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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 3:17am On Nov 08, 2016
veekid:
What an incredible job you're doing here bro; keep it coming
no wahala
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 3:16am On Nov 08, 2016
yorhmienerd:
Wow! The plot is good, but timing and the age-ing system is kind of flawed. Good job creeza, work more on the spelling errors and you are game. Nice job
I made few adjustments to the age system. The part I dont get is where you mentioned 'Timing'. Explain pls. Thank you for reading the story.
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 10:59pm On Nov 07, 2016
bibijay123:
Thank you dear, you have a good start. I am captivated.
I learnt from the best : bibijay123. *winks*
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 10:52pm On Nov 07, 2016
sexybbstar:
Go and eat it
dont be so harsh bbstar, stay put ok. You will enjoy the food. I PROMISE

Cc sexybbstar
LiteratureRe: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Creeza(m): 10:11pm On Nov 07, 2016
Bibi . I've read your story twice. TO be honest I like your style. Thats why I employed it in my own story... '' When Love Dies'' its taking a new dimension now, and could even go on for a very long time.

you can say I'm a fan of yours. I HAVE TO GIVE YOU THAT .
#gracias
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 10:03pm On Nov 07, 2016
Cc: silla
sexybbstar
neeheeta

food is on the table
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op):
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bibijay123
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I kept my promise. Here is something for you.


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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op):
CHAPTER 2
*The Turn Around*


GABRIEL

The ladies were feeling disgusted with my V.I.P treatment. They kept talking and making funny comments. I cared less about their discomfort.

What difference would it make? I was also in great distress, the timing was wrong and terrible.



The air in the town shuttle bus was ageless and putrified. The passengers alone were more than the luxirious bus could accomodate.

'' why is he occupying three seats ?''

''we are passengers too''

''I cant understand the reason why he seats there so comfortably...''

''while we are standing'' the second lady cut in while they continued with their chit-chat.

Their disturbances was much and the steward couldnt take it anymore.

*'' please Ma'am dont get it all wrong. Those goods were paid for as normal passengers would ''
he said to rid the bus of nonsense gossip.


The bus was a fifteen seater-long town shuttle. Three passengers could seat on a row.

That was not the case here, four passengers squeezed on each and a pack of others jammed themselves through the passway.

* my phone rang*

''hello Love'' I sighed.

''hello Gabriel. How are you? Have you taken lunch?''

'' No, but I will soon'' I said trying to be calm .

'why? Whats wrong? Kate enquired
''are you sick. Whats the problem honey?

*''nothing, I sold all my paper maché horses . Some lady bought them all, and I'm taking it to her flower farm now'' I said.

''ok. Love . I'm here with Mimi. She is going to help me secure a job'' Kate said ,in a more calm voice.

''ok. Bye love''

On that fateful day, I should be feeling happy about my sales. That was far from the truth. The stress of transportation was a tragedy in comedy garments.


I alighted from the bus at Eleme Junction- yes I was living in Port-Harcourt, Nigeria. thats how I got into exportation business- then took a cab that was going to ''Love Blooms '' flower farm.

* Love Blooms was huge and stretch throughout a hectare of land.
* The tales about this farm were ferry in nature. The exports of fresh flowers to the West(THE GREAT America) were tripple tonnes annually.

The main entrance had no gaurds and the flowers were beautiful. It was like the owner wanted to give a stranger the first impression- We have only beautiful flowers, no cash here- How sweet!!

********
KATHERINE

After the phone call with Gabriel, the thoughts in my head raced faster than ever. The great Usain Bolt would loose his reputation trying to beat their record.

''Uhm Kate...Kate...kate!!!'' the voice of Mimi ,jolted me into reality.

''yes...yes... What? I said

''what are you up to now? Mimi said
'' we cant sit here all day, come on lets get go search for a job'' she continued.

''uhm.. Mimi its 2pm already. I have to pick Dave from school'' I smirked.
My eyes gazed upon the wall clock at the end of the eatery hall.


''ok then. We'll do that tommorrow'' Mimi sounded discouraged.


* David's school was not so far from our location. The ride there was just 20 minutes away. The streets pattern was dynamic , cars trooped out of different angles .

The traffic lights regulated the flow. ''RED..YELLOW...GREEN'' and then I was in a flashback.
** Gabriel was with me on the bed . The sheets were snow white and pure. I was still un-broken and 16 years old- a girl who was still in anticipation to explore the sweet side of life.
He touched my b**bs which were very firm and super-big for my age. The electric charge that passed through me that moment were unspoken and unheard of.

'' I'm scared Gabriel'' I said , with fear in my voice.

'' Trust me Katherine, this wont hurt'' Gabriel convinced me.

'' what happens if I get pregnant?'

'' We will be careful, I promise you' He said while kissing my lower stomach.

He went further downwards. This time my abdomen were on fire. The fire I had never felt before. For the first time in my life, a strong the pin-like structure in my V.j was filled with so much nerves. The feeling was out of this world. The pace of my heart increed, when Gabriel touch that pin-like structure with his tongue- uuhhhh!!! Oh my!!

''arrghhh!! Ummmm!!! Gabri.....'' I moaned out.

''shhh stay put Kate ,just relax'' He shushed me and grabbed my two arms that were trying to push his head away, from my v.j.

These feelings were electric. Like nothing I've ever felt before.
The sweetness turned to pain, when He inserted his finger into my V.j. A shock passed through me and my body released some kind of fluid.

* The pain was excruciating and grew worse, when Gabriel put in his Pen*s inside me. He made two push and I was already bleeding.
Blood soaked the white sheets and crawled down to my laps- I was fully unclad- and that was how I became de-flowered.

''ARRRRRR!!! It hurts . Gabriel please'' I cried.

'' Kate ,do you love me?
He asked . His chocolate skin was now glowing, sweat broke out from every part of his unclad body. He was like a machine and that moment I fell in love with that Machine.

'I love you''
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EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 7:36pm On Nov 07, 2016
Its genuine. JUST RE-DOWNLOAD the previous bench-mark from uniben.edu The screening details you viewed before registration
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 5:22pm On Nov 07, 2016
Uniben woh!!!!! before ot was pre screening cut off now its screening cut off. Hmmmm
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 5:20pm On Nov 07, 2016
THE ULTIMATE JOYSTICK CASE

Chapter Two.


Now the introduction part is over, lets get down to the story proper.




Jide was still confused about the reply which miss. Mysterious gave him. She said '' finally, whats the meaning of that?


'' wait, I dont get it. You mean you ve heard of me before or what? ''



'' actually Jide I was at the party, and I saw your little display with mr. Plumpy'' She gave out a long laugh out loud.


''thats no answer to my question'' Jide cut in.


'' i'm sorry. OK . Who doesnt know Jide- the supercool and famous Street fighter from Imaguro high, Oredo?'' Eby replied while making a gesture with her arm slicing the air.


'' Really now huh? Now thats something'' Jide felt very proud but she forgot the part that he was actually a s*x god at 17.


'' so Eby, where'd you learn how to drive. You have a licence?'' Jide continued ''tell me how did you really hear about me?





Jide had the slightest idea that he was dealing with a veteran in the act of violence and technical-know-how. The mood was becoming very unbearable for Eby. This was not what she expected but nevertheless Mr. Jackpot was really trying- only if he could try better than asking Jamb questions.


'' I learnt how to drive from my fifth step father'' Eby sighed.




''yea dont even ask me how many step fathers I have, because I've practically lost count'' Eby continued with her tale rather unapollegetic and non-challantly.

Jide was taken aback, when there is a mysterious event atleast clues could be seen to decode the mystery, that was not the case of Eby.

'' Are you drunk? Jide asked Eby just to make sure she was sober and was'nt bluffing.

'' I'm as sober as cool can ever be' Eby recounted '' but I've had just a little vodka, the bottle is here. Wanna take some?


Jide has seen his type. Both kids were lovers of alcohol-only if they had a better upbringing- and they could go on and on taking shots. That was one of the similarities they had.

Eby gave Jide the bottle of vodka and now turned off the reving engine of the car which they had been sitting inside all these while.

He took a gulp of the hard-drink and clenched his teeth tightly only releasing them when the hot-drink was down his throat. He gave a big sigh.



''oh dear! I was nearly caught today. But thank you for saving my ass''


'' you 're most welcome Mr. Street fighter'' Eby said and laughed out really hard.

''whats funny? Why the hilarious laughter? Jide couldnt understand.
She was still laughing when she said '' seriously you wanted to beat that guy to madness, mhen see blows. These your muscles are tough and could protect just anygirl from danger''

There was little truth in what she said though. He was v-shaped and the thick muscles of his broad chest and arms combined perfectly to give a first impression- ALPHA MALE- and that was the truth.

"stop making me laugh ok. Am just a regular guy''
'' really now? So what happened back there at the party? ''

'' I was only trying to protect the girl from harm'' Jide pointed out with some impunity in his speech.

''hey! I was there , ok . I watched the whole drama'' she continued '' you really did that to impress her''

'' too bad she didnt even seem impressed a bit'' he had to admit the truth because it was obvious.

They two had a long night of catching up and gisting. The chemistry between them was filled with adrenaline juice-any bagger who was a one night stander would testify to that.

They joked and laughed and soon forgot they were previously in a hot fast and furious race with the police. The corner where Eby parked the car was dark and quiet, only a trace amount of moonlight penetrated the windscreen.

'' where'd you get the car from? Jide became more inquisitive.


'' dont ask what you cant handle'' she was fast in killing to topic. The reccurent questions were now having hash-tags with them.
'' I just wanna know''
'' I wont say a word, because it doesnt matter'' Eby was now very serious ''besides the c
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 5:18pm On Nov 07, 2016
Sorry guys.. I was banned.. I will drop something this evening...
Cc: veekid
bibijay123
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EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 8:21pm On Nov 06, 2016
For the continuation go to romance section and search for the story, or check out literature section. READ AND drop your opinion
EducationRe: 2016/2017 Uniben Admission Thread Guide. by Creeza(m): 8:13pm On Nov 06, 2016
THE ULTIMATE JOYSTICK CASE
Chapter 1.

Jide and Eby were practically soulmates. They ate together, read together , party together, went out on dates, slept together and even shit together! Before I go further, let me describe a little bit of how this came to be..
* Jide was only ten when he started living with his uncle in Benin, Edo. At that age, he had already lost his parents and now orphaned. His strict uncle, who took joy in being a disciplinarian was a kill joy. Mr Bade was nothing more than a sarcastic sadist.
Growing up with such hostility , Jide learnt a lot about life and then became an expert in doing only what makes him very happy : mastering the act of the joystick. This alone will prove enough evidence in a very serious case later in his life.
* Eby on the other hand was mysterious. Her paternal lineage is not a story that even her own mother could testify to. The crux of the matter: she knew only her mother as a mother and father all encased in one. Unlike Jide, Eby was loose and at age 10 she already saw an erect anatomy of a man-you know what that means.
Now back to the present. A notable event played part in the meeting of Jide and Eby. The normal hangout for teenage secondary boys and girls where all manners of un-godly acts took place. This life is not unusual in modern day Nigeria. It was at one of such parties that Jide met his soon to be : heart throbe. The music was loud and shouts were heard in the hall that was deemly lit by a red party rolling bulb. It took only a veteran eyes to maneuver your way into the corners.
* At the nearest bar was seated a pretty damsel. Her side view alone showed everything the front and back had to offer. From a dark corner, Jide admired this girl,even though he had'nt seen her face yet. He wasnt alone there, his long time side chick,Odion was busy smooching his chest and making slurty moves in the almost pitch-black corner.*Odion was a twin but her twin died when they were little, and she never saw her twin- Odion's role in Jide's life is a storyline to watchout for.
Amidst the noise and dancing, Jide summed up courage to go and get himself a new catch. He was about to touch her from the back when suddenly a fat guy beat him to the task-how dissappointing it was for him.
*Odion tried to maintain her cool and not act in anyway that would prove jealousy on her part. No way- she wont even think of it because Jide was a playboy and she felt lucky to still be his side-chick after 3 years and this was their final year in secondary school.
* the fat guy had a funny look on his face that somehow showed that he was rich but very careless about his looks. He almost had a plump stomach at the age of 16.
'' hello pretty one'' says Fat guy.
'' I'm willing to pay .name your price. '' he continued when his first statement was met with a defening silence even while he raised the pitch of his voice-due to the loud music.
'' Bleep off, I dont do small d**k heads'' the girl finally said.
'' lets take it easy, you and me. Care for a dance? The fat insisted and grapped her left arm.
'' I said f*ck the hell off, let me go. Let go of my arm'' damsel in distress.
This seemed like a good opportunity for Jide. Oh good lord! He was going to punch the fats out the guy's ass. Beaming with a smile that was rather cornish, Knight in shinning armour(Jide ) charged to the rescue.
* hey man let her go, let go her arm. The lady said you let her be'' Jide joined the convo with his deep masculine voice. The voice that could melt hearts for guys and also stiff nip**es in the ladies .
'' and who are you? The fat guy asked.
'' am your worst nightmare'' Jide bluffed while pounding a blow to his right jaw. The boy fell instantly to the flow and darkness soon enveloped his eyes when Jide pounced on him with another blow to his left eye socket.
The pandomonium was rife and not many seemed to care-atleast not untill both boys started scattering the whole place.
This was not a surprise to Odion, her Joystick machine was also a street fighter-ever ready to pick on anybody. The music stopped when Jide flung mr .fat into the corner where speakers were blasting the sounds.
All these while , pretty damsel was rather less concerned. She grinned and bit the inner part of her cheek then sighed with great disgust ''boys are stupid. There life is a drama. BARMAN one shot of whisky please''
* Not very long. The police arrived the venue. Party crashed. All man tear race. The few scape goats were pulled by their trousers and recievd slaps whenever they uttered ''oga I no follow o'
'no worry when we reach station'' the officer will always say.
** mr fat was partially unconcious when the police rescued his pathetic ass. Jide escaped. He was still pondering where to run to, when a car sped towards his direction. '' get in'' said the female voice. When they were away from the scene , jide asked the strange lady''who are you?
It wasnt the pretty damsel at the bar,'' I'm Eby and its nice to meet you finally, Jide
LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op):
DAMILOLA

" Funmi, Funmi huh?? where is this girl?. Funmi , Mom is home now. Baby , baby am back now. " the house was silent and no reply , this was unusual . Funmi would always come running out to embrace me when ever she heard my car park outside the front entrance door. Things were really getting spooky and I thought maybe my daughter had been kidnapped.

Reaching for the wooden bat that was near the door I made sure the slightest noise was not heard.
" Bisola , Bisola, where in the world is that good for nothing Nanny... " Bisi was my daughter' s nanny and she not being in the living room meant she was either in the kitchen or cleaning the bathroom. The thought pass through my mind that I was just being too sensitive and paranoid, at least Umaru was still on guard at the main-gate so there must be a conspiracy somewhere.
********

"Mummy!!!!! " that was Funmi's voice when she came rushing from the back door that lead to the garden behind the house . " Mummy, welcome mummy " Funmi was quick to embrace me. I put down the batton on the floor and sighed a huge relief
" Baby what did go outside to do? you nearly scared the life out of me "

"sorry Mummy, Nanny took me out to water the flowers"
" and where is that your nanny" I enquired with a furious face expression.

"Im right here ma'am " Bisi replied just when she closed the door behind her. " I am sorry madam , but I told her to stay upstairs in her room but she insisted ." Continued Bisi

" Bisola , how many times have I told you not to allow my baby get her clothes dirty while playing? look at her now , she looks so messy" The anger in my voice was noticeable.
Bisola just keft silent and replied " Madam it wont happen again"..
*****

" and you left the front door unlocked, the passage , evrywhere looks so unkept . What am I paying you for eh? Bisi" that was when I noticed the toys that were littered across the hallway .

" Ma'am am sorry" Bisi repeated
" Mummy dont be mad at nanny, I was bored that thats why I asked her to play with me" . My daughter had the most lovely voice and her sweet voice was angelic that it was enough to calm the storm in my temper.
" but baby you shouldn't play outside in the garden" I wanted to make my point clear.
" mummy , my birthday is coming up soon and I dont have any one to play with" Funmi said this in a very touching manner.
"Dont worry baby, mummy is here for you"

"mummy I want my daddy, doesnt he love me , will he come for my birthday?"

* Those words made me loose balance . I did not know how to lie to my only daughter . Being a single mother was not an easy task , and my boyfriend Richard left me when we were still in college . His mom was against our relationship, she even went as far as calling my mom a mistress, and that she wouldnt have anything to do with a daughter of the woman that tried to steal her husband.

*Richard left me for America, and he never knew we had a baby from just one night's stand.........

" baby dont worry, Daddy loves you and remember I told you that your dad works in a very far place ."
"yes I do mummy, but doesnt he want me in his life , I have not seen him before mummy. when is he coming back?" Funmi cut in.

I didnt know the best answer to give her but atleast I did not enjoy seeing my daughter suffer "Soon Baby. I promise your mummy will get daddy back" I said and hugged my 6 year old beautiful daughter.......
I wasnt sure what I was going to do, I only knew I had to do something and it had to be soon.
********†******
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op): 2:32pm On Nov 06, 2016
I really appreciate Bibi et Veekid.. gracias.
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LiteratureRe: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(op):
KATHERINE
*I started searching for Job vancancies to support Gabriel, I applied for nanny jobs, catery services, and even as a househelp. During my search, Mimi was there to help me out. She was a friend indeed and she made it her priority to always have time to spend with me-a weekend girly thing- and never was it a dull moment.
* Mimi worked at a gym house and she spent most of her time during rounds of coaching to trainees. She was also fanatic of belly dancing. ** We were having some we time at our usual hangout-the Verizon Restaurant- and I couldnt ignore the fact that Mimi was looking a bit different today- her skin was lighter and her chest was very firm. Her slim but in-shape body was almost perfect.
'' Mimi you look different today, whatsup? I tried to enquire.
'' Nothing is up. Just keeping fit. And you Kate you need to take care of yourself. You look pale''
''Mimi, I dont have time for that. I need to take care of my family . Then other things follow'' I sighed
* Kate, to be honest: you stress yourself so much and neglect your duty of remaining beautiful in Gabriel's eyes'' mimi pointed out .
* That wasnt the most important thing to me. My husband loved me and so did my kid. The troubles which was more demanding were the financial issues- and I always pretend not to be worried- even my parents were not rich.
* Ever since I had been a teenager ( I got pregnant at 16 and a young mother. Now 22) it was my dream to finish high school, go to college and get a degree in Business Administrations. A good Bsc with first class was my target but if only wishes were horses. My dream was cut short when I fell in love with Gabriel, not minding the circumstances surrounding our relationship and the need for wealth in my family. My mother even tried to discourage me from marrying a simple carpenter-she wanted a son-in-law who had fleet of cars and controlled assets with just a snap of his fingers. All these were good and wise to wish for but Love blinded my ego for aquisition of wealth.
* I was deeply in love with the man that captured my heart-Gabriel- and everyday I had to pretend not to care about money as long as we lived happily.
* I was willing to stay poor for Love, but the turn of things had begin to re-programme that mindset...
**
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