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muller101:
Larry well done. But how about the bag of money they stole is it that they don't really want to make good use of it presently? Tell us where the money is before it's value depreciate further.

No, I'm not telling yet.

To siftweir and everyone sending me PM's,

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LSD

Ishilove:
LarrySun, darling, 'girded their loins' in the context which is used here is wrong, but the update is really nice

Thanks sweetie. Perhaps I should have used 'packaged their loins' instead. Thanks once again. Modified.

Phew! Ishilove is following my story!

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Adasun:
choi karo na ashana o

She believes what she believes.

Vicoch:
Ha ha ha,, African bad gal

Girls like Karo make the world go round.

Mhizpotential:
The girl na baddo set..

ghost mode deactivated

Thanks for the deactivation, ma'am.

crislyn:
Omo this girls are badder than bad o. LarrySun i'm really glad you r coming back to this story...God bless you. You r simply amazing with the way you write, it seems so foreign and funny.

Thank you so much, dear. It's people like you who inspire me to continue.

nellaz:
LARRYSUN, you are killing it, am rite behind u, following bumper 2 bumper

You've turned me into a killer.

Rodriguez12:
D gal no even get any atom of fear.....making basket fall inluv wit this kind slut won't b d best option for me oooo....thanks for d update larry

Thanks for following, sir.

macpetrus:
Karo... Game on, I know Peter is going to use that as a venue to blackfemale her to date basket

Hehehe! @blackfewmale. Funny pun.

Niwdog:
Alamo!! Karo Na ashii

Truly, her philosophy is a weird one.

oluangelkay:
Ewo！ the girl don spoil finish. But will peter still get mind do wetin he wan do？Only time will tell. Nice one Larry. I love u again and again for dis update

Thanks dear.

OluwabuqqyYOLO: Considering all the other works you had been dishing out, I was expecting much more from this particular one. I guess my expectations were too raised, perhaps I should have stopped at the lintel. I know you could have done much better, but somehow, you must have underestimated your opponents since Frankenstein's disqualification. Above all, I believe in your writing skill, I just don't feel this particular one. It's a minor depiction of your talent. Who am I to judge, anyway? Such happens to the best of us.


Gmike2Rule: At this level, the story you wrote is a little misnomer. I think you should have written something more engaging, something particularly much more relatable. I don't understand why such syndrome as this happens at final stages. You are a very gifted writer, but this one is just too simple to impress. Well done, all the same.

Skarlett: What can I say? You were knocked down and you rose with renewed strength! Wow! You are an inspiration to writers, you are an inspiration to me. You just blew my mind away with this story. You fought tooth and nail to reach here. You are too much, lady. You've just proved your worth. Your stories have always been deep. It tells a lot about how exceptional you are. God bless your heart.

Pick: Skar-freaking-lett!

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I've got to help my Frankenstein and my Skarlett campaign.

They are true writers.

Frankenstein:
Ah, the journey ends for me! It was worth it all through. Never knew I could piece together the entries I dropped until I tried.


Larrysun, a review/critique of my post, please. I would like to take corrections and improve my writing.

Congrats, OluwabuqqyYOLO.

Done, sir.

Selected Contestants:

1. OluwabuqqyYOLO

2. Gmike2Rule

Well, to review the stories:

Frankenstein: I really like the fact that you wrote your narrative from the perspective of a dog. And for someone who resides in Ikorodu and understands first-hand the insurgency of the Badoo cult group, I appreciate this work. But it would not be entirely right of me to choose a story due to personal experience, or relatable ideology for that matter. I am obliged to choose a work that leans more on the side of literature; and personally, I believe that's where OluwabuqqyYOLO's unicorn grew a longer horn at the snout. However, I still had to question my choice; indeed, I was sitting on a fence about what story to choose. Yours is a deep story, his a deep writing style. Here, I was in a quandary. And so, after reading both stories over and over, I decided to share among anonymous folk who appreciate good writings; unsurprisingly, it was almost a tie, but your opponent's story picked the lead still. Choosing between your story and your opponent's was the toughest decision I had to make.

You are a very good writer, there's absolutely no doubt about it, but you can be much better. I would love to read some of your works if you've got any. That big-headed OluwabuqqyYOLO was a diamond in the rough when I met him, but he has become so good that he gives me the creeps. Don't stop writing, Frankenstein, you've got it in you. You can only get better.

Skarlett: Yours was the first story I read. It moved me to tears. I should have selected it but for a little error. What you wrote was supposed to be a letter, which is perfect, but that letter shouldn't have contained quotation marks. Your opponent, Gmike2Rule, wrote something almost as heart-rending as yours. You both are amazingly talented. I feel so glad to have had you in my group. You are a wonderful, writer, Skarlett dear, it's so unfortunate that I had to choose. You write comfortably in almost any genre. You gained my respect the day you wrote that story about gunshot. Don't you dare give up writing; your decision may cause the third world war. Much love.

God bless you all.

LSD.

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nellaz:
DIS STORY LONG SHA, BUT I DEY FOLLOW EREMA WINE UR WAIST

It's indeed long.

muller101:
My father! It’s my father! He’s coming!” she quickly returned her breasts to their rightful homes.


Lolssssss very funny. Larry so those mellons get homes?

Don't mind this Larry.

PBeni:
Larrysun working his magic again.
Nice update...

Thanks boss.

lovelygurl:
I still think Rhoda is pregnant

And I think I might have an idea who her father is

We haven't heard of that greedy man since forever

Just thinking out loud

I hope you are right. Thanks for following.

nkemdave:
Ghen! Ghen!! Ghen!!!

Finally, the bubble is about to be bursted

What if the bubble can stand the prick of the pin?

multicash:
Nice story... This story started in 2015 and we are already in 2017, hopefully it will end in 2020.
Talented writer with impeccable skills, will follow and patiently wait...

It's a long-term project.

muller101:
Larrysun u are doing great. The story is captivating.nice work

I appreciate your kindness, sir.

lovelygurl:
Oh oh. Blackie is in trouble

Someday, every secret will later be exposed. It's all a matter of time.

LogoDWhiz:
Interesting.. Love this Larrysun....



This is hilarious Larry. Lovely use of words...

Thanks boss.

Pairing:

OluwabuqqyYOLO vs Frankenstein

Skarlett vs Gmike2Rule

I suggest you study your opponents' previous posts to know their strengths and weaknesses.

God bless you all, soldiers.

I retain Gmike2Rule.