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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 10:14am On Nov 06, 2016
Obinnau:
you are mentioning way too much people, I unbanned you the first time and you went and re-edited it. anyways I have unbanned you.
thank you sir
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op):
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 9:18pm On Nov 05, 2016
The next morning was even more dramatic. I was still on the bed trying to figure out how to get a down-payment for my new truck which I had already described as ''FOR SALE'' . The need was urgent and no Jupiter or Mars was stopping it. To avoid the harrassment from the bank I needed a plan. This was not the life I wanted, not like this.
Still deep in thoughts and confusion, I barely noticed when Kate came from the living room to get me out of the bed '' Love , stop this you're doing , I know its hard but we will make it somehow'' Kate was sure of herself.
*
The ceiling fan was now a thing of wonder to my eyes- the cyclic rythm somehow seemed to take away the thoughts and they became butterflies in my head. '' Love, we need money, Dave has to pay his school fees and we have to pay the bank'' these words managed to escape my lips when I tried to sit up on the bed.
'' I know Gabriel, thats why I will look for a job. Any job that will bring money''
'' Dont worry Kate, you need not do that. Things will be fine''
'' but atleast ,let me try, than sitting all day in a store hoping that someone buys even a matchstick box'' she sounded bitter and serious.
*
I kept quiet and let her win the arguement but deep down I knew what I wanted....
*************************

THE NEW LADY
* The remaining art crafts in my store I started taking to the market. Found a spot along the road and quietly squeezed myself in between two women. There was going to be my pivot to a goodlife (I GUESS) .
Everyday was a story for the Gods. I could barely sell even just a toy. The Sun scoarched me in the afternoon, rain would cool my nerves in the evening. This continued for two days ,until I met the lady that turned my story around.
***
Sometimes we think that the universe doesnt hear our heart desires. Its just hard to realise that we are innocent of anything Karma brings our way. That was my mindset but this changed when a lady in a new suv saloon car stopped right infront of me.
She came down and walked straight to my stand (at least I can call it that, I was practically standing . And no time to sit down) and her voice was nice and calm when she said '' How much are these horses?
'' Ma'am just 350 per horse'' I said reluctantly.
'' Hmm they are cheap''
'' I 'll take the eight of them'' she concluded. ''ma'am thats nice but all these cant enter your booth, so how will you take them? '' I suggested while still looking bitter (maybe the sun scoarched even the sense of humour out of me.
*
'' I'll pay for them now and you'll deliver them to my flower farm. I need them as a gift for my daughter-her birthday is coming up'' the lady persisted.
I could'nt believe her . ''ME , deliver it to your flower farm'' I thought out loudly to myself.
*''ma'am but I dont do home service delivery''
'' dont worry, I will pay you 50% for downtime and inconviniences...and did you make them yourself? She was quick to question my patience which was about to Peter out.
''yes I did'' was an answer that best suit her rhetorical statement.
'' they are lovely. Here, take the money and thats my card so you will locate the farm'' she gave me her complementary card and then took a picture of me with her iphone 7.
''and what was that for? I asked
'' so you dont run away with my money...uhm ?? She tried to guess
'' Gabriel, its Gabriel'' was good enough to make her stop seeing me as a thief,who will be so eager to abscond with her money.
* ''oh nice. Am Damilola and it was nice to meet you'' Dami was eager to shake me. I stretch forward my arms and enclosed her soft palms. It felt like touching a teddy bear-they were so soft.
*
After she shook me and turned to get back into her car, that was when I noticed she was very beautiful. Her hair was blonde and probably fixed but it was a perfect suit to her very fair skin. Her hips looked like they had been under surgical blades( they were too good to be true). The high-heels that adorned her feet shone brightly in the warm sunlight, making a compliment effect of her perfect match red gown.
*
''whats happening to you Gabriel'' I quickly questioned myself. ''Let it pass. You're married now, its a by-gone issue'' the thoughts were loud in my head and I stood there jaws down and watching as Dami zoomed off with her gray coloured car.
'' this cant be happening, no no. Its just infatuation or lust-yes lust-for heaven sakes you are married'' I admonished myself the more, still trying to dissociate my mind from the worst : Having feelings for another woman.

*NEXT EPISODE LOADING* stay tuned
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 8:03pm On Nov 05, 2016
abefe99:
by mentioning there names
ok thanks I will do just that.
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 7:55pm On Nov 05, 2016
veekid:
I hope I ll find it interesting cheesy
definately Baba. FEEL free to correct me when its not right abeg. And thanks again for following the thread
LiteratureRe: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Creeza(m): 7:08pm On Nov 05, 2016
Hmmm.,interesting and nice. Please I like your story and I have a question. HOW WILL I GET MENTIONS, TO MAKE Nairalands Mods push my story to Fp. Its a story about........! Read it and see for yourself. '' WHEN LOVE DIES''
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 6:55pm On Nov 05, 2016
Cc: abefe99 cuddlemii skarlet bibijay123 veekid please check out this story
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op):
Gabriel


In essence of being the best husband and father, I made efforts to recieve bank loans and used our home as collateral-it was'nt much but enough to get me 500 grand- then it was time to actively make use my talents. I put up posters of employment. Yes I became the boss practically. Day and night , we worked tirelessly at the little workshop near the house.... Some days when I sleep off while working late, Kate is always there to make sure the ball was kept rolling, she was my lineline through out the turbulent waves.


The craft store was getting bigger, the payout increased. Shipments doubled and income became stable, my few employees were able to the task. The ride was long, but in a while we could afford to buy a truck car. Kate is one dynamic person and she could adjust to any situation without stress. This made her take up the wheel as our new driver.


For months things were working fine and everyone seemed happy than ever. Just as I thought life was becoming easier so came the bitter realization that changed my life for good.

We took another batch of consignment to the seaport just to supply as usual, but this time I was alone and I got a shock revalation that got me thinking for days..


'' Whats happening Tayo? A question that came simultaneously from my mind and mouth, because I was still confused why the Police was shutting down the vicinity. The Seaport was put under total lock and key

Everywhere,people crowde,d either trying to complain or convince their clearance officers to do something and save their containers.


''Gabz I'm sorry. They found some cocaine stocked up in one our containers. According to report I gathered, they put it in the wooden toy horses you made...''

Tayo was not done with his speech when I cut in

'' what? Tayo you are joking right? I mean; how come? Who put drugs in my crafts?
This is insane.''

*
Tayo knew the pain I was going through at the moment and he knew exactly the right words to say ''bro calm down, its not the end of the world. Remember I put you in this mess, dont worry we'll figure out something. Just relax'' Those words didnt hold enough water in them but I could atleast take sympathy in his words. How am I going to get the installments to settle my bank loans- like hell, it was a monthly issue- and to make things worse I didnt save enough.
Crying wouldnt help matters, at most a Man of my age (I was still 30 ) should not be easily defeated by trials.

It took some time before I snapped out of my deep thoughts '' so what do we do now? '' my mind was not yet made up but the mouth took a turn after the shock.

''I'll figure out something. Just hang in there. Gabz dont worry.'' Tayo concluded.

I tried to open the driver's seat-door but my mind and body were not in sync, a chord had been detached from my medulla, and the body was making and taking actions on its own. The road home was now shorter because I wanted nothing more than to get home and sleep- I was devastated -to be frank.

"All will be fine, love. Dont worry. We will survive'' Kate tried to calm me down after I narated my ordeal to her immediately I got home.
'' Remember, we're in this together Gabriel, I will stand by you.'' she continued.
I looked at her and couldnt understand why this Ibo woman had no love for money. It was incredible and yet fascinating. All my life I was made to believe the Ibo women had nothing but crush for wealth-they cant keep a blind eye to money.

My mom came by the house and she was there all through,listening to our conversation. We sat at the dinning table. Mama was still young and her beauty shone with a radiance of unspoken magnitude. Even her words made it worthwhile to appreciate her as a mother.

''Gabriel my son, dont worry. You need to focus more on your wife and child. Now is not the time to sulk in your mishaps, rather look to the brighter side of life'' Mom nailed her point with a revolting sense that demanded self-applause.

So blessed by God for giving me two lovely women in my life. I was thankful and showed it in a genuine way.

I thanked the both of them.


Meanwhile, we were had dinner and it was getting late.


The night was cold and Katherine knew exactly what to do. She stroke my chest with her left arm in a gentle soothing manner. ''Come here to mama'' she said.
My mind was ready, I obeyed like a sheep to the slaughter. Rolling over I found myself under her unclad body-damn my wife is a hottie-


She rocked me steadily while moaning. Her V.G was making a palatable covering on my joystick. She was simply amazing.'



Tbc
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 4:37pm On Nov 05, 2016
abefe99:
more update plss
abefe99 the update is dropped... PLEASE HOW DO I get more people to read the story?
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op):
Gabriel


It was early in the morning but we had to leave, Dave was still in his room getting his school bag ready, while I munched breakfast.

I called out to him and he replied in a loud and clear voice.


'Am coming Dad, let me get my bag' David replied while he dashed into his room. He was quick and agile , I couldnt imagine the energy that flowed in his veins. Every opportunity I had to smile and feel proud, was utilized to the climax.
****

'Love , you should eat your breakfast quick. You know I dont like you starving at work'' Kate reassured me with a soothing voice.
I was happy and let the love and happiness circulate to every part of my being.
**-
The only words that were courageous or rather sheepish enough to escape my mouth was ''Kate, I love you so very much'' . She leaned forward and rested on my shoulders with her hair stroking my chin. When she had felt comfortable, it was time to admit the unending truth '' And I love you so very, very much, Gabriel''
**-
I took Dave by the arm and we went outside . A truck was there to carry some of my products to the seaport. Some of the goods very priced below normal, but I didnt complain since the youth of these modern age prefared gadgets to wooden toys. The clearance officer was my very good friend and he adviced me to make wooden horses to be exported to the west. The idea was bright but the capital to start was deep down in hades- if only it were that easy- the best I did was to settle for little shipments until I was able to acquire a loan from the bank.
** '' Dave dont forget to kiss your Mom goodbye , Ok'' I said . The little man rushed to his mother ,who was now standing at the doorway. She had to bend down a little and recieve the kiss . '' Bye Mom, love you ''.
" and I love you too, Dave'' Kate replied. I bade her goodbye and then we hopped unto the truck (which was almost filled to the top..... The driver ignited the engine and it took off gradually and then accellerated with minimum velocity. As we left I looked through the side mirror and saw Kate waving her arms in a way of trying to bid us goodbye... '' take care Love, call me when you get to work'' she shouted a little.
'' I will. I will call you ,Love'' my reply came while popping my head out of the window a little.

************
The seaport was an hour journey, and was sort of exhausting to get there. I dropped Dave at school, before we embarked on the journey........ We Reached there at about 9.45 am on the morning drive. The port was busy for its status. A huge sign was placed at the entrance and the security officials were fully armed to the teeth. . . . .. . METRO-DEVIAN seaport was a hub for dealers of general mechandise and home service equipment. It was established 30 years back and now flourished 24/7.
*****
'' where my goods...'' came a voice , when we had parked ''I hope they are in good shape, Gabriel'' continued the voice who was now in sight. Tayo was a good friend and a very hard-working clearance officer. He helped me secure some space on the container, in return he got commission on the products.
'' Tayo. Good to see you again and yes they are in good shape'' I reassured him.
He looked at the back of truck and came to me the second time when he finally said '' Gabz, you need to do more ok. If you ever want to be rich. Man try getting a loan from the bank. Remember you are doing this for Kate''
*******
His words were blunt but honest, the least I could do to repay the love of my wife was to make her comfortable. And that was the prior thing for now and I couldnt care less about myself...
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op):
It seemed like a new beginning for Kate and I and our only son David. The sun was warm and the rays penetrated the windows of our humble home .
Be it as it may, every story has a beginning and ours was the most exciting moment of my life of which I will always remember.
*
'' I will always be there for you. Even when the world is against us, I will stand by you , love you and cherish you in health and sickness; in wealth and poverty, till death do us part, Gabriel'' .
*****
These words meant alot to me and the smile on Kate's face alone was the most beautiful thing in the whole universe. As she made her vows to me and proclaimed her love in front of the whole congregation, I felt like the luckiest person alive''.....
**
I was still beaming with Joy and happiness while I put the ring on her finger, when the priest said '' You may kiss the bride'_____ 'brethren I give you Mr. and Mrs Egedege'' . The soft but deep kiss on my lips by her's made an inaugural statement of the bliss to come in latter days.
******

Kate is a very pretty lady and her long black hair adorned her fair-skin that made her look like a hybrid( or you can say half-cast). She is a naturally caring person and would go extra miles just to make me happy. Her Ibo descent made her seem more economical with financial situations. I couldnt say less of her ability to nourish me properly both in the dinning room and the other room.
*
My son David, is just 6 and wise enough to help out with little home chores. His brown eyes depicted a clone image of mine ,matching his dimples on the cheek. The trait was in the gene, including his hard but curly hair like mine.
*
Our family was a happy one and didnt care much about the little income we made from my craft-work (paper marge, wood carving and capentry). Things went on fine untill the needs of the family became more demanding and cumbersome... Only a miracle would rescue me from this situation.
****
The only thing I wanted was to give my family a wonderful and comfortable life. This seemed farfetched and impossible because my wife Kate was no better a high school leaver, and her mini-business (she sold food items) could only provide little. The remedy was a mile walk away, but I was determined to get there. Anyhow or Anyway, I was going to succeed..
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LiteratureWHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op):
PRIOR TO THIS story I'm about to share, it is very important to note that the characters herein and the story is entirely fictional but based on a true life story.
**** would love your patience and comments to improve my skills..
****

For a clearer picture ,and ease of understanding, the story will be told from the eye-sight of the main Characters..
*ENJOY*
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EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 11:28pm On Nov 04, 2016
Please I dont know how true this is but the least I can do is to trust my uncle.. Believe me this is what He said will happen except Uniben decides otherwise.
So after waiting for weeks endless,I pestered my Dad to call my Uncle ( His maternal cousin* note He is not a lecturer), and complained about the delay of the list,,,,
My uncle was very specific and according to Him , His friend in admissions department said " That all aspirants should debunk every rumour about the list being out, that it will be made available *ONLY* on or before the 30th Nov( just to keep your mind at ease, Its 30th actually)... So believe me if you want, me too am not so convinced, but to be honest - Since this admission process , My uncle has never being known for lies, He either says or Finds out the truth... Just to conclude, Only if Uniben decides otherwise... Expect the list 30th... Peace
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 12:19pm On Nov 04, 2016
Only God knows where the list is right now. I JUST PRAY I'm favored to be among the lucky ones on the merit list.
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 12:51pm On Nov 03, 2016
Pls make this page reach 300. UNIBEN O!!
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 11:56am On Nov 01, 2016
Why here quiet nah?
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 10:11am On Oct 29, 2016
osjoshua:
When we normally write post ume then ehn..atleast among your group friends you ll see some with 59, 50, 58, 60 and so on..
Whys is this one different...
I called a lecturer to tell him about the tragic stuff..but he said his colleague told him that they purposely fail some persons cos of school space and not to give them unnecessary hope, thats why they didnt release it on time..
Oga why You dae lie like this nah? THE LIE good for your eyes?
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 10:08am On Oct 29, 2016
Ok I have something on my mind. First , ask yourself ''what is uniben upto?
This session has been full of Drama.
Benchmarks: highest was 220, and someone was postulating that if eventually point system is adopted, the cut off point will somehow reduce. Why? Many have been benched off.
Jupep: came out both list and result . Lowest 40 points. ITS A BIT obvious that most where given admission due to the cash involved. (EH? Lemme hear Uniben allow 120k waka like dat, 4 this buhari regime,say wetin happen?) and the highest mark i saw was 72.
D.E : MORE drama occured here. This is where point grading might have been put into play. Although exams where written..that does not still justify the system used. NOTEWORTHY HERE is the fact that no list was released in pari per sua with the result. My advice : D.E candidates should have patience and pray. If you dont know how , ask We the Utme candidates. WE HAVE BECOME masters in the act ... PEACE!!!
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 12:49pm On Oct 27, 2016
mhizmercinda:
3rd crush
Kai!!! LWKMD... Buahahahaha.. 3RD crush. Friendzone unlimited!!
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 7:55pm On Oct 26, 2016
solomix10:
if u can vomit it pls vomit o , Awaiting first batch vomit from u ..lol
hehehehe. Na only you waka come?
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 2:48pm On Oct 26, 2016
solomix10:
[color=#000099][/color] bros why not utme list is out nawh
lol, make I vomit the list. ? I DNT KNW OGA
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 12:05pm On Oct 26, 2016
Jupeb admission list is out.
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 12:06pm On Oct 25, 2016
Ihav Wait tire, sotey wait dnn dae wait me.
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 9:54am On Oct 25, 2016
its another day.... Something might show today... I believe
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 10:44am On Oct 24, 2016
Whats happening? Everywhere is quiet!
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 12:11pm On Oct 21, 2016
raphieMontella:
happy [color=steelblue]buffday[/color] [color=orange]baba!..[/color]


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thanks ah bunch
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 12:08pm On Oct 21, 2016
harlehleh:
Happy birthday..may God grant u ur heart desires..amen
sorry, couldnt reply earlier. Party things
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 5:46pm On Oct 20, 2016
chizzyjnr:
Happy birthday baba. Age with grace
i go age with joy sef, as far as admission follow am. BABA GOD NONI
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 2:48pm On Oct 20, 2016
Its my birthday today..
Help me celebrate it
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 10:45am On Oct 15, 2016
Marael:
chikita
GOOD JOB!!
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 9:53am On Oct 15, 2016
raphieMontella:
how u use change the text [color=teal]color[/color] ,use emoticon, bold n strikethrough on this forum .....awaiting ya reply
yea
and left
it to one coner or the other is very easy, you just need to
be patient and Master the art

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