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queenitee:
Divepen1 I've been trying to send you a mail without success *sad face* Where have you been?

TemiGURL:
This part two isn't on front page yet? What are the mods doing?

Divepen1, Lalasticlala? This story is arguably the best on this forum. Do the needful ASAP.

PrinceOFprince:
I no know for them o. This mods can be quite funny at times. Divepen1, I think he's joining the lot now.

queenitee:
I knew it Your styles are different

germaphobe:
from day one i know you guys ain't the same, but i thought you were the one giving him tips on how to blow off ones mind with imagery and weird imagination

IFEOLUWAKRIZ:
Lols

Bobosneh:
it's was always confusing for me sometimes I will have to rub my eyes to see I'm seeing right lol

afribabe:
Wow!!! Divepen thank you thank you thank you!!!!

Creeza:
I'm speechless bro. Wow!! can't believe I read this through one night non stop till now..

There are lotz of morals to learn From this story. A lot I mean, Emeka died trying to buy his mom a cow and and many dreams he had too.

I know lotz of guys that hustle daily just to put a smile on the faces of those they really love.

I know.. But m'en , coming from someone who has been there, done it, and got lucky to not let the system suck me in to doing Things you can't come back from.. I still say hutsle bro.. Don't result to stealing or crossing the border.. Everyday for the Hustle one day for the hutsler. just keep pushing.

I laughed so hard when he shouted " Europe ,Your father"


His death was tragic.. Though..

And then Lizzy, what can I say? it seems our beloved writer knows how to toil with our emotions.. Who could have actually thought she really loved Tunde but doing sh?it with his brother to make him jealous .. Thats mad gaan. Ras! gaaan...

I dont blame her.. The way she died.... incredibly pitiful..


Cecilia reminds me of a character in one of my short stories... Cara Gun smoke..only this case mine is a legal killer.


I loved her savagery, to think I saw her as an average Niger babe who wanted to slay the world and tour places.. I did picture her cleavages in my mind sha.. it was mind blowing, you can't even start to imagine if I tell you...


And the part where she showed us her true identity.. that was So Wow!!! Who could have imagined she was the kind of girl Tunde's Ma was always talking about.. The typ that cut joysticks for a living.. hehheehhe.




Tunds, my real guy... I wanna be like you when I grow up. Only pain me he didnt make it to Europe... I would have loved to See him go. And shame the devil...




Ade, was just too naiv for my liking.. He was too childish abeg but every character has their flaws. I'm even surprised he didnt die... Mumu .. S.O Alonge ko T.y Alonge ni...

In all , divepen1 kudos sir. I respect your brilliance

( takes a bow) And exits the platform

Missmossy:
Beautiful piece with an amazing imagery, keep it up Divepen1.

queenitee:
Biola please find the strength to leave that abusive marriage, I cannot cry if you should die.

Pastor Element, ehmm, ehmm...... thou shall not judge sha, so I'm saying nothing

xaviercasmir:
Wow Interesting and captivating story . Keep it up bro