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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by kwencypresh(f): 10:15am On Sep 03, 2015
hmmmmm
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by soniachuks(f): 10:28am On Sep 03, 2015
Finally,Thanks for the update...
More greeze to ya elbow grin
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by ysadiq(m): 12:10pm On Sep 03, 2015
Its a pity for Adeola but i hope chris can help save her from been arrested for kidnapping. Pls more update sirrrrrr.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Holubunmi(f): 4:41pm On Sep 03, 2015
I'm glued to this..... U are going a great job
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by princessadeola(f): 7:51pm On Sep 03, 2015
thumps up. Thanks 4 d update
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 8:55pm On Sep 03, 2015
Speechless lipsrsealed
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by stuff46(m): 9:11pm On Sep 03, 2015
I smell blood o.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Aliyullahi(m): 9:29pm On Sep 03, 2015
This is becoming more interesting. Deola's ass would be saved but that is if she hasn't receive one bullet or more.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by shankies215(f): 7:28am On Sep 04, 2015
Adeola wud be arrested.....nyc! Who dem cum shoot lyk dis? I smell more blooood..... D real poo has jst started! D9ty7, i neeeeed mooooooore, biko
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by mackzydon9(m): 11:51am On Sep 04, 2015
Jeez finally after a day of not sleeping. I must confess bros dayo you are good just good. And i look up to you in the sphere of literature on nairaland.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Nobody: 2:26pm On Sep 04, 2015
Great updates dee. Thanks
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by macpetrus(m): 3:25pm On Sep 04, 2015
kudos..Nice update
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Lilyomi(f): 5:39pm On Sep 04, 2015
So Ade is off the hook? This may giv Daniel the upper hand over Christie and Ade may win custody. On the other hand, mayor wl reveal wat apnd or one of the men wl confess. Asyd dat, hw did Ade knw abt it? That question may imply her. Gud Job.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Ziziola: 7:14pm On Sep 04, 2015
ysadiq:
Its a pity for Adeola but i hope chris can help save her from been arrested for kidnapping. Pls more update sirrrrrr.
Which kyn yeye hope be that. Her husband must know what she did

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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Nobody: 7:10am On Sep 05, 2015
This is getting interesting more and more.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Oyinprince(m): 7:15am On Sep 05, 2015
still following Boss, ride on
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by zimoni(f): 10:49am On Sep 07, 2015
Quite interesting.

Thanks for the update Bro.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Omololamide(f): 10:14pm On Sep 07, 2015
Oga Dee, wetin dey happen. See how long it took us to get an update on this story. I check ur blog daily bt no updates abt this story. Even ur new stories, there hasnt been any new updates in a while. Pls hope all these stories re not too much at once... Pls look into it and give us a schedule to follow with regular updates. Thank you.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 6:20pm On Sep 08, 2015
--continuation--
Mayor stared at his blood soaked left hand in horror. He had during his fight with his opponents removed a gun and due to the close proximity between the hand which held the gun and his opponents tummy, he has pulled the trigger, the bullet penetrating harder than ever, and the resulting blood splash hit his hand.
He stared at the lifeless body lying in front of him, and for the first time, he regretted pulling the trigger. He looked round the room, but couldn't find his second opponent, he knew at once that he had gone to seek help and probably return with reinforcements, and as it stands, he is outnumbered with a very large difference, such that it won't take them five minutes to finish him off.
He immediately tasked his mind into finding and easy escape route for him, and being a formost member of the gang, he knew every ins and outs of the warehouse.
From his standpoint, there were only three exits, or better referred to as safety exits. The first being the enterance door, the second being the window and the last being the roof.
He considered his chances with the three exits and quickly analysed the pros and cons. Exiting through the window will land him outside the warehouse, but still within the compound, and he will need to access the high walls or unlock the gate to gain freedom. Making use of the door is simillar to making use of the window, because opening the entrance door leads him into the compound, and he had the option of accessing the gate or the high walls. The last option seemed temporary, because it is not a means of escape, but mere temporarily going into hiding. Which is to climb into the roof and stay there until he is no longer hunted.
He immediately made for the window, using it as a step, he was able to remove one of the celling slabs and in a swift movement, he disappeared into the roof.
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Biggie stared from Majid to Adeola to Christopher with a questioning look, but non of them could tell him where the gunshot came from or who was responsible. Just then another of his men barged into the room.
"Baba! The cops are here." He panted.
Biggie could feel his heart in his mouth. "What cops?" He asked.
"The police."
"Inside the building?" He asked.
"No...." the guy was explaining, but was cut short.
"come on, shut up. You are confused. Gather everyone else in the building, we are shifting base." Biggie instructed. And in five seconds, he was out of the room.
To say Adeola was shocked is an understatement, because never in her life has she heard of an assassin's group running away at the mention of the police. But with the reform the police force underwent in the last few months, the fear of the Men in Black is the begining of wisdom.
"Don't make a sound, okay? The police will be here soon." Adeola said to Chris who still held on tightly.

--tbc--

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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(m): 6:21pm On Sep 08, 2015
--continuation--
After he has been given an all clear, Daniel Martins finally drove into the compound with the hope of finding his son alive. He quickly alighted and ran towards the police boss.
"How far?" He asked.
The police officer turned to face him with a suprised look. "You shouldn't be here." he said.
"I asked as question Mr man. And I demand an answer." Daniel shouted.
"Calm down, Mr Daniel. Your safety is very important to me in particular." The police man replied politely. But seeing that his approach is not going down well with the businessman, he changed approach.
"For now your son is no where in sight. The supposed kidnappers are not either, but we saw a dead body in one of the rooms, and from all indications, the gunshot we hear the other time resulted in the dead body we found. If that is the case, then the kidnappers should still be around the vicinity." He explained.
"What about my son?" Daniel asked fearfully.
"e be like sey you are deaf. Haven't I been speaking in English since?" The officer thought.
"Finding your son lies with finding the kidnappers. Just stand back and let us do our job."
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After spending fifteen minutes in the room with no one in sight, except the blaring sound of the police van siren, Mayor jumped down as silent as he could and then proceeded into the inner rooms in the warehouse. He was hopeful that Christopher would still be in the room as it will be unprofessional of Biggie to at the same time try to save himself and still hold the boy hostage.
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Daniel stood impatiently beside the police boss as he instructed his boys with displayed images on a flatscreen. Judging from the way and manner with which everyone paid attention, he concluded that it has to be related to the house inside whose compound they were.
"Sir." One of the police officers called their boss' attention while pointing to the entrance of the house.
Everyone turned towards the direction which the officer pointed.
Daniel followed everybody's gaze and as if in a movie, Chris walked side by side with a young man he would recognize anywhere, and a suprise followed from behind. He had to rub his eyes with the back of his hands to ascertain if he was dreaming or not. There stood his wife all smiles.
He calmly walked towards them.
"Chris, are you okay?" He asked.
"Yes dad." for the first time in his life, he felt like a real dad. He opened his arms and hugged him tightly.
"Thank you very much sweety." He hugged his wife too, and for the first time he felt he has a family.
"He found us and rescued us." Chris said pointing to Mayor who was being held by the police.
Daniel shook hands with him warmly with a smile, even though Mayor didn't return the gesture, he still appreciated his help at rescuing his son.
A question on his mind was how his wife came to be in the same place with Chris.
"Where is my mum?" Chris asked, disappointment evident in his looks.
"She sent me." Mayor replied.

END OF CHAPTER 16

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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by mackzydon9(m): 6:47pm On Sep 08, 2015
Bros dayo let that law breaker be arrested
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 9:17pm On Sep 08, 2015
at last chris will go to his dad
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Omololamide(f): 10:02pm On Sep 08, 2015
Sweet. Weldone.... Thanks for the update. Keep it coming. It dey sweet my body... Interesting update.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by ysadiq(m): 10:39pm On Sep 08, 2015
Ahhh dis is not god for tina is this how daniel and adeola are going take christopher away from her.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Lilyomi(f): 1:48am On Sep 09, 2015
Onemansquad:
at last chris will go to his dad
If this is ur mind I may divorce u.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 4:08am On Sep 09, 2015
Lilyomi:
If this is ur mind I may divorce u.
is dat a threat undecided
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Orlolahdey(f): 10:13am On Sep 09, 2015
Tanx for the updates boss
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by adewealth027(f): 10:50am On Sep 09, 2015
I second you jare
Lilyomi:

If this is ur mind I may divorce u.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 12:55pm On Sep 09, 2015
stuff46:
I smell blood o.
if i call u dog nw u go dy complain

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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 1:09pm On Sep 09, 2015
adewealth027:
I second you jare
u want me to divorce her undecided
why
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Pukka36(f): 3:24pm On Sep 09, 2015
Onemansquad:
at last chris will go to his dad
It's not gonna happen!
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 3:27pm On Sep 09, 2015
Pukka36:
It's not gonna happen!
isnt it obvious?? oya na lets watch and see *u wil c d way dee wil twist everytin

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