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maclatunji: Larry-Sun, make your writing simple. Yes, you are trying to be descreptive but you are overdoing it. The part of 'like a mating chihuahua' was just gross. Find a more
appropriate simile.

Frank 3:16, watch your tenses. Writing literature is different from speaking English. Then again, I think you guys are rushing too much- think and feel your character's emotions not just: "Gbram! I can write, let me start tapping my keyboard and hit the 1,000 mark.

As crude as your words sound, I think you're right. I will correct the comparison error. Yes, one of the main functions of this thread is to have people point out our errors so that we may improve.
Thanks Mac.
Bless you.

HumbledbYGrace: Larry Sun would you please remove my name in the list? I don't think I can do this, maybe I should just pull my chair and join the readers club.

I hope my notice is not too late

Thanks

I am really hurt by this. If you had really thought you wouldn't be able to pull it off, I wonder why you signed up in the first place. Besides, for something as serious as this, I would have expected you to PM me first. My initial plan was to offer an assistance during your turn by working up the chapter with you (I already imagined this when I wrote that members may collaborate to create a chapter), I was even ready to relinquish the spotlight and perhaps send a chapter to your mail to post at your turn. Now that you're definitely opting out, I see no reason to make you stay again after endless tries. Of course, you can remain a reader and make necessary comments and corrections.

To me, your reason for chickening out doesn't hold much fluid, because I'm still certain that you can do it. But I THINK Mazi's decisive prurient art in his future contribution brought about your decision (I may be wrong though).

Anyway, I shall put Yellow Mosquito in your place.

uj_sizzle: hah! I laugheth
Moss is one crazy asssed dude, i would know him anywhere.

He's not among those two fig-leaves-wearers?

HumbledbYGrace: There is no Moss in them pictures

How sure are you? Which one is Mynd?

Ishilove: Red Moss welldone o. So you want to contribute twice abi? Notin do you

He's not Redmosquito.

With the names suggestion, Ishilove has just hit the nail on the occiput. In addition, we shouldn't create characters with too mouthful names. I think our characters shouldn't carry more than three-syllabic names. Names like Ada, Funmi, Uche, Chima, Abigail, Hakeem and Daniel are short and precise (please I've already used these names in my Brand Of Cain work. No need to re-use them). There is quite an oeuvre of names to employ. Thanks.

uj_sizzle: u now think it's him?

Yes, because I know you wouldn't lie to me

Yellow_Mosquito: Yup... I think so... I will join

Okay, I shall include your name.

HumbledbYGrace: I still have the pic in my phone...

Those guys are crazy

Mynd and Moss

I love them for that...soooo hilarious Can't stop laughing!

Yellow_Mosquito: DId you guys leave me behind... COmmon, make una carry me follow body

You wanna join in?

Yellow_Mosquito: If there is something as looking for trouble, I'm on top of that game.... Now watch the reaction of Red-Mosquito and Mynd_44

LOL! Typically Moss

Let us all remember that he also laid down some pointers for the next writers to work on.

uj_sizzle: hahahahahaha
fear not, it's RedMoss n Mynd

Oh! I see.

uj_sizzle: **think, think really really quickly**

Your profile picture is scaring me.

frank3.16:
in order not to disappoint, i had to update today, cos i might be very busy tomorrow. hope i didnt break the law

Well, you somehow did, but it's cool. Gives the next writer more time to prepare.
That stuff you posted is...WOW! The plot definitely thickens
However, it seems as though you wrote the chapter in haste...some errors were staring at me therein (and you didn't title your chapter). Good work though.

uj_sizzle: my dear, i floateth with
no idea what you're talking about.
I haven't seen any val offer neither have i accepted any.
So u up?

**thinking, thinking really really deeply**

uj_sizzle: by whom, i ask again

A guy asked your hand in Val, have you forgotten?

Anonymous! Christ! Must you quote the story?

uj_sizzle: hmmm to think i offered
what part of the planet do u reside?

But you're already claimed

uj_sizzle: playing cupid?

Yeah! Playing Cupid now, HBG?

uj_sizzle: hi Larry
did u finally find ur val?

NOT YET

We want your risque connotations.

uj_sizzle: Hello everyone.
Seems i missed a lot

Howdy UJ?

Thief!

And corrupt as many Nairalanders as possible.

Mynd_44: Hello people

Hello Mynd_44.

HumbledbYGrace: *yawn*

Goodmorning people....

Morning my Gracie, just waking up?