Self control is very important in life..ave learnt to ave self control bro...............dis ur story is gr8 and I say bro more synovial fluid to ur glenohumeral joint.

oceandivee:
Self control is very important in life..ave learnt to ave self control bro...............dis ur story is gr8 and I say bro more synovial fluid to ur glenohumeral joint.

chai! These ur terms they do me somehow o... U be medical student? Thanks alot anyway

I love the story because it has happy ending though some people has to be sacrifice in other for some to be happy. You did a great job especially for your constant update. Looking forward for you other stories.

Finally we have peace. The game is not realy a dirty game because even TB Joshua will fall into the game just that God want Afeez to be great this way. Realy love the story thank ajodem.

Ajodem dis ur story make sense Jare,Dem don talk am already,self control is all DAT matters.lovely story guy and I hope u will start a new story very soon

Great work. Kudos to u.

Mehn the 'dirty game' appeared twice in the whole story...nice wan bro jst dat ah gon give some fualt to you 'bros why u no de use condoms on tiawo or zianab u for don aviod all dis pregnancy nah...nd 2nd critism acrding to d story when ud do ya NYSC u cum get money buy bunglow self get car abi? Money de abi...bt all ya journey na wit car ud go..haba bros no plane ni(airport) for u too land anytym u wish in a twinkling of an eye (even tho its a fictional story)

AJODEM!!! with the way you write you deserve a Nobel Laurete plus Grammy

Bravo!!! Learnt a lesson n ur story. I think zainab's father wasn't realistic in blaming Afeez. The main culpit is zainab for dangling a fish in front of a cat n expect it not to eat it. Why shud she tempt afeez thru taiwo? Afterall body no be firewood. I learnt never to give out what u desire (ur man) to a frnd in d name of testing loyalty. Loyalty my foot.
Looking forward to reading more of ur stories. Nice one bro.

sunnym:
I love the story because it has happy ending though some people has to be sacrifice in other for some to be happy. You did a great job especially for your constant update. Looking forward for you other stories.

Thanks alot for the commendation. That was my first write-up and my wish is to be a seasonal writer

drtwist:
Finally we have peace. The game is not realy a dirty game because even TB Joshua will fall into the game just that God want Afeez to be great this way. Realy love the story thank ajodem.

hmmm! I got point my bro... Thanks for making it with me... You too much

uthman305:
Ajodem dis ur story make sense Jare,Dem don talk am already,self control is all DAT matters.lovely story guy and I hope u will start a new story very soon

Thanks alot for the commendation my bro... this is my first write-up and my wish is to be a seasonal writer... We gonna catch later God's willing

tsquare29:
Great work. Kudos to u.

thanks alot...

icewinz:
Mehn the 'dirty game' appeared twice in the whole story...nice wan bro jst dat ah gon give some fualt to you 'bros why u no de use condoms on tiawo or zianab u for don aviod all dis pregnancy nah...nd 2nd critism acrding to d story when ud do ya NYSC u cum get money buy bunglow self get car abi? Money de abi...bt all ya journey na wit car ud go..haba bros no plane ni(airport) for u too land anytym u wish in a twinkling of an eye (even tho its a fictional story)

The guy involved, Afeez was a learner ni jawe and never prepared for all those challenges... Lesson to guys and the ladies... Lolz. U 2 much

Idrhas:
AJODEM!!! with the way you write you deserve a Nobel Laurete plus Grammy

I can't just believe what i'm seing here... You guys are stimulating with these your comments... I really appreciate you all for support. You are blessed.

mubzay:
Bravo!!! Learnt a lesson n ur story. I think zainab's father wasn't realistic in blaming Afeez. The main culpit is zainab for dangling a fish in front of a cat n expect it not to eat it. Why shud she tempt afeez thru taiwo? Afterall body no be firewood. I learnt never to give out what u desire (ur man) to a frnd in d name of testing loyalty. Loyalty my foot.
Looking forward to reading more of ur stories. Nice one bro.

hmmmm! You are very much correct my sister. You are blessed

ajodem:
lolz... Still on process o... Make i add groundnut?...

yes na

gimme part2 and I'll write my review..... thanks in anticipation

Donphemmzzy:
gimme part2 and I'll write my review..... thanks in anticipation

lolz... It gat no part 2 o

u no give me part2......Guy u wicked small oo... but sincerely u are a great writer.... nice write up... U tha bomb!! more ink to ur pen...... inbox me wen next u writing again.... Jah bless!!!

Donphemmzzy:
u no give me part2......Guy u wicked small oo... but sincerely u are a great writer.... nice write up... U tha bomb!! more ink to ur pen...... inbox me wen next u writing again.... Jah bless!!!

Thanks alot ma brova... No quam, we are still together

Ajodem, nice story... It made me cry. Oku ise oo.

michaelmo11:
Ajodem, nice story... It made me cry. Oku ise oo.

Ehyah! It was somehow touching even when I, myself went throught episode 48, I felt like crying, but just a fiction. Thanks for sparing out of your hectic time to go through my work. You are blessed

#tearsofjoy# I love this story....sooooo touching!...op,I doff my cap for u...u are one of the best writers....thanks for the story

queenbetsy:
#tearsofjoy# I love this story....sooooo touching!...op,I doff my cap for u...u are one of the best writers....thanks for the story

hmmmm! Are you guys flattering me with this your complimentry words... I can't just believe what I'm seing here. Thanks anyway... You are blessed

ajodem:

hmmmm! Are you guys flattering me with this your complimentry words... I can't just believe what I'm seing here. Thanks anyway... You are blessed

amen...but bros,I'm expecting another o

Indeed you are a creative writer! Jah bless.

Activityj:
Indeed you are a creative writer! Jah bless.

Thanks alot. You are blessed

Ajodem

Sey na like dis we go dey ni

nice tori i dey enjoy am since episode 1 but d way d tin end nawaaa o wey sophaiat come dey beg wetin she talk we no no nice work sha nice tori i dey enjoy am since episode 1 but d way d tin end nawaaa o wey sophaiat come dey beg wetin she talk we no no nice work sha

9ce story...all we need to dis story is Payne's blessing

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