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chistar01: lol! I see you babes! . Welcome and please have your sit.

Oga mi,criticize me nah!

jumzzy448: Well done.....
But ℓ̊ observed that the first letter of your characters name are always in small letters instead of capital letters. Pls take note of that.
Keep the updates coming.

Your correction has been recieved and is being looked into.

so whats gonna happen now?

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"lets set a bait"

"a what?" serg ron asked looking perplexed.

"a bait; that will make the job easier for us"

serg ron was about to ask him to enunciate when a constable burst into the office; excitement written all over his face. He saluted them and kept starring at them like a slowpoke.

"so what is it cop ?" serg ron asked the intruding constable.

"i've been knocking sir but you didnt answer or you didnt hear me. There is a man outside sir" he replied.


inspector jack who was getting impatient to share his idea asked the constable rather angrily "so what the heck has that got to do with us?"

the constable looked confused. And wondered if he was in the right office. Then he asked "sir i heard you are handling "the" strange murder case"

"well; what if i am?" came inspector jack's reply.

"the man outside said he lost his wife last night sir"


"i still dont see how that concerns me cop" inspector jack replied getting angry.

The constable breathed out and said" the man outside said he came back from work last night by 0615 pm. He knocked on his door but got no response. He knew his wife was in since she didnt go to work yesterday. So he shouted her name twice to check if maybe she hadn't heard him knocking. But what greeted him was eerie silence. Then he heard muffled giggles; he thought it was his wife but three different voices followed the giggles. He became alarmed and rushed down to his car where he retrieved a hammer from the trunk which he used to break down the door of his house. But when he had succeeded in breaking down the door and stepped into his house. What met his eyes left him speechless. His wife was hanging loosely from the ceiling fan; her head had been cut off and kept on the bed.


"Her eyes were gorged out"

inspector jack's office phone rang immediately after that statement and after wasting a little time he picked the call. A call that would alter and change his life forever.

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"After locking the place i made sure i put a police seal on it before i left. I also contacted the land lady and told her what happened. She was genuinely shocked so there is no way she would have Killed them. After all i was there" that was serg ron recounting and explaining to his superior what transpired the night before. He was tired and sleepy due to lack of sleep which was denied yesterday by fate.


The time was 0945 am and he was sitting in his superior's office inspector jack pond. The office was spacious with two or three shelves containing books and other materials. At the northern side was a table and on the table was a few scary looking legal documents, a gun and a note pad. An a.c placed east ward of the room distribute air generously.


Inspector jack pond had recieved an order on his table that morning requesting him to take over a murder case reported by one sergeant ron gabriel . After swearing and cursing under his breath he decided to summon the reporter and find out more about the case.

Inspector jack looked very athletic and passably handsome. Through out his years in the police force, he was yet to handle a murder investigation so if was practically a novice but in theory he was a veteran. He hated that morning, cursed it and even wished he wasn't in the police force. Of all cases they gave him one in which people died with their heads cut of and eyes gorged out. The whole thing was just too scary.


Insp jack looked up from the report note, his colleague had stopped talking so if thought he was taking a momentary pause; but when he looked up serg ron was fast asleep on the chair. He felt irritated and wanted to wake him up but thought better of it and decided to let him be. He went back to the report in his hands.



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Five hours later inspector jack was tired. Serg ron had woken up and together they had been planning on how to go about unravelling the murder case.


"so have they searched the apartment thoroughly?" inspector jack asked.

"yes,they even conducted ballistic test for finger prints" serg ron replied.

"look serg,i don't know how the hell we are going to go about this; but i know the killer must be an expert."


serg ron shuddered as the image of Cyndy's freshly cut head came back to him; then he said "maybe we should just close the case; the killer left no trace".

"hmmm; maybe we would; maybe we wont. But the dead deserve justice; dont forget that serg."


serg ron looked as confused as a scattered puzzle. Slowly he stood up paced up and down the office thinking hard; he looked at his superior and asked him "sir; has a Q&A section(question and answer) been conducted with the inhabitants of the water street where the estate is located?"


"that has been done while you were sleeping. I sent some boys down there. It didnt yield much result just a few stupid answers" inspector jack replied sullenly. Then he stood up and kept starring at the a.c as if answers were written boldly on it; or maybe it was. After starring at it for what seemed like hours to him. He had an idea and brightened up then he turned to the serg and said.....

That was an amazing write up. Thumbs up ma.

therealbabe: Now, i hope i wont av a nightmare 2day wit dis story im reading

i hope so too.

The urch part really pained me,but i guess shit happens. I've learnt alot from this story especially the last part.

Mr chistar. I DOFF MY FEDORA IN RESPECT AND APRECIATION OF THIS ULTIMATE-PIECE.

*takes a bow*

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The prince iz here,chistar i c u jare

STILL WAITING.Oga o,wea u de?

Still here,nedu abeg come update.

*Rushes in,tired*
Abeg somebody should create space let me sit down and wait for the grand finale......

jumzzy448: Now ℓ̊ 'm scared 4 serg Ron oo
Hope they won't cut off his head very soon?

I'm hoping and praying against that too!

[quote author=Miz_Sammy]Whats going on in dat apartment? Who's freak dats hacking heads?[/quote]Meself don't know.

Clemzy16: "ya welkum"

"buh wat did u do to my signature. . ."


™ƺƔcιεмεηт®

rectified!

Silvarose: still glue to my seat, nice work, keep it flowing

Sure,ma'am!you are highly welcome.

chistar01: Wow, nice!! Each post makes me want more!

Oga mi,i still be learner 4 wea u de na!*suspense ish*

Clemzy16: " good morning chuck"


™ƺƔcιεмεηт®

beautiful morning to you too,bro.

[quote author=Miz_Sammy]oga chistar brought me hear. Wonderful story chuksemi *following*[/quote]Thanks ma'am.You are highly welcome.Your seat number is 002.

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"is that the door leading to the kitchen? He asked her, pointing to the door.

"Yes,it is.

"alright,ummm,before i go in there, is there a place in the kitchen someone might hide? Maybe a cellar or something.

she looked at him,smiled and said, "you're scared sir"

"hell no am not,just making sure i'm on the right track" though he knew his answer was a half truth.

He stared again at the door,moved closer to it and clutched his gun with both hands.With enough strenght as he could muster. He kicked the door with his right foot, it swung open.

The kitchen was lit, he walked in slowly, swinging his gun wielding arms from side to side, in the typical commando fashion. A quick scan of the kitchen proved that no one had been in there. He let his arms drop and he moved to the kitchen counter, sat on a chair and was trying to figure out what next to do. The sleep he had felt earlier had suddenly disappeared.

He had sat there for about two minutes when if heard giggles,muffled giggles coming from the sitting/bedroom direction. He simply ignored it and was trying to pour himself a glass of water to clear his brains alittle when he heard voices. three different voices.


On impulse he dashed out of the kitchen into the sitting room, he searched for cyndy with his eyes but there was no trace of her. Quickly he started running towards the door but was intercepted by something he had hit his leg against.

A short chill ran down his spine,slowly he looked down on the object he had hit his leg against. it was a human head with blood oozing out to show it had been freshly but. The eyes had been gorged out.


THE HEAD WAS CYNDY'S.

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Serg ron looked around the room immediately, darting his eyes left right and centre. He clutched the piece of paper tight as if the end to this mystery depended on it. Quietly he murmured expletives to himself and shouted....


"Any where you are, if you are in this room come out now and face me like a man"deep down he knew that declaration was half hearted as he was already wobbly. He was sure he could faint any moment, but he didn't show is fear so as not to frighten the girl who was still a prime suspect.



It would be forgiven that serg ron till this time hadn't noticed a small door at the southern part of the room.He looked at the girl again and saw her starring back at him with questions in her eyes.



"What is written on that paper?" she asked him.


"Nothing, don't worry all would be well" he found himself comforting her. Something was wrong with this picture and he knew it. He brought out his note pad and a pen ready to write down as much info as he could gather.


"What's your name?" he asked her.


"cyndy" Came the curt reply.


"cyndy who?"


"cyndy greg"


"Alright cyndy greg, you stay at?" he was writing the whole thing down. So there was need for her resident address. Atleast thats what he thought.

"I live here, the door before this one"


"bleep me, you stay in this estate?"


"yes, i do"

"so you know the dead man on that bed?"he asked her and as if on remote control he spat out of disgust.


"yes. His name was Mr brown cleantemple."

"Your house is it same as this?i mean in structure" he asked her.

"yes"

"okay cyndy, is there a place some one might hide?"

"No,yes,in the kitchen maybe"

"what the blimey?,there is a kitchen? He was suddenly alert,dropping his note pad and pen on the couch beside him,covered in blood. He quickly brought out his smith and wessons 38. He looked round the room again and then he saw another door at the southern part of the room.

jumzzy448: You made mistake in some of Ūя spellings. U̶̲̥̅̊ wrote euen instead of even. Then you wrote dann
Dn't know if U̶̲̥̅̊ were trying to write than....
All the way gud story.

Modified,thankyou ma,God bless you ma.

forgive me!i had to type with my opera browser since my direct phone browser refused to open.

I will make up for it tomorrow.

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They walked for about 50minutes and serg ron had began to wonder why he was even following her in the first place,maybe out of curiosity,he silently hoped that whatever she was going to show him better be worth while so he wouldn't have wasted his time.



Stop,she suddenly said.in front of an estate.

serg ron craned his neck to hear what else she was going to say.


i won't move further just go into the house on the left,sixth row,she said and smiled.

serg ron wanted to hand cuff her there and then but decided to play cool.'alright 'he said 'i will go in but you will come with me'.


No.they will eat me raw,she said and tears streamed freely from her eyes but she was smiling.


What a weird lady,serg ron thought but he said out loud,please come with me no body will touch you i promise.


you promise ?she asked him.


yes.serg ron re assured her.

Then follow me,she said.And she walked into the estate.

serg ron followed her,on getting to the 2nd door on the 6th row. She stopped and asked him to open the door.serg ron obliged and kicked the door open.

as they stepped in,the girl trailing Him.what serg ron saw was gruesome. there was blood every where and a human head was lying on the bed including other body parts scattered here and there.


He turned to handcuff the girl and declare her under arrest for murder when something caught his eyes.it was a piece of paper lying by the door side. Cautiously he went to pick it up.during training they had been taught to always approach things with caution.He had once neglected that rule and it cost him something very dear.


He got to the door,bent down and picked up the paper.He had planned to read it out loud but the content of the paper left him speechless.On the paper was written

"SERGEANT RON GABRIEL:I WILL COME FOR YOU:YOUR DEATH IS NIGH"

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He had been in this kind of situation before and had gotten himself robbed so this time he was extra careful. As he stepped down from the official police siren fitted car, one would notice that Sergeant ron wasn't the typical police type.He was tall and lean but his facial features made up for all his other deficiencies for he was a handsome fellow.

sergeant ron leant his 6.1ft body on his car side with his left hand tucked into his pant pocket.

Hey,he called out to the girl sitting on the road naked.but she took no notice of him.

He walked closer to her and shouted again 'hey' this time she heard him as she turned towards his direction and said.

Hi

what are you doing there?serg ron asked her.


i'm feeding on dead bodies,wanna join me?she replied.


Her response shocked him,he quickly scanned the area and for the first time in seven years.serg ron was scared.But he took his time and went closer to her,dangling his gun in his left hand visibly so she can see it.

A closer view proved to serg ron what he had been suspecting,she was clearly a murderer and this was probably her first murder so she had suffered mental problems.


Whats Your name?he asked her

She looked at him again and instead of answering she simply said 'follow me'

serg ron watched as she stood up,dusted her behind and started moving south.He followed.