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Story:lost In A Cold World(an Emotional Story) / Jos, December And Cold. / UNYIME-IVY KING – “burning Hurt” Akwa Ibom’s Bestfemale Literary Fiction Writer (2) (3) (4)
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Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 4:49am On Jul 26, 2012 |
Cuddle wadup? |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 4:52am On Jul 26, 2012 |
My mind did a trip right there. My legs felt like running off and my head felt like exploding. My eyes were almost burning while my hands just hung stiff on my side She noticed all these and asked “what is wrong”? “ did I do something wrong”? Then my voice came back to me and I got control “no I was just too pleased and I did not want to interrupt you” “the truth is that, I had felt that way since the first day I saw you but I did not know how it will make you feel hence, I was glad being just friends but I would love that a lot” She just smiled, came closer to me and planted a kiss on my right cheek Then she stepped back said “good night” and walked into her house. I watched her go into her house a million times even though it happened only once. I stood rooted to the ground right there and it was like I had eyes were everywhere. Every motion in her walk, every impact of her foot on the ground which made her body bounce was recorded by me and I realized that I did not like this girl, I was in love with her. |
Re: The burning cold by ijebabe: 6:17am On Jul 26, 2012 |
Bloody fcck! A little bit of editing required but I love it Mynd! I love that mind of yours Cindybabe that was platonic |
Re: The burning cold by Cuddlemii: 1:06pm On Jul 27, 2012 |
Mynd_44: Cuddle wadup? I am good. I am here Keep up the good work! |
Re: The burning cold by Tgirl4real(f): 7:57am On Sep 24, 2012 |
Hmmm...seems d writer is on recess |
Re: The burning cold by kikilove(f): 9:53am On Sep 24, 2012 |
Nice story am waiting 2 read more keep up d good work |
Re: The burning cold by Luckygurl(f): 11:15am On Sep 25, 2012 |
SECONDED |
Re: The burning cold by ijebabe: 3:55pm On Sep 25, 2012 |
I had forgotten about this thread. Mynd, where are you Don't make me call you Myndi |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 5:42pm On Sep 25, 2012 |
Yeah seriously, where is the author? He should be flogged. Laziness is a bad thing omo |
Re: The burning cold by Tgirl4real(f): 11:04am On Sep 26, 2012 |
How many strokes?? |
Re: The burning cold by greedie1(f): 11:10am On Sep 26, 2012 |
Hmmm....different and interesting. More ink to ur pen mynd |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 1:52am On Sep 27, 2012 |
Tgirl4real: How many strokes??A thousand |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 6:53am On Sep 27, 2012 |
Browsing with my phone sucks but its no excuse |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 6:56am On Sep 27, 2012 |
My sleep was sound that night. Deep, dreamless and long and I woke up with a big smile on my face. I was up earlier than usual. I went to brush my mouth and went to the sitting room because I saw the light turned on there. I walked in half expecting to see mum watching a movie or reading a book but there was no one there. I switched the lights off and was about going to bed when it came back on. I almost jumped. I turned back and looked around fast, there was no one there but me. Looked at the switch and saw that at the position it was, the bulb was not supposed to be on. Some courage was summoned in me as a thought came into me. The switch must be faulty, which must explain the bulb being left on in the first when I heard it It sounded like footsteps: steady and regular. Quite and soft, they were coming from my mum’s room and I made for the room. She must be up working again. I was at her door when I heard it again: this time, they came from the sitting room. But it could not be from the sitting room, I was there and the light was on. I walked out and headed for my her room and tried to open the door when I saw a shadow move in the sitting room. I stopped moving. A part of me wanted to walk back to the sitting room while another part (the smart part) was headed to my mum. I almost saw another shadow with the corner of my eyes in another part and I ran for my mum’s room. I stopped moving. A part of me wanted to walk back to the sitting room while another part (the smart part) was headed to my mum. I almost saw another shadow with the corner of my eyes in another part and I ran for my mum’s room. I did not even knock as was the rule between us when we entered one another’s room. I just turned the knob and pushed the door. What I saw scarred me. 3 Likes |
Re: The burning cold by Nobody: 4:30pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
ooooooooohhhh! c'mon nah 1 Like |
Re: The burning cold by Nobody: 5:57pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
nice Mynd dunno you cud write thought it was only "romance section" you knew 2 Likes |
Re: The burning cold by tellwsdom: 5:58pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
Wetin be this rubbish?? ...Shey if i read am finish, my evening food go disappear come my front?? |
Re: The burning cold by Nobody: 5:58pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
reading is not one of my virtues. |
Re: The burning cold by Nobody: 5:59pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
tellwsdom: Wetin be this rubbish?? ...Shey if i read am finish, my evening food go disappear come my front?? lmao.. |
Re: The burning cold by Nobody: 6:03pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
GARRI: Too boring Just too boring! Rubbish! |
Re: The burning cold by nikkyshyne(f): 6:10pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
Only read the last storyline. So Oga Mynd, what did you see? |
Re: The burning cold by freecocoa(f): 6:11pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
OP i didn't read your write up yet but from the few comments about it i know you didn't come up with it yourself. So tell us where you dey copy am from, i guess you wait for 11:45 to update because that's the time the owner of the story gives you asses to it abi? You wey i know for this forum no go fit write anything that lengthy cos you no fit read anything wey pass 2 paragraphs, na copy and paste you dey do, no lie 5 Likes |
Re: The burning cold by nikkyshyne(f): 6:16pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
OMG freecocoa, I tot so too. Lol |
Re: The burning cold by Booty4me: 6:16pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
tellwsdom: Wetin be this rubbish?? ...Shey if i read am finish, my evening food go disappear come my front??I swearrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr........ And he will be the First to criticize daily news for lengthy writup.. meanwhile this space is for sale |
Re: The burning cold by tellwsdom: 6:20pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
Booty4me: The space has been sold out to him ...The money dey seun hand now |
Re: The burning cold by greedie1(f): 6:24pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
freecocoa: OP i didn't read your write up yet but from the few comments about it i know you didn't come up with it yourself.. Lol |
Re: The burning cold by freecocoa(f): 6:26pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
nikkyshyne: OMG freecocoa, I tot so too. LolMy dear he can only f00l some people not someone like me that know him very well on here, i know better |
Re: The burning cold by tpia5: 6:34pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
didnt read the write up but just wondering why it made front page. does somebody have a crush on somebody? 1 Like |
Re: The burning cold by Odinaka00(m): 6:35pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
[quote author=Sapphiredamsel]Too boring[/quote Write yours na |
Re: The burning cold by Odinaka00(m): 6:37pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
freecocoa: OP i didn't read your write up yet but from the few comments about it i know you didn't come up with it yourself. U̶̲̥̅̊ don finish dz guy o, walai |
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 6:59pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
tpia@:Did you just say/type front page? OMG I will be charged for plagiarism. Hahahahaha |
Re: The burning cold by kariolality: 7:04pm On Sep 27, 2012 |
Who put this in the front Page=>Recycle Bin @Mods |
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