Lutherblaq:
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Lutherblaq

Lutherblaq

Lutherblaq


How many times did I call you?


Man you're good. The story seems rushed but trust me dude, you're doing a great work.

I thought I was the only crazy writer in town, my next story already feels like PG compared to yours.

Keep up the good work Sir.


I just have one or two advices for you...

#please reduce the names, you keep repeating everyone names over and over again, I don't know if it's only me, but I do get lost trying to figure out which character is which, some of the names of the female characters sounds masculine, sometimes I don't know if it's a man or woman speaking.

You need to work on that, like "Toyota", instead of always using that name, you could call her "The Boss" or something distinct or make use of pronouns more.


#Another thing, you sometimes narrate things in first person view.

Example, "The Hunters aren't present as Shark came into the Neon room and bowed to invisible Godzilla."


You could put it this way; "Shark walked into the Neon room. No hunter was present, Godzilla stared into blank space through his mask as the Shark bowed in respect."


Hope you get my point sir. You've won yourself a fan Sir.

Thanks to Antimandatethie for tagging me. Keep up the great work.

Therock5555:
Lutherblaq

Lutherblaq

Lutherblaq


How many times did I call you?


Man you're good. The story seems rushed but trust me dude, you're doing a great work.

I thought I was the only crazy writer in town, my next story already feels like PG compared to yours.

Keep up the good work Sir.


I just have one or two advices for you...

#please reduce the names, you keep repeating everyone names over and over again, I don't know if it's only me, but I do get lost trying to figure out which character is which, some of the names of the female characters sounds masculine, sometimes I don't know if it's a man or woman speaking.

You need to work on that, like "Toyota", instead of always using that name, you could call her "The Boss" or something distinct or make use of pronouns more.


#Another thing, you sometimes narrate things in first person view.

Example, "The Hunters aren't present as Shark came into the Neon room and bowed to invisible Godzilla."


You could put it this way; "Shark walked into the Neon room. No hunter was present, Godzilla stared into blank space through his mask as the Shark bowed in respect."


Hope you get my point sir. You've won yourself a fan Sir.

Thanks to Antimandatethie for tagging me. Keep up the great work.

My Man!! You are welcome onboard

thanks for the advice bro all are noted, i will try my best to improve.

don't forget to halla me when you start with that your own tori o, make i come pour oil for your head.

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Jezebel came out of her apartment, smiling greedily as she started walking her way to Tiger's. She can't wait to f**k him again.

"Hey b**ch!" Delilah's voice drew her back, and she turned.

"Wanted to ask how was the mission, No one is talking about it" she said.

"Successful as always, boss has never f**ked up on a mission... Alberto's death is topping the headlines tonight when they find his severed body" Delilah replied.

"I wish I followed y'all instead of watching over the clan with Sylvester, he's so damn boring" Jezebel complained, and she grinned. "He's not boring in bed,baby. Where are you going by the way?"

"Isn't it obvious? To f**k my favorite d**k" Jezebel replied.

"The underboss? I saw him going into boss's apartment just now" she replied, and Jezebel's eyes bulged.

*Terminator's Domain.*
Toyota just finished having her shower, and she's currently standing in front of the mirror nakedly, staring at the mark on her left b**b again. It's crazy that anytime she sees it, she thinks of Denzel, the only boy she has ever formed a tight bond with. She hates him, yeah she does so much.... After all the promises of leaving Atlanta with her anytime they complete their training, he left without taking her anyways, he left after taking her f**king virginity. She touched the mark again, and the sensations from her night with him tingled in her brain.

"I'll protect you with my life, Rachel" his favorite words sounded in her head, and she quickly took her finger off the mark.

It was at that moment she realized someone else is in the room with her. She turned back swiftly, grabbing a knife from the wall hanger which she tried throwing backwards, but strong hands captured her Immediately, and she came face to face with Tiger.

Why is he always showing up anything she's thinking about Denzel? How did he even get here without her noticing? Only those trained in Atlanta know the silent steps skill, walking without making the slightest sound. Who the hell is he!

"You're a spy, aren't you? You knowingly allowed me to capture you!" She muttered, and he stared down at her naked body for long, settling his eyes on her fresh p*ssy for minutes before facing her "Yeah, I knowingly allowed you to capture me so I could f**k you anytime I want, b**ch" he smiled naughtily, and she smirked.

"You're calling for death" She mumbled, and Tiger replied by lowering his head to her neck, giving her a hard kiss which left an instant hickey as he had a lick of her skin. She should be fighting back right now, but she couldn't. She badly needs something inside her right now, and that's him. Memories of what he did to her yesterday hit her head like tornado, and that got her p*ssy weeping so bad, dripping down her naked thighs as she pushed her back to the wall and pressed his body on hers, letting his hard d**k stroke her p*ssy through his pants.

She got wetter, and he brought his face to the front of hers, smirking like he owns her.

She hates that look, so she pushed him away, and he laughed. "You're soaked, baby, eager to be f**ked"

"Get out!" She ordered, and at the same time...
"Underboss!, Your attention is needed please!" Jezebel's voice shouted from outside, and he smiled.

"Seems I'll go for hers. Goodnight, baby" he winked and started leaving, but after the forth step, she suddenly pulled him back, and before he knew it, they landed in bed together, and she stayed on top.

"Tell me what you really want? I promised to destroy you remember?" He smirked, and she did the same.

"Destroy me if you can, bastard"
he tossed them immediately, so he came on top. Tearing his belt out of his loop, he tore away his pants too, and his fat d**k spranged out.

"Put it in" she widened her legs readily, and he pushed in every inch of his d**k at once. Before she knew it, he got cuffs from his pants and cuffed her hands above the bed.

"What the f**k are you doing?" She questioned.

"Destroying you like you asked" he replied, thrusting roughly into her.

"F**k you Tiger! F**k you!" She screamed, and he gave it to her again. "Bastard!!!!"

"Underboss!" Jezebel shouted from outside, and that was when he thrusted in the third time, shifting the bed and her goddamn womb at the same time.
TBC

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update don land from sahara , read up!

Please where is the update?

Happy weekend lutherblack

Abdulreheem:
Happy weekend lutherblack

Wish you the same bro. hope you will kill chicken for us.

bhouze:


Please where is the update?

2morrow is the day for back to back update. happy weekend

softy:

Happy weekend my most active gee onbard, wish you a joyfull weekend.

Lutherblaq:


Happy weekend my most active gee onbard, wish you a joyfull weekend.

Same here "The Man of the Moment"

I have been busy since morning. Well done, Lutherblaq.

If you have 1000 stories in future: in my honour I will read all. Just stay focused and be consistent.


As usual, " FEED US MORE!!!"

softy:

Same here "The Man of the Moment" I have been busy this since morning. Well done, Lutherblaq.

As usual, " FEED US MORE!!!"

you bad gan!

I actually thought there's an update. If you see the way I run ehn! I no see my slippers sef 🙄🙆

Pinkdimples:
I actually thought there's an update. If you see the way I run ehn! I no see my slippers sef

no update today oo . but sunday hmm.

BTW happy weekend

Lutherblaq:


no update today oo . but sunday hmm.

BTW happy weekend

I can't wait ooooo 💃💃💃

Same here dear

Lutherblaq:


2morrow is the day for back to back update. happy weekend

Happy weekend bro...you can make this come to live as an animated movie using some simple AI tools.

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Capter 15&16

"Gawd damnit!" Toyota spat, and Tiger's palm found its way to her neck, wrapping tightly on it, making her head spin from lack of oxygen.

"Stop pretending, I know you like this, you like getting used like a f**k doll, stop the fake cries slut" he muttered, his manly voice making her p*ssy spasm around his d**k A evil smile appeared on her plush lips, and she eventually laughed shortly.

"I told you to destroy me if you can, go on and let's see who destroys who, bastard" she replied, and the cruel smile that followed from Tiger immediately showed that he's gonna show no mercy , and she loves it that way. She wants the hurt as much as he does.

"You'll regret saying that" he replied, giving her a smack in the face, not enough to leave a mark, but enough for it to hurt, and she clenched around him as she cried out. Pain and pleasure has never mixed this well before. He gave her a smack again, harder this time before bracing the back of her head and tightening his hand around her throat. A satisfied look came to his face when he saw how perfectly she's taking it, and she felt so proud of herself that she can take him without being crushed. She wants all of him, everything he has to give. She looked him straight in the eye, daring him to stop, but she could tell immediately that he won't be able to stop. It's like she let a dangerous animal out, and she's ready for the consequences. If it comes to the worse, they'd destroy each other. A loud moan escaped her lips when she bent her into two, making sure her knees were touching her shoulders before plunging his d**k into her already hot p*ssy again. He did brutally this time, pushing it in till tears of pleasure filled her eyes, there's almost too much of him to take. She squeezed around him, and her toes curled instinctively.

"Do your worse, Tiger" she spoke tauntingly, though her p*ssy is on fire already even without any move from him. The first thrust came immediately, and she let out a scream. She was forced open, and he slid in and out of her p*ssy faster, a beautiful smile is on his face as he brutalizes her body. There and there, she admitted it that his beauty mystifies her, how someone so dangerous could have the face of an angel. She returned the beautiful smile, and a hard thrust entered her p*ssy, causing her to gasp, she felt the cuff on her wrists loosening. He uncuffed her! She didn't wait to wonder about his sudden change of mind before diving her hand between their legs to feel them. She was spread impossibly wide to fit him. She touched her own cl*t before wrapping her fingers around his c**k as it slid in and out of her .A mutual moan of pleasure left their mouths at the same time as their c*m dripped down her c*nt onto the bedsheets.

"You can't destroy me, Tiger" she whispered, even after cumming more times than she could remember, body bruised and aching from having him inside of her, she still won't bow to any man even when it feels this good. Not even a demigod like him can make her pray. When she removed her fingers from his sliding d**k, they were already wet with their juices. It fascinated her so much that she licked some of the cream from her fingers. Tiger watched her in delight, and she decided to share with him. She slid the fingers into his mouth, and he licked it off thoroughly, sucking her fingers into his mouth. Immediately her fingers fell from his mouth, he pulled out of her, his d**k glistening with her c*m as he shoved her forward. Her face met with the mattress, and he pinned her down by her neck so her @ss is up for him. He slammed his long length back inside her in one full thrust. Her eyes rolled back, and her mouth fell open. Tiger took the advantage to hook his fingers into her mouth, forcing her back to his hips where there's nowhere to run. He wrecked her bones, the strength of his next thrust making her spines twinge. He gave it to her hard, all off him rough and skilled. Tiger f**ked her violently from behind, and she f**ked herself on his d**k, giving him back as much as she takes. He spit on her exposed @ss, Letting it drip down her c*nt. She got to hold the sheets, and he grabbed her wrists, bringing them behind her back. The clap of his hips against her @ss builds. She's trapped, and the sheets soaked her cries.

Thanks for the update. Though I only read few lines (6) when I realized it's all about sex scene. You are doing well sha. We need more of action Biko 🤔🤔

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"Cat's got your tongue?" He laughed above her, and she shook her head, blinking back tears when he hit her center of gravity. He picked up another mad pace immediately, growling into her ear. "Youwanna deny me even with your c*m is all-over my c**k?"

The dark room shifted, echoing the sound of Tiger f**king her. She suddenly heard the pounding coming from the wall. He's f**king so hard that the bed is tearing into the wall.

"Bastard!!!" She finally let out a cry as he wrapped himself around her, arms moving underneath her arms and over her chest. He lays himself over her, using one hand to capture her large bre*sts while the other hand held her throat. The hole in the wall became deeper as the bed kept hitting it, squeaking under the weight of his brutal f**king. She's definitely the only thing keeping him from tearing a hole through the mattress. He sucked her breas* into his mouth so hard, f**king her harder again under the steamy heat. Her vagin* tore apart.

"F**k you Tiger! F**k!" She cursed, biting through the bed as her p*ssy shed tears of c*m.

"I'm gonna enjoy filling your little p*ssy with my c*m" Tiger groaned, pressing his d**k harder into her.

"Do it!" She managed to scream, spreading herself open for him as he prowled over her.

"C*m inside me, stronzo" she muttered, and he obeyed , f**king her deeply as she felt his c**k pulse inside her hot p*ssy. She welcomed him, falling into the abyss of pleasure as he released inside her. His still-hard d**k fell out of her, but then she tossed them, and she came on top. He had his own fun, now it's time to have hers. Just like he cuffed her earlier, she did too, and his eyes narrowed when she pushed his d**k back inside her, encompassing all of him as she sat regally on the throne.

"F**k!" Tiger moaned when he shifted an inch, his d**k brushing her far wall. She was hot and tight, filled to the brim like she wanted, but now,both of them are wrecked.

"Told you you can't destroy me, Tiger" she smirked, and a gasp fell out of her when her p*ssy sucked in more of his d**k. She moved her palms to his chest, holding herself steady as his c**k slides out of her then went back in, stroking her p*ssy so good that she moaned his name.

"Yeah, Tiger!" Sweats fell from her lids, and she slammed herself deep on his d**k again, tearing herself apart once again.

"Cazzo! Yota" he moaned her shortened name, and her head spun.
She rode him faster, causing her b**bs to bounce on her chest. She bent to his neck and kissed the skin she found, finding pleasure in giving him mark with her mouth. The hoarse groan from his mouth brought her to the edge. He growled against her lips, feeling her get close. "Wanna feel your c*m on my d**k again"

"I'm c*mming!" She cried out, matching his tortured groan as she buried her face in his neck, trying to muffle the scream that's leaving her. Unknown to her, she forgot to lock the cuffs, his hands slipped off, and he grabbed her big @ss. The veins on his muscular arms were bulging as he lifted her off his covk, both watching his fat d**k leave her p*ssy before he dropped her back down, making his d**k slid dangerously back in.

"Oh f**k! Yeah!" She moaned in ecstacy, enjoying the pleasure and pains so much. His c**k bumped her cervix, and she saw stars behind her closed eyes. He leaned up to take her b**bs into his mouth. It felt so good, the tender flesh subjected to more torture as he buried his face in her brea*ts. While riding his d**k, Tiger wrapped his mouth around her b**bs, tasting all of her. This surely isn't ending soon, they'll take turn to tear each other apart till daybreak.

Pinkdimples:
Thanks for the update. Though I only read few lines (6) when I realized it's all about sex scene. You are doing well sha. We need more of action Biko

am really sorry for sex scenes i will make it up for you

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SAME NIGHT: Shark arrived in the alley house with about six gangsters, and right from the front of the small house, they could already see the ruins. The blood, the knocked out teeth, the cut off fingers, shattered glasses and walls, then the multiple dead bodies. It's a total havoc as they walked in. Shark's eyes remained wide as he led in his gang, and immediately he opened the door of the only room, his eyes widened more. One of his gangsters was already waiting in, the one who discovered the body. Alberto's mutilated body is still there, his head and intestines are still on the ground with his heart. His stream of blood clotted on the ground already, smelling like doom as Shark inhaled it. He could imagine the hellish torture as he got killed, then he faced the wall and beheld her bold mark. It's her, surely her. She's the only one in the underworld who kills brutally, but this is more brutal than the killings she did before.

"Boss!" Another gangster rushed in, and he faced him. The body of the guy he sent to act like him was dragged in, head gone.

"She killed him too" Shark smirked and looked at Alberto's body again. It doesn't look like killing for trivial reasons. The torture marks she left on his body and the aura surrounding the scene only speaks of one thing. Reveng! eShe's taking revenge, but why? Why Alberto? Is he the only one she's targeting? Or are there still more Hunters on her list?? This only means he has to build up his guard again and protect all The Hunters, he has to protect Godzilla since it's what he's getting payed for. The battle line has been drawn.
SIN-NATION~1AM
"No ... Please don't go... Mum... Dad don't leave.... Don't go.... Don't leave me all alone!... I'm so lonely don't leave! Dad!!!" Toyota shouted from her sleep, wriggling around in bed. She's having the usual nightmare, sweating so much as her head rolled on the pillow. She's in her underwear and bra only, with Tiger beside her.

"Mum... Dad...mum....dad!" She shouted from her sleep again, and Tiger woke up this time. "Hey!" He shouted, but she didn't stop.

"Hey Toyota!" He went louder.

"Mum! Dad! Mum!!" She kept wriggling, and he placed an hand on her forehead to still her.

"Hey, Rachel" he called calmly, and she calmed down immediately, resting back on the bed as her head stilled on the pillow.

"Denzel... I'll kill you... your life is mine to take..." She muttered before sleeping off again, and Tiger sighed, taking his hand off her forehead. He got down from the bed and started staring at her from there. They f**ked till midnight before falling asleep earlier, and he's still shirtless. He got his shirt from the ground and covered her with the duvet before walking out. The moon and stars were lined beautifully in the night sky as he walked back to his apartment, and he couldn't help but admire them. He stopped for a while and smiled dryly, remembering Toyota's nightmare earlier.

"You still have the nightmares, stubborn cat" he sighed, looking down from the sky. He got a cigar from his pocket, but he couldn't find a lighter, so he walked faster to his apartment to get one. He really needs smoke in his mouth right now. He got to the front of his apartment and met Jezebel waiting, but he ignored her and made to open the door "I'm not invisible, boss" she said, and he faced her.

"I choose not to see you, leave" he glared, and she scoffed.

"So now that the boss is giving you a dirty p*ssy to f**k, I'm meaningless?" Tiger got his gun immediately, and he didn't hesitate to give her a shot on the arm.

"AHHH!!!" She wailed, grabbing the bloody arm as she staggered, looking at him shockingly "Next time you blurt out such crap, it'll be your head, stay off" he warned and went in, shutting the door hard.

"F**k! My arm!!!" She cried out.

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NEXT MORNING:Tiger was the first person to get to the training hall. He's shirtless, and his muscles were already bulging as he wore his gloves and started with the punching bag. The first few punches were light, but after that, the memories of his parents death started coming, and he began punching hard, so hard that the punching bag tore apart, letting out it's content on the ground. He was about to keep punching the bursted bag when he felt a sharp move behind, and he quickly ducked to the right. A knife flew forward and got stuck in the punching bag. There's only one person capable of that. He turned to see exactly who he was expecting. Chance. His body changed colour as a result of kneeling in front of the furnace till daybreak, his eyes aren't exceptional.

"You should brace up if you really wanna kill me" Tiger said, and Chance rushed fast to him. He made to punch him, but Tiger caught his punch and threw him back easily. Chance almost fell, but he held himself and raised a kick to his face. Tiger grabbed the leg and twisted it slightly before letting go of him. He fell on the floor and stood immediately, coming for him again. He was able to punch Tiger just one time, but when he tried it again, Tiger caught the hand and flipped him, landing him heavily. "I hate you!!!!" Chance shouted.

"Why? Cos I didn't tell Toyota to release you last night? You told me yourself to stay away from your business, and besides, I think you deserved it" Tiger replied, and Chance spranged up.

"Shut up! You're not even fit to be my brother! You don't act like you care about our parents death anymore! All you care about is fun!" He shouted. "Stop talking" Tiger replied.

''"I'm not lying! You're just a coward who don't deserve to be born by my parents! You're worse! Bastard!!!" Chance shouted, and Tiger sighed simply.

"Are you done? Go take care of yourself" he said and started walking out.

"Coward!!! Bastard!!! I hate you!!!" Chance shouted after him, but he kept going till he went out completely. Chance was breathing hard as he kept standing, baring his teeth.

"I hate you!!!" He shouted again, and Taylor came in. He scoffed and started walking out. She made the mistake of holding him, and he angrily gave her a punch which sent her staggering.

"Don't touch me, and don't talk to me, betrayer" he muttered hatefully and walked out, meeting Zenith by the door.

"Hey, i got ointment for your body" she said, and he frowned. "When did you become nice?"

"Follow me, madman" Zenith rolled eyes, and he smiled before following her out. Taylor came out of the hall, watching them till they went out of the building completely.

COMPUTER LAB~30 MINS LATER
The emergency alarm made everyone rush down to the lab, it's time to start planning the next mission. Toyota entered with a deadly glare directed towards an angle. She's the last to come in.

"I think we're watching a movie again this morning" Jaemin muttered when she finally got to Tiger.

"What the hell did you see in my room last night?' she questioned, and hush fell in the room.

"What are you trying to keep?" Tiger threw another question, trying to keep his temper down. What Chance said is still lingering in his memory, and he could do anything right now to get it out.

"I asked what the hell you saw!" Toyota growled, giving him a slap on the right cheek, and that was the end. Tiger grabbed her neck with his two hands, shocking everyone as he pushed her energetically, sending her crashing on the glass wall. Her back broke the wall, and her blood wet her singlet as he continued pushing her till he broke the second wall with her back too, destroying a lot of systems.

"Tiger!!!' she screamed, and her back finally hit the concrete wall as his evil eyes met hers. Her airflow was heavily restricted as she gasped hurtfully.

"Tiger...

"The next time you raise your hand on my face, I'mma give you times three" he muttered.
<><><>TBC...

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Toyota Camry don see her match 😁😁😁

lets see who is d boss

nice story.👌

Pinkdimples:
Toyota Camry don see her match 😁😁😁

She is yet to see her match,
Remember something triggered off Tiger,

Let same something triggered of Toyota too, let's see if Tiger can Matched her

do4luv14:



She is yet to see her match,
Remember something triggered off Tiger,

Let same something triggered of Toyota too, let's see if Tiger can Matched her

Kind of true. Just wondering if her gang members will respect her fully well like before,this one Tiger de mishandle our own very Toyota for public 😄😄😄😄

paulek4eva i don catch you o oya come pay dues.

Pinkdimples:
Kind of true. Just wondering if her gang members will respect her fully well like before,this one Tiger de mishandle our own very Toyota for public 😄😄😄😄

Let's watch and see,
Tiger might even be Denzal too