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Re: Mended Hearts by damselposh(f): 11:44am On Nov 02, 2018 |
queenitee: lol, the same thing am asking her |
Re: Mended Hearts by Preshbeauty(f): 6:27am On Nov 03, 2018 |
who the hell is this master? bia James, you have not told me why you are covering Mr Williams up. well done OP |
Re: Mended Hearts by Nobody: 7:20am On Nov 03, 2018 |
QueenBelle was here |
Re: Mended Hearts by Yabaleftstudent: 8:03am On Nov 03, 2018 |
nice story but make it more romantic... add lil sex thing inside ;-) |
Re: Mended Hearts by WHOcarex: 8:42am On Nov 03, 2018 |
I'm coming |
Re: Mended Hearts by ADAMXMAR: 10:02am On Nov 03, 2018 |
Nice piece bro..U got a gift |
Re: Mended Hearts by Eberechi24(f): 10:21am On Nov 03, 2018 |
damselposh, we made it to FP, p |
Re: Mended Hearts by damselposh(f): 10:44am On Nov 03, 2018 |
Preshbeauty: Thanks for reading |
Re: Mended Hearts by damselposh(f): 10:45am On Nov 03, 2018 |
QueenBelle: lol, you are very much welcomed |
Re: Mended Hearts by damselposh(f): 10:45am On Nov 03, 2018 |
Re: Mended Hearts by damselposh(f): 10:46am On Nov 03, 2018 |
WHOcarex: we dey wait |
Re: Mended Hearts by damselposh(f): 10:51am On Nov 03, 2018 |
ADAMXMAR: I be girl oooo |
Re: Mended Hearts by damselposh(f): 10:52am On Nov 03, 2018 |
Eberechi24: yes dear, thank you. imela 1 Like |
Re: Mended Hearts by dadalicious: 12:31pm On Nov 03, 2018 |
Re: Mended Hearts by Slimynonny: 12:35pm On Nov 03, 2018 |
Nice epistle. Kudos damsel |
Re: Mended Hearts by damselposh(f): 1:09pm On Nov 03, 2018 |
dadalicious: lol, I don't even know how to add sex things |
Re: Mended Hearts by damselposh(f): 1:10pm On Nov 03, 2018 |
Slimynonny: thanks for reading |
Re: Mended Hearts by Youngzubi(m): 1:46pm On Nov 03, 2018 |
Cool , you're trying dear Try to put episodes or chapters on your update to make it easier for your readers.. Also in your conversation try to make the dialogs more comprehensive, what you have to do is put yourself in position of your characters, dont just think or guess what to write next, be the character, discuss and reply, that way you will get your readers more engrossed in your craft Tho i didnt get the chance to read all today, i l'l continue later Keep it up, we learn everyday, no one knows it all but can only learn and get better... Still your guy youngzubi..... 3 Likes |
Re: Mended Hearts by yunggreat(m): 2:05pm On Nov 03, 2018 |
I've been quiet for too long
please update
more ink to your pen dear ��� |
Re: Mended Hearts by damselposh(f): 2:40pm On Nov 03, 2018 |
Youngzubi: thank you, I appreciate, I will put all of them to practice 1 Like |
Re: Mended Hearts by damselposh(f): 2:40pm On Nov 03, 2018 |
yunggreat:thanks for reading |
Re: Mended Hearts by damselposh(f): 3:48pm On Nov 03, 2018 |
Episode 14 Chapter 25 Mara was done eating and was relaxing on the sofa, her phone rung, she saw her fiance's contact details on the screen, she wondered why he was calling her, she didn't want anyone to spoil the fun she was having with her best friend and so she refused picking up the call, speaking of her best friend , where did she go to?, she entered the room to look for her friend and heard the sound of a rushing tap inside the bathroom, she must be taking her bathe, she concluded. she decided to use that opportunity to take in the decor of the room, it was painted pink, the normal ladies colour, her wardrobe was made of glass, she had a pink bed sheet too, she looked at the bedside drawer and saw a book on top of it, she forgot everything about admiring the room and went to pick up the book, on getting there, she realized that it was a diary, she widened her eyes in shock, her best friend had a diary and she never knew, out of curiosity, she opened the diary, the first pages were about their lives while in the university, she smiled while remembering the past, her smile later turned to a look of horror when she got to a particular page and saw something, a picture of Kenny. she turned to the next page and found a piece of paper folded neatly, she opened it and found out that it was a copy of their genotype test result, she widened her eyes the more because what she was seeing there was different from what the doctor gave to them, then she turned to the next page and read what shattered her heart the more. "Dear diary today is the day that I will finally separate Kenny and Mara, I have paid the doctor to give them a fake result, I can't wait to be with my Kenny" Mara closed her eyes in shock as beads of sweat gathered on her forehead. "Why did you take my diary without permission" Stephanie asked immediately she came out from the bathroom. "What is Kenny's picture doing in your diary?" Mara asked still not recovering from the shock. "Well, you finally found out, yes, am the one behind the threatening note at the mall, I was happy when you told me that you saw Funmilayo, I decided to use that opportunity in sending you the threatening note" she said nonchalantly as she collected the diary from Mara. "But what did I do? I thought we were best of friends?" she asked wiping off the sweat. "yes, we were until you took Kenny away from me, I came back to Nigeria because of him" she shouted. "I don't understand, what do you mean?" "You remember when I told you of a guy I was crushing on?, that guy is Kenny, on my welcome home party, I was going to show him to you but you came up with the excuse of going home, I told him to take you home because our driver wasn't around and not for you to seduce him" she yelled getting frustrated. "But he fell in love with me and not you steph" Mara said finally breaking into a sob. "That's because you seduced him, I was there when he proposed to you at the Macally eatery, all the time I told you that I was in Abeokuta was all a lie, I have been in owerri all those time" she yelled again. "You can't separate the both of us, we love each other" Mara said heading towards the living room to get her phone, she needed to call Kenny to come and pick her up because she didn't think she could drive in that situation, just few steps more to the door, she felt a sharp pain on her abdomen, as if her intestine were been ripped out. she heard a mocking laugh behind her. "I can see that the poison has started getting effective, I poisoned your food dear bestie" Stephanie said sitting down on the bed. "since Kenny still wanted to marry you even after the Genotype troubles, I decided to kill you instead" she crossed her legs now giggling. "But why Steph?, what did I do," she asked clutching her stomach. "Don't worry about Kenny, I will take care of him more than you ever did" she gave her a wink. Mara fell down still clutching her stomach, tears formed in her eyes, was she going to die so early? was she going to die without telling Kenny of their baby, she closed her eyes as tears poured down heavily, she felt life go out of her slowly, then she heard it, her Hero's voice. "Amarachi, I called you but you didn't answer" Kenny said rushing into the room. "officers, that's the lady over there, arrest her please" he pointed at Stephanie. "Kenny, I have to tell you something" she said still clutching her stomach tightly "Am carrying your baby, your seed is growing in me" she said weakly. Kenny didn't understand what she was saying, he needed to take her to the hospital, he carried her and rushed out of the house. 3 Likes |
Re: Mended Hearts by Nobody: 4:39pm On Nov 03, 2018 |
Hmmmmm |
Re: Mended Hearts by Abelranking: 5:13pm On Nov 03, 2018 |
front page material finally on front page |
Re: Mended Hearts by damselposh(f): 6:02pm On Nov 03, 2018 |
LightQueen:lol |
Re: Mended Hearts by damselposh(f): 6:02pm On Nov 03, 2018 |
Re: Mended Hearts by OgaBossG(m): 7:20pm On Nov 03, 2018 |
This is a great piece.
really good. More Grace dear @damsel |
Re: Mended Hearts by Simeonalvez(m): 8:12pm On Nov 03, 2018 |
Y re sure doing a great job in entertaining us... More grace# |
Re: Mended Hearts by Deckline(m): 9:19pm On Nov 03, 2018 |
This line got me.
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"your seed is growing in me"
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Is kenny a farmer now? |
Re: Mended Hearts by francium001: 9:29pm On Nov 03, 2018 |
Congrats dear we made front page today, keep it up @damselposh |
Re: Mended Hearts by damselposh(f): 9:32pm On Nov 03, 2018 |
OgaBossG: thanks for reading |
Re: Mended Hearts by damselposh(f): 9:33pm On Nov 03, 2018 |
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