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(Jeffrey is driving when suddenly he sees someone, his class mate in secondary school days. He was the best student in their secondary school days. He stop his car and honk. Oscar turn)
OSCAR- J. J.
JEFFREY-(alight) Hi boy. It's been a long time. (they shake hand)
OSCAR- Man I dey. Shebi you no wan me, naw. You no wan show face for my bonk.
JEFFREY- long time no see. How I take no your bonk? (they shake hand again)
OSCAR- you don change big time.
JEFFREY- (Switch to english accent) let's enter that cafeteria and gist.
§§§ CURTAIN FALL §§§
*
(Belinda and her mother plan on how to take over Katerina's place)
BELINDA- Mother, am tired of all this. Jeff doesn't love me but Oscar does. Even with the false evidence I have against him, he is not tame. He promise to make life miserable for me if he does't have Katerina. And Katerina is my Bff. I can't bear to betray her. This is getting...
BOSE- (cut in) she is the one betraying you. She took Jeff away from you and she deserve to pay for all this.
BELINDA- But she is innocent. She doesn't know I was betroth to jeff from childhood.
BOSE- that is the more reason you have to tell her the truth. I believe she will understand you.
BELINDA- But I love Oscar. Am even carrying his child.
BOSE- What!
BELINDA- Yes mother. Am six weeks pregnant for Oscar.
BOSE- Does he knows?

Oooo.....hh nooooo

Nice work. I guess this will make my day.

+++ACT2 - SCENE II+++
(At Dbest general hospital. Babra is sleeping peaceful as Katerina walk into her ward)
KATERINA- (Thinking) poor woman. I don't know whether what Ernest said is true though have seen the striking resemblance. You will never get to know that have discover the truth about myself. I know you have reason for what you did. And I hope one day you will come up with a tangible reason. (she drop the food flask she came with. As she open the door, Babra open her eyes, her vision blur)
BABRA- Agnes.
KATERINA- (amaze, she perch beside her) Mama.
BABRA- Dear, when did you come?
KATERINA- Few minutes ago. I brought you your favourite food, succotash.
BABRA- Oh my dear, thank you.
(she try to hug her but Katerina bend and give her a warm embrace and a peck)
BABRA- You are welcome.
KATERINA- How is your relationship with Jeff?
KATERINA- Everything is smooth. He introduced me to his parent. His mother really likes me but I saw something on his father's eyes. It seem they force him to accept me. You know how rich people really value class or background.
BABRA- (Touch her cheek) don't worry Agnes. When he knows the kind of lovely angel you are, he will come around. He will accept you into their family and will no longer see you as a gold digger but as a blessing.
KATERINA- (Beam) amen.
BABRA- I wish I could live to see you on the d-day but the doctor said, I have three days to stay alive. This cancer is killing me slowly.
KATERINA- (Tears well-up her face) mama, God knows you are the only one I have . You will not die. You will live to declare the goodness of God.
BABRA- (Wipe the tears off her face) you are not alone, princess Agnes.
KATERINA- Princess Agnes! Mama, you have forgotten my name.
BABRA- No, Katerina. Why should I forget your name. Princess Agnes is your true name. You are not alone, princess. You have a family.
KATERINA-(gasp) what! Mama tell me who am I?
BABRA- It's a long story. When you come back from work, I will brief you. I will give you all the evidence you need to know.
₹₹₹CURTAIN FALL₹₹₹

TANZ

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ERNEST- (dial Katerina's number) ok mum.
KATERINA- Hello, who is this?
ERNEST- Is me, Ernest. My...
KATERINA- (Cut in) what do you want from me? I'm not your sister. I have a family. People do resemble each other, so leave me alone. (she end the call)
HANNAH- Call her again. Do you know who she is leaving with?
ERNEST- It's Babra, Babra Damina.
JASPER/HANNAH- What!
ERNEST- She kidnapped my only sister and she is going to pay double for her atrocity. (Ernest dail Katerina's phone number again)
HANNAH- (Weep) how could she do such a thing to me? After all have done for her. How could she betray us?
JASPER- (Consoling) we will find her and the able hand of law will judge and put her behind bar.
ERNEST- Mum, is ok. I will do everything in my power to find her. The line is going through.
HANNAH- Let me talk to her.
(Ernest give the phone to her)
KATERINA- Hello, why can't I have peace of mind? why are you haunting me?
HANNAH- Is ok, dear Agnes. Is me, your biological mother.
KATERINA- My what! Why are you people treading on my emotion?
HANNAH- (weeping) please listen to me. Don't end the call.
(the reciever sniff on the other end.
HANNAH- Babra was my best maid. She couldn't have a child of he own because her husband was impotent. When you were kidnapped, she resign and since then, we have not seen her again.
KATERINA- I don't believe any word that you said. Don't even think you can convince me. I love my mother. Whether she kidnapped me or not, I won't allow you people to make her die before her time. She loves me. She care for me. She is...
HANNAH- (Cut in) then, why did she kidnapped you?
KATERINA- she did not kidnapped me, you imposter. (she end the call)
JASPER- (Pat his wife) Is ok, darling. She will come around.
ERNEST- Let's give her something to ruminate about what we have tell her.
HANNAH-(Nod) Is there no way we can trace her?
ERNEST- There is but only if she doesn't stop using the line. Poor sister, may God protect you for us.
*
++++CURTAIN FALL++++
(Katerina think about everything that was going on in her life. She wasn't ready to give Babra heart attack. All Babra had shown her was love and kindness and she has to reciprocate. Her phone which tingle, jolted her out of her reverie)
KATERINA- Hello Jeff.
JEFFREY- Katerina, I thought we were having a date. Have been waiting for you for the past forty five minute.
KATERINA- Oh... Jeff, am sorry. I was occupied.
JEFFREY- Does that mean you have cancel our date?
KATERINA- NO. Am on my way.
++++CURTAIN FALL++++

(King Jasper and queen Hannah sat in their court teasing each other)
HANNAH- My king, do you remember one prince charming who fell into stagnant water while pursueing a princess?
JASPER- (chortle) oh... You won but the princess was dying to have the prince. And when the prince stopped chasing her, she wept. She went in searched of the prince and when they found each other, they never leaved each other again.
HANNAH- (smile and give her husband a peck) I love you, my lord.
JASPER- (kiss her lightly) I love you too, my one and only.
(just then, prince Ernest came in)
ERNEST- Sorry to disturb you too. I have something to show you and I believe my guest is as good as yours.
JASPER- (sit up) what is it, son?
ERNEST- (Show them the profile of Katerina) I saw this woman on facebook and we started chatting.
HANNAH- Don't tell you are involve in cyber love.
ERNEST- Hell no, you know how I value our family esteem. Mother, look at this picture again. Is there any difference between us except my masculine figure.
HANNAH- (look again) they first thing I notice when I have birth to the two of you was this birth mark near your eyebrow.
JASPER- Are you sure?
HANNAH- Yes, she is my daughter. How can we find her?
ERNEST- I will figure it out. I saw her number online.
JASPER- Then, invite her to have dinner with us.
HANNAH- No, call her now.

(Katerina login to facebook. Someone request to be her friend. She accept her request and the both start chatting)
ERNEST- (text) what is the meaning of KTA?
KATERINA- (text) Katerina. What about Ernest? Is that your real name?
ERNEST- Yes, Ernest is my real name. I like your name and your profile. You look magnificent.
KATERINA- Thank you.
ERNEST- Check my profile again and see if there is any difference between you and me.
KATERINA- Why?
ERNEST- Please just do it. There is something I saw that makes me request for your friendship.
(katerina check his profile again and try to compare it with herself. Then she sees it. The pot wine mark just her eyebrow. They were both fair in complexion with oblong pretty visage, pink lips, cat-like eyes and a pot wine mark near their eyebrow.)
KATERINA- (confuse) have not seen anything
ERNEST- You are lying. I can feel it. That is why it takes you so long to reply my text.
KATERINA- who are you? What do you want from me?
ERNEST- I am Ernest Jasper. The prince of priceless kingdom.
KATERINA- my mother told me she used to work there.
ERNEST- who is your mother?
KATERINA- her name is Babra Damina.
ERNEST- My mother showed me her picture. She said, she was a nice woman. she was suppose to be our nanny but when my twin sister was kidnapped, she resigned and since then, they never saw her. She kidnapped you. She is not your mother. You are my missing sister. You are princess Agnes.
(After Katerina finish reading the text, tears roll down her face)
KATERINA- (text) this conversation is over. (she sign out)
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PrinceAdepoju: following...
the story seems to be familiar though .

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+++ACT 2- SCENE 1+++
(Oscar came back from U.S.A together with Belinda. They had been dating for four years. They sat in Elshadi restaurant licking vanilla ice cream silently)
OSCAR- Belinda (he hold her hand but Belinda remove her hand from the table and frown)
BELINDA- What is it? Why did you bring me here?
OSCAR- Hey calm down. I brought you here to remind you that I love and that, am ready to spend eternity with you.
BELINDA-(gasped) what!
OSCAR- Yes dear, have been trying to reach out to you but you have been ignoring my calls. I don't know what is going on but all I know is that I love you. You are the air that I breath.
BELINDA- you have not arrive at a point yet.
OSCAR- Marry me, Belinda. (he genuflected and bring out a ring)
BELINDA- (stand)This is ridiculous. Please stand. You are embarrassing me. People are watching us.
OSCAR- But I love you.
BELINDA- Stop it. Please sit. Let's talk like mature people.
(they both sit)
BELINDA- Listen to me Oscar, I love you but that doesn't mean I have to end up with someone like you. Whatever we had together was just for fun...
OSCAR- (Surprise)What!
BELINDA- (gather courage) yes, I can't marry you. When I needed you, you were not there for me. You were busy with your so called contract. I need a man who desperately want me not the other way.
OSCAR- I'm sorry, Belinda. The contract was for the benefit of both of us. I want us to live a better life. To build a palace together, where servant will be at our beck and call. You will not suffer. I want you to live a happy life. I want the best for you, Belinda.
BELINDA- (Controlling her emotion) Am sorry, Oscar. You are dreaming. Please wake up and face reality. I will not disgrace my family by marrying you. The fact that the government gave you a scholarship to study abroad doesn't make us to be in the same class. We are world apart.
OSCAR- Belinda, I can't believe you are saying this after everything we share together.
BELINDA- Why are you being so annoying? Which is so hard for you to understand? Is it, I don't want you in my life or we are world apart?
OSCAR- I'm not going to give up on you. I know someone is been advising you.
BELINDA-(Stand) who could that be? I won't sit here and watch you insult me. Excuse me. (she walk out on him)
++++CURTAIN FALL++++

(Belinda visit Katerina)
BELINDA- How is your mother's health?
KATERINA- God is taking control.
BELINDA- (cross leg) gist me, babe.
KATERINA- what gist?
BELINDA- You said you have a good news to tell me.
KATERINA- Oh...that. My bad. (she rub her breathtakingly pure golden ring) I'm engage.
BELINDA- Oh my God! (she hug her) who is this lucky dude? You did not even introduce him to me.
KATERINA- I'm sorry, it happen so fast and you know, you were in the state. His name is Jeff
BELINDA- (shock) Is he the Jeff I know?
KATERINA- Do you know J.J. Benson?
BELINDA- (Pretending to be happy for her) offcourse, who doesn't know the son of the minister for science and technology. He was... even my childhood friend.
KATERINA- That is a relieve. I thought you two had something in common.
BELINDA-No, we don't. I don't think he will even remember me again.
KATERINA- Then, let's have a date with him together.
BELINDA- that will be fantastic. (they smile and hug each other)
KATERINA- I'm sweating, let me go and take my bath. (she leave)
BELINDA- (echo) Hurry up, I'm waiting for you.
(As Katerina leaves, she remove Jeffrey's phone number from Katerina's phone)
++++CURTAIN FALL++++

+++CONTINUATION+++
STELLA- Don't start it, please. We are talking about till death do us part issue and you are comparing it to a tenure of two to four years. I can't believe you are doing this, John. Is there anything wrong with him marrying Katerina apart from class?
JOHN- No, she is a decent girl but...
STELLA- (But in) There is no but. Let them get marry as soon as possible.
JOHN- Is going to ruin my political relationship with Michael.
JEFFREY-father, if I am your true son and you love me, please grant my heart desire. I love her. It takes two good years before she accepted my proposal. I promise her everything. I can bear to betray. She doesn't deserve any of this. She is an exceptionally woman.
JOHN- She is a wolf in sheep clothing. She is only after your money. You need a woman who can assist you financially and not a woman who keeps demanding. I know her type. Slow poison. She is going to wretch your life.
JEFFREY- papa, don't do this to me.
STELLA- So you marry me because of my money?
JOHN- Honey please don't start it. You know I love you. I have...
STELLA- (weep) when I marry you, you had nothing. I introduced you to my family. They accepted you the way you were. They gave you connection. They make you who you are today. So you were after my money, afterall and you want my son to leave his heart desire and go after money?
JOHN- (try to pat her but stella dodge and hug his son) Is not what want you are thinking. I love you. I really do and...
STELLA- (interrupt) Then if you love me as you say and you want me to be happy, make my son happy.
++++CURTAIN FALL++++

+++ACT 1 -SCENE 1+++
(In Jeffrey's bedroom, sat mr and mrs John Benson)
JOHN- My son...
JEFFREY- Papa
JOHN- I and your mother came to remind you about our discussion, two months ago.
STELLA- You said you were going to introduce to us your bride to be. Have you found one?
JEFFREY- Yes mama. Have found a good girl from a good background.
STELLA- (sigh) Hmm... That is a relief.
JOHN- Whose daughter is she?
JEFFREY- Papa, she is the daughter of Babra, the wife of late mr Damina.
STELLA- Oh...oh. Now I remember, the welder. He was such a nice man. Everyone likes him. I knew you won't make mistake. Her name is Kate...
JEFFREY- [cut in]Katerina
JOHN- (fuming) so, of all the women in this world, is the daughter of a poor welder that you want to marry?
JEFFREY- papa, that daughter of a poor welder is my heartbeat. Is the one I want to marry. I love her. I love her even more than my own life. I love Katerina Damina.
JOHN- (stand) I will never allow that to happen and that is final.
JEFFREY- (stand) Never papa. Have always been obedient to you but this time, am very sorry, you don't have a say. I won't allow you or anyone to jeopardize my fututre with Katerina
JOHN- What future? Both of you have no future of being together. She isn't your class.
JEFFREY- Then who is my class?
JOHN- Belinda Michael. I promise his father that I will merge the two of you And that will bind our political relationship and further...
STELLA- (Protest) No, I won't sit here and watch you bring that spoilt brat into this family. Is marriage politics?
JOHN- (angry) woman...

After loosing my story,(behold the jewel of my heart) have decided to come up with this play.
Pls ur comment and criticism will be highly welcome. Thanks.
This fiction is strictly the work of Dorisbest so, piracy beware.
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CHARACTERS IN THE PLAY
JEFFREY -Stella's son
BABRA -Katerina's foster mother.
STELLA -John's wife
BELINDA-Katerina's best friend
KATERINA-Jeffrey fiancee
AMOS -Doctor
PETER -Manager of Macpherson petroleum group of company
ANTHONIA-Peter's permanent secretary
OSCAR -Belinda's boyfriend
JASPER -The king
HANNAH -The queen
EMERALD - Denis's wife
DENIS -Emerald husband
MICHAEL -Belinda's father
BOSE -Belinda's mother
ERNEST -Hannah's son
BRUNO -Emerald spy
other characters will be added as the story unfold. Stay tune

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Taking over[okon, Doris]
behold the jewel of my heart[Okon, Doris]
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