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I've Got Money On My Mind,
I Don't Wanna Stay Behind,
I Just Wanna Go With The Wind,
To A Place Where The Treasures I'll Find

I've got my mind on money
I'm Young, the day for me is still sunny
I know it sounds funny
but in these times, I want my fair share of milk and honey.

Some thoughts are better kept unsaid
Till when in action be said.
I just want in silence lay siege
For feelings unexpressed.

Yes Bodun, I read your Poem, Really Nice.

Lol, ur funny too lady boss

just praising you
you wrote that, didnt you?

i bu ezigbo nwa-afor
ji si ike ada
oo?

WokarGwa:
I agree with Boss Bitch:
No one dictates for a writer what to write.But a writer needs an editor, and it is that editor's duty to point out such mistakes as these.

thanks wokargwa, and boss bitch for the criticisms,
and the corrections, now i think i know the diffrence btw rap and poetry
i'll take that up on my next piece
thnks again

Boss bitch:
OMG. . . its so sweet. . . it needs some editing but its still sweet

thanks for the encouragement Lady Boss, i needed it, tell me more 'bout the editing part.

this is touchin' and spirit lifting
good work

There it lies
My Bane,
A feast of flies
In it, there's no Gain.

I talk of women
young and old alike
pitfalls and snares to men
young and old alike.

But I'll overcome, I'll walk the Mile,
each step with smile,
My goal to reach the end,
and never from the right way bend.

He’s cutely,
She’s pretty.

He knows he’s handsome,
He knows he’s lonesome.

She knows she’s a beauty,
She’s lonely.

He says “A walk will do me fine”
She says “I’ll go out, dazzle and shine”.

The stage was set,
That was how they met.

She shined and bedazzled he,
He simply mesmerized She.

They both stared wide-eyed,
The die was cast,
He recovered first and smiled,
Hormones really work fast.

She smiled back,
And he said to her

“Where you’re from I don’t know
But thank God, today you showed
Here, let’s sit together,
Let’s get to know each other,
There’s no how
Am letting you go now,
You’ll be my She
And I’ll be you’re He”.

She said “when you look at me,
It’s a look of one, who really loves me,
Who wouldn’t put anything in the world above me,
And tonight, this eve,
You’ll be Adam, and I’ll be your Eve”.

He wants to hold her hands,
To be the one to wipe her tears,
To be her shoulder and knee,
A friend when she’s in need.



She wants to be her baby,
Coz she wants to have his baby,
To live together, share together,
And help each other.

He wants to wake up to her sweet face,
Tomorrow and always,
And for all her days,
She wants to stay with him, in his place.

Ain’t this Love at first sight?
A tale of Two as evening approached Night.

The He and The She.

He’s cutely,
She’s pretty.

He knows he’s handsome,
He knows he’s lonesome.

She knows she’s a beauty,
She’s lonely.

He says “A walk will do me fine”
She says “I’ll go out, dazzle and shine”.

The stage was set,
That was how they met.

She shined and bedazzled he,
He simply mesmerized She.

They both stared wide-eyed,
The die was cast,
He recovered first and smiled,
Hormones really work fast.

She smiled back,
And he said to her

“Where you’re from I don’t know
But thank God, today you showed
Here, let’s sit together,
Let’s get to know each other,
There’s no how
Am letting you go now,
You’ll be my She
And I’ll be you’re He”.

She said “when you look at me,
It’s a look of one, who really loves me,
Who wouldn’t put anything in the world above me,
And tonight, this eve,
You’ll be Adam, and I’ll be your Eve”.

He wants to hold her hands,
To be the one to wipe her tears,
To be her shoulder and knee,
A friend when she’s in need.



She wants to be her baby,
Coz she wants to have his baby,
To live together, share together,
And help each other.

He wants to wake up to her sweet face,
Tomorrow and always,
And for all her days,
She wants to stay with him, in his place.

Ain’t this Love at first sight?
A tale of Two as evening approached Night.

The He and The She.

Thank You, Mr. B
and welcome to the thread and forum

nice Twist here, .
Keep It Up.

U've got nice one over there at mantra
esp the Line

"My smile is me, It sayeth Nothing."

@OPI

Opi Nwanna,
Ife ana eme adilo easy, Shaa
I've been facebooking
Sorry! I forgot 'bout rhyming
But am back Now
I'll put my lines down