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LiteratureRe: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Creeza(m): 12:07am On Nov 19, 2016
remiseyi:
you nailed it...
am glad you observed it too.
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LiteratureRe: The Auction by Creeza(m): 12:05am On Nov 19, 2016
Lleigh:
Creeza I am humbled by your words thank you. I really appreciate it.
you are welcome dear.. And I dropped a tip for you in " The river" .... Nice updates dear.. Ride on.
LiteratureRe: The River by Creeza(m):
Firstly, Let me say Fred is crushing on Eliora already, but his drinking habit is already a no winner for him..

The guys that were also in the room when, she was introduced by Devine: huge adrenaline and urge to get the new girl . If you know what I mean.

modified, but I hope you read it , Lleigh.. *winks
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 11:47pm On Nov 18, 2016
bibijay123:
Being broke is the root of all evil.
I' ll journal this statement.. universal truth.
LiteratureRe: The River by Creeza(m): 11:45pm On Nov 18, 2016
my favrite.. grin lleigh , lemme read this one small.. but you re bursting my brain here nah! shuo huh Three stories and all very interesting. , which one will I choose,

don't mind me dear grin keep it cuming #MM 's voice.
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LiteratureRe: The Auction by Creeza(m): 11:36pm On Nov 18, 2016
Lleigh, you deserve an award to be very honest.

I can't imagine how one person writes three different stories simultaneously, and all are very brilliant.

Wordings, description. Name it.

In conclusion read my signature. * winks
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LiteratureRe: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Creeza(m): 11:23pm On Nov 18, 2016
yorhmienerd:
[color=#9900ff]She's not stealing anything! This is what happen when you teach a naive girl how to explore the world [/color]
I said this before... she had her brain re programmed and disoriented by the very people she trusted. Now she turned out a nearly naive and a sociopath all combine in one person.... let's cut her some slacks here. OK

Personally I don't like her, but the truth is glaring in shining silver: Mabel is just eating fruits of Her own mastermind.

#lemme cone and be going.. grin
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 11:18pm On Nov 18, 2016
tunjilomo:
GBOAM,Really enjoying this,read it from A and it is awesome
thanks tunjilomo, *winks
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 11:16pm On Nov 18, 2016
YINKS89:
mehn dats was ma fear all along bt nonethless d writernoens the characters nd kan do as he pleases with them... ride on bro.
I will bro. Hope the knots are all starting to get loosed right ?

no more confusions?
LiteratureRe: The Club a story - #nlwriters by Creeza(m):
Remi are you blind? undecided De ja vú , same expressions , Open your eyes nah... Er? MM is Sam...

But I dont blame you, the very one at the club has an alias.. Sam and MM

Lleigh I'm not happy.. this is torture for Remi..

Nice one , indeed this was a bomb.. # fingers clipped and expecting the next de ja vú- Remi actually doing it , even a quickie with Sam grin
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LiteratureRe: The Club a story - #nlwriters by Creeza(m): 10:59pm On Nov 18, 2016
Lleigh:
dropped..........
grin oya lemme start reading. thanks for the mention dear.
LiteratureRe: Hearts In Ashes by Creeza(m): 10:57pm On Nov 18, 2016
skarlett pls. !!!!!! I' m hungry nah! Shuo?

Poison Seyi nah... I really want that guy dead.. pleasehuh?
LiteratureRe: The Club a story - #nlwriters by Creeza(m): 10:48pm On Nov 18, 2016
drop a bomb please !!!?*winks
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 10:46pm On Nov 18, 2016
Udochee:
its about to go down..of all days to give excuses it had to be Dave's bday.fingers closed & eyes opened
hehehe grin
LiteratureRe: The Club a story - #nlwriters by Creeza(m):
I love feedbacks, thats why I give feedbacks, Its simple- and I am rooting for Matt, big time. *winks
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 9:48pm On Nov 18, 2016
Sharafawizkidayo:
Woah!! this story is interesting o, as in eh i am so liking?? understatement, wat i mean to say is i loooovvveee!!!!!! this tori, pls mention me in ur nxt update, u are good bro. Nyc work
thanks bro, I will do just that. :-) wink
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 9:45pm On Nov 18, 2016
mirob:
Feeling bad for Kate, Gaberiel really fall for Dami so cheaply, he would have found another means. Some men ehhhh.
Rooting for team kate, wow Kate has a pack of supporters. How interesting
LiteratureRe: The Club a story - #nlwriters by Creeza(m): 7:21pm On Nov 18, 2016
Liegh I saw this cuming. Haba! Is she made of brick? See matts unclad erect Mahogany wood, she must wet her undies too!
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LiteratureRe: The Club a story - #nlwriters by Creeza(m): 6:31pm On Nov 18, 2016
All work and no play makes jacky chan a dull boy. grin
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 6:04pm On Nov 18, 2016
sod09:
e Dan happen
fenfelenfe
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 5:55pm On Nov 18, 2016
yorhmienerd:
[color=#9900ff]You know why we will continue to have gender problem in this country- GENERALISING every thing. I comment my reserve [/color]
grin lmao
LiteratureRe: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Creeza(m): 5:52pm On Nov 18, 2016
Its only in Africa they deport you from a country, and then you still go back to cause trouble. LOL funmzilastic funmi.


SLY YOUR PART TOO LONG o grin, Couldnt read it all, but nice one bibijay123, what can I say, you're simply exellenté !
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 5:36pm On Nov 18, 2016
Baddchristy:
We all know what's going to happen
it's in the blood of all men to cheat
In fact they love cheating
abi? Lol grin
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op):
dedicated to all those that believe in the power of love.
cc Dominique, bibijay123 Yinks89 Hafelove and Yorhmienerd.



Chapter Five* Temptation In Human form*


Gabriel



*It went on consecutively for weeks. Every morning , I would wake up at 6.45 am , just to be punctual. I would sneak out quietly
without Kate's knowledge. It was cool and awesome-the feeling of being invisible.

Although it got to the point of frustration , irritation and suicidal tendencies- I pushed too far to the edge cause I liked it.
From six to nine , and the cycle continued the next morning.

Dami's gate man already accustomed to my early visits, let me in even though he was clueless to what promoted the early morning visits.

Miss Akehinde was already awake and as usual brought me new pairs of clothes- sometimes she gave me night pajamas - just to make it look all real to her daughter, that I was indeed a part of the family she lost. Funmi was still sound asleep


I changed into the shirt and felt uncomfortable with her staring at my chest and abdomen.
**----------

" I will be going home early today ' I said.

" Why? What's the rush?

+------
*Rush? Nothing more than trying to escape your xray eyes * I thought out loud and shook my head in disgust.
------

"Emergency ! I said.

she kept mute as if to pretend she didn't hear me. Her eyes fixed upon my bag this time, which was on the room divider.

"Why do you always carry a bag pack?

" Emergencies " I replied non challantly.

"What kind?

"NOthing too important ' I said " just any kind"

Dami was not satisfied with my answer . She must have been having a bad hunch about me.

*-------
*well that's her business * I' m just doing it for the money*

"OK ,very well then. You can go home early today, but I' ll be the one to explain it to Funmi'

My head moved in unison with my thoughts. Its seemed OK by me. I took my bag and towered down the stairs to change my pants.
**************************



It was almost 6:30 in the evening and still Dami was nowhere to be found . Had she forgotten so easily? I couldn't set my mind to refrain from the thought.


My eyes locked in , on the wall clock and I bit my lips in regret. Almost brimming with rage, I sighed bitterly.
Funmi was comfortably enjoying her position in my bosom , watching her favourite t.v programme. The poor girl, I had learnt to love her dearly as mine.

Nanny Bisi came in with a tray containing glasses of juice and candy cake bars. She placed them on a stool beside the bed.

"Is Dami back already? I asked.

"No sir. She is still out "

"OK thank you" .

She shut the door briskly behind her when she left.

* my phone vibrated in my shorts*A text from Kate*

: Hi Love, please try to be home early. Remember its David's birthday . kisses and hugs. See you soon.
**+-----


Of course I did remember , only if I could excape this nonsense called daddy- posing.


" I'm sorry Love. Something important came up. Overtime and we have to beat the dead line for the supply'
My thumb clicked send , when I was done typing the SMS.****---

"What can be more Important than your family? If you can't make it for your son, what more about me- about us?
She replied instantly.

I sighed and carefully typed my reply" It won't get to that point. Trust me I have the situation under control"

It took her some time to reply, maybe she wanted to assimilate what I meant by being "in control"

" In control? Or you are being controlled? I'm sorry , but you confuse me with your work life.
Please call me"

I didn't reply back and then she called, I rejected it. She called the second time, but it was already on silent mode.
*

" Daddy who was that? Funmi enquired .

"No one of importance baby, ' I said ' its just one of my many clients".
I enjoyed the moment.

*************************


10 pm.

Dami returned home , stone drunk and very tipsy. Her mobile never went through, she practically forgot me.


"You are late" I said when she locked her car and came inside the living room.

My mood was not so good ,I paced up and down and tried to be calm.

"Why? This is my house. I can come in and go out any time I want" She said in a tipsy manner.

She staggered and her high heels brought her crumbling to the floor, when I caught her in mid - air, by a freak of impulse .

I saw something in her eyes. A burning desire of which I was afraid to give her. So deep, that the demons in me were even frightened to behold her .
She kept mute and then suddenly said " aawn , how sweet. Now put me down , I can find my bedroom unaided"

She tripped a second time and fell face flat on the cold tile.

"Let me help you Dami" I said ' You are really drunk"

Awrful, and pathetic. Carrying her from the laps with my other arm supporting her torso, I took her to her room. Placed her gently on the the red sheets which left a romantic picture in the mind. Her room was deemly lit by moonlight, just a perfect scene for hot romance.

Her arms restricted my motion, and she uttered inaudible words.

"What ? I tried to place my ear on her lips.....

" Why are you still here? Gabriel? She began...
" I expected you to reject my offer but you did not. You were too easy for me . Too easy and cheap.
Tell me Gabriel , do you have a wife at home to feed" She said.

Her worrds angered me the more and I tried to withdraw my arms, but she won't let them loose freely.
Maybe she already knew, maybe my cover was already blown. What was in the email , she received on that auspicious day?
Perhaps, it was on her mind all along, I couldn't imagine but fear the worst.

" Maybe ! ' I said, knowing fully well she was past reasoning and and already in stupor .

"Stay with me tonight , don't go. Please'

"I have to.....' I said while trying to move.

Her lips touched mine and she kissed me with so much passion while her eyes were closed.
" Don't leave ... Please stay... Love me, please Gabriel"

Temptation indeed, my testerones were energenized. I could feel the lust on my whole body.
The fire burned and nothing could extinguish it.
There she was in my arms and I was afraid, afraid not of almost perfect curves, but of committing a crime of infidelity .

TBC
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LiteratureRe: Nephilim by Creeza(m): 2:44pm On Nov 18, 2016
ReuEl12:
jagugu88li jidxin Midastouche01 Temmason shigo20 nastynic tuhnday olumose001 creeza, call the others please
gallantly present
LiteratureRe: The Auction by Creeza(m): 11:29pm On Nov 17, 2016
I will read when I'm free. Thanks for the mention.
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LiteratureRe: The River by Creeza(m): 11:17pm On Nov 17, 2016
Thanks for the mention lleigh. I see strong chemistry in the loops for Devine and Eliora.

But Danny's death according to the story, might make her nt to be ready to dance outside her comfort zone.

NICE UPDATE miss Lleigh. Am inspired . kiss
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 9:32pm On Nov 17, 2016
YINKS89:
no update 2night ?
I wish I could bro, maybe tmmrw!
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 8:16pm On Nov 17, 2016
bibijay123:
lol make Andy try this tin wey hin do for Oshodi, body go tell am. He's forming super man issokay. Weldone Creez a!
lol thank you dear
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 8:10pm On Nov 17, 2016
yorhmienerd:
[color=#9900ff]The fear of Oshodi boys is the beginning of wellness [/color]
lol
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 8:09pm On Nov 17, 2016
YINKS89:
u gat mi dre addin more character wld make it more intersting thou i juz hope at d end t defines the title which (the temptation of gabriel)...
No qualms.

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