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Ok

If you invest your money in a bale of clothes, it will return in a hundred folds

ashewoboy:
uc where i am coming from? mayb seun can save the situation. rules can be amended.

what you are saying is not wrong outrightly but the time you are saying it and the apparent purpose is off the point.
let me ask, did u witness the last stage?

Frankenstein:
Oh, please!

Anger at the babe? What if the character is gay?

Pain for the guy? - What if the YOU is female and dead.

Injustice? - What if the character remarried willingly and was expressing sorrow instead of guilt.

Many more deductions could be extracted.

now you get my point....
Because its six words dont mean the story cant be conclusive to a reasonable extent....

In this kind of competition, the best never wins
As a result of incompetent judgement or the fact that popularity shadows content if votes (likes and shares) are the deciding factors. Not that the latter matters, as it has been stipulated at the initial stage.
But voters u dont have to ridicule the writer by contrasting the stories in your (limited) opinions.
Rules like grammar, tenses, punctuation etc supercedes the moral of the story.
most people judge concerning what the story said but not how it was written.

piroux:
Oh my God, is it too late to submit? I didnt have internet access yesterday, i didnt know about the deadline, i'm sorry. Pls, can i still submit?

Pele

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carry on....

Chill

ashewoboy:
it will be sardonic, lugubrious and unfair if skarlett wins this contest. voting should not be the criterion to determine the winner. the judges should choose the winner. skarlett has so much influence here, she does not deserve to win. missnande owns this crown. just look at her submission, superb. divepen1, do something about this. seun, do something about this.#skarlettmustnotwin. #teammissnande.

and you just realised all dis now
welldone
however u just living up to ur moniker bro

repogirl:
Is someone still sore from losing?

some kind of sores are good and worth it

repogirl shd come and do depth analysis now

thank you I must say I like your style too

It suffices that the Elder perished here than the Elder was captured here. We divined for the Chief also known as Down who sleeps in a basket as his leg obstructs the street, he was the patron of the tortoise that cultivates the sky and the son of a belch. It happened that he eavesdropped and learnt that his wife who tied a hundred wrappers but none reached her knees was seeing the marabou that owns a well but baths with spittle... The Moon was their witness. Down was irritated but Ifa warned him of limitations.
So he went to consult his alter ego under the river that just flows and to hunt an alibi where neither the Sun nor the Moon penetrates, it was so dark and eerily silent, you could only hear yourself meditate and maybe Oluweri would counsel you... Oluweri kept a pet, Dark Secrets.
Then he went to the house he built with cotton wool but his wife had absconded. She should have left her head behind, he paid for it. The moon giggled outside where he ate Cayenne pepper and invoked Sango who sent flames to consume the lovers and veiled the sky.
He raised his head and shoulders and levitated, he would surprise the lunatic Moon, teach it to mock, kick it around... He mused as he rose. The World watched. As he peaked the highest mountain, the clouds shifted and he beheld the immensity of the Moon. He was upset. The moon stared him down as he grabbed the clouds futilely and fell because they were slippery... He remembered the Oracle and promised not to fall the way he was, he pronounced the mantra for transfiguration and became a Downpour. So the Chief also known as Down fell on the World.

very interesting.... I like stories that were bore out of lores I wrote a shorter story sometime ago, you might like it too

present

oh well

EmperorLee:
I no like am ooh, i be born again. Done.

buh na wetin dem take born us na lolz thanks

EmperorLee:
Haaaaaa Egbami

shey u like it pls like and share

please vote for me to get to the next stage

https://www.nairaland.com/3919666/seun-osewa-battle-moderator-judges/4#59698846

profuhrer pls assist my ministry

PLEASE READ AND VOTE FOR THIS SHORT AND SEXY STORY ON THE SEUN OSEWA CONTEST

https://www.nairaland.com/3919666/seun-osewa-battle-moderator-judges/4#59698846


Your vote will take me to the next stage thanks