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Affegott:
Well, you should have maintained the original plan or better still edit the previous post to suit your new inspiration. As most of us like to read for fun, some of us are disturbed by a little inconsistency.

Still a good read for me and most people. Thumbs up.

Affegott:
This is the only part I have problem with. Apparently only one of them had a horrible experience, and it was even a dream.

Nice story, followed keenly. Thanks for making it short and interesting.

That Ezra was so bold and masculine, they named her after a (male) prophet.

peter4d2:
nice story 2 good 2 be a dream I was hoping it did be a reality. d main lesson I got out of dis piece is that always try 2 express ur feelings 2 d 1 u care abt n not 2 wait till they r dead so u culd compose a nice eulogy during their burial rites.

diago94:
Donkross1. I must confess you got me. I admire your writeup. More ink to your pen. Invite me to more of your stories.

Sageez:
5am

The noise from my phone woke me up this morning (don't ask me the kinda phone I use), ''I'll kill lil sis when she wakes, why must she take off my M-card?'' I muttered .
I checked the screen it was 5:00am and who could be calling at this time? it was Anayo calling. Anayo is my Director's boy, he runs all errands for my Director.

Anayo: sageez director asked me to inform all workers that there will be an emergency meet in his office by 6:20am.
Me: ok, I will be there.

I got to our director's office by 6:19am. I meet some of my colleagues there.

We waited till 6:45am but no sign of our director so we called Anayo and the i.diot laughed and screamed 'APRIL FOOL'. I hate Anayo.

Cc.
Donkross1
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Oyinprince:
Two hands in the air for Baba. Wonderful piece

graciousisi:
O my God..... Am soooooo scared. Nice job op

Tslim404:
I've been a ghost reader but kai hmmmmmn this is superb, its great. Welldone

Ashiat39:
first of it kind 'horror story'

good work donkross1, av never know DAT u are writer too

Orlolahdey:
Thank God it was just a DRM...nice write up boss

NidaxJ:
Thank God. its a dream.... Return of exorcist

dimssy:
OMG. This is ..........

Nicolars:
Wow seriously, I usually get bored with stories but seriously, I enjoyed this. Nice work

SPDAZZY:
Présent monsieur. How late am I?
Nice Story. I was so scared... Thank God it was just a dream. *breaths out*

hefelove:
Nice story! He make sense die! The Reunion too was cool. Abeg when is ur next story?

dimssy:
That was how you didnt mention me right.

teepsee:
Sorry man. I was almost in tears towards the ending part.

Does that mean that God will take me cause I'm a good person oo. Well I don't want to go know. Oluwa I'm grateful

Olibboy:
Jesus Is lord sha

DrayZee:
I was reading this stuff...Then NEPA took light!
Remain small tin I for just run comot house. Dis story is wicked.
Na to enter Jokes section go clear my mind remain.
Nice writeup!

Bishops10:
Ouch......imagine the time am reading this story
Thumbs up writer

chibyz:
nice story line,but learn how to punctuate your dialogues. i want you to also learn how to show instead of telling. when you said music was playing, it would have been nice if you mentioned the title of the song.but nice one dear,you are growing.

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virtuedagirl:
A beautiful but scary piece thank God say na just nightmare.

iamdeejayscar:
Jeezzz.... super interesting but you need an editor

iamdeejayscar:
Not complete sir.... please oh

olalekan9320:
an interesting stoorry

Donsheddy:
Nice one

teepsee:
So wasted my time reading some poo dreams.
Nice one man. Thumbs up

Geedhey:
couldn't read this short piece and keep quiet... I say thumbs up & well done. Enjoyed every bit of it. More Grace

alphajerus:
if only I could see the author of this great fiction I promise him my thumbs up!!! ur the man .I love ur work pls keep the torch on...alphajerus