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Literature › Re: My First Real Attempt A Writing....give Me A Poke Or A Thumbs Up! by breathing(f): 12:29am On Apr 27, 2012
camgal: You are very welcome @ Whiteguru. @ dailynews and every other poster I just launched my Book the blog diaries and would appreciate it if you could take the time to check it out on http:///7GZJd. Thank you so much and good luck to you whiteguru in all your future endeavours. If you like the book, you can follow me via emails for updates ;Dthanks
sorry the page you are looking for does not exist!

Where did you say we could find the book again
Literature › Re: Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie is now married by breathing(f): 5:11am On Apr 26, 2012
Were you a suitor? Or you had a crush. Yeah, she got married and it's even been a while now. I dont think she wanted the media to increase her pre-wedding jitters by constantly asking her (as they are bound to), how she expects to balance her feminism with her husband. Lol
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Literature › Re: The Cow Conundrum by breathing(f): 11:22pm On Apr 25, 2012
Interesting story, i just read right through without skipping a line. I like the humour very much too.
Literature › Re: Have You Read Breathing's Diary? by breathing(f): 5:55pm On Apr 19, 2012
Unbelievable.(fullstop)lol. Just saw this and this is quite flattering.(that's another fullstop,lol)
Literature › Re: My First Real Attempt A Writing....give Me A Poke Or A Thumbs Up! by breathing(f): 2:56pm On Apr 19, 2012
I'd say i see a good writer in the making. You've got an interesting story here, lines like 'he wondered...what was about to make the almighty cry today' depict your natural talent.


However, you need to put in some extra effort. You describe your scenes too hurriedly,as if you find the job uncomfortable 'he was sitting on his office table...,and you haven't taken the time to spell or paragraph well.

Presentation matters a lot,and your work shouldn't look like you are just dumping it on the audience. You've written a nice story,but atleast you've got to partially edit before posting.
Literature › Re: movie Script 4sale It's Like Mr Ibu! Mehn You Need To See This Script) by breathing(f): 2:34pm On Apr 19, 2012
And the fact that its like Mr. Ibu is supposed to be the movie's 'unique' selling point i presume. Hilarious already!
Literature › Re: What Inspires You To Write? by breathing(f): 2:25pm On Apr 19, 2012
I cant play some particular songs without wanting to write,songs like Beyonce's I was here,and Adele's Someone like you. I'm also moved to write every time i read some very good writing.
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