This is interesting, didn't know that there was an epic story behind the name.

Cant wait to see the plan

Divepen1:
Dearest reader, you know I wouldn't have minded continuing without comments. But I was trying to rewrite this story but the effect is coming back the way it was. I noticed it is because I am editing instead of rewriting. I will find my bearing. But for noe, I have to stop..

Watch out for ' A New Year Celebration and A Divorce Declaration'

nice one...waiting for the continuation

Great story bibijay123...just read it from last night till now

Nice one bibijay123

Nice one ozila...very captivating

Nice one leriebloom...just caught up...happy new year and thanks for the mentions

Kim on angry mode...looking for the person who destroyed her life (should get a mirror)
Leriebloom keep it up!

The story played out nicely..almost everyone has a happy ending. Great work rachealfst..don't mind my scarce comments, been busy...thumbs up

Nice one rachealfst..you've gone far..been busy so just caught up!

Johnbauer:
Bro,soldiers live in the barracks,they dont live among civilians and report for duty at the barracks not even the generals..its not dat hv read all books on nairaland but i dont think you guys do crime fiction

I think some generals have houses outside barracks

Good one rachealfst...next we need to know if any more drama between Feranmi & Sewa

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The view in the side mirror showed the road was clear, so he could navigate into the speed lane. He flipped on the left indicator and swerved to the left, overtaking the slow moving car that he had been following.

Christopher Ajayi (not Chris, he needs to always be addressed as Christopher) was a neat freak who suffered from a mild form of obsessive compulsive disorder (OCD). It was his blessing and his curse, as a financial consultant his pernickety behaviour meant he hardly (if at all) missed anything and all his projects achieved maximum success, but for those who had to relate with him in any way it was a tiresome affair and as such he had only two people who could tolerate him enough to be his friends.

Today was just a day like every other, with the same routines, general expectation and nothing extraordinary on the horizon.

Just as he was about to get onto the exit ramp to leave the highway, he noticed a really dusty sapphire 2016 Toyota Highlander on the road ahead of him. This was exactly the same as his own car (colour and everything), but it was dirty. He dialled his secretary and instructed her put all his appointments on hold; he would be running late today.

He added more pressure on the gas pedal and the car shot forward, there was no way he was going to let the dirty car get out of his sight.
He turned on the radio and selected a classical song from his playlist; he needed to calm his mind.

After following the car for about forty five minutes, the driver pulled into a private parking area and due to the similarity of the vehicles, the security guard allowed Christopher to drive in also. When the car was parked, the driver got out locked the car and headed into the elevator. Meanwhile, Christopher waited till the driver was gone and then got out of his own car and headed towards the parked car. He put on a latex glove on his right hand and then wrote using his fingers in large, clear, beautifully designed characters 'Please wash me!'.

Satisfied, Christopher took off the glove threw it in a trash bin, took out some wipes from his jacket pocket and wiped his hands, then walked back to his vehicle and drove away.

The End!

Cool, Emma is back! Turns out he was ok, carry on rachealfst

Another nice one Leriebloom!

Continue the story please Mohbaby!

Guys if you have read something similar & cannot prove it was copied let us enjoy our story in peace. Thank you!

**I would also add that if indeed sapphiregirl22 on wattpad plagiarised you, check if you can do something about it.

***Clearly PLAGIARISED as Mohbaby has no proof of writing & story is the same.

Who's nurse Angel's husband and how will seeing him again affect Wemmy? Feranmi's phone is broken and it's not like he is big on cash, got to replace it. He really needs to speak to his wife on what's happening. What will Sewa do next?

Intriguing story rachealfst..waiting for continuation

Kim is obviously the protagonist in the story, so we all trying to like/understand her. She is in a crazy marriage and trying to do things right by her daughter. She makes decisions on the spot without thinking of their consequences and has in the past given herself to debauchery which cost her the loss of relationship with her family.

Tara is a self entitled individual who thinks she is better than everyone. She hangs with people she feels are not up to her level so as to always get the feeling of importance. She probably was devastated when Ralph chose Kim over her.

Denzel gives the impression of care and affection but there's the feeling that he's hiding something. Probably someone that has a family somewhere or perhaps children out of wedlock.

Ralph for some reason has his heart stuck on Jennifer. After two girls & even a kid he still goes back to her. He was into hard drugs and we don't know if he's clean now. Kim was an adventure & after the initial infatuation he can't seem to find any attachment to her apart from their daughter.

Hailey is just a kid caught in the middle of a dysfunctional family. Her parents are undecided with what they want and as a result she has gained understanding of relationship from their behaviours (as seen when she ignored kim)

Favorite character: Kim's mom..lol

Leriebloom is the awesome writer who is capturing our imagination

Another nice update rachealfst..Feranmi was lucky this time around due to Thessy's intervention.
A lot of people get stuck on what they had & never really see the greater things in front of them...it's really difficult to let go at times...happy weekend!

I can relate to Niel's behaviour somehow...just somehow oh before some peeps start calling someone devil...Lol
Nice updates Mohbaby..see ya tomorrow

Good one rachealfst..seems the new characters are going to make the story more interesting