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mystkk: @larry 1st impression dey say matas a lot,i careles if she's an angel
@my tnks
@uj u dnt hv to apologise 4her
@redmos tanks i enjoyed d song cud picture u bendin ur waist n dancin lk a yoruba man lolz
@all tanks aint angree ders always an antagonist in every setup am used to her kind,nice meetin yal good n bad

I'd rather you write out your words in full, these abbreviations are breaking my heart.

uj_sizzle: stalkers? Wannabe??
He leaves his perculiar trademark on every handle.
You don't know Red like i do Larry

I'll be damned if that's true! Moss!

Mynd_44: Okay I will comsider it

On a second thought, don't do it. Those PHCN guys are so unpredictable.

uj_sizzle: you my friend need to cut it out. We've all had our fill of seeing your different handles, will u also burden us with task of discussing them with you still? Or this some less than brilliant way you desire to hoard attention?? It is tiring please...

I strongly believe those bloodsuckers aren't Red.

Mynd_44: I will try not to....and the transformer is calling me and asking for a warm hug

Of course you can do that. The transformer has 'no power' over you.

Mynd_44: My kitchen knife is begining to look friendly right now. And it is looking at my wrist like my hand is the violin while it is the.......

Please, do not harm the kitchen knife with your wrist because...

brokoto: oga you don de unravel the story already º°˚˚˚°º‎​ . Looks like you have the whole plot in your head and you want others to hopefully follow it like that until it gets to your turn.

If that's what you think, sir, then you're wrong. The mystery hasn't even begun. I didn't unravel anything, I don't even know what direction the plot may swerve. I only made out those pointers for the next writer to easily draw his plots. It is humanly impossible for the story to follow the pattern you supposedly said I'm hoping. By the way, I don't have any other plot other than what I've already written in the first chapter.

Bless you, sir.

mystkk: I just wanted to make friends but if dis how people are rude here den no need

The people here are quite friendly, believe me. HBG is also very friendly, just try to understand her.
You're welcome to Nairaland. Naturally, a welcome party should be hosted but...

Mynd_44: I refuse to be bored to death

I agree with you, LOL! Boredom can rot the bone marrow.

The last time I checked, nobody has monopoly over this chat room. And girls, quit this act, will you?

The heat is getting quite intense.

frank3.16:
I am it guys. I must confess, larry has got my brain crackin. I hear guys talking about developin plots like its easy for me to read into larrys mind.

I love challenges and this is one. I can't even wait to see what I can come up with. So like u all, let's watch and see

I have a feeling that you only read the first part of the story I posted (the Italics), I posted the story in two parts o.

cowgurl: I see, nice to meet you too.
Good morning everyone.

Good morning, Gurl. How was your night?

Mynd_44: Is it just me or is 1,500 words small? I was just making an update for something and I realised this

What is 1'500 words small?

Dull...dull...dull, I want something interesting here!

Efemena_xy: Nothing.

Just dabbling in a 'lil bit 'o soliloquy...

But 'battle of the egos'? Now

Good morning, guys. Wishing you a beautiful day ahead.

Mazi_Omenuko: #...just kidding though, you should know me better by now...#

Forgive me, Mazi. I know you'll develop a wonderful plotting

white mosquito: @larry. I only apologize wen warranted. I dint insult him. Dont become all big brotherish because iv bin callin u uncle, k!. @ oaray. Obviously ur learner. Some details drag the storyline, and introduce too many leads/issues for the reader to consider. Its always advisable to let the reader form his own opinion/impression abt a xter.

I'm not being big brotherish, White. I thought you weren't very polite and demanded you apologize. But seeing that you didn't acknowledge your shortcomings, I better let you be.

I didn't draw a definte background for the character, if you have noticed. I didn't even give Lucan a surname, I want someone else to do that. The first chapter is mainly to introduce suspense from which the subsequent chapters would draw. Some explanations are still hanging, and I'm sure the other writers would rightly fill the void. Like take for instance, the strange phone number which was used to call Lucan. There should be a plausible explanation for that, it cannot just be ignored because that is one of those things the readers would expect being succintly explained. In the explanation too, there shouldn't be any fantastic excuse; no supernatural involvement should be drawn from it.

If the handwriting on the wall, however, isn't legible enough, I shall await till my turn to post surfaces again, so that this detail would be outline.

Being a detective story that it is, a corpse should naturally be introduced. This may be drawn eventually at the second chapter or the tenth.

Those 'unnecessary' details may serve as pointers with which to use in thickening the plot or alleviating tensions already built up in the suspense. Ishilove has said a whole lot of what I mean. I can't wait to read the updates. Peace all

Mynd_44: Okay......cos happy endings are happy and my works are dark and witchy.
Happily ever after na myth jorh

Myth is synonymous with Fiction.

white mosquito: Just say u hav no idea. We'l understand

That's not a good way to talk, White. Please apologize.

white mosquito: Just say u hav no idea. We'l understand

That's not a good way to talk to people, please apologize.

Mynd_44: Larry, seeing that I am last on the list, do I end the story or continue it and throw it back to you? be warned, I don't do happy endings ooo. I even hate it when the good guy wins in movies

You shall continue it and throw it back I wouldn't want you killing the readers' hero off. Reading this, I'd never allow you to end it...it'd always come to me

She just told him. She did the right thing.

white mosquito: Uncle larry, wit all due respect to ur writin prowess, i feel der r a lot of unnecessary details in d script. Almost seems like repetition. Thx u.
Runs away before he calls cuddlemii

Thanks a lot, White. I'll remember to improve on that. I'm still a learner, you know?

Oh, no...there isn't any reason for me to report you to Cud. You just did something great

Bless you, ma'am.

Here is the link to the story:

Nairaland Writers Collaboration

Mazi_Omenuko: Then backslide again on getting to chapter 16. Did you see how he rescued that girl, ignoring his own pains from the fire? That's the kind of character I love working with!

Mazi, you're beginning to scare me o. Thickening the plot is most important. Turning a character to a Pope or Porn star might diminish the originality of the plotting. Focusing on the plot development should rather be paramount.

Eze Promoe: [color=crimson]Evening Larry Soyinka [/color]

Howdy Eze Achebe?

cowgurl: great, great, great. I bet yours was as well.

My sleeps are being denied lately.

Eze Promoe: [color=crimson]Can't someone share the link to Larry's story? All I see here is 'Larry, you're good', nothing to see. Abi the story is not for learners like us [/color]

Oh! Sorry about that. I'll send it asap.

cowgurl: LOL...this is not that kind of cowgurl, pay no heed to Mynd hello Larry-sun

Hi! How was your day?