Remite011:



I commend ur effort of coming up with cool, suspenseful, and thrilling story but I'll like to let u know dat u need to make ur updates lengthy because most ppl (like me) love lengthy and meaningful write-up. Plus it will make the comments flow from others too

dear remitte011 i appreciate your concern and i'll like to thank you for being such a good and a concerned folower of this thread!...thanks walai.

*in mayorkun's voice*

i'm gonna stick with youu like a bamboo...
brus! you be genius ooo...
are u getting me!..
are u getting me....

maxxy26:
Ajecking# Thanks 4 The Update,Na Here Wey Dey,

welkam dear!...

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thanks i'll try!...

Am waiting ooo. update sharp sharp dear....

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Kindly fall in.

as u said brus

CONTINUATION............

ann2012, remitte, charles224, olufemiwhit, isod, sussybae, donkelz, maxxy26, sliss, valyzubuxx, rachealfst ,yungzubi themonk, lightqueen, ferarriLAferarri. all are invited for this longest update ever inthis story ever. hope u enjoy it.

the fact that i was armed was a secret between me and my long leather made brown coat plus my fellow gangstars .
a small crowd started to form in the scene with everybody keeping a reasonable distant.
i immediately gave him a hard push on the chest with my hands that made him move two step backward before he gain balance to come back for revenge.
i saw something from the corner of my eyes towards me at a speed. i bend a little and it landed on one of the opponents head.
it was a bottle thrown by a uniformed man probably the clubs security guard.
as they were trying to help their brother who was bleeding profusely.
i found a safe hiding place behind a dustbin opposite the main gate.
the sound of the police cyrene from a distant hsd caught our.
we all withdraw and took off.
our vehicle was waiting at the spot we left it.
we took the road leading to gudele as the sound of the cyrene was getting closer.
toronto boys wont be lucky in the hands of the police if they happen to be caught.
from the park each one of us took a cab leading to their respective location.
to kill suspicion from police checkpoints or perherps they might have heard of the incidence.
all our arms were hidden in the boot of the car we used.
at 6pm i took a cab that would take me to my area thongpiny airport road.
i was not inthe mood of eating anything, so i bought basta(a baked cake locally made in juba) and a bottle of novida.
and headed straight to my apartment.
in my apartment i found this self proclaimed mrs ajeck has tidied the room and even washed my clothes. norah is trying anyway possible to win me but goodluck to her!.
the events of the last few hours flashed back into my head.
toronto boys wouldnt have survived if not because of the police.
it will also be unfortunate for them if they get caught.
and it would have also been unfortunate for us too if we didnt escape in time. those were the thought in my mind.
i rested my back on the bed and dipped my hands in my pocket and removved my phone.
i saw 7 missed calls.so my phone was in silence all this while.
3 from winnie
2 missed calls issabelle
1 from lug and the remaining was from an unknown number
i actually have that fear for new numbers
some of them are scammers who would clear all your immediately after you pick their calls.
some may also be other criminals who are plotting against me.
as a criminal i must be on alert
i dialled winnies number immediately.
'hello baby how are you doing, i'm missing youso much, you are not picking my calls hope all is well' were the words from winnie immediately after she picked the call.
i told her am fine just that i have been too busy and apologised.
she said she have a friends birthday and she is inviting me to attend it.
i agreed without consulting any of ancestral gods.
i'm truly in love with this little angel.

TO BE CONTINUED........

i dey for ur back like..paul haymen and brock lesner...ooo

am loyal to u like..paul haymen and brock lesner...ooo

Ann2012:


I'm here

Keep the updates coming

thanks dear get ready for along one coming soon!...

genius!... aku

brief me with the one for free...dont forget the link. ABEGG...

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even when rugs is all i wear my reputations give gear my mindset, sucess and outcomes is near.

**continuation**

the sound of the music from the mainhall was booming but didn't prevented us from hearing the footsteps of the new intruder.
while clapping his hands he slowly walked majestically and stop just inches from me.
i stood calmly like a statue...no a living statue.
the goliath was a little shorter than me and thats an advantage since he has to look up to be able to see his opponent little david.
"what brought bluzza to the known elephant of juba city or have you not heard about how dangerous we could be to any one who jump our way".
he broke the silence looking straight into my eyes with a team no fear look on his kwa'mit decolored eyes.
we are toronto boiss..
the four boys who sat down under the tree chorused heading toward us and stop just behind their leader.

TBC....