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Na me first reach here?

LarrySun:
I mind not.

Mr LarrySun Can I get an autograph? .. D9ty7 I sight you in the viewing section, you self kan gimi autograph oo. Na my mentors for literature section be that .



Madam Op, you are on point.. thanks for sharing.

heemah:
Thanks for the mention missmossy..
This is nice, Ma'am Cho25bc...Waiting for more..
Dandypearl, where art thou? My unrivalled bartender; Donkross1 and Sageez, food yaf ready ooo

The official bartender at your service ma'am



Okay make I sleep wake up before I read .. thanks for the mention baeby .

Madam Op rankadede oo.

1st to reach here . I name dz side Donkross1 stand... strictly for cute girls sha.





Mr op.. Oya let the story begin.

Nice.. Very nice piece..

You mean say mesef follow chop the national cake



Oya oya more updates ma'am.. nice job
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Lol it's a theory but you try sha . Nice one.

Okay.





I actually decided to read this story because I saw in your profile that Ib city is your location (I hope you are really an ib girl tho lool) and maybe because you look cute also ... On a serious note, it's a very nice concept and a cool story all together. First thing I noticed is your repetition of words (par example "leave leave" "being being" but it's like it only happened in the first and second episode, just proof-read and correct that.

Secondly, you have to space your work to make it easier to read. Something like this.....



[b]

Alhaji Omolowo is the owner of the unpainted storey building with tall masquerade trees bursting with leaves. The apartment, which has over 18 rooms is well known in the community for lodging Okada riders, Lorry drivers ,touts.Omolowo's building is where violence, theft, conflict between husband and wives exist in its highest order. Nuru lives in the Omolowo's apartment. He rents the quarters behind the main building with his wife Romoke.Nuru got married not quite long and thought that the quarters would provide him the privacy he desire, but ever since got to Omolowo's household, Romoke have always been complaining about their missing items.



"Nuru,shebi I told you that i suspected Mama Tunde living in the main building? Mama Dosumu her fellow housemate actually told me few moments ago that it was Mama Tunde that stole my white Caribbean skirt"



"Romoke, Kindly endure with me till our one year agreement with the landlord lapses, i will surely get us another apartment, O.k?"said Nuru.


"There is no room for peace in this house at all, oni ejo ,ola ija.Seriously, one must not raise a child in this house", replied Romoke as she place her head on her husband's chest.



Baba Sidi occupies a room and palour inside the main building. He is an Okada rider who is in his late 30's.He is blah blah blah [/b]




Finally, make sure you put the Adegoroyes in the story ... Just kidding ... I for like call my squad but if dem reach here now, dem go say na woman I find reach here



Chaii I be talkative sha

Adematae:
Accept my condolence bro, I understand what It means to lose a mother to the cold hands of death, it's painful. Your story made tears well up in my eyes as I remember my sweet mum that passed on about a year ago.

Sorry bout your mum too. It is well.

lenmafon:
i understand ur pains cos 15years ago, mine passed on. i did not see her for three months only to be told that she was gone. she was my friend and mentor. rip to our lovely mothers who has gone to the other side. they will forever remain in our hearts

Amen!!!

Gunsound:
am in skul cormfortable but after readin dis ur story all in my mind now is to go nd see my lovely mother who has just undergone a surgery. Help me pray for my mum please.

it is well with your mum. You should go n see her soonest.

Affegott:
Feeling so sour about your mum's passing. I know how it feels as I haven't healed from a similar that happened 9 years ago. Accept my condolence.

Thanks so much bro.