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LiteratureRe: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Creeza(m): 4:22pm On Nov 20, 2016
I KNW SHE DID hit her head. I'm just concerned. Abou the poor baby boy in her, not herself.
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 3:36pm On Nov 20, 2016
elskillful:
if not that dami fell asleep gabriel would have done it.
see how poverty and want for money is shattering this loving family.
thanks for the update creeza.






N£XT
OK dear
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 3:35pm On Nov 20, 2016
bibijay123:
I think Gabe does not really love Kate. else he won't be falling so easily for Dami n he is not even scared of losing his family wen the truth comes out. I am officially Andy's fan....
lol team Andy ! But you don't know him that much to support him nah? Bibijay he might be worse than Gabe , you never can tell. grin
LiteratureRe: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Creeza(m): 3:32pm On Nov 20, 2016
Bibijay

cry why is Funmi bleeding and vomiting nah? cry

Sly is back to sulking ... cry

Mabel is happy with Tade.

And Uche is confused cry

I am crying bitterly here... Sniffs
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 3:30pm On Nov 20, 2016
Udochee:
nice suspension abi na suspense sef(all join). but hope Gabbu will hold strong for long.story getting more interesting.
more ink to you & other writers.
chai!!! I hope he does o!! grin and thanks for the encouragement
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 3:16pm On Nov 20, 2016
Udochee my guy..... I ' m sorry baba Gabriel no gree do am o.. His conscience didn't allow him to grin
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 3:12pm On Nov 20, 2016
jagugu88li:
Thanks for the dedication creeza, really appreciated.

If Gabriel doesn't refrain from this daddy-for-hire nonsense, he'll loose more than his family. I'm still struggling to understand why he feels he'll loose his job when admitting to having a family because clearly, Dami will still need his services regardless, given her desperation.

I thought Dami hired the PI for Gabriel, me sef cheesy

Good job, still here!
thanks dear, I know you read through all the latest updates cox I saw your moniker there for a long time.

The P. I she got an email from is in New York! Keeping watch off her mom...The first man I introduced is actually another investigator, I' m surprised you didn't see that ---- she is on to someone else.

*winks.....
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LiteratureRe: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Creeza(m): 2:51pm On Nov 20, 2016
bibijay123:
lol Berra go update o
just did .
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 2:01pm On Nov 20, 2016
Updated just now...

cc Dominique
jagugu88li
Yorhmienerd
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op):
dedicated Hardybattee45
Sharafawizkidayo
mirob , timstone

*Continues



Gabriel.

I gently caressed her laps, my arms went a bit further upwards into the forbidden arena.

It was entruiging, alluring and mind blowing, but unfortunately , Dami was already fast asleep- bad luck and alcohol effects.

In as much I wanted to dive into her, it would be termed rape and far from love making.

*I still have a bit of self respect and dignity , we are not a Menagerie in human form.

I carefully untangled my arms and moved a few paces backwards. Turned and open the door, only to glance back at her for a while, beheld her curves then
shut the door firmly..
*****************


Katherine



I hoped so dearly for the best and still afraid of the worst case scenario- loosing my husband to his work. He was within reach but I couldn't grasp him even though I tried . The thought was scary enough.

I sat down. The chairs pinched me and I stood up immediately. My heart raced fast and I prayed: Lord bring him home safe tonight. Just let him come back.
*-----------------

" Mum? Is daddy back yet? Dave said as he wiped his face , getting rid of any sleep hangovers.

I must have woke him up with my frantic pacing up and down.

I glanced surreptitiously at the wall clock. The big Joe said" 11: 45 pm.


"No son" I said " Go to your room and rest OK?.

"I' ll wait for your father, until he comes back"
I felt huge amounts of sympathy in my bones, his facial expressions made me quiver with fear.

"I want to wait with you , please"

" No honey, I 'll be fine . Don't worry about me" I said as my arms smoothly brushed his left shoulder ,raising him to his feet.

" Get up....let's get you to bed. Its really late"

Dave sighed. Looked at the dinning table and said " Mummy who is going to eat all these dishes you prepared? Too bad Daddy is not back yet and my appetite is gone"
*******--------

I paused for some seconds , my eyes became heavy, a tear trickled down leaving the white balls glassy.

"Mummy, now you are crying" he continued " Its my birthday and I should be sad, not you"

I felt a touch of ambivalence , laughter came forth and pain disapperaed.

I chuckled " Haha..I'm sorry Dave... Mummy is too emotional"

His lips brightened my cheeks with a touch of love.

"Goodnight Mother..I love you so much"

"Goodnight baby, I love you so very much" I said while standing from my squatting position.

****************------------

My mind tried to give answers to the rhetoritical questions in my head. *All of them would be answered tonight. **
---
The door creeked open I immediately feigned sleeep . I shut my eyelids perfectly without flinching .

I could feel his heart beat, it was really him. His breath was fresh. I sniffed his shirt like a rabbit when he kissed me on the forehead. Clean, no sweat and suspicious.

I opened an eye and saw him scanning the room with a surprise look on his face.

Oops!!! He nearly caught me peeking. I shut my eyes again penultimately before he turned.

"Love, love wake up" Gabriel tapped me on the shoulder.

"Wake up its late. Let's go to bed"

I let one eye open like I was indeed aroused from a deep sleep.

"You could have at least called " I began.

"Let me explain....."

I cut him short and said" Please do just that! Your son was worried sick waiting for you since yesterday. You just came back this morning at 1am to explain. Explain what exactly?
I said checking the time.

*Calm down now Kate. Take it easy,* my mind was faster than my tongue. I wanted to let it all out. The anger overflowed . Oh help me lord.*-----

" Kate listen... " He began again.

" I've tried listening for the past seven years. I have been listening.... I know we need money... Yes.. But what's the essence of it ,if we can't be happy?

His eyes betrayed his thoughts and I wanted an apology. *say it goddmit, just fuvking say it...say you 're sorry.

Then he unexpectedly shouted" OK fine , I go to work early and come back late.. So what's the big deal huh? What?

I couldn't believe my eyes , this was not my husband . This is not the Gabriel I gave my virginity , the man I sacrificed so much for. His eyes were blood shot with anger.

" Everything I do, I do for you and our son Dave" He continued " its not just about me .. Can't you see I'm tired huh? Cant you see ? I'm sick and tired of this poor life. I'm sick and tired of eating from hand to mouth"

" I grew up without a father, my mother and sister was all I had . I begged for food all my life. Now I'm trying so hard to give us a better life and you call me selfish?. Go on, tell the whole neighbourhood that your husband doesn't sleep at home because he is working very hard" He said.

I was stoned with silence but then I got a bigger shock.

" Gabriel what happened to your ring? Where is it? I said trying to refrain from the thought.

He sighed.. " Its in my bag"

" why would you put your wedding ring there? I said this time a bit calm but deep down I boiled with anger.

" Safety measures at work" He said.

I couldn't believe my ears. Could my husband's love for me be dead already? Did he place his work before us- me and my son? What have I done wrong?

He walked out on me and I caught his arm " Please Gabriel, please..... What's happening to you- to us? Tell me I want to understand" I said with tears in my eyes.

He brushed me off and said" Im being truthful and sincere, your problem is that you are doubting me"

I watched as he banged the door loudly behind him and broke down terribly into tears , crying my eyes out.

TBC
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LiteratureRe: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Creeza(m):
Bibijay123 and skarlett , what happen? We are waiting o!

OH I just remembered, let me come and be going. I might update today... So I am also a culprit here!

THIS PHCN now Bedc(Benin city) , you guys no go kill person.
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EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 11:26am On Nov 20, 2016
Why is my kofa still showing 'submitted' instead of 'admitted' ?

This a question running through the minds of many aspirants, now I want to show you, and not just tell you why that is so! Enjoy!

How many third batch candidates have you seen admitted with proof of recieving the letter? Not many I guess.
The crux is hidden in the fact that their screening was rushed, and a façade, just a make shift of ' face - face screening '

Personally, I have nothing against them, but remember I posted sometime criticising the man handling, flogging mistreatment of third batch? Doesnt this show that only few will, or already have been chosen from the batch.

Talking about supplementary. It is a gamble, and only the IKP's ( i know Person) have an added advantage. I remember a friend of mine, a girl, wont disclose name for security reasons: Her dad is a lecturer and he was given two slots to fill. What did he do?
He simply put his daughter(second batch) and her friend who bought supplementary form and as at the moment of writing this, both have paid acceptance fees.

Look deeper, you will see the glaring truth in polished silver. All first batch were admitted, all I mean and just a few were denied - someonelse bought their slot. (believe me if you want, but thats the truth)

Now, hitting the nail vehemently on the epicap of contention, Tell me how many non catchment were admitted in second batch? Not many of which I can count.

If you are still in doubt ,ask yourself 'what happened to 45 % merit; 35 catchment and 20 elds?

My dear, it has already been implemented. I can boldly testify to that : Second batch screening was fast not because they were few but because it was jus 35 % of the available slot.

ANY HOPE? you may ask, I dont want to burst your bubbles but my dear sitting at home waiting for your kofa to miraculously change to admitted now wont help - the only remedy is to act ( If you know what I mean- and believe me you 'll be needing very very long legs) This is Nigeria where anything can happen only if you put your mind to it.

If there is any list again, I doubt its Elds or whatever you want to call it.

You are not on merit, not on catchment and even elds...your only shot was the Merit as a non catchment, and you say ' I'm waiting for second list' well I hope the V.c is your uncle.

Nevertheless, I wish you all the best in this year's admission proces
s, just 10 days to go.
In the end ,you will smile and rejoice.

#HAPPY christ the King day #corpusCHRISTUS
EducationUNIBEN Admission 2016 : Why Am I Not Yet Admitted?. Get In Here by Creeza(op): 11:10am On Nov 20, 2016
Why is my kofa still showing 'submitted' instead of 'admitted' ?


This a question running through the minds of many aspirants, now I want to show you, and not just tell you why that is so! Enjoy!


How many third batch candidates have you seen admitted with proof of recieving the letter? Not many I guess.

The crux is hidden in the fact that their screening was rushed, and a façade, just a make shift of ' face - face screening '

Personally, I have nothing against them, but remember I posted sometime criticising the man handling, flogging mistreatment of third batch? Doesnt this show that only few will, or already have been chosen from the batch.

Talking about supplementary. It is a gamble, and only the IKP's ( i know Person) have an added advantage. I remember a friend of mine, a girl, wont disclose name for security reasons: Her dad is a lecturer and he was given two slots to fill.

What did he do?
He simply put his daughter(second batch) and her friend who bought supplementary form and as at the moment of writing this, both have paid acceptance fees and through with online clearance.

Look deeper, you will see the glaring truth in polished silver. All first batch were admitted, all I mean and just a few were denied - someonelse bought their slot. (believe me if you want, but thats the truth)

Now, hitting the nail vehemently on the epicap of contention, Tell me how many non catchment were admitted in second batch? Not many of which I can count.

If you are still in doubt ,ask yourself 'what happened to 45 % merit; 35 catchment and 20 elds?


My dear, it has already been implemented. I can boldly testify to that : Second batch screening was fast not because they were few but because it was jus 35 % of the available slot.

ANY HOPE? you may ask, I dont want to burst your bubbles but my dear sitting at home waiting for your kofa to miraculously change to admitted now wont help - the only remedy is to act ( If you know what I mean- and believe me you 'll be needing very very long legs).

This is Nigeria where anything can happen only if you put your mind to it.

If there is any list again, I doubt its Elds or whatever you want to call it.

You are not on merit, not on catchment and even elds...your only shot was the Merit as a non catchment, and you say ' I'm waiting for second list' well I hope the V.c is your uncle.

Nevertheless, I wish you all the best in this year's admission proces
s, just 10 days to go.
In the end ,you will smile and rejoice.

#HAPPY christ the King day #corpusCHRISTUS

cc Lalasticlala
dominique
Richiez
fynestboi
LiteratureRe: The River by Creeza(m): 9:56am On Nov 20, 2016
For a moment I thought I could see the boy... Scary, and haunting. Lleigh nice piece and the dialogue said it all.

Thanks for the dedication.
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LiteratureRe: Alarm #Nlwriters by Creeza(m): 10:34pm On Nov 19, 2016
I'm not the best guy to ask for opinions. Trust me, but Ralph , hmm the bad boy! No comments,

Why is kels nt a main character? Or is that an alias?
grin

Denzel Washington, hmm he should just let Kim have a peaceful problem management- her family.

Thats mine, Its Useless I know. But hey! check my signature grin before you judge me, just yet
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LiteratureRe: 3mjaj Sweet Sorrow! by Creeza(m): 10:25pm On Nov 19, 2016
Nice post. I can imagine Tomiwa snoring pitifully. Lolz.. Some women snore so badly, you think they are reciting the national anthem grin
LiteratureRe: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Creeza(m): 7:12pm On Nov 19, 2016
khalifahsparkles:
lol. I'm not even following the arguments.
my dear you have to o. Just find one team and join, teamSerwa or even teamCeci. Lol
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EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 6:38pm On Nov 19, 2016
Its been a while, since I last commentted on this thread

Re:Nobody missed me (Chai! ) cry
LiteratureRe: Alarm #Nlwriters by Creeza(m): 6:26pm On Nov 19, 2016
Leriebloom:
Episode 11
Kim stared at her mother. She saw tears, pain, anger and joy in her eyes.

"Oh my, you are back " she said wiping her tears, pulling her daughter into a hug.

" I missed you so much mum" she said crying and inhaling the scent of her mother.

A scent that she missed so much.

"Mummy why are you crying? "Hailey asked looking confused.

Kim's mother stared at her grand daughter and smiled.
" She is so beautiful and she talks so well, what is her name? " she asked pretending like she didn't know, taking Hailey's hand.

" My name is Hailey " she said with a wide smile.

Kim's mother of arched a brow,," She is smart too, I love her already " she said smiling appreciatively.

" We should go inside" she said leading both her daughter and grand daughter inside.

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Six years ago

Kim stared at Ralph with confusion when he told her to try sniffing the white substance on the table.

"Ralph, you know that I have never tried this stuff before " she said she softly. A voice in her head was telling her not to.

Ralph laughed out aloud," Tara has given you weed to take before, so what makes this any different? " he asked huskily. His eyes were half closed, showing her that he was drop dead high.

" There is a difference Ralph. This is illegal " she said trying to listen to the voice of reason in her head.

" Weed is illegal " he said with a smirk.

He had left her defenseless.

" I am your boyfriend Kim, do this for me please" he said with so much sincerity that she believed.

She knelt down on the ground beside him and sniffed the white substance.

Ralph was watching her with so much intensity but she didn't care.

She sat up, as she felt the effect of the cocaine begin to take its place.

She felt numb at first, and afterwards mentally alert. She felt her eyes open.
She felt she could see everything clearly.
Hear every sound in the room.

She smiled and took another snort.
Ralph smiled.

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Six years later


Immediately Kim entered the house with Hailey she heard a loud scream.

She jumped in shock at the voice. It was her a baby sister, Kells.She rushed to hug her.

"Oh my God, I can't believe that you are here. I only get to see you on TV, I have bee....... " Kells was cut short by her mother's stern look.

" She just got here and you want to bore her with your talk eh" their mother said with a serious look.

Kim smiled.

Her mother was still as serious ever. She guessed nothing much had changed after all.

Hailey held Kim's hand tight. She had not gotten used to her environment yet, she was still trying to observe the new faces.

"Kells help Kim with her box, helo make sure my daughter and grand daughter get settled " mother said with so much happiness.

Kells took the box and kept on talking about things she had missed out on for six years now.

Kim wasn't listening until Kells mentioned Tara's name. Kim tried to shut Kells up with a look but it was already too late, wise Hailey had caught up on it.

"Mummy who is Tara? " she asked with so much curiosity causing Kells to shut up and Kim to place a hand on her head.

Ghosts of the past were catching up with her.
this Kells is what we call disseminure expertertè,
: can talk for Africa eh!

#oya bring it cuming grin
LiteratureRe: The White Paper ( A Romance Story) by Creeza(m): 6:09pm On Nov 19, 2016
Ride on
LiteratureRe: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Creeza(m): 5:33pm On Nov 19, 2016
grin Bibi come and update o. PLease! The magnitude of these arguments is brimming red and hot coal.
Wont be long before firstblood is drawn, I saw a vision o. PLEASE!!
***
#team Funmi, team SlyAnnie, DupUche, team Mabel. Everyone has a team grin
LiteratureRe: In The World Of 3 Women (A Romance Suspense Story by Kayode Odusanya) by Creeza(m): 3:55pm On Nov 19, 2016
Interesting. Ride on , I got the gist.
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 2:03pm On Nov 19, 2016
elskillful:
Gabriel please don't do it.
Lets see what happens :-P
LiteratureRe: In The World Of 3 Women (A Romance Suspense Story by Kayode Odusanya) by Creeza(m): 2:00pm On Nov 19, 2016
Please Kayo80, I couldnt go through all the chapters.. So far I know that Dapo is nt so well to do, contrasted by Lola's wealthy background.. Kindly write a short prologue so I can follow up.,

Waiting patiently... And nice story.
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LiteratureRe: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Creeza(m): 1:31pm On Nov 19, 2016
yorhmienerd:
[color=#9900ff]The you know why heavy smokers finds it hard to stop smoking?, It starts with a drag, then escalate to a stick, then two, then a pack, till it become part and parcle of them. Mabel introduced her to the world of pleasuring herself, introduced her to sultry dressing, alchohol and it vices and she expects it to stop with that, Funmi is a good student who like to research more on what her teacher{Mabel} taught her, this is a case of YAM PEPPER SCATTER SCATTER [/color]
Hahah Teach me how to fish, dont give fish bones. BRO oil dae yah head jare!
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LiteratureRe: In The World Of 3 Women (A Romance Suspense Story by Kayode Odusanya) by Creeza(m): 1:26pm On Nov 19, 2016
yorhmienerd:
Creeza, Lawlahdey, Jay452, Countrygirl, Bibijay123, Veekid,
present sir!
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LiteratureRe: 3mjaj Sweet Sorrow! by Creeza(m): 11:11am On Nov 19, 2016
Ride on
LiteratureRe: Blood For Blood:a Tale Of Treachery by Creeza(m): 11:03am On Nov 19, 2016
Following. Keep it cuming bro, but Try to space your work.

BLOOD ,SLOW and TRIGGER.. I cant imagine the mystery behind this Mirage à Trois.

Just like in the movies :Cicadè a Deus- City Of God.


Yorhmienerd
Lleigh
jagugu88li
yinks89
mirob

I just found this one- seems promising.
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LiteratureRe: Nephilim by Creeza(m): 9:54am On Nov 19, 2016
Waiting patiently for updates
LiteratureRe: Engaged To A Heartless CEO by Creeza(m): 9:52am On Nov 19, 2016
YINKS89:
dis is sewious.... kant imagine daniel bringing in gurls of various sizes.
lol
LiteratureRe: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Creeza(m): 9:50am On Nov 19, 2016
ajoke21:
[/color]Funmi forgot who she was and where she was coming from. If she continues with her revenge,it will back fire at her. Her solution is to retrace her step. My opinion though!
I go for #slyannie, #dupuche
I laugh u in cantonese. grin its obvious You've not been actively following the story.

Retrace which steps, the one that leads to humiliation? Her own mother rejected her.

Please know how to give advices, so you dont confuse an average minded individual- like me grin
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 9:42am On Nov 19, 2016
Hardybattee45:
Cr eeza I dey gbadun your story......waiting for next update. THUMBS UP wink wink
thanks a bunch , I wont keep you waiting for long.

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