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Poems For ReviewRe: The Convict by Chuksemi(m): 7:50pm On Oct 04, 2014
This is sincerely epic. Wow. Wow. Wow.
Poems For ReviewRe: Perfect Ex. (oxymoron) by Chuksemi(m): 6:56pm On Oct 04, 2014
Perfect, I flowed with this. The opposing words were beautifully juxtaposed.
LiteratureRe: OMA Collection Of Poems by Chuksemi(m): 6:49pm On Oct 04, 2014
OMA4U:
thirsty of poetic juice or what?
Aha, a new one. Poetic juice it is thengrin
LiteratureRe: OMA Collection Of Poems by Chuksemi(m): 5:50pm On Oct 04, 2014
OMA4U:
Thanks Bamibor, I appreciate your comments sir.
I am thirsty sircheesy
LiteratureRe: Poem~ Be Wrong Or Belong by Chuksemi(op): 5:42pm On Oct 04, 2014
timpaker:
Very good for a starter. cheesy
However, I don't understand your rhyming scheme.
Is it an end rhyme or an enclosed rhyme cuz I see you used both up there?
cool
Sir, it is supposed to be aabbc. End rhyme I guess it is. Cos, I intended to place the rhymes at the end of each line. What's an enclosed rhyme? Please point them out sir huh . Thanks grin
LiteratureRe: Poem~ Be Wrong Or Belong by Chuksemi(op): 11:20pm On Oct 03, 2014
OMA4U: It's called quintet and some of your rhymes are 'half-rhyme' e.g born and grown.

Thumbs up!
Thank you. grin
LiteratureRe: Poem~ Be Wrong Or Belong by Chuksemi(op): 10:01pm On Oct 03, 2014
OMA4U: I love your poem and it's depiction. This's not quatrain. This's a five-line poem while quatrain is a four-line poem. You got it?

OMA
Thanks a bunch, mentor. cool . So what is this one called?
LiteratureRe: The Funeral Of Justice by Chuksemi(m): 9:46pm On Oct 03, 2014
This is a beautiful piece. I have just been inspired.
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LiteratureRe: Poem~ Be Wrong Or Belong by Chuksemi(op): 9:20pm On Oct 03, 2014
lirusehn: smiley
Oga me, please review biko
LiteratureRe: Poem~ Be Wrong Or Belong by Chuksemi(op):
I think this is a quintet, rhyme scheme is aabbc. Please correct me If I am wrong, I am purely a novice here.


Oma4u. Timparker. Ishilove, divepen. Larrysun. Firestar, naijababe. Dygeasy. Ray360, audreytimms, marioking. Please drop a review.

So, I have got a half rhyme up there, line 1 and 2. Born and grown. Thanks to oma4ugrin
LiteraturePoem~ Be Wrong Or Belong by Chuksemi(op): 8:52pm On Oct 03, 2014
I just started. Your criticisms are highly welcomed and appreciated.


On a certain day he was born
Years later he had grown
His childhood wasn't devoid of tears
Growing, he learnt to hide tears
Insecurity he battled with, then and later


Is he too tall or short
Living up to people's expectation he tried not to fall short
Is he too good or ugly
For the public judge, not wrongly
This life he lived, albeit sadly


Up and down he climbed the hills of life
Yes and yes he agreed to the public like a wife
Decisions he took, not on his own
People played him the funky tone
Yet, his life was solitary


So and so his life walked past
For indeed time is fast
All his life he tried to belong
To the majority that could be wrong
If only he knew better
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RomanceRe: I Tried To Keep Her. But She Left. Suicidal Thoughts. by Chuksemi(op): 6:47pm On Oct 03, 2014
Okay. Thanks to you all
RomanceI Tried To Keep Her. But She Left. Suicidal Thoughts. by Chuksemi(op): 11:41am On Oct 03, 2014
I love her so much. I can die for her. Her name is jane and she is from Russia.Last week she told me she doesn't like me no more. I cried and cried but she wouldn't listen..

So I came back to nigeria, and soon as I landed my girlfriend here told me she is married.. Why me, why always me I ask. Answer me now oh.

So I WANT TO Kill myself. Please just let me do it.. Don't beg me. i will kill myself oh. I have warned you.
Nairaland GeneralRe: Happy Birthday Ishilove by Chuksemi(m): 11:15am On Oct 03, 2014
Ishilove: Thank you sir.

Zyxxx, thank you, again wink

Faithgokz, thank you darling smiley
Happy birthday ma'am. If for nothing else, for the fact that, in you lives a store of rare intelligence.
LiteratureRe: A P0em To Mark Nigeria's 54th Independence Day! Please Read! by Chuksemi(m): 11:12am On Oct 03, 2014
Nice poem. I enjoyed the rhyme scheme. Good turn out.
LiteratureRe: OMA Collection Of Poems by Chuksemi(m): 11:04am On Oct 03, 2014
I wish to start something like this very soon, though I am officially a big learner. But I would appreciate your blunt criticism when I start. Of course I would tag you. I admire your write up, you are indeed, a good poet.
LiteratureRe: Be Positively Inspired | Motivational Sayings From Great Minds. by Chuksemi(m): 10:38am On Oct 03, 2014
Cry whenever you feel like, but never in public~me
EducationRe: Imo State University 2014/2015 Admission Thread by Chuksemi(m): 10:24am On Oct 03, 2014
chykeJ: Please are we to expect other lists or just apply for supplementary..had a 260 putme score, wasn't on merit list, going for economics..what do I do??
Bro, I feel your pain. I had 268, economics too, but wasn't admitted. They admitted only 43 people for the course. I suggest you apply for supplementary, immediately.
PoliticsRe: 2015: God Has Already Chosen Our Leaders - Sultan by Chuksemi(m): 9:08am On Sep 30, 2014
Well, here in Russia, we don't have sultans. So this is quite strange. huh
EducationRe: Imo State University 2014/2015 Admission Thread by Chuksemi(m): 5:30pm On Sep 29, 2014
kenny1795: imsuboi is not doing his job on this thread he created... he has lil info things going on
I don't get it huh . His job? Are you paying him or something. You think he is under any obligation to help you? He created this thread and he has tried. All we have to do is share any information we have that would aid others. Not waiting on imsu boi To come and supply you with information. For God's sake the guy has a life offline.
EducationRe: The Pitiable Life Of A Nigerian Teacher. The Way Forward?? by Chuksemi(m):
The Only Solution To This Is If Parents Become More Concerned With Their Children's Education. International Schools Pay Very Well. I Know One In PortHarcourt That Pays Up To 120,000 As A Starting Salary. If Parents Take Education Seriously, Nobody Would Send Their Children To Petty Schools. They Don't Learn Very Well In Petty Schools And The Work Force Consists Of unqualified Persons. International Schools With Standard Facilities Employ Qualified People And Charge Higher, Yet They Pay Teachers Very Well And The Kids Learn Very Well In Such Schools. Petty Schools Should Be Eradicated. Only Then Would Teachers Get Good Take Home Pay.
PhonesRe: Naija Smartphonomics: The Economics Of Buying A Smart Phone In Nigeria by Chuksemi(m):
Well., I use an Iphone 6 and a blackberry passport. I am very rich so., this is nothing to me.. cool
RomanceHelp Me, She Is Dying. by Chuksemi(op): 6:07pm On Sep 28, 2014
You see, I am a diligent man.. And i have money. I am very rich. I stay in Russia but I have a girlfriend in Nigeria.

Sometime ago, I bought her an Iphone 6 and increased her monthly allowance to 150,000 but she didn't appreciate it. So I decided to call it quits..

Yesterday I called her and told her the relationship was over. She laughed and said it has been long overdue. I was saddened. Then I told her that if she had begged me I would have given her 5million dollars. The line went dead.

Later that evening, a man called me and said he was a doctor. He said my girlfriend is very sick and would die if I don't accept her back. I am confused, what should I do? huh
EducationRe: Imo State University 2014/2015 Admission Thread by Chuksemi(m): 8:17am On Sep 28, 2014
HerMajestyB: I saw the username on my putme registration slip!
I'm trying to register oooo but its saying error too! Don't know wat went wrong!
I guess it's service. Maybe later this week it will clear up
EducationRe: Imo State University 2014/2015 Admission Thread by Chuksemi(m): 6:50pm On Sep 27, 2014
HerMajestyB: Oh..... Ok!! Tnx
What username did you use? Mine has refused to open, keeps showing me error.
EducationRe: Imo State University 2014/2015 Admission Thread by Chuksemi(m): 11:23am On Sep 27, 2014
I have tried applying , they keep showing me an error message and something about username error or application successfully submitted. I didn't even fill in anything. Is this normal? Or was it programmed this way this year?
EducationRe: Imo State University 2014/2015 Admission Thread by Chuksemi(m): 11:44pm On Sep 26, 2014
HerMajestyB: Ohk...... I've seen it. So should I start filling the required information??
Infact I've started filling it!
With a phone? Or laptop? Tell me about it when you're through. What questions they asked and if you had to print out anything.
EducationRe: Imo State University 2014/2015 Admission Thread by Chuksemi(m): 10:21pm On Sep 26, 2014
HerMajestyB: Pls help me..... I don't know my username..... Pls how do I get it back? Pls!
Check your post utme acknowledgement slip, the print out. It is written there in. Though I would advice you wait, let's hear from imsu boi. So we can know the procedures before hand.
EducationRe: Imo State University 2014/2015 Admission Thread by Chuksemi(m): 6:28pm On Sep 26, 2014
I've been trying the admission status link, it keeps showing me an error message. Strange I must say....
EducationRe: Imo State University 2014/2015 Admission Thread by Chuksemi(m): 5:07pm On Sep 26, 2014
I just checked their official website now. Application for supplementary has started without a release of the second batch list. So, if you probably didn't make the first and "suspected" last list, you can apply for supplementary now.

Cc: imsuboi
RomanceRe: Is It Advisable For Guys To Have Different Girls Pictures On Their Mobile by Chuksemi(m): 5:22pm On Sep 25, 2014
Here in Russia. It is abnormal for a man to have women.'s pictures in his phone.. It makes the man a "girlie" .. cool
RomanceRe: I Want To Be Wooed By A Lady Again! by Chuksemi(m): 5:18pm On Sep 25, 2014
Well, I doubt a lady in Nigeria would woo you.. Here in Russia, ladies woo men. cool

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