Damselposh, the ride has been worthwhile dear.
It would be a Sin on my part if I fail to point out this particular mistake I noticed in the last update(Maybe it's in other updates, not sure though). The use of 'Am' instead of ' I'm '. Most Youths make that mistake especially on social media and probably during exams. I'm not a literary dude though
All the same, Nice Plot. Keep shining.

Nice story you have here Dear, it really worth the time, keep it up

eagleeye2:
Interesting story. The plot makes a lot of sense. Nathan knew very well that Derrick would have been a hard nut to crack had it been he got the estate as his father already wished. And Derrick proved this, by going ahead to thwart the 30 million deal his father had with the white guy.
Most times, our parents (especially the wealthy) always have to make tough decisions on who to inherit the most cherished assets or to control the wealth when they are gone.
OP, it would have been nice if you had told us what later happened in the family. Did Derrick later get his rightful inheritance? Did his mother apologize for wrongfully accusing him? Did he get back to the white man concerning the earlier deal which he somehow thwarted?
Nice story all around.

Thanks dear for following all along, I ended the story that way because I started my exams and i am in my final year, so I needed to concentrate. And i didn't want to keep you guys waiting for long, like staying for a week or more without an update, so i ended it the way i did.
Am sorry about it though, but i promise to make it up to you guys in my next story coming up Immediately am done writing my project.
I apologise once again.
Thanks.

Eziokwugbaoto:
Damselposh, the ride has been worthwhile dear.
It would be a Sin on my part if I fail to point out this particular mistake I noticed in the last update(Maybe it's in other updates, not sure though). The use of 'Am' instead of ' I'm '. Most Youths make that mistake especially on social media and probably during exams. I'm not a literary dude though
All the same, Nice Plot. Keep shining.

Thanks for pointing out the mistake sweety, correction taken

francium001:
Nice story you have here Dear, it really worth the time, keep it up

Thanks boo

damselposh:



Thanks for pointing out the mistake sweety, correction taken

Don't mention hun.

damselposh. I really enjoyed this story.Keep it up!

XionTemmy:
damselposh. I really enjoyed this story.Keep it up!

thanks boo

Just stumbled on the story.... really enjoyed it. Well done damselposh...

PrudySara:
Just stumbled on the story.... really enjoyed it.
Well done damselposh...

thanks baby

You're welcome dear

damselposh:


thanks baby