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Lleigh:
no pressure right!!

not at all

Waiting!

YINKS89:
uve gat a nice story dre bt ma observation is dat u nid to alesys make ur xplanation short nd precise also we the readers wld always love what is goin to make us wnt more nd on the average i would score u a 4 there also please try as much as possible to involve more character nd it shldnt juz b all abt neil nd annie. at this junction i drop ma pen cr eeza u kan take over.

u said it all bruv.

No problem, ride on.. AND Nigeria is messd up bro Three wives *catchy line Afonjas, Almajiris and Igboukwu right?

YINKS89:
abeg no because sey i don dey dislike gab no change him destiny oooo.....
gab is still ma guy

I will update tmrw , I'll gv u a mention then decide if he is changd or not. *winks

I'm honoured bro
but you failed to give accolade to those that really make this section fun and interesting

jagugu88li
colik
DaddySLY
remiseyi
yinks89
bibijay123
dominique
b4u

call on others, a great poet is about to shine

Julietogbo:
I pray when Gabriel realizes his mistakes it won't be too late

thanks juliet , I pray so too.

YINKS89:
now ma love for gab is slowly fading away bt i hope he brings himself back on track b4 its too late.

No problem, soon we will know!

Lleigh:
Believe it or not cr eeza and I are newbies....

Jagugu 88li is telling you the truth....

Your interaction will give you ideas good luck

true o NEWBIES gone Semi-pro.. Thanks to our lovely friends like jagugu88li and bibijay123

jagugu88li:
Who just sent me a post in this our 21st century? Creèza....ehn!

Shigo20 nastynic Tuhnda ey mhi z Ll eigh dominiq ue adecu late john wizey law lahdey
Yorhmie nerd s wann col ik oya, tell this guy about technology abeg

My lady, dont vex with me, I was only showing the guy example o.

Ooops.. IMPOSTER AND FRAUD CAUGHT!

Red Alert! Cuddlemii
lalasticlala
obinnau

Plagiarism! Plagiarism !!!

greg42:
Help me out bruh.......i don't have a viable audience to appreciate my work.......am new here......help me call users attention

First, to get an audience, you need to be an audience. Comment on other threads and hey do it genuinely .

Why? Nairalanders are intelligent ,they can tell if you're just too good to be true.
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Step two, to be a better writer, be the best reader. This means read more of those stories you find interesting and adopt their methods : dont copy or plaglarise( I hope I got the spelling), just adopt their style.
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Before you post that story, proof read and detach unnecessary details- give the reader the chance to figure out somethings by themselves.
Example

I went on and on in the middle of the forest , the nigt was still young and I could hear the foosteps of my trailers behind me. - This garulous and gibberish.

Try this instead.

I fled through the dark night aided only by the rays of moonlight, my deepest fear was the footsteps that closed in on me.

*Show, dont tell.


Again, mention monikers. This does the trick. Beware, too much of it leads into two unmitigated disasters : banned for spamming or you simply get them irritated.

Cc Bibijay123 jagugu88li mirob yinks89 tunjilomo veekid and eniqurl you guys are invited.
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Last but not the least on the preference list.
Be consistent, reply comments and complete the story.


Nobody likes it when the author absconds with their fav. Characters.

#I REST MY PEN

[quote author=Lleigh post=51228605][/quote]ok, I missd something then, Maybe I didnt read it well, but she promised Remi that she was going to take off her mask ri?

Continue... But I told you to space the work.. Bro the story is interesting, this is Front page Material, only you can Improve the punctuations and Space the work..

Maybe you use opera mini that's why! Try using chrome or flashfox... To update...

Nice one,ride on.

Lleigh:
Thank you for coming over and commenting......

we shall see....I am getting goosebumps too

impossicant, the story is all in your head so why get goosebumps? funny

Its obvious your style of drawing her attention to it is making her loose appetite to continue this wonderful story. To me It doesn't really matter , the end justifies the case.

Lleigh:
Gabriel you naughty man

Is he? Time will tell tho!

What can I say? I have not been following this story for a very long time- because surprisingly, I am a newbie to nairaland Literature section and within weeks am proud to say that I've been honoured tremendously to be mentioned to this great thread.
Not just to read but to profer my own comments about a great story.

Skarlett-- You as simply amazing! Execenlenté! Bravoir! Bravoir!!!

And these two great writers I've been acquainted with

bibijay123 and lleigh , I Dolph my hat for you!

I'm honoured beyond doubts

bibijay123 Im sceptical about Dupe inviting Funmi into her home...

This is going to be a very long and rough ride,, I'm glued here... Just pray my bank account replenishes so I won't have to beg for data #God forbid

Took a while tho!

So let me get this straight: Sam/ MM decides to let Remi unmask her, only if He and I mean only if he proved that he was worth it...
She would become his, body and soul included, hmmmm I smell suspense and conspiracy.. Lleighs I hope its not what I think-?--- I am a writer too, but let me not spoil the fun and allow the author twist the story anyway she likes....

Long and very educative updates -- my best part " When Remi sat speechlessly on the table thinking to himself how he was gonna give it to her hard and raw.... Team Remi all the way..

Gloria007:
I love this...following

thanks dear

jagugu88li:
hahahaha I beg to differ m'Lady. Mine is, Gabriel really loves his wife hence he's always worried about hurting her by his lies (if she were to fund out). He's desperation for wealth comes also from wanting to fulfill a splendid life for his family. He simply took the wrong turn by allowing himself to take a job offered by a lady he finds attractive. Wrong turn.

Mr. Author Sir! Your life depends on wether or not they divorce after the truth comes. Andy guy could turnout to be a bought admirer too. I'll stop here

aye mi o.. Please spare me nah! Its Gabriel who is to blame not me nah

I missed tho... The king is here!!! Creeza for president 2032, shey una go vote for me ni? . So let me read up then drop a comment.

Mohbaby:
Probably the so called writer of that story plagiarized this work since it's been posted for a long time and Honestly I feel so bad right now that am even thinking of stopping...

dont despair! Continue , or try mutation of plot... Create a twist just to differentiate. DONt mind them. Ride on.

Lleigh:
cc jagugu88li , iykekelvins,

Creeza.... my Maths expert.....apologies if my mathematical inferences are wrong

next update about to land

patiently waiting... Meanwhile, lemme do research about story plotting

Lleigh:
Nice one Divepen1

The he said she said eventually gets ignored as the readers gloss over it.

But woe betide you as a writer if it isn't there.

Dialogue is hard...as we also need to imbue the character traits in there as well

Its a tasky thing but truth is when your readers get accustommed to it, they wont bother about flaws-which are inevitable.

Sometimes, I draft about four or five diff convos about a particular topic, before posting.

And after that. The reader should spot the flaws, and comment. Very innovative. NICE THREAD. divepen1

Mohbaby:
am telling u.. Thanks creez a!

you 're welcome dear. I hope my moniker gets a mention, on your next update.

I just read this through. Niel is the kinda guy you'd wanna hate but cant help it but love him more, just so you can see what else he could possibly do. NICE mohbaby.

Very nice. He needs a little more touch , and then he is heartless *winks

Anthony is really strong headed

LOL

yorhmienerd:
[color=#9900ff]If you hadn't interpet it, you would have seen "Back to Sender" [/color]

Ehbulu aba (thanks in Esan lang.)

yorhmienerd:
Cool!