, Doctor
Rapheal was the one calling.
"Hello." She said a little bit
frightened. "Sweetheart, I was expecting your
call throughout yesterday but I
was suprised you didn't call. What
did your husband say?" he asked.
"Look here Raph, I don't think
such thing will work between us, I am married."
"You were what yesterday?
Divorced or unhappy with your
marriage?" He asked.
"I love my husband and I am
happily married to him." She defended weakly.
Just then Onome opened the door
and walked in.
"Give me the phone let me talk to
him." She said to Rachel who
immediately handed the phone to her.
"Hey, I have a question for you."
She said with a deep croacking
voice.
"Who is this? Give the phone back
to the owner." He said rudely. "How would you feel if your wife,
the woman you claimed to love is
sleeping with another man behind
your back?" Onome asked.
There was silence for a while
before he spoke. "Give the phone back to Rachel."
He said.
"I'll definitely give the phone back
to her. But in case of next time,
don't jump around chasing
married women. Is this how you were taught to handle your
patients?" She asked.
Rapheal still kept mute and didn't
say a thing.
"Mind you, do unto others what
you want them to do to you. Someone will definitely pay you
back in your coin. Your wife will
warm the bed of another man."
Onome continued.
"Woman, don't rain curses on me."
"Am not raining curses on you man. Its the truth and its bitter. Stay
clear of Rachel or you face the
consequences." Onome said and
hunp up.
Rachel was looking at the elderly
lady with in and total suprise. "When next he calls, don't pick his
call. Talk to your husband and let
him understand how you feel
about that hospital. You can
change hospital just to avoid that
useless man." Onome advised while Rachel continued staring at
her.

--to be continued--

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As for the case of victor, he miqht not be of help if he choose to play a dumb fellow with the police.
The cases on groud are too much to say they could be connected.
Victoria as an assassin, now entered the scenes of sandra and kelv,while someone wantz kelv be eliminated at khar corp and his father is now more occupied that he has forgoten about charlse wife (whatz that her name again?) and charlse getting more cases on him,don't you think it would get him confused even he is an experience fellow.
And ngozi's action miqht be a problem, she could loose her fiance and start trusting kelv since he wantz her at in the police to get information,it miqgt make her tellin hm things she should not and in turn ruins charlse chanses on the case... My opinions ooh
my oga D7ty9 yu the bomb

another update already? My read am

Tolani........u had better run for ur life or report to the police
I don talk am say d sense wey Rachel suppose get,na him Onome pack full for head.......once again well done Onome
Rachel had better talk to her husband o.....delay might be dangerous

It's lyk Rachael still hv feelings 4 dis doctor, dat's y she's too weak 2 resist him, onome, I lyk her swag. I just hope Rachael has d nerve 2 tell her husby.
D9ty7....u are one in Trillion... Thanks 4 d update

U're da bomb boss! Pls continue, I wanna knw wat will happen to Tolani

Why nt tell ur husband, ehh kwa rachael?? changing hospital won't solv d problm, beside ur new hospital na where them go post raphael go.

adeh39:
It's lyk Rachael still hv feelings 4 dis doctor, dat's y she's too weak 2 resist him, onome, I lyk her swag. I just hope Rachael has d nerve 2 tell her husby.
D9ty7....u are one in Trillion... Thanks 4 d update

exactly what I had in mind

Bad news guys. I just lost one of the updates that I already saved for today.
That alone discouraged me, I'll have to type all over again. You will have to bear with me. The update may come in late.

--continuation--
Tolani picked up her bag and
headed for the door. The events of
the previous night kept playing in
her mind.
"Don't you have classes today?" Tolani asked Dolapo who was
lying on the bed still dressed in her
nightie.
"I don't, not until 2pm. Professor
Orimade." She replied.
"STAT right?" Tola asked. "Yeah. Last class before exams."
Dolapo emphasised.
Tola pushed the door knob and
walked out of the room, head high
in the air.
Exams will be starting on Monday, the exams that'll decide their
future, their chances of getting a
job after their youth service. Even
though, her grades have been
good, she can't take chances of
failing the exam. She walked into the lecture hall
quite early and sat down in the
front like she has always done. She
brought out her phone when the
population began to increase and
plugged in her earpiece. She tuned to a radio station. And was
humming to the songs being aired.
Just then someone tapped her
from behind and handed a folded
paper to her, the guy turned back
at once and walked towards the exit. She unfolded the paper and
saw it written boldly with a red ink, "YOU ARE NEXT." she looked at the retreating figure
of the guy, he wasn't a member of
the class, she had never seen him
on campus before. She considered
going after him to ask what the
content of the paper meant. She stood up, tucked her phone in her
bag and ran after the guy.
"Excuse me." She called but got no
reply.
Just then the guy entered a Nissan
Amanda and the car drove off. She made a mental note to copy the
plate number, but she had no pen
on her. She managed to cram the
number plate. Just as she tried
turning back, the lecturer whose
class they are having just drove into the lecture complex.
She quickly walked into the hall
without turning back. Immediately
she got to her seat, she scribbled
the plate number on one of her
books, she typed it on her phone with the aim of saving it in her
diary.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Rachel was watching film in the
living room when her ringing
phone caught her attention. She stood up and walked into her
room to pick the call. Tak of the
delvil, lo and behold, Doctor
Rapheal was the one calling.
"Hello." She said a little bit
frightened. "Sweetheart, I was expecting your
call throughout yesterday but I
was suprised you didn't call. What
did your husband say?" he asked.
"Look here Raph, I don't think
such thing will work between us, I am married."
"You were what yesterday?
Divorced or unhappy with your
marriage?" He asked.
"I love my husband and I am
happily married to him." She defended weakly.
Just then Onome opened the door
and walked in.
"Give me the phone let me talk to
him." She said to Rachel who
immediately handed the phone to her.
"Hey, I have a question for you."
She said with a deep croacking
voice.
"Who is this? Give the phone back
to the owner." He said rudely. "How would you feel if your wife,
the woman you claimed to love is
sleeping with another man behind
your back?" Onome asked.
There was silence for a while
before he spoke. "Give the phone back to Rachel."
He said.
"I'll definitely give the phone back
to her. But in case of next time,
don't jump around chasing
married women. Is this how you were taught to handle your
patients?" She asked.
Rapheal still kept mute and didn't
say a thing.
"Mind you, do unto others what
you want them to do to you. Someone will definitely pay you
back in your coin. Your wife will
warm the bed of another man."
Onome continued.
"Woman, don't rain curses on me."
"Am not raining curses on you man. Its the truth and its bitter. Stay
clear of Rachel or you face the
consequences." Onome said and
hunp up.
Rachel was looking at the elderly
lady with in and total suprise. "When next he calls, don't pick his
call. Talk to your husband and let
him understand how you feel
about that hospital. You can
change hospital just to avoid that
useless man." Onome advised while Rachel continued starring at
her.
****
A black mercedez benz 190E
pulled up in front of Clement's
residence. Two men dressed in tux
suits alighted and walked towards
the gate. One of them knocked on the gate.
"Yes? Who is that?" A voice asked
from within.
The gate was opened by a young
guy who looked Igbo with a tired
look. "How may I help you?" He asked.
"Is this Inspector Clement's
residence?" One of the two men
asked.
"Yes, and who are you?" Akpan
who still had bandage on his body asked.

--tbc--

Dix one hard to predict. but i predict,the comisioner wil want both clement, ngozi and mike to release that criminal called viktor

i'm here.. Abeg do kill people pls

Thank you jare my brother. I go kill them plenty.

kocvalour:
i'm here.. Abeg do kill people pls

Refreshing but suspense filled. Clement and his wife's lives depend on the gateman. He better call his oga and inform him of the visitors and the card. Kelvin should be fast enough to fight and kill the opportunist in his group. That lady should walk in a friend's company quickly to campus security after lectures. Great one D9ty7.
Techno your seat gave me the urge to write all these o. Thank you
Yes Rachael and her discovery o. Chief Clement of all has not done anything.

Mhen...Akpan na sharp guy o,seems one of them would be taken off the case,and something tells me its Ngozi

I agree with you. But don't you think it could be Clement? Sylvester has been acting all strange towards him.

haydot95:
Mhen...Akpan na sharp guy o,seems one of them would be taken off the case,and something tells me its Ngozi

God doesn't leave his own.

ThaRuthlxx7:
Hi guys i just want to use this medium to lie down and say God i thank you, ur too faithful..

I was involve in a trailer crash accident on monday morning with my cousin, suddenly a trailer from nowhere jamb us.. It happen so quick that i found myself and my brother in the hospital.. Although no body died i just had a broken leg and arm same with my brother... The drive mscheeeew was no where to be found.. Inspite of all... Am saying lord i thank you and wish u guys help me thank him too:::: i can't thank him enough

God will continue to protect us all.

Niwdog:
Dix one hard to predict. but i predict,the comisioner wil want both clement, ngozi and mike to release that criminal called viktor

my tots exactly
viktor might b released based on the order from above

d9ty7 nice update boss... do have a great day

Emzypaz:
God doesn't leave his own.God will continue to protect us all.

amen

Emzypaz:
I agree with you. But don't you think it could be Clement? Sylvester has been acting all strange towards him.

u might be right on that,then it means Kelvin's secrets will be exposed,and if clement is taken off the case,he z gonna make his brother help him handle the case,tho illegally...and Kelvin is gonna end up dying for the good cause....or maybe not

ThaRuthlxx7:
Hi guys i just want to use this medium to lie down and say God i thank you, ur too faithful..

I was involve in a trailer crash accident on monday morning with my cousin, suddenly a trailer from nowhere jamb us.. It happen so quick that i found myself and my brother in the hospital.. Although no body died i just had a broken leg and arm same with my brother... The drive mscheeeew was no where to be found.. Inspite of all... Am saying lord i thank you and wish u guys help me thank him too:::: i can't thank him enough

Thank God