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I really did have he whole story figured out. Then my phone was stolen back then and I just zoned out.

Reading this after all these years with no has opened my eyes to how my readers enjoyed it.

I will try and finish this story.

And I will only start posting when the story is finished, so they will never be another break in transmission.

Thanks

Karenjay. You're a brilliant pelzin. I was beginning to wonder how everything will tie up.

Meanwhile, I seem to think the name Rita's crush is Mark. And I'm sticking with that.
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Mark got home in a lot less time than he had told his brother Richard. While he had plans to grab an early dinner in some restaurant before heading home, he changed his mind when he remembered Rich had Sophia over last night. For all of his brother taking her on fancy dates, she never failed to leave his refrigerator well stocked with different meals, which always finger licking good. Rich could continue deceiving himself but his women chasing days were seeing their twilight. God bless Sophia, he thought.

And Sophia, the ass on the girl. Damn. His brother struck gold with that one he had to admit. Besides their identical looks which they shared, their love for a nicely shaped behind was the other thing they had in common. They could not have been more polar opposite than the twins; Rich and Mark.

Rich had always been the life of the party, the boisterous one. The trouble maker who always roped his twin into covering up. The baba for them girls. International heart breaker. They were both handsome and Rich knew how to use it to his advantage. Years of hard work in the gym and their careers only added to the appeal. Mark on the other hand while certainly not "reserved", he was the clean up guy. The calm one. The guy who knew that girls liked him both never knew what to do. While Rich maintained that Mark was not innocent, Mark never broke hearts and was straight up with his emotionally dissociative state. He was a serial monogamous friends with benefits kind of guy.

Dinner at home that evening was a special Ghana jollof recipe Sophia had whipped up over some nice Arsenal banter, Rich was a staunch Gunner. So far as Rich was concerned, if this was how Ghana jollof went then Nigerian jollof didn't stand a chance. Mark maintained that he wasn't talking of the rice but about Sophia's behind. Anything from her had to be the best to him.
"Talking of behinds" Rich said. "Yesterday when I was out with Sophia, I saw this broad who seemed like she recognised me. As usual I turned up the charms and flashed my million dollar smile. But she just stood up and ran away"

Mark couldn't contain his laughter as he told his brother "it is one of two things. Either you've broken that girls heart in the past and you cannot remember or Sophia don tie down your skills"

"The upside though" Rich continued "As she stormed away, the sway of her ass was a certified Oscar performance"

The talk of fleeing girls drew Mark's mind back to earlier in the day when the deja vu inducing face ran past him. He didn't bring it up to Rich because he didn't want to equal the banter playing field.

And while he was taunting Rich of his failing charms, he also remembered the only girl he ever wanted to use his own "charms" on. It was an innocent kind of love. But it had left him scarred and made him hide his emotions behind an ice fortress.

He cast his mind away from all those serious thoughts and went back to hitting Rich with banter.

If only they knew they had both been talking and thinking about the same girl.

nkemdi89:
I read one of her writeups on a letter she penned down to her daughter, according to her she said she won't stop her daughter from involving in premarital sex, neither will she create an impression that her father was the only man she had slept with, but she will only advice her to be responsible for her actions, as the notion of "waiting for the wedding night is not realistic". She also painted a picture of fun in premarital as long as you can take care of yourself.

But,

is she not stating the reality?

Oga,

This your honest review sef.

And if you look at it critically, she no lie for the book. Those are the harsh realities we live in.

Sha I appreciate that it's your opinion and you have a right to it, so I respect it.

But if e too pain you, go write your own moral book.

Please appreciate that that is my opinion, I have a right to it so respect it.

Thank you.