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I guessed that's where u comin from but didn't wanna pre-empt u.
The letter "L". .
But like u said,wordplay shud ALMOST sound like. .
So I think Blownapart ALMOST sounded like Bonaparte. .u don't think so?
Plus, there r different ways to wordplay. .d examples u gave is where u just break a word to get different wordS from a single. .which is d obvious approach,
Bonaparte. .Bone-apart.
Wat I did wat referece d event and d result of d even. .weavin it into d name.
Hence watreloo. .Napoleon. .if it was a war and he was defeated then he must as well be BLOWNAPART! IMO Bone apart is d obvious way to go. .and many will go there. .
That's y Slimshay and others culd flow wit it cos its fresh way to do it, lol
Next I'l talk bout the Cum laude line in comparison to the Blownapart line.
Good lookin out dude.

oNe

@Mykali
Dunno ur idea of wordplay but that was still a wordplay. .lol.
U don't agree?

oNe

@Mykali
I do not remember RHYMING bonapart wit blown apart. Ma RhYME was Clone attack with Blown apart. But to answer ur Q. .yes! Bonaparte as a word rhymes wit Blown apart.
As the sound goes;
Bon(e)- aparte
Blown. Apart.
So I think they rhyme. .if not parfectly but as Slants. Don't u agree?

oNe

slimshay:
I see you man.

Meanwhile I feel what Streetwise was saying about the murder in-law line. Murder in-law (mother in-law) being the primary word play, it does not reference a spouses' mother.

Hmmm. .yea thts true! didnt focus it that way.
i was lookin at "Killing Legally' as d launch pad for the "Murder inlaw".
But i gotyu both! Nice one.

oNe

@Bamsyle
ur analysis always a nice read even when u are puttin knife thru sm1

James3d
hey good one.


Cool both of u pick out some lines some didnt! e.g
Bamsyle :Table of Content,
and 3d: PISS TOOL . .thanks y'all, good lookin out.

oNe

Ibime:
In autopsy, lemme add that ma favourite DBR lines was:

This dude is only as tight as he-claims/
When a horse pulverise his a$$ with me pulling the reins/

How can one still claim to be 'tight' after being pulverised by a horse. Hehehehehe

Whilst ma favourite line of mine comes from Round 1:

Im ruing the sad loss/ when this dude hit the ashphalt/
He'll get pushed off the last floor/. . . with only a waterproof bag . . . to use as a drag force!!/

I figured that Waterproof line. .and i LMAO. .sayin ibime na hillarious-murderer ooo
Yea. .and the horse thingy too. .hehehe. . u got it perfectly! U cant claim tight ever again after such horsey encounter. .lol.
Good lookin dude!

oNe

I think the reason DBR came considerably weaker than his FFR posts is the fact that he let Ibime take the battle to his comfort zone.
It's a tactical thing . . . Ibime brought up multies, what DBR shoulda said was 'my wordplay is unrivalled'.

Eldee ,u are on point. .but hey the reason i said win or lose wont matter to me in d 2nd round was cos i had told ibis
i was gon go MULTIES on him. .u get? so for me round2 was more like show proof.

And for goodness' sake, DBR is too much of a nice guy, how can you acknowledge the fact that Ibime is critically acclaimed in a rap battle.
He was saying 'u engrain greatness', 'he's critically-acclaimed . . but im closing the-range' . . . when Ibime was saying 'if he say my name in vain, theres no pardon for him/ cos Ill shoot Cannons at this Primate. . . for his Cardinal sin!/'??

On point again. .but depends on how u look at it. Dont just look at the line that kinda praise him. .check how the line ended.
Even in battle u can spit the truth and stil flog wit it.
Truth is Ibis is a dope spitter. .if i said he's wack. .y'all be like "yea right"!
that happend in d battle with H.J! so i kno
But in sayin that he's crittically acclaimed. .also said he bout to be ashamed cos i closed the range.

Also A SEEDED defeat cancles out an enGRAINED greatness. .it's simple!

And yea. .im a nice guy!!

oNe

@Slimshay. .good lookn. .nothin do u!


@Streetwize

Thanks i appreciate ur compliment and positive criticism. .
I knu u'l prefer this 2nd round cos of the injected multies and all. .lol

Yea bout the build up. .u r right! But then ur example didnt offer a
better way to set it up, it's just a variation of mine.
The wordply focus was on KILL LEGALLY /MURDER INLAW
Kill>Murder and Legally>Inlaw


This is the old and ur suggestion:

DBR. . .
so im hangin this dawg. .kill him legally , like a murder in-law!/
leave his core splatter on the floor. . chop him up wit rusty saw/

Streetwise. . .
I'll slaughter this LovePeddler/ while his bytches mom wonders in awe/
and reads him his rights. . . . murder in Law!!!!

If i didnt rush, i wuldda set it up like this instead:
im hangin this dawg/. .chop him up wit a rusty saw/
his core splatter on floor. .kill him legally. .like a murder in-law!

Still usin all the same words (u sing bytches mom may make it sound more abusive i agree but
dont really like goin that direction. .even tho its a battle. I just dont like bringin such into it except i got served 1st)

About bringin the Ibime/Streetwize/DBR issshh into. .which marks a minus. .
again i dealt with that issue on ma last verse b4 the second round(u can check it out)
so for me. .bringin it up AGAIN. .may be over floggin it. .when i got more words to play with

Good lookin out nonedaless!

oNe

@Hax
just wanna ask wat do u really mean by forcing wordplay AGAIN. .u seem to be the only one sayin that.
How faar na?

oNe

Ok, im free just a lil bit now:
@Mykali

I wont make comment on Ibis line, im just responding to some of the comments made on mine.
And Mykali even ASKED that i respond to his question.

i already killed this rat. .this u . .just a clone attack/

this is your final Waterloo. . name u Napoleon Blown-apart!/

I think slimshay already answer this. But just wanna know what d issue is with the line.
U not just feelin it or. . .?

And yea. .on the Range and Rover ishhh. .funny u quoted Ibis line. .
so it's a bad look if ibime spat it and i repeat it.
But not if i spat it b4 Ibime, right?
ok, b4 ibis dropped his line in d battle i dropped this.

i end up on wall of fame. . while u doin the walk of shame/
u think u spittin Fire. . u just another waka flocka Flame/
aint just in the name . .simply mean u aint got d brain/
ironically moReover u gettin Less Range/
this gay so dump. . he givin a head wont be called givin a brain!/

So u can imagine how it feels to watch ibis drop his after mine n didnt get thumb down for usin a line i had used
in the course of the battle, while i get thumbed down for it lookin like i bit his line.
U quoated ibis version which came after mine and said:

this Range Rovers wordplay has already been used, and DBR repeating it ''in the same battle'' doesn't look too good.
Im sure its an over sight on ur part. .but comment like that colors pple perception bout my originality.
(howeva i dont even see anythin wrong is havin a different version of a particular line or idea with same words but coined differently)
But hey, we cool, just commenting. Good lookin out.

oNe

Wow. . hehehe. .congrats ibime! Where's the party at?
Yea. .t'was a long run from the subliminal. .is there any long runnin battle ever like this here??
Nice one dude.
And to y'all accredited voters. .gracias.

All comments noted.
I nor wan comment on any. .yet.
Pple take me wayyy toooo serious. .if i talk now ,make e no be like say na because i nor win 
So all question, and issues raised will be discussed la'er and we can share and all learn to be better at wat we luv.

That said, ma fav line from Ibis against all is

He better Reverence [/i]my rhymes, cos Im a[i] Father to him/
If he say my name in vain, theres no pardon for him/ cos Ill shoot Cannons at this Primate. . . for his Cardinal sin!/

It's wayy more seamless and brilliant . .than the come LAU-de line. .tbh.

So ones again its a victory of Structure above all.
Nice sparring wit u dude! i mean it.

oNe

Errmm . .Ibime/Eldee

Verse in.

Eldeegy. .PM those u gotta PM so we can rap this up quick.


oNe

Eldeegy, rhymestein ke? Lol,either way I can't lose mehn. Just set it up alredi. .let's do this mehn!or it may take longer time to get ths round again and I don't wanna b d one to kill d heat for ibime and those campaigning for it. .all na play.
32lines deadline 9pm tuesday.

oNe

@ibime. . No worries. Let's do tmoro 9pm. Ma schedule is tighter on wednesday and progresively so for this week. It's a battle naauw. A loss won't make me any lesser. .let's do it now that u r thirsty for ma blood, but live up to ur hype o.lol.
Eldeegity, set up for tmoro. .deadline 9ish! God speed.

oNe

Hey googlelicious darl' aren't we all family pple? We all came from a family naauww Me luv, u aint chasin waterfall jaree,u aint tlc naauw. No worry me for u and u for me

oNe

Yep. .I know u and multies. .I'm just leavin d ofis now at 10:20pm. .ok let's do tmoro then,so u nor go say na me make u lose steam.9PM . .its gon be tough on me tho but hey. .
That said audience applaude puches and wordplay. .which are content. .multie is just a style. Plus how wil sm1 say MOST of ma ishhh is generic .out of 32 and and quote one. .while there are few of ibis bars the even me hav spat b4. .just wanna mention that. .ibis,invite me for d victory party. .round 2 beckons.

oNe

Ibime. . I aint been corky or sthn and u kno I respect ur views. .and yep H.J is a heavyweight in his right! But I notice d mistake y'all make is thinkin multies is king. .sayin until I step up ma multie. .
How many high rankin mc dey do multie sef. .in ma rating multi don't count much! And if u think I don't do it u mustav missed much of ma ffr ishhh. .infact don't make me go multie on ur a$s for round 2 o. .lol the fact dat u can't put ma verse in a rhythm in ur head don't mean it aint got one. .how many of royce or nas lyric can u put in rhythm just by readin d lyric ahen u aint heard d song. .u'l admit u can easily do such wit some artist while u can't for some. That's wat I'm sayin. When dyu want round u deadline.

oNe

How u take kno. .I even have carry over leave from last year! Was called back. .this year is almost ended and I'm stil pleadin wit the COO to lemme go. . , ones I do,I"l put it as one of d things to do!

oNe

Hahahaha. .ibims. .U all round? Topicals I held it down, FFR, I didn't let it drown. .u battlin me. .and u frown while I redesign d crown. . Dude, most yall got in solely on battle. .talk bout allround master ,even a hater knows it fit moi best! Niggaz lie. .evidence don't!
Afta our back to back u stil dey yan quikwitted,lol.
Infact wats d latest u can do for round 2?

oNe

Heeeeyyy chamokazie, where u been? U don vote so? Chei this one wey I collect google for ur hand so, na now u go pay me back wait na u or Genuflirt sef? Well if na u abeg nor vote o. .lol

oNe

Hehehe. .chicken wey don hatch wey mature take do suya chop with wine sef!
This battle is him tryna claim it back . .u nor know?

But as u talk say u go severe ma head ol'boy ma balls shrink o.
Me kno say u be badt guy. .u go just serve us all the wicked verses wey u cook for ur audio project!
Oops. . .i nor suppose let pple kno ooo

oNe

04kaa:
lmao at rhymefokaholic   thats why i told u to learn how to rap on audio. test it for once, u will begin to thank me later

Guy i know. .but time is wat im broke off. .seriously. y'all cant understand when i say that.
Earlier, i got 2 brief. .now if i told u as im speakin i got 5 briefs all with crazy deadlines u wont believe it.
And hey. .family too dey dia o. Dude e nor easy. .but smday . .yea. .maybe when im on leave.

Good lookin out tho

oNe

Eldee. .draw means draw. Do u count draw as plus for smone again . .na wa o.
Yea. .i may not really know the rules but. .
After u counted the "credible votes" YOU said score stands at> ibime 2. .DBR 3.
That dont sound like draw to me. .and u blame me for sayin so? . .
and all of a sudden because i commented. .it now stands at Ibime 3. .dbr 2?
Anythin y'all say. .i just want a closure to it. .
If Bis wins. .im sure he deserves it. .if i win i think i deserve it.
So really it's not bout the winning. .but the sportpenmanship we both displayed.
The fact that some cant really say who takes it says enuff.
If u need to PM more credible voters to come vote to get a resolve, fine.
crude, chamo, genu, . .by d way is crude and crudedude the same person?
Alredy we both have an understandin that whichever way it goes. .a 2nd round must happen.
And of course the iwu/inec is just joke. .dont kno y y'all catch feelings when im involved

Ibime. .i already said we can do 2nd round. .but i cant promise u this week.
U think im backin out from whoopin u again?!



Street, goin after Ibime for the crown is chasin shadows. . like i said na babe wedding Tiara dey im head o.
U want the real thing. .u gon have to take it, steal or snatch it from me. .cos it's in ma custody . . for now


oNe

i know . .na u be rhymeFokaholic naauww . .we dey learn from u

oNe

Dnt be sleazy ibime. . i was referin to the verses i dropped on FFR
while i was keepin the place buzzin before ur cheap shot at the throne!
And cos of ma busy schedule i had to pen soem thots down at nights. .when im free.
All our verses when u attacked was in one DAY. .no nights, rmemba?
Cant promise anythin this week, i have 2 international brand pitches on ma desk.

@eldee,
if after more than 9votes. .about 4 draw points. .ibime +2. . dbr +3 (minus the ones u didnt count o)
if that's d defination of draw. .then declare it draw. na u be iwu/inec naauw

oNe

slimshay:
Streetwize you don dey display that strategy whizkid was talkin about abi? O4ka don giv you response, oya use am do practice. . .hehehe

Nor mind am . .wayo boy! Street thinks he can fool us and suck us in.
Go to FFR and prove urself u still got it. .make una nor turn dis plave to FFR lounge.
Plus erase the tot u stil got the crown. .u wey dem don impeach due to ur inactivity!

oNe

Ibime:
@ DBR,

Abi you no know say going back to back with Ofoka is like banging head against brick wall?. . .hehehehe

Ibime. .u don warn me b4 but d guy just sabi draw person enta yawa.

streetwize:
ohhh where is Sauron when u need him. . . thsat guy would show u wat real verbal mischief is.

FYI, I like your style, crazy metaphors and wordplay are the only way to beat Ibime, but allow me reiterate, as for this battle verse. .  poor rhyme structure. Anyways I'll stop sayin it if thats wat u want. . . but it doesn't change the fact. Either learn from it or move on. .

yeeeee, o4kaa is on my side for once. . . the moon must be blue. ,

Ofoka will support anybody just to make battle happen, i swear! LMAO
Ok, Street. .i gotchu . .but "poor rhyme structure" aint same as "U dont rhyme". .feel me?
But hey. .i criticized ur audio b4. .so i cant be closed herated to urs. .especially since this is all fun. .just didnt feel the manner in which u did it. But we cool, ehh?


oNe

I revive a thread . .pull it out of distress/
the S[i]h[/i]!t was sinkin . .i put it back on the deck/
While y'all was sleepin i breathe life into this place/
displace fake wannabes with lyrical display/
DBR spits CPR ma words oxygenate/
but still originate. . wordplay that'l asphyxiate/
i Diss. .u Play. .call me out. .u get disdained/
tho i gave E props the punk rplied me wit hate/
is this all i get for all the nite i stayed awake?
mental pain n ache. .tryna brew words that's resuscitate?/
lets relate. .bring your points and let's debate/
cant figure i culd spit rhythm in the dope verbs i laced?/
Ranting bout excessive wordplay. .wat bout excessive multies/
knew your a$$ wudnt vote me when u threw me a sub' diss/
some big mouth. .never rep. . but quick to talk [i]s[/i]h!t/
And some dont belong here their place is in the Street/
b!tch. .do us a favor. .prove ma 32 didn't rhyme/
u cant deny it. . i  was gruesome with each line/
when u critiqued . .boy, i didnt say a word/
but tryna thumb down dude who thumbed me up . .thats so wrong!
it not personal. .u still ma dawg. .we doin this just for the fun/
to those who got ma back. ."one for all and all for one"/
Dude u on. .Ibis u deluded thinkin u Bis. . canibus?/
want me to expose the load of crap multies u forced?/
lines where u didnt make no sense at all. . filled with flaws?
Forced verses . .putting explanation in (Brackets)/
your  "Yori yori" verse. . cant save u from the casket/
go ahead. . keep bickering bout a rhyme scheme. ./
while u was writtin fable . .i was plotting your life spilling!/
And Ofoka and the rest haterz. .i treat u like a sausage with no fillings! /



All rhymes na play o . .y'all shudnt start catchin' feelings on this, ok?

oNe

I revive a thread . .pull it out of distress/
the s[/i]h!t was [i]sinkin . .i put it back on the deck/
While y'all was sleepin i breathe life into this place/
displace fake wannabes with lyrical display/
DBR spits CPR ma words oxygenate/
but still originate. . wordplay that'l asphyxiate/
i Diss. .u Play. .call me out. .u get disdained/
tho i gave E props the punk rplied me wit hate/
is this all i get for all the nite i stayed awake?
mental pain n ache. .tryna brew words that's resuscitate?/
lets relate. .bring your points and let's debate/
cant figure i culd spit rhythm in the dope verbs i laced?/
Ranting bout excessive wordplay. .wat bout excessive multies/
knew your a[i]$[/i]s wudnt vote me when u threw me a sub' diss/
some big mouth. .never rep. . but quick to talk s[/i]h!t/
And some dont belong here their place is in the Street/
b!tch. .do us a favor. .prove ma 32 didn't rhyme/
u cant deny it. . i  was gruesome with each line/
when u critiqued . .boy, i didnt say a word/
but tryna thumb down dude who thumbed me up . .thats so wrong!
it not personal. .u still ma dawg. .we doin this just for the fun/
to those who got ma back. ."one for all and all for one"/
Dude u on. .I[i]bis u deluded thinkin u Bis. . canibus?/
want me to expose the load of crap multies u forced?/
lines where u didnt make no sense at all. . filled with flaws?
Forced verses . .putting explanation in (Brackets)/
your  "Yori yori" verse. . cant save u from the casket/
go ahead. . keep bickering bout a rhyme scheme. ./
while u was writtin fable . .i was plotting your life spilling!/
And Ofoka and the rest haterz. .i treat u like a sausage with no fillings! /



All rhymes na play o . .y'all shudnt start catchin' feelings on this, ok?

oNe

U don too stay wit Spirit u no kno technology again? U nor
See say na BB I take rply. .yeye boy Ofoka, u too like wahala. .lol just dey put pepper n fire for small mata. .make am bigga pass wetin e be. Street na ma guy o. .make no mistake bout that! Make u too no take ma own comment to heart naa. .
Me do audio battle wit ibime? He go flog me naauw. Forget say e no popular Ibime na PH failed rapper o, lol.
Respect!!

oNe

Hehehe. .ibime. .u don start again o. U for let this round end officially naauw. I don't intend to drop verse on this thread.Let it serve y it was created. . Wanna throw shots? Take it to FFR. Will respond once ma IT guy releases some blocked site.

Decent verse tho, bigups!

oNe

1st all, u need to work on ur grammar. .lol.
Now, u need to seperate criticism from mere verbal mischief. Street has one of the longest criticism at d openin, but attackin sm1 who voted, by countering and smwhat seein no reason y d person voted me aint criticism, nobody countered U or him when u voted Ibis, so get it right.Plus his issue that I don't rhyme is just so erroneous.
This na play, even Ibis and I hav mutual respect for each other. .criticize but pls make sense.

oNe