Liricyst V Obesemf

Voting Criteria :

Opener - 1 point

Rhymes - 2 points

Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points

Punchlines - 3 points

Personals - 2 points

Flow - 1 point

Wordplays - 2 points

Closer - 1 point


Rules

- 10 lines.

- Deadline is 8pm, Friday 6 March 2014.

- Verses should be posted by both
battlers on or not later than
deadline date.

- No biting, swaying, stretching,
feeding or recycling.

- No complaining about votes.

- A no show attracts a ban.

- No unnecessary comments

- No smearing comments about any
bar OR biting accusations without
proof.

- Whatever you feel is wrong with a
bar or verse - please put it in your
vote. Vote and state what you found
wrong.

- If there's anything you need to say
in defence of your verse please save
them for after voting's over.

- NO argument with established vets
OR voters.

- Battlers should not interject
between votes and voters should
just vote and leave it like that.

Goodluck!!!

check

Bloody scene

obesemf:
3 people left, so how we dey do am

You both should do this in shivers, be cagey/cos ur lines are weaker n lazy/this nigga is crazy/& you both to him is like river to navy/after he does this battle, this will be a quote from linda ikeji:/ “A madman just did the murder of two”…like he had wild sex with iya ibeji!!!/

Btw obese & I, we can find no greater spacing/Lyrically, I’m on a better placing/the alms I give equal d whole figure the hater rakes in/ If I throw his wack scripts to the wind…he’ll ‘do his runs’ &still be displeased…cos it’s another case he gets to fail at paper chasing!!!/

He can trust that I’ll be rocking this bout/we go punch for punch, I get to sip on mixed drinks for knocking him out!!/He should put his faith in me, my next words are nothing to doubt/When he about to be slayed, he’ll bow to my blade… yea sure..I’m murking devouts!!!/

This should be a ‘quick’ kill, there’s no use bluffing /I could have a ‘sharp’ sword meet his head as I introduce cutting / but I’ll find no wits, just blood profuse gushing / so I be stating the claim: no matter how many divisions I make in his brain,….his 'intelligence' quotient will always produce nothing!!!!/

obesemf:

as soon as i win the tournament finish

LOL! What’s the likelihood of his claims & damned plans?/ he expects & aims to advance/to the throne…without anticipating the cyst, I’ll put a shame to his ‘cat scans’/see, I kill the possibility,& reveal the probability, of an obese win…..is rightly named a fat chance!!!/

police is your friend

the fool dey wan beat me, how?,
yo, ma guy, when you see me bow,
its clear, I'm here to destroy your gimmick now,
i just turned NL to rap genius, now watch me break lyric down/
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watch your head boy, murder is my first choice,
are you scared boy? better make less noise,
no label gonna sign you, cause you got the best voice?,
even if he sees the 'deal though' the gay gets beaten with sexx toys,
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see im tactical, my victory far from marginal,
gimme the first second, i make this beating classical,
had a huge appetite in boarding school, friends thought it was magical,
never,'1st, 2nd or3rd, cuz how he constantly 'fought' at the table.... niggas mistook him for Arsenal

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just hit the touch down, i aint really give a ffuckk now,
you could lie prostrate, but truthfully you'd still backdown,
your illusions of grandeur, you'd have your scalp cut round,
the fool go dey scream "I AM LEGEND"as Will Smith laughs in the background,
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so lets talk school or money, the dude is a reject,
he go claim he gets quick head, but he barely think first,
the fool is boring, he jokes and every body wants him dead,
at this 'rate' give him 'time' to impress, and even the 'principal' wont show simple interest


*drops mic*

Open for votes :
Mikuz
Emaprince
O4kaa
Cooger
Ibime
Kr0ne
Goshikid
Limerick
Please your two cents. Thanks!

mikuz pls tag judges

obesemf:

had a huge appetite in boarding school, friends thought it was magical,
never,'1st, 2nd or3rd, cuz how he constantly 'fought' at the table.... niggas mistook him for Arsenal

*nodding my head like warriblood*

MVGT- obesemf

this principal and arsenal line..comical shit!! ...Basket Mouth Of Nairaland Land

Sorry for coming in late, been super busy.

Good battle. I enjoyed it. Obesemf takes this for me. Nice one!

O4kaa
Cooger
Ibime
Kr0ne
Goshikid
Limerick

Please vote on this too. Thanks!

Good bout. . . here's how I call it. . .


Opener - 1 point - Lyricist

Rhymes - 2 points - Lyricist

Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points - Tie

Punchlines - 3 points - Tie

Personals - 2 points - none really

Flow - 1 point - Obese

Wordplays - 2 points - Tie, because I think fourth and fought is a stretch

Closer - 1 point - none, both played.


MVGT: Lyricist

Ok great, more votes please.

D0pe brawl!



Opener - 1 point - Tie (both ideas are great!)

Rhymes - 2 points - Lyricist (Lyricyst is superior here. Obis, never rhyme 'first' with 'get')

Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points - Obesemf

Punchlines - 3 points - Tie

Personals - 2 points - Lyricyst

Flow - 1 point - Obesemf

Wordplays - 2 points - Tie (d1ldo and fourth played)

Closer - 1 point - Tie

Mvgt - Lyricyst

These guys are good

Mvgt: Lyricyst!

Obese you sef you Try

Both emcees are equally matched, a much better battle ! both of them went hard

Opener - 1 point - obesemf obesemf pidgin flow is crazy, i felt that broken pidgin flow in my veins

Rhymes - 2 points - obesemf His flow is bananas, i was rhyming it on a beat as i read his bars

Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points - Liricyst

Punchlines - 3 points - Draw Liricyst got class no doubt, obesemyf was going bunkers 1-2 jab 1-2 jab

Personals - 2 points - obesemf He was throwing slugs like liricyst was in front of him

Flow - 1 point - obesemf His flow is bananas, i was rhyming it on a beat as i read his bars

Wordplays - 2 points - Draw

Closer - 1 point -Draw

liricyst structure was kinda questionable, felt a bit like overstretching if he had arranged his bars, it woulda sounded way better , he got skills no doubt...however

MVGT: obesemf

Mikuz pls tag more Dvs

Thanks guys. .

Goshikid
Coogar

WhaYaSay?

opener--Tie
Rhymes-Liricyst
PunchLINE--Obesemf
Flow--obesemf
Personal--tie

mikuz:
Thanks guys. .
Goshikid
Coogar
WhaYaSay?

Wordplay--Liricyst
METAPHOR--Liricyst
Closer-Liricyst
MVGT Liricyst

Mikuz... You guys don't have schemes in your judgement catas? Smh

Mikuz... There's no Scheme as part of the judging catas? That's not cool fam


Okay, I know my judgement might not count but Amma have my say anyways (Mikuz I used to have a title on Insignia, you should know what that means)

Bar 4 Bar... This was a really close battle, both mcs impressed me with their pen game but truthfully.. Bar 3 is the only bar I have #Obese edging cos #Lyricist came weaker in that bar.. Other bars were close and we're either ties or slightly edged to #Lyricist... Cata breakdown would have them almost on tie but Issorta preferred Lyricist set ups leading up to the punch



#MVGT: Lyricist... Kudos to both MCs... It's a close one, could easily have gone either ways

IDivine1:
Mikuz... You guys don't have schemes in your judgement catas? Smh

What's your name on Insignia?

Ojumu IDivine Samuel

wake up, fools!
most of you slept on the creativity displayed by these cats.

this is the best match-up i have seen here this year & i must say i was highly impressed that newbies could really come up with such an amazing pen game.

i would have called for a re-match if it's possible but since a winner must emerge, my vote goes to liricyst by the tiniest of margin. rhyming is the foundation of rapping as far as i am concerned - i am always on the same side of the perfect rhymer.

liricyst won me over with his rhyme pattern & rhyme scheme. obese had the better scheme & the dopest angle though - if obese can polish his rhyme scheme better then he would be a monster.

his closer was the bomb. nuccas are quoting his arsënal bar as the dopešt when he literally killed the closer by taking us back to primary school arithmetic - the formula for simple interest.

it's a shame the bar even flew over ibime's head & he claims to be a math guru.

MVGT: liricyst

coogar:
wake up, fools!
most of you slept on the creativity displayed by these cats.

this is the best match-up i have seen here this year & i must say i was highly impressed that newbies could really come up with such an amazing pen game.

i would have called for a re-match if it's possible but since a winner must emerge, my vote goes to liricyst by the tiniest of margin. rhyming is the foundation of rapping as far as i am concerned - i am always on the same side of the perfect rhymer.

liricyst won me over with his rhyme pattern & rhyme scheme. obese had the better scheme & the dopest angle though - if obese can polish his rhyme scheme better then he would be a monster.

his closer was the bomb. nuccas are quoting his arsënal bar as the dopešt when he literally killed the closer by taking us back to primary school arithmetic - the formula for simple interest.

it's a shame the bar even flew over ibime's head & he claims to be a math guru.

MVGT: liricyst

Bro, I doubt Obese's last bar went over anyone's head... The whole simple interest scheme was nice as with most of the other bars in the verse... It's just preference as to what you enjoyed more

IDivine1:

Bro, I doubt Obese's last bar went over anyone's head... The whole simple interest scheme was nice as with most of the other bars in the verse... It's just preference as to what you enjoyed more

it did!
if they caught it, someone woulda mentioned it. this battle deserves more credits than they are giving it. you want to tell me that semi-illiterate mikuz knows what simple interest is?

coogar:


it did!
if they caught it, someone woulda mentioned it. this battle deserves more credits than they are giving it. you want to tell me that semi-illiterate mikuz knows what simple interest is?

Obese's closer is the best punch in this battle, that's why I gave him the win.

Pundad why are you swaying votes?

coogar:
wake up, fools!
most of you slept on the creativity displayed by these cats.

this is the best match-up i have seen here this year & i must say i was highly impressed that newbies could really come up with such an amazing pen game.

i would have called for a re-match if it's possible but since a winner must emerge, my vote goes to liricyst by the tiniest of margin. rhyming is the foundation of rapping as far as i am concerned - i am always on the same side of the perfect rhymer.

liricyst won me over with his rhyme pattern & rhyme scheme. obese had the better scheme & the dopest angle though - if obese can polish his rhyme scheme better then he would be a monster.

his closer was the bomb. nuccas are quoting his arsënal bar as the dopešt when he literally killed the closer by taking us back to primary school arithmetic - the formula for simple interest.

it's a shame the bar even flew over ibime's head & he claims to be a math guru.

MVGT: liricyst

I've played Principal and Interest before so it wasn't new to me. Not saying it's generic, just not new to me

Ibime:


I've played Principal and Interest before so it wasn't new to me. Not saying it's generic, just not new to me

Where did you play it?

Ibime:


I've played Principal and Interest before so it wasn't new to me. Not saying it's generic, just not new to me

shut up your mouth, stop lying!
where did you play the "simple interest" scheme before? tell us, where?