₦airaland Forum

(Follows the fire)

Jumizie13: Dedicated to my Sweetheart (PRINCE ADEOLU OLUWASEGUN) nd my twin sister (LEWADOSKY).
Chapter 1
Abideem memorial college(Abideem Memorial College) is well known far nd near around the city of lagos(Lagos) because of its qualified teachers, an elaborate nd(and) laboratory, good sporting facilities, poultry farm and many others.
The school had a vast compound secured with concrete fence. In front of the school gate was a huge signboard written(bearing) ABIDEEM MEMORIAL COLLEGE, with the picture of Veronica and Stephen. Both an(grammatically inappropriate, please delete) ex-students of the school. Their names can(could/would) never be wiped off in the history of the school, because of(due to) the glory they have brought to the school.
The school had a big poultry farm where various types of birds are breed(were bred), especially chickens. The school also had an orchard and 2 acres of farmland where various types of crops are planted.
"There is going to be a football match between our school and Lion of Judah College." said a husky voice which belonged to the principal of the school in person of Mr. Ogunnubi(Jejune. It would be better if written this way: a husky voice which belonged to the principal of the school, Mr. Ogunnubi, said...) . So, i(the singular personal pronoun must always be capitalised) want you guys to prepare very well so as to keep our school flag flying, he continued.

Rough review.

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Illuminatus: When was it published?

1994

Dark River of the Earth (Dean Koontz)
page 155.