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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by queenitee(f): 3:46pm On Feb 15, 2018
phayth:
Yeah, this is what is called true friendship. Even if it doesn't work out romantically, you can still remain friends with some of your ex especially where you have mutual respect for one another.Thanks dear for the update!
Exactly, that's just what most people don't understand

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 7:41pm On Feb 15, 2018
Dedication:
RolaDiva, tillaman, timota, Adesina12, samwobi, kaytolee, D2Seun, horgahboss, Garphar, Twenty47, Ettabel195, Edipee, Kingsunnyaleke.




MUMMY EJIOFOR
I woke up from my sleep hearing a loud bang on the door.
"Thieves!" I concluded. I never had a robbery experience before all my life.

I went to my daughter’s room, she was up already looking frightened on her bed.

"Mum, what's going on. I think they are thieves" she said with a shaky voice.

"Crystal, oya get up and change into another cloth. Remove this transparent night gown and wear something descent. I mean big cloth that will covers your body" I said and she obeyed.

She wore a long and free gown. I handed her a wrapper to tie it around her body. Just to look less appealing.

I called the security lines we were given at the landlord's meeting but it wasn't going. I had no choice than to call Afam. I quickly passed the message and disconnected the call.

The thieves are now trying to force their way in as the kicks become intensed.
"Open this door now" a devilish voice said from outside.

"God please come to our aid. Jesus take control. I cover myself and my daughter with the blood of Jesus" I said prayerfully.

"Amen!" Crystal said still shaking.

We ran into the sitting room and as we got there. The door flew open before us. As two men walked in majestically with a mask on their faces.

"On your knees!" One of them commanded and we obeyed.

"Take everything you want but spare me and my daughter"

"I can see you want to cooperate" the other thief said.

"Yes....yes. we are ready to cooperate" Crystal said.

"Oh that's nice. Mother and daughter her willing to cooperate" he said sarcastically.

"But it's just that we're not here for the money" the other one added.

I was scared the more when he said they are not here for the money. “So why are they here” I thought.
I summoned courage and spoke.


"Then what do you want from us?" I asked.
"Your lives!"






CRYSTAL
"Blood of Jesus!" I exclaimed shaking. Mum remained quiet, praying inside her heart, I guess.

"Yes, your lives and we've been payed handsomely it"

"Jesus! Assassins!" I cried out.

"Shut that mouth before I shut it for you permanently" He said pointing at me.

"Please..... please... we’ ll pay you whatever you want. I have money, infact my father will pay you anything you want. Name your price and he'll pay"

"O. B. O. He said with sarcasm. Omo baba olowo(rich man's child) will you keep quiet!” He shouted at me.

"Well, that's very nice of you baby girl but unfortunately we are loyal to our clients" he said with a pitiful voice. Though it sounded sarcastic.

"So say your last prayers" he said affirmatively.

I held my mum’s hands and we closed our eyes.
“Stop, before you say your prayers, is there anything you’d like to tell each other people you die?” One of the Assassins asked.

“No, nothing” Mum replied.

“Mum, I have something to say” I said, I just needed to buy time. This is our chance to wait for help.

“You see, we all have secrets. Especially girls...We'll give you time” he said.

“Crystal was is it that you want to tell me at this point of… No, we will not die but live” Mum said.

“Mum it’s about my relationship with my ex- boyfriend, Soma back then in school”

Then I started my narration. It’s not easy to tell but I have to buy time.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Adesina12: 8:05pm On Feb 15, 2018
Wow!!! Omo see suspense
Toyin Taiwo u r the best
O ya hot sweet popcorn for you combine with holandia yoghurt

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by cbella(f): 8:21pm On Feb 15, 2018
Lolzzz... When I now grabbed my coke and biscuit she decided to go on commercial break.


Thank you aunty

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rchilee: 9:52pm On Feb 15, 2018
lol.

Amara n Crystal will be forced to move in with Dady Afam if they survive this

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Bibi294(f): 9:53pm On Feb 15, 2018
No one invited me... Thank God I invited myself

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 10:25pm On Feb 15, 2018
Bibi294:
No one invited me... Thank God I invited myself
My Bibi...... I'm sorry, hope I'm forgiven. Welcome on board.
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by LilySopi(f): 10:57pm On Feb 15, 2018
This story got me glued since I started reading. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Bibi294(f): 12:20am On Feb 16, 2018
rachealfst:
My Bibi...... I'm sorry, hope I'm forgiven. Welcome on board.
of course yes, this Tori dey sweet person for body

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by olatex25(m): 1:03am On Feb 16, 2018
rachealfst....
I don't even know where to start from, let me just say dis is d best story I read so far.. this is just too good, d fiction is number 1, down to d suspense .. u are just too at dis dear, u deserve a medal for dis. it really worth d time... more grease to ur elbow I pray....

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Dessydemmy: 9:32am On Feb 16, 2018
YEEPA!!!

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Ettabel195: 10:29am On Feb 16, 2018
Thank you ma... U are wonderful... I wish u well in all ur endeavours

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Nobody: 10:53am On Feb 16, 2018
cbella:


Lolzz... That rather, then I deserve one bottle of coke grin
Sure u r gonna get more than that one of these days I assure u

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by cbella(f): 10:53am On Feb 16, 2018
rchilee:
lol.

Amara n Crystal will be forced to move in with Dady Afam if they survive this


Who knows maybe Afam or Oba planned this oooo.........
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Nobody: 11:14am On Feb 16, 2018
cbella:



Who knows maybe Afam or Oba planned this oooo.........






Handwork of Beatrice.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 11:26am On Feb 16, 2018
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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by queenitee(f): 11:29am On Feb 16, 2018
Hmm, eh eh

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Eddyella(f): 1:00pm On Feb 16, 2018
See suspense.More ink 2 ur pen.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Ehmjay(m): 1:15pm On Feb 16, 2018
Smart girl!!! I know of some dummie in this thread that their thinking faculty won't go there...I no kuku mention names oooo

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Nobody: 2:38pm On Feb 16, 2018
that O B O part got smiling...

This last update made my day, couldn't believes I was profusely sweating. someone had to ask "Oga is any wrong" before my state of emotion returned to normalcy.

Rachaelfst thumbs up

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by dupsai(f): 4:29pm On Feb 16, 2018
Shift lemme faint, nothing must happen to Crystal and her mum o. Rachaelfst thanks for this, wake me up when the thieves leave.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by horgahboss(m): 6:19pm On Feb 16, 2018
rachealfst:
My Bibi...... I'm sorry, hope I'm forgiven. Welcome on board.
Hello av been trying 2 refill on okadabooks.com so dat i can buy dis story bt it iznt working, care 2 help an astute lover of diz story plz?
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 7:07pm On Feb 16, 2018
horgahboss:
Hello av been trying 2 refill on okadabooks.com so dat i can buy dis story bt it iznt working, care 2 help an astute lover of diz story plz?
You can send me an email. toyinfst2@yahoo.com
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by LilySopi(f): 7:31pm On Feb 16, 2018
rachealfst:
You can send me an email. toyinfst2@yahoo.com
Am interested too cos d same tin happened to me. Hope u don't mind if I mail u

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Horlar995(m): 7:44pm On Feb 16, 2018
Nice work ma'am

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 7:56pm On Feb 16, 2018
LilySopi:

Am interested too cos d same tin happened to me. Hope u don't mind if I mail u
Yes you can mail me.
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by pweetymhi(f): 9:14pm On Feb 16, 2018
lord please send help to them quick o nothing must happen to crystal and her mum

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by kunleis4u(m): 10:13pm On Feb 16, 2018
hmmm dying is not frightening but wrong decision made while living and cause harm to innocent people, i belief betreace will regrett this

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by berhdo: 10:51pm On Feb 16, 2018
I have been following this thread for some time, i must confess u are good, i mean very good. Waiting for the next update ma.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by horgahboss(m): 10:52pm On Feb 16, 2018
rachealfst:
Yes you can mail me.
av mailed it so wat next?
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by LilySopi(f): 9:24am On Feb 17, 2018
rachealfst:
Yes you can mail me.

I have done that
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by lonesome501(m): 9:49am On Feb 17, 2018
hahahahahahaha!! can't stop laughing..imagine who @pweetymhi z praying to is it d lord jesus christ or lord rachealfst

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