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pardon me for been such a latecomer....but this is a free chat thread, right? we can talk about anything?? or are there any special rules??

senbonzakura....first of all, i must say ur writing is UNIQUE! I love ur writing style, especially the comedies...
As for ur name, men u sure say all letters of d alphabet no dey inside?
Anyway...i'm following u...so pls write more...

More battery to ur laptop.... #winks#

in no particular order:
serasadeiyare
zubikeO1
they are great writers, who pay attention to details...they av made nairaland interesting...

adusco: wow!!!
Reading this write up kept me busy as if i was preparing for an exam.
It would have taken much commitment to sit down and compose, type and post in here for our enjoyment.
Though i'm a latecomer but no ill feeling in commmenting on this.
If i may ask ,how long does it take you to write this,what do you do for a leaving and where on this earth did you get the inspiration?

adusco: wow!!!
Reading this write up kept me busy as if i was preparing for an exam.
It would have taken much commitment to sit down and compose, type and post in here for our enjoyment.
Though i'm a latecomer but no ill feeling in commmenting on this.
If i may ask ,how long does it take you to write this,what do you do for a leaving and where on this earth did you get the inspiration?

Wow, adusco...you are my newest fan! Welcome on board. I'm glad you enjoyed my story.
Indeed, it took a lot of commitment and i felt discouraged along the line, but i am glad i found the strenght to complete it...
To answer your questions, i spent about two months to write, type and upload this story.
I studied Biochemistry, I am currently applying for jobs.
As for my inspiration....i have been writing stories since i was seven years old, but this is the first time i am posting something online. The inspiration came due to the fact that i got tired of stumbling into romance novels with all its intricate romantic details, so i thought i should write a beautiful love story excluding se.xual content...
I must not fail to acknowledge my cousin (O.I) who wrote the first few paragraphs of chapter one, several years ago.....

xoxo

zubike01: Nike is a Santeras a divinity i find it hard that she would choose to walk that path after her encounter in Valley of flames ministry. Tunde is a thief with no respect for religion, culture and human life. i didn't think it would be fair for him to have a happy ending. Never the less getting a power man of God to break the curse would make all the suspense meaningless. The joy of suspense is the inability to predict what comes next.

hahaha, Zuby is dat wot u think?
The suspense in this story is already strong..... So nothing can water it down....Let me show u something....

Dis is not the way the story came across to me, and i'm sure, one or two of ur readers will agree....
Firstly, u portrayed Nike as a fighter, and if anyone should have a happy ending after all the trouble, it's her. Seriously she has to be delivered from the curse.
Secondly, u portrayed Tunde as a criminal that was ready to start a new life, but it could still make sense to make the curse kill him, if you really want a tragedy.
As for ogunshola, he ought to have died since he FAILED his mission.
And the son of tunde and nike can always be put in an orphanage, so that nike can start a new life.
Infact if u want to end the story in such a way that u can write part two, then u should make the child inherit some part of the curse.

I hope this helps, as a writer i know the two most difficult parts to adjust in stories are the beginning and the end.... So i'm not suggesting you change the ending, I'm just registering my ideas....it might help u in ur next story or something.... # just thinking.#

zubike01: Thanks DNA i hope to read the story i inspired you to complete.

An epilogue is usually just used to bring closure to a story. It helps reveal the faith of a character after all the events that occured in the story.It shouldn't be expected to take thesame form as the main chapters of the story.

I didn't kill NIke and Tunde the story said nothing is really known all we have is speculations all we are sure of is that she had a son. We can't confirm if they died or just decided to go their separate ways and leave their son in an orphanage. Its a tragedy dear...

Hugs hugs hugs

ah! Tragedy ke.
Biko Zuby do something for your numba one fan na....why did u allow ogunshola and princess to live happily ever after, and then u are leaving tunde and nike just like that! No oooo.....no be so ooo.....try adjust am abeg...

Interesting story...waiting 4 ur next book....u av really inspired me to complete d book i started several years ago.....

But d epilogue seemed as if u RUSHED it...
Besides why did u kill our dear Nike and Tunde..
Waiting for your reply.

oleku baby: What a lovely story. short sweet and simple. Kudos DNA1, A PLEASANT SURPRICE AND A REFRESHING READ. It was just today i decided to open and read. you used sipmle words to paint the pictures/ convey your thought beautifully. write more pls. thank you

aww.. Thanks. Your comment means soooooo much to me.
Thanks again.

zubike01: lovely that all i can say

zuby
Thanks o.... Na me hail u pass.

d last update was wow....

so...I've been meaning to ask. What inspired u to write this story?

hahahaha...that should be Nike..

update d story ooo, what r u waiting for?