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happyjuliet:
Nice write up... look like a movie have seen b4 (The two wife)

maybe, maybe not.. But Its a true life story, and this is a banger!! Just stay tuned. Thnks for dropping by.

sunshine46:
Captivating piece...following in-distractedly

thanks dear, thanks for following. *winks

stanvesco:
awesome story
seems you reeling out the story of my life... hahahhhaahaaa

please kindly change ur storytellibg style a little please...
chose a major character... and let it remain thus... so you don't confuse us with... first person narration pleaseeeeeeeee
your story is GLORIOuS

wow! Thanks a bunch. But to be honest, to fully grasp the whole story five characters are involved. PLEASE BEAR WITH ME- but the center of gravity is Gabriel.

For your sake, let me write a short Prelude.

* Gabriel disvirgins a young girl, whom he felt he loved so much (THAT IS Kate). Successively, life didnt go as planned when they had a son, now He will do anything just to get rich- his motives are quite ambivalent though.

Kate has her own life- Mimi and another crazy friend, I still cant find a name for him.

Then comes Dami- single but rich asf, her main deprivation is love, and will go the extreme just to get it.

Andy- I still cant picture his role here. Its kinda blurred, but He is vital to Kate.

As the story unveils, I hope to make it more less confusing. The aim is to make us feel the pain and trials each character is going through.

ENJOY. And thanks for stopping by.

hefelove:
It's been long I read stories on nairaland but this particular story title gat ma attention, lemme book space, will read later

thanks for stopping by.

No problem. I will do justice to that.

Thanks, but I felt the urge to share. I like feedbacks. #gracias

Secondary school was amazing! In our journey through secondary school, we all encountered some crazy Nigerian teachers. Here are the most interesting ones.

1. The Disciplinarian:
These ones were usually very strict and never hesitated to use the cane. Their classes were very quiet, and most people just sat in fear ,never really understanding anything.
Everyone studied extra hard for their exams and tests because nobody wanted to face their wrath. They always gave the worst physical punishments too.

2. The Clueless Ones
These ones usually had no idea what they were teaching and frequently consulted the textbook during lessons. Their classes were usually boring and if they were asked any questions, their steady reply was ‘that’s your assignment, find out yourself’.

3. The Off-Point Teacher:
These ones always went off point during lessons. Most of the time, they talked about their personal life and gave unsolicited advice that nobody cared about.

4. Dry Jokers:
This one will always find a way to slip in dry jokes. Nobody ever laughed, or just pretended to laugh, but they never stopped cracking their 'yeye' jokes.

5. The Hilarious One
These ones always had really interesting classes. All the students loved them, and they cracked great jokes.

6. The Hot One
This one was usually very hot and had a great body. Students always had crushes on them, and everyone wanted to be their favourite.

7. The Boring One
These ones taught boring subjects and were never bright or lively. Their classes were usually a snooze-fest and people usually had average grades.

8. The Oversabi Master
These ones always did too much oversabi. Ensured all the rules were followed and never gave room for any spontaneity in their lessons. Their life goal was to become principal or Head of the department. They also walked into classrooms randomly to enforce order and even other teachers did not like them.

9. The Entrepreneur
These ones were always selling one thing or the other in school-chin chin, kpof kpof, zobo- and they often made students run errands for them. They were usually nice though and gave students treats sometimes. They really cared about money, and would often lament about how little their salary is.

10. The Gossip
These ones were talkative and they always wanted to know what was going on in the classroom and who was dating who. They can be too nosy about your personal life. They also never kept their mouths shut and were responsible for most of the gossip in school.

If you did not find your teacher here, kindly add his/her character.

Cc obinnau

omeira:
Mehn, the story is Bam. Hope Kate doesn't get hurt sha. Thanks Creeza.
Osas grabbed his throat in agony as the throes of death gnawed at him. He gaped at the plates in front of him as pain engulfed all of him. He felt the urge to disgorge his abdominal contents. Yet pain had not even started. Osas could be saved, but he knew, those with him knew he would not, must not survive it. The tradition stays. No one eats what Osas ate from the king's plate except that he dies.
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flashfox ok for this? CAUSE FB says ' error' . I used Uc web browser tho!

saxwizard:
the storyline is good Mr Whizzdom but don't rush it

asin eh! I REMEMBER READING chapter 4 last, now its 12. Oga easy nah, rushing the story will make people loose interest. I'M being honest here. I like your plot- dont rush it, cox I'm lost already. Thnk you.

Wow I'm stunned. Nice job Op. Following

greedie1:
just make sure u don't hurt the wife!!!
I'm following u bumper to bumper, thanks for sharing this great piece with us.

awwwn, poor adorable Kate. Lets see about that, but I cant promise because someone has to get hurt, makes the story more fun.

Hahahaha Remi better take my advice o. If he wants to impress MM.

Lleigh:
Creeza....

Hooked......please make sure you finish this piece.

I will try my best. Its a long way ahead, but with your support and comments, we will get there!

Whizzdom:
CHAPTER 9

“Anthony! Anthony!” Anthony’s mother shouted as she tapped Anthony to wake up.

“Mmm, Ehhn, MMh” Anthony said as he opened his eyes.

“Stand up, it is almost time, won’t you go for the screening today?” said Anthony’s mom

Anthony yawned and stretched first before coming to his sense that he has a screening exercise today.

He quickly jumped up and looked at the time, it says eleven thirty, before saying.

“They will have started the screening exercise already” he said.

“That’s the reason I was trying to wake you up, but as a chronic sleeper that you are, you slept like a person that was hit with a rod on the head” said his mother

“Thanks mom” Anthony said as he ran out of his room to the toilet to wash his face.

“There are spots of saliva by the side of your mouth, make sure you wash it away” said his mother.

Anthony’s mother exited the room and went to her room. The reason Anthony’s mother was supportive of what Anthony wanted to do was because she could see the zeal and the passion that Anthony has towards soldering.

She has been watching him since he was at age 10; she could see that her son loves military activities.

She had convinced her husband, Anthony’s Dad to let their son go for what his heart desires since there are popular, wealthy and famous people who are in the Army, people like Commander J. K. Abudu, Major General Yusuf Tijani and General Audu Madu of Nigerian Defence Academy.

“The path our son wants to follow is very good, he won’t be like those Aboki Soldiers, that didn’t go to school.

He will be an educated, certified and rich soldier.” She said to her husband.

“But God frowned at killing, ‘if a man kills by the sword, by the sword he too shall be killed’ is what the bible and God himself said” said her husband
“We must put a stop to the soldiering passion that is flowing in the heart of our son, moreover they will be injecting into our son some powerful steroid drugs that make them powerful in strenght for a short duration, and at the end when the drugs wears-out, the bad side-effects of the drugs will begin”

“Our son will now be in pain for overworking his body; such drugs also turn some soldiers into lunatics at the end of the day or in the future.

Look woman, I don’t want a mad person in my generation because there was nothing like a mad person in my generation”

Anthony’s mother was frustrated by the protest of her husband said convincingly.

“Nothing will happen to our son, neither will he turn lunatic, he will go into that Nigerian Defence Academy and come out with first class result into a full breed army officer. With riches and wealth tangling around his neck, then we will seat down and enjoy.”

“See, in this Academy that Anthony is going for, there is nothing like drugs; the Federal Government of Nigeria has changed all discrepancies and unethical practices of the past.

They have rebranded it and bring it forth to be a new and transformed Academy” said Anthony’s mother

“Where did you get that from?” asked her husband.

“From yesterday’s newspaper, it was in the erm erm, DailyWatch” She replied.

“And you are sure that it is Federal Government that says so?” her husband asked again.

“Yes, I am positive” She replied again.

“Okay if you say so, he can go then” said her husband.

“My husband, there is nothing to be afraid about, all is well, let’s just pray for our son that God should protect and guide him. That’s all” she said.

“And we will tell him not to join bad gangs if he gets there” said her husband

“We will.” She said.

Anthony's dad is skeptical about him joining the military, Same happened to me in my early days as a scholar, but here we are now. NICE UPDATE.

Still following

greedie1:
happily ever after would be him going for the flower garden woman and his wife going for Mr andy ; D

Lol I like your projection, but to be honest : a twist will shock you! Battle of wits is about to happen. I dont write Happily ever afters. (lolz)

Thanks for stopping by tho!

Lleigh:
Creeza....

haha....you must be able to give us a mathematical formula, to determine the point of no return for him

He will have to do mind over mtter

mathematically speaking *clears throat* Remi has to multiply the strokes on his Joystick, but the time interval will greatly affect his infinital endurance. Therefore it is wise to subtract his subconscious mind from the act, divide it by the fact that he wants the main deal which is equivalent to MM.

In summary, the equation is based purely on Calculus.

He will cum at the midpoint of his fantansy except he divides the starting point and climax by 2.

X1 + x2 /2

tu comprendez? *winks

ADECULATE:
tanks 4 d mention, am following u bumper bumper

lol, Welcome and enjoy reading.. Just cruise in the story, and feel free to ask questions *winks

Lleigh, Remi wont be able to rub oil on his erect anatomy for two minutes, without cuming. I bet the sight of MM alone will trigger those hormones. #wtf!

I think Seduction is taking over here, like 50 shades of grey.

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I wish you a happy reading on this humble thread of mine. please enjoy and Oh! I forgot: I love feedbacks , it encourages me more.. thank you

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I invite you to this humble thread of mine. please enjoy and kindly leave feedbacks.. Thank you

True talk, And Lleigh . Remi is trying. YOU ARE EXCEPTIONAL... Keep it up, dont forget to Hangout with Gabriel- the dark handsome hustler *winks

Nice story bro. The plot is nice. I was captivated in begining before you changed the tone narrative. Its started well with 'I' then you jumped into 'Anthony said'

i'm not into arts, rather A maths student. MY LOVE FOR writing eludes my focus on science.

Improve on the first person and third person convo style, and u are game!
skarlett bibijay123 and Lleigh will teach you more. Learn from them *following

Cc skarlett, I mistyped your name. Sorry

Udochee:
keep it up bro.quite interesting so far

thanks alot. Hope you still stay tuned. And thanks for stopping by.


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Continued* dedicated skarlet iykestix and stupidYorubaFool


Gabriel.

Nothing hurts more than taking a decision when those whom you did it for, gets hurt in the end. Its like commiting suicide

when you are subjected to be hanged at the same time.

I went home and could not stop thinking about my incident with with Dami.
It wore me out gradually and Kate noticed the tension in my voice and behaviour .
I could have chose to hide it, but it was there.

I became disgusted with the food on the table. Nothing felt right , nothing seemed in place .
I barely ate the macroni and fresh fish which my wife prepared . Somehow my taste bud was defaulted .

"Love you barely ate anything, something wrong? Kate asked while she fondled her fork on the plate.

I made no attempts to answer , but somehow I was obliged to " Nothing, my Love. Its just work. I'm stressed out"

"OK then, maybe you should eat a little and go take a good shower. After that I'm sure you will be fine" Kate continued
" Love , but tell me , is there something I should know?


"Uh? What? Its nothing really" I said , feeling guilty that I lied to my wife.

Dave , being a happy fellow like always encouraged me to eat. (Imagine , my own child treating me like a baby, hmm how sweet)

"You better eat. Dad its good for you. Our teacher says "a balanced diet makes the body grow" He said

"Oh I see! So you want daddy to grow bigger than this? I joked about it , with my hands placed few inches above my head.

The laughter on his face was awesome. " You are funny. That's not what I meant,You are already big , tall and handsome. All you need is to eat healthy"

" That's alright, son eat up. The left over will be put into the fridge for tomorrow" Kate interrupted us.
******************†***********

I came out of the shower, feeling fresh and energetic as ever. The pillows on the bed had flowers designs on them- Damilola came to mind.
Kate is beautiful , but even more when she starts combing her hair in front of the mirror.
I hanged my towel to dry . With only knickers on, went under the sheets.

"Gabriel? Tell me something ' Kate began.' What happened today? Why are you so moody?

I felt a shock running down my legs. Then I was forced to reply "Uhm .. My friend Tayo..'

'Yes what about him? She asked

"You see, Tayo has a friend who.... Kate what do you know about "DADDY FOR HIRE? I asked her without thinking twice.

Her face gave a surprising look. She dropped the comb, turned and looked at me .

" what? Daddy for hire? What stupid work is that? " she was surprised indeed " I know about Nanny for hire, but "dady for hire"?
That's stupid and absurd"

I swallowed my saliva and it didn't go down well though. " Well , you see..' I began

" Tayo has a friend , whom a lady hired as a daddy for her daughter. According to him, the lady wants him to pretend like a her child's father.
Just for a year"

' That's crazy. So what's he going to be doing? Wipe out diper or babby -sit her child?. I don't believe you Gabriel'

"Not that , Love. The little girl is six. Besides no man in his right senses would be a nanny" I said. Feeling deep guilt and disgust.



Kate put off her night gown cover, remaining her lingerie. What a sight to behold. How sexy and beautiful she is.
She came to bed with me, wrapped herself under my arms with her nose under my ampit.

" hmmmmm... Smells like trouble" she said , with the most beautiful smile ever.

I grasped her firmly and looked deep into her brown eyes. I was not sure what I felt but I knew one thing : I did all I had to do for her.

" To be honest love, I don't think its wise . What if he falls in love with the woman? Kate asked


'what can I say ? I replied.

Kate suddenly noticed something. Pushed me in a serious but funny manner ' Hey ! Are you sure its not you? If I find out you have another woman
and you just using this as an excuse.....'

"No love, I' m not and besides I will never set eyes upon another woman ' I said ' but only you'
At this point ,the guilt enveloped me. The more I tried to hide it, the more it became obvious. I turned to the other side and
I could see through the reflecting glass on our cupboard .

My wife raised her arms like she would punch me or something , bit her lower lip then said " You better not , because if you do that.. You will get it from me'

It really made me laugh...

*************************†**********


The guy waited for me to say something .

The speakers were a bit loud but I could still hear my heart beat fast.

The club was deem lighted with red rolling bulbs. It seemed like everyone there was red in complexion.
A glass of Martini and grape fruit slice stare back at me, my eyes were down . I can't look at him, No! How Ami going to say this?

Tayo ' s blue jacket complimented his brown chinos trousers, he just got a new hair cut.

' Bro ? Gabz? .... What is it man? ' Tayo asked after being so impatient ' Its been ages you put you head down and you are not saying anything'

I raised an eyebrow , " Bro I' m confused '

"I am all ears ' He said , while crossing his arms.

" Tayo , am in deep pepper soup"

He gave out a hysterical laughter and coughed before looking at me again.

" how deep? Eat all the meat and drink the soup. I am sure you will survive'

You think this is funny? I asked , feeling nerdy and drunk.

' OK am sorry..what is it ?

My back rested upon the leather cushion. I sighed a deep relief but still not looking at his face.

' Bro , I'm in love with another woman.' I shook my head in regret.

" That's impossible. You are not the womanizer amongst us.. Maxwel is not , rather I'm the Kingpin in that field. So how come?
He looked really surprised.

' Tayo, The worst part is that she doesn't know and now she even offered me a job' I paused and took another gulp of matini.

' what kinda job?. Go on, I'm listening '

" She wants me to pretend I'm her child's father. Kate doesn't even know abut this. I lied to her for the first time in my life, that it was your friend
who got the job." I looked at him for a moment and assimilated the fact that he would understand.

' Man this is complicated ' he began ' So what do you intend to do? Will you take the job?

"Of course I will. I need the money " I ejected the feeling right away.

" what about the little girl? So you will lie to her too? And Kate ,what happens if she get to know about this eventually?

"Honestly bro, I don't know'......

Lleigh:
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Going for a cold shower.....................

Chapter 13

Remi watched as she walked back to the wall of torture, she stopped by the table and opened a drawer.

She placed a bottle of oil on the table.

‘I told you to have your shirt off before I came in the room’ she said as she glared at him.

‘For that infraction, I want everything off’ she turned to him, hands on her hips.

She threw the bottle of oil at him.

‘I want you to rub that all over your body’, she said as she walked back to her wall.

It was the same oil she had used the night they had met. Vanilla, lavender and the other scent he still couldn’t place.

Now he understood what women meant, about being objectified.

Taking your clothes off in the throes of passion was one thing, being told when to take them off and being watched was something else.

She was now sitting on a black leather sofa, on the other side of the room. Her mask glittered in the semi gloom of the room as she stared at him.

A mysterious queen surveying prime male form for her pleasure.

However, undressing and being scrutinized by her was like a lesson in sensuality. It made him feel hard, incredibly so.

He would put on a show for her, a strip tease for her eyes only.

He started with his t-shirt, trying to think of the moves Kevin Hart made in Think Like a Man 2. That foray into stripping had ended in disaster though, he chuckled silently.

He rubbed the oil on his chest and arms, the crotch of his trousers were soo tight it was uncomfortable.

His arousal was obvious to both of them.

He bent down to slip off his loafers, standing up again.

As he rubbed more oil, on his stomach and moved his hand towards the buckle of his belt, he imagined her nails, raking a path down his pelvic bone.

He took off his trousers in one fluid movement.

Woody, his nick name for his third leg stood proud and erect.

‘You will do that last’ she told him from her seat on the sofa.

Her legs were stretched and wide apart in front her, his eyes were drawn to the valley between her legs.

He rubbed the oil on his thighs and legs, each sensual stroke heightening his arousal, to the extent that a drop of precum dripped on to the floor.

‘Oh dear Matt’ her voice carried over from where she was.

She had seen it, his cheeks burned.

‘You can now rub the oil on your dick, you will rub it in for..mmm….’as she stared at him intently.

‘Two minutes, you’re not allowed to come’

TBC

Haha ... No wonder I got no mentions.. Nice suspense.. Hmm this is mind blowing