Romance › Re: My Experience With An Abuja Babe.. by adeadeyera(m): 5:00pm On Jan 10, 2021 |
webhead: why should a mouse tell a lion that he isn't a lion.
the fact that you don't know know what a draft entails proves that you are just an average guy who owns a phone with a keyboard.
I don't need your validation to become a writer: I am already one.
maybe not a great one ---Yet--- but I am better than you. Your abjectness is visible to all, yet you can't see it. A 'writer' who can't spell GRAMMAR and DRAFT, and yet wants to prove what point? Bush meat! |
Romance › Re: My Experience With An Abuja Babe.. by adeadeyera(m): 2:07pm On Jan 10, 2021*. Modified: 4:57pm On Jan 10, 2021 |
webhead: another dumb post to prove how little you know about the subject at hand.
Errors, regardless of what form--- like Grammer, syntax, punctuation etc--- are all errors. and they all appear in a d[b]arft[/b].
infact, Grammer and tense errors are the first two of which great writers admit to neglecting when writing said draft.
but I'm sure you won't still understand me. or should I use smaller words, since what I'm saying seems to be incomprehensible to you. Say no more. Stay put at being an idiot. You can never be a writer. |
Romance › Re: My Experience With An Abuja Babe.. by adeadeyera(m): 10:24pm On Jan 09, 2021*. Modified: 10:51pm On Jan 09, 2021 |
webhead: why are shifting the topic?
my Grammer error (which I am proud of) proves everything I've been pointing out to your unlearning mind. not to mention that you have also made other grammer mistakes in your previous post.
don't be a coward and prove all your previous statements to me. Even though I know that your warped mind wouldn't still comprehend, lemme attempt to lay it bare. Errors like syntax, punctuations and typos are commonplace in drafts. However, tenses and grammar errors are proof that you have to work on your writing skills. But since you want to prove to idiots like you that you can write (the Nigerian way), you're here exhibiting idiocy, proving nonsense. Doesn't change the fact that you're an idiot, though. |
Romance › Re: My Experience With An Abuja Babe.. by adeadeyera(m): 9:46pm On Jan 09, 2021 |
webhead: Dumbass, so you have switched from "so, when those great be writers scribbled down to their drafts, they were fraught with common tenses and Grammer errors ?" to "simple tenses flaws and typo blunders aren't on the same level in writing".
you have indirectly confirmed how embarrassingly unsophisticated your brain is.
chameleon! You have an unembarrassingly sophisticated brain, yet you can't retain simple thought patterns without tenses and grammar errors. Ani se, you're an idiot. ORDEH! |
Romance › Re: My Experience With An Abuja Babe.. by adeadeyera(m): 8:47pm On Jan 09, 2021 |
webhead: your post shows how much of an apathetic fool you are.
where did I state that I write as well as the writers I mentioned.
but I can get to that same level, by learning and following their footsteps---- one of them being writing a crappy but idea-rich first draft.
this writers have admitted to writing horrible first draft.
but your proudful and shallow-minded brian won't allow you accept that. that's why you will quote me again with another dumb post to mask your naivety.
people like you don't learn; you'll always stay empty. No, you're the apathetic idiot for saying I implied that the greats you mentioned had to have error-fraught drafts in all their writings. If you weren't an irredeemable dumbo, you'd know that simple tenses flaws and typos blunders aren't on the same level in writing - even though they're all errors. Bush meat! |
Romance › Re: My Experience With An Abuja Babe.. by adeadeyera(m): 8:39pm On Jan 09, 2021 |
NiRfreak: Guyman stop disgracing yourself. It's normal for first draft to have typo errors and some sprinkles of grammatical error which is usually not intentional..doesn't matter if u are native speaker or a literature Nobel laurette ..it happens cos during writing- first draft.. you are following your thought speed as the inspiration comes on you, so u don't have time to be going back to correct errors ..if you do...that's a poor way to write as u might lose your concentration, sequence of the story and inspiration...... Just stop the blind argument. There's a reason why we have proofreaders/proofreading after writing. You operate purely on the speed of your mind. It's you who should stop exhibiting folly. |
Romance › Re: My Experience With An Abuja Babe.. by adeadeyera(m): 6:21pm On Jan 09, 2021 |
Erkhalifa: We never can tell bro, maybe he is working on his writing ability, so bear with him, just as long you can understand the story is trying to pass. It was just cruise, bro |
Romance › Re: My Experience With An Abuja Babe.. by adeadeyera(m): 6:20pm On Jan 09, 2021 |
webhead: then you're implying that great writers--- like Stephen king, Gillian Flynn, James Patterson, j.k. Rowling, Anne lammot--- brain's are suboptimal??
Sorry for you. Isn't it even sicker that you coequate the functionality of your own mind to that of greats like Stephen King, Flynn and Patterson's? So, when those great writers scribbled down their drafts, they were fraught with common tenses and grammar errors? Masters of the language? Native speakers? You should be sorry for yourself. |
Romance › Re: My Experience With An Abuja Babe.. by adeadeyera(m): 3:41pm On Jan 09, 2021 |
webhead: Yes. including Grammer errors and incorrect tenses.
if your were someone who is capable of independent thought and open to knowledge (which you are not), then you would've tried to educate yourself on what a first draft is.
Writing and editing and two different things: the former involves letting your mind free and the latter is placing your thoughts in correct sequence---- and not just correcting tenses and grammar.
if you're are doing both at the same time you are impeding the full potential of your creativity, because you're subconsciously telling your brain that you want only polished sentences.
the human mind isn't programmed that way; that's why you have to think more when editing---- resulting in reduction of effeciency when writing.
i am a writer, so further argument is pointless.
improve your self first before you bother about other faults Your own mind is not programmed that way because it's feeble and obviously, because rather than challenging yourself, you come on Nairaland to defend how your mind functions at suboptimal capacity. Get help. |
Romance › Re: My Experience With An Abuja Babe.. by adeadeyera(m): 3:38pm On Jan 09, 2021 |
webhead: Yes. including Grammer errors and incorrect tenses.
if your were someone who is capable of independent thought and open to knowledge (which you are not), then you would've tried to educate yourself on what a first draft is.
Writing and editing and two different things: the former involves letting your mind free and the latter is placing your thoughts in correct sequence---- and not just correcting tenses and grammar.
if you're are doing both at the same time you are impeding the full potential of your creativity, because you're subconsciously telling your brain that you want only polished sentences.
the human mind isn't programmed that way; that's why you have to think more when editing---- resulting in reduction of effeciency when writing.
i am a writer, so further argument is pointless.
improve your self first before you bother about other faults What you don't have, you can't give. Stringing thoughts together and in error-fraught sentences does mean only one thing. You're doing the wrong thing. Diversify, otherwise na hunger go kill you. Bush meat. |
Romance › Re: My Experience With An Abuja Babe.. by adeadeyera(m): 11:53am On Jan 09, 2021 |
Paulcyril19: Oga be nice na.. You barely know him and you're bashing him like this? Actually, I do know him. And it was all cruise. |
Romance › Re: My Experience With An Abuja Babe.. by adeadeyera(m): 11:08am On Jan 09, 2021 |
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Romance › Re: My Wife To Be Is Two Years Older Than Me. Please Advise. by adeadeyera(m): 10:55am On Jan 09, 2021 |
If you let her go, there's a high likelihood that you'd regret it, especially that no two women are the same. If she possesses the right things you seek in a woman, shun the age difference and grow with her.
If you have any doubt, make a decision.
But age is not a problem if you don't make it one.
All the best. |
Romance › Re: My Experience With An Abuja Babe.. by adeadeyera(m): 9:50am On Jan 09, 2021 |
webhead: dude.
why say he doesn't know anything, when, in reality you're the person who is naive.
professional writers first get their thoughts down without judgement: no editing, no checking of whether your spellings are correct etc ---- it's called a first draft.
next time be constructive. "First getting thoughts down" including the tenses and grammar errors abi? You're the only naïve one here, Mr. Wannabe know-it. Rest! |
Romance › Re: My Experience With An Abuja Babe.. by adeadeyera(m): 9:29am On Jan 09, 2021 |
online4business: Guy kudos to you, make this a habit write write write but if you want to let people keep reading you've to edit edit and edit your write up so that it'll be easy for people to read.
@adeadeyera please encourage him, do you know why millions of Nigeria never read books guy na naija be this oooo maybe you've been out of the shore's of this shithole
However if he has edited his writing it'll take more time to post his story so he decided to fire aim and shot.
Good Writing is the most difficult skill in the world Gary c halbert world's greatest copywriter of all time.
Op to improve your writing please read The element of style by stunk and white. less than 100 pages you can read it in a week.
Also 100 ways to improve your writing by Gary povost.
I save the best of the best for last
On writing well: a memoirs of the craft by Stephen king
it should be on every writers desk. note the good stuff is after his childhood story so you can skip it.
This will be the most important book about how to write. your writing carreer will improve with a garrantee.
2021 might be a tough year but it depends on what you do with your time.
My new year resolution.
I've decide to upload 7 books every. Month on my kdp account still bezos pay well before starting a blog and kick start my copywriting carreer.
Ps. I hate punctuating my write up on nairaland it's a waste of time. Trust me, it was just cruise. And I guess the OP understood. Moreover, he's my friend - we live within the same estate. That's why I didn't test it when others took digs, except for the few idiots who threw insults. |
Romance › Re: My Experience With An Abuja Babe.. by adeadeyera(m): 9:27am On Jan 09, 2021 |
YorubaPrince: Baba, gbenu e soun!  Alaileko omo, gbenu dake when elders are talking. Kekere lo tin ba yin lo. |
Romance › Re: My Experience With An Abuja Babe.. by adeadeyera(m): 1:48am On Jan 09, 2021 |
tbanty1: Look at a g.o.at. Do i really need to say something to you? I don't think so, because u look frustrated already. Your name has said it all boy. Any quote after this will be ignored.  You wouldn't dare "say anything" no more because your fickle mind lacks the capacity to bear an intellectual perspective on any subject at all. That's why you indeed cried more than the bereaved. Unlike you, I've got zero tolerance for stupidity and that's why you'll get served hot hot, idiot. I'm your father's role model, little man. |
Romance › Re: My Experience With An Abuja Babe.. by adeadeyera(m): 1:44am On Jan 09, 2021 |
Olakunleyakub: This is too harsh professor of blogging.
There are better ways of correcting people mistake instead of discrediting their efforts!
Am very much disappointed in this your response cos it uncalled for. Okay |
Romance › Re: My Experience With An Abuja Babe.. by adeadeyera(m): 12:29am On Jan 09, 2021 |
tbanty1: Do you really need to condemn someone effort? What is your gain doing that? He has made it clear that he will modify once he's done with his writeup. So what's ur problem? Go and sit down, u this modafucker and let's get what his story is all about. If you weren't an idiot, you'd have seen how he tried to argue when someone pointed it out to him. Shall I also point out the tenses and grammar errors and not just the many typo errors? No, I wouldn't. It'll be pointless doing so, as your feeble mind wouldn't comprehend. ORDEH! |
Romance › Re: My Experience With An Abuja Babe.. by adeadeyera(m): 11:07pm On Jan 08, 2021 |
Patrioticbreed9: ok i accept.. Better. In the meantime, go on with your fiction. |
Romance › Re: My Experience With An Abuja Babe.. by adeadeyera(m): 10:50pm On Jan 08, 2021 |
Patrioticbreed9: yes.... i will modify the whole post very soon, in blogging they is what we call proof reading.. am posting under presure and that is why you are seeing so many errors. No, you no sabi anything. No rule in blogging says you can't construct very good sentences and still go over again to proofread. You're just a poor writer. |
Education › Re: Foreign Scholarships And Age Limit: Share Your Views by adeadeyera(m): 6:45pm On Jan 02, 2021 |
There are a number of scholarship opportunities that don't come with age limits, even for undergraduate studies. You just need to expand your scope - make wide researches. All the best! |
Education › Re: My Scholarship Story by adeadeyera(m): 5:50pm On Jan 02, 2021 |
I have a lot of questions and I've just followed you on Twitter. Kindly follow back sir @adeadeyera |
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Spaxon: No sire. Lexus wasn't on the old man's list Lexus has to be it. No regrets. |
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