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Asiaa look at the strangers especially the one laughing with his eyes he looked so unreal and he is coming towards them why didnt they come earlier when she was looking clean and pretty he came and looked at her then moved on to her friends and danced with them she felt a foreign feeling anger and hate which she has never felt come lets take a picture and move on Al a picture? Al couldnt imagined any camera capturing this it wouldnt get this raw beauty and innocence no the camera would only capture weird women in white for critizing from the outside world No you cant do that he said with fierceness his brothers has never seen him that way alright lets go they agreed Al looked back and saw they young lady whose eyes he loved still staring at him why did he feel bad about not dancing with her or hearing her voice he shrugged his shoulders and put her out of his mind

The ceremony would last for five days five days of dancing Asiaa wished it would last forever mama bye am going with my friends come home with a young man the mother replied yes mama
the brother set off the next day Ezekiel Marcus and Alphonsus Bros you even know where we dey go Al as he is called by his brothers asked just keep quiet they said in unision finally they came upon ladies dancing in an open field gbam Marcus shouted we don jam ghost just shut it and lets think Ezekiel replied wondering how he ended up with two apes as brothers lol i dont think they are ghost Al said lets join them the women stopped their danced and looked at the strangers its a rare sight in their villages they occasionally have white men coming to take pictures of them but these were young and dont look like they can to take pictures

Its the end of august and time for the annual ceremony the women do where they all wear white and dance in the village square asiaa cant wait she love the freedom for normally the village is a dull place where everyone follows a daily routine wake up farm tend to animals cook and sleep children were seen and not heard.
meanwhile in abuja pastor Alec was talking to his three sons more like shouting i never thought i would ever say this he said but i really wished you were all girls just look at sarah that child has never given me headache since the day she was born how can you say you want to discover a new civilization in this century going off to God knows where and what are you going to do if you even find it nothing said Alphonsus we would just leave it as pure and untamed as it is father just let us do this his eldest son pleaded one week of fun before we finally go off to pastoral school pastor Alec had no answer he couldnt tell them to go clubbing it would be wrong he look at his bible and thought please God i dont know what to do or say you can go he said one week and this never happened when do you leave he asked and they said tomorrow

*Am trying my hand at putting a story in my head into writing uh i need help with it i dont even know who to mention*
Theirs was a close knit village of only at most a hundred people they all know each other have one community school and closed off from the outside world Asiaa family house was built by her great grand father as most houses the girls grow into women and marry the boys they grow up with farm their food and live a very simple life she has always wanted to see what lies beyond the river but as mother would always say be contented dear child