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This is sincerely epic. Wow. Wow. Wow. |
Perfect, I flowed with this. The opposing words were beautifully juxtaposed. |
OMA4U:Aha, a new one. Poetic juice it is then ![]() |
OMA4U:I am thirsty sir ![]() |
timpaker:Sir, it is supposed to be aabbc. End rhyme I guess it is. Cos, I intended to place the rhymes at the end of each line. What's an enclosed rhyme? Please point them out sir . Thanks ![]() |
OMA4U: It's called quintet and some of your rhymes are 'half-rhyme' e.g born and grown.Thank you. ![]() |
OMA4U: I love your poem and it's depiction. This's not quatrain. This's a five-line poem while quatrain is a four-line poem. You got it?Thanks a bunch, mentor. . So what is this one called? |
This is a beautiful piece. I have just been inspired. |
lirusehn:Oga me, please review biko |
I think this is a quintet, rhyme scheme is aabbc. Please correct me If I am wrong, I am purely a novice here. Oma4u. Timparker. Ishilove, divepen. Larrysun. Firestar, naijababe. Dygeasy. Ray360, audreytimms, marioking. Please drop a review. So, I have got a half rhyme up there, line 1 and 2. Born and grown. Thanks to oma4u ![]() |
I just started. Your criticisms are highly welcomed and appreciated. On a certain day he was born Years later he had grown His childhood wasn't devoid of tears Growing, he learnt to hide tears Insecurity he battled with, then and later Is he too tall or short Living up to people's expectation he tried not to fall short Is he too good or ugly For the public judge, not wrongly This life he lived, albeit sadly Up and down he climbed the hills of life Yes and yes he agreed to the public like a wife Decisions he took, not on his own People played him the funky tone Yet, his life was solitary So and so his life walked past For indeed time is fast All his life he tried to belong To the majority that could be wrong If only he knew better |
Okay. Thanks to you all |
I love her so much. I can die for her. Her name is jane and she is from Russia.Last week she told me she doesn't like me no more. I cried and cried but she wouldn't listen.. So I came back to nigeria, and soon as I landed my girlfriend here told me she is married.. Why me, why always me I ask. Answer me now oh. So I WANT TO Kill myself. Please just let me do it.. Don't beg me. i will kill myself oh. I have warned you. |
Ishilove: Thank you sir.Happy birthday ma'am. If for nothing else, for the fact that, in you lives a store of rare intelligence. |
Nice poem. I enjoyed the rhyme scheme. Good turn out. |
I wish to start something like this very soon, though I am officially a big learner. But I would appreciate your blunt criticism when I start. Of course I would tag you. I admire your write up, you are indeed, a good poet. |
Cry whenever you feel like, but never in public~me |
chykeJ: Please are we to expect other lists or just apply for supplementary..had a 260 putme score, wasn't on merit list, going for economics..what do I do??Bro, I feel your pain. I had 268, economics too, but wasn't admitted. They admitted only 43 people for the course. I suggest you apply for supplementary, immediately. |
Well, here in Russia, we don't have sultans. So this is quite strange. ![]() |
kenny1795: imsuboi is not doing his job on this thread he created... he has lil info things going onI don't get it . His job? Are you paying him or something. You think he is under any obligation to help you? He created this thread and he has tried. All we have to do is share any information we have that would aid others. Not waiting on imsu boi To come and supply you with information. For God's sake the guy has a life offline. |
The Only Solution To This Is If Parents Become More Concerned With Their Children's Education. International Schools Pay Very Well. I Know One In PortHarcourt That Pays Up To 120,000 As A Starting Salary. If Parents Take Education Seriously, Nobody Would Send Their Children To Petty Schools. They Don't Learn Very Well In Petty Schools And The Work Force Consists Of unqualified Persons. International Schools With Standard Facilities Employ Qualified People And Charge Higher, Yet They Pay Teachers Very Well And The Kids Learn Very Well In Such Schools. Petty Schools Should Be Eradicated. Only Then Would Teachers Get Good Take Home Pay. |
Well., I use an Iphone 6 and a blackberry passport. I am very rich so., this is nothing to me.. ![]() |
You see, I am a diligent man.. And i have money. I am very rich. I stay in Russia but I have a girlfriend in Nigeria. Sometime ago, I bought her an Iphone 6 and increased her monthly allowance to 150,000 but she didn't appreciate it. So I decided to call it quits.. Yesterday I called her and told her the relationship was over. She laughed and said it has been long overdue. I was saddened. Then I told her that if she had begged me I would have given her 5million dollars. The line went dead. Later that evening, a man called me and said he was a doctor. He said my girlfriend is very sick and would die if I don't accept her back. I am confused, what should I do? ![]() |
HerMajestyB: I saw the username on my putme registration slip!I guess it's service. Maybe later this week it will clear up |
HerMajestyB: Oh..... Ok!! TnxWhat username did you use? Mine has refused to open, keeps showing me error. |
I have tried applying , they keep showing me an error message and something about username error or application successfully submitted. I didn't even fill in anything. Is this normal? Or was it programmed this way this year? |
HerMajestyB: Ohk...... I've seen it. So should I start filling the required information??With a phone? Or laptop? Tell me about it when you're through. What questions they asked and if you had to print out anything. |
HerMajestyB: Pls help me..... I don't know my username..... Pls how do I get it back? Pls!Check your post utme acknowledgement slip, the print out. It is written there in. Though I would advice you wait, let's hear from imsu boi. So we can know the procedures before hand. |
I've been trying the admission status link, it keeps showing me an error message. Strange I must say.... |
I just checked their official website now. Application for supplementary has started without a release of the second batch list. So, if you probably didn't make the first and "suspected" last list, you can apply for supplementary now. Cc: imsuboi |
Here in Russia. It is abnormal for a man to have women.'s pictures in his phone.. It makes the man a "girlie" .. ![]() |
Well, I doubt a lady in Nigeria would woo you.. Here in Russia, ladies woo men. ![]() |
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