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Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by cyber5(m): 8:42pm On Jul 26, 2017
stephenGee12:
Lol.....
Nice one bro.
Hadampson, yungeez, meneski, gtin, cyber5 , apollux.
There is a new story ooo.

* Olamide's voice*

melo melo la fe wi
mele melo la fe read


buh no wahala we go read till kingdom come
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by Hadampson(m): 9:05pm On Jul 26, 2017
cyber5:

* Olamide's voice*
melo melo la fe wi mele melo la fe read

buh no wahala we go read till kingdom
Lolgrin You are very funny
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by Hadampson(m): 9:09pm On Jul 26, 2017
stephenGee12:
Lol..... Nice one bro. Hadampson, yungeez, meneski, gtin, cyber5 , apollux. There is a new story ooo.
Present bro
It's good to have you on board queenitee..where were you all this while?
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by queenitee(f): 9:11pm On Jul 26, 2017
Hadampson:
Present bro

It's good to have you on board queenitee..where were you all this while?
I have been working ni o. Mehn David and Jeremy
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by Hadampson(m): 10:18pm On Jul 26, 2017
queenitee:

I have been working ni o. Mehn David and Jeremy
cheesy
Welcome back

Alot had been happening in your absence o buh lemme keep quiet sha before somebody will start calling me AMEBO
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by Hadampson(m): 11:04pm On Jul 26, 2017
Clash of the titans... david VS jeremy
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by queenitee(f): 12:18am On Jul 27, 2017
Hadampson:
cheesy
Welcome back

Alot had been happening in your absence o buh lemme keep quiet sha before somebody will start calling me AMEBO
Oya tell me, don't keep quiet.
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by XolezCouture: 6:40am On Jul 27, 2017
interesting...following up
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by baronky: 8:14am On Jul 27, 2017
This is nice, can't wait for season 2
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by Hadampson(m): 9:38am On Jul 27, 2017
queenitee:

Oya tell me, don't keep quiet.
Whispering to her# jane1234f will tell you everything
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by queenitee(f): 1:27pm On Jul 27, 2017
Hadampson:
Whispering to her# jane1234f will tell you everything
She told me already, she said it's you

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Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by gtin(m): 3:22pm On Jul 27, 2017
stephenGee12:
Lol..... Nice one bro. Hadampson, yungeez, meneski, gtin, cyber5 , apollux. There is a new story ooo.
Am present, lemme call my boo MhizDherbee come let's read a story together
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by Hadampson(m): 3:51pm On Jul 27, 2017
queenitee:
She told me already, she said it's you
Meshockedundecided She is lying against me o
Am nur the one who gossips when you are away. It's hormobolanle and jane1234f
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by Jane1234f(f): 4:30pm On Jul 27, 2017
Hadampson:
Meshockedundecided
She is lying against me o

Am nur the one who gossips when you are away. It's hormobolanle and jane1234f
Thank my sister knows I cannot do that
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by Hadampson(m): 5:13pm On Jul 27, 2017
Jane1234f:
Thank my sister knows I cannot do that
Mtcheewwsad

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Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by Abelosas222(m): 6:22pm On Jul 27, 2017
caught in the moment continues tomorrow.. You can get the full story for just 250naira via diamond bank 0077718348 pls pay alongside ur name and ur WhatsApp contact
Caught In the moment continues tomorrow�
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by MhizDherbee(f): 7:36pm On Jul 27, 2017
gtin:

Am present, lemme call my boo MhizDherbee come let's read a story together
Present Bae!
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by Nobody: 8:10pm On Jul 27, 2017
winkwhere is our moderator we are eagerly waiting for the part two ooo the suspense is killing
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by queenitee(f): 8:20pm On Jul 27, 2017
Tina1223:
winkwhere is our moderator we are eagerly waiting for the part two ooo the suspense is killing
I swear he should come and help us na
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by MhizDherbee(f): 10:02pm On Jul 27, 2017
Is the Op a He/She ?
queenitee:

I swear she should come and help us na
Is the Op a He/She ?
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by queenitee(f): 11:05pm On Jul 27, 2017
MhizDherbee:
Is the Op a He/She ?Is the Op a He/She ?
Sorry, a he. I'm used to reading stories from females a lot, that's why. He should come and help us rather
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by cutediva87(f): 5:34am On Jul 28, 2017
wow
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by Abelosas222(m): 5:57am On Jul 28, 2017
Ab fiction stories/poems
Caught In The Moment .Season 2
written by
onyeneke Abel
Episode 1

My dear readers, it will be a surprise if I tell you that all you've been reading was just a an intro to my story..David coming back into the picture was where my real story began..
As he moved towards us, I noticed a feminine figure with him, who was that? Was he married already?
Till he got real close now..my God David had grown astonishingly handsome..he wore single-breasted suit with a black Oxford wingtip shoe..his dimple was just as cute, brown eyes was way more sexier, he had grown more beards now, was nicely cut..hmm, it seems he had been working out self, his arms were muscular now..oh my God..is this David?..I was lost, forgetting that there was one aunty tailing him from behind..
Jeremy hurried to meet him up and hugged him, I remained where I stood, and tried so hard to hide my face..Jeremy was now leading him to meet me..God this Jeremy self..my legs were shaking, I couldn't comport myself
"Dave this is bukky"
I kept my head down so he wouldn't see my face, but when I noticed he wasn't saying anything i raised my head to spy a little.. And then my eyes met his gaze..I stuttered and missed a step, before Jeremy could reach me, David was quick to hold my hands and drew me to himself..i met his chest and his eyes, and his scent, God I have missed this guy..
"Hello bukky, I'm David"
What? He let me go and extended his hand for an handshake, was he acting or he didn't recognize me..I shook his hand, oh his soft hands
"Bukky compose yourself, stupid girl"
My mind warned me again..I cleared my throat
"Pl..Please..ple..ased to meet you Da..David"
I knew I was actually making a fool of myself when everyone kept quiet for a while till Jeremy saved me had changed the topic
"And who is the lucky one"
He was now referring to that aunty behind him..
"Oh, she is my fiancee"
God! I was deeply hurt..I felt my chest would rip out..so David couldn't even wait for just 2yrs..just 2yrs!..how could he?..he just forgot me like that..
On our way to the hospital, I was strangely quiet, I spied on David as he played with his fiancee who introduced herself as Joanne, with my cornered eyes,he didn't even stare at me for a sec..well she was pretty sha, David always had big eyes..
I knew Jeremy noticed me, so I had to lie again..when we got to the hospital..he rushed to meet madam Clara and hugged her, introducing his fiancee once again..I just stood outside and watched them..so was David just acting or he really forgot about me?

Caught in the moment
continues
©Onyeneke Abel .July 2017 all right reserved

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Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by EvaJael(f): 7:00am On Jul 28, 2017
This is serious. Thumps up op
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by Niwdog(m): 7:38am On Jul 28, 2017
What's wrong with this bulky of a girl
She irritates me with her stupid behaviour
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by queenitee(f): 7:43am On Jul 28, 2017
Uncle come and continue. Bukky isn't stupid Niwdog, you just don't forget your first love easily esp when it isn't like you brokeup or something
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by 1felix(f): 7:50am On Jul 28, 2017
please Bulky is acting too low.
as key figure she needs to be bold. Moreover she was the one who abandoned him at the alter and I can recall if u tell us why she left.
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by Abelosas222(m): 9:08am On Jul 28, 2017
Ab fiction stories/poems
Written by
onyeneke Abel
Caught In The Moment .Season 2

Episode 2

Have you ever felt hurt? That your heart has a pain you can't reach, so hurt that you can't explain how you feel, that you would prefer physical pain to what you feel..how can one person have the power to melt my ego and reduce me to nothing..it was all I thought when I watched David introducing his fiancee, it was what I felt each time he passed by me like I didn't exist, what I felt each time I see Joanne around him..
Jeremy had been trying to reach me but I just kept lying that I wasn't feeling well..he caught many times starring at David but I just waved it off with flaunting excuses, I knew he had began to suspect something was up..but I couldn't help myself.. David was my first, I was his first, it was like we were bonded in some ways that each time I see him my whole body system changes..I still couldn't believe he didn't feel the same way.
Madam Clara chemotherapy had kicked off, I prayed so hard..I had to be there for Jeremy, and kept reminding him that all would be well..well David had Joanne so he doesn't really need me..
Good news!..the Doctor assured us that it was successful, we could only now pray for the best..
We weren't allowed to see her till after a week..I was the first to go in.
"My child, come"
She opened her arms and hugged me..it felt residing..I didn't know when I started crying, like I had been looking for how to let it all out since..
"My daughter, why are you crying?"
She cupped my cheek and used her finger to wipe my tears..I wanted to tell her it was David, I wanted to tell her he was hurting me..but I couldn't, I just hugged her again..she let me cry till I was tired and slept off in her arms..
I felt someone lifting me up, but I didn't want to open my eyes..
"Gently please"
I heard madam Clara's voice in a low tone, she was still weak, I was now regretting why I slept in her arms, imagine the stress I had put her through.. I figured it would be Jeremy..so I just rest my head on his shoulders..but then, I felt this arms was way too muscular than Jeremy's.. So while we were outside the hospital I opened my eyes..
"David?"
He put me gently inside his car and didn't say a word as he drove..
"David?"
What's this..he remembers me now? Or what?..
"David if you would not answer me then stop the car"
I said and I meant it..surprisingly he stopped the car and turned to look at me..
"My Bukky"
My heart melted, that's what he had always called me..so he remembers me?

Caught in a moment
continues
©Onyeneke Abel .July 2017 all right reserved

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Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by gtin(m): 9:47am On Jul 28, 2017
Omo this story is getting more and more interesting can't wait for the next update, Op u are doing a great job
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by abefe99: 9:53am On Jul 28, 2017
if I no comment God self go vex this is really interesting more ink to ur pen
Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by pweetymhi(f): 10:29am On Jul 28, 2017
This is the bomb, welldone sir in falz voice

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Re: Novel: Caught In The Moment (house Of Earl Fashion) Written By: Onyeneke Abel by Abelosas222(m): 1:15pm On Jul 28, 2017
Thnks people fr ur comments..nxt update cms up soon kiss

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