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lumzybo:
... to the people talking about Karo, it's like you av forgotten one thing it's a gaddem story. Its all happening inside larry's head. Y'all shld take a chill pill.
Good job Larry and happy new month to everyone

Thank you, sir.

olawizkid:
Here is my number dude 08156080992

Dude?

Tattooboy:
Truth be told, the guy is good.

Thank yyou, sir.

macpetrus:
Another front page This super story hit front page every month

I have no idea.

ladeturner69:
black maria naa no worry all I go put ur name as the owner of the story
I feel this story should be more than this.

Okay. Thanks.

nkemdave:
Black and Basket, please teach that girl a lesson. Nice story #Larrysun

I'm not sure if they are teaching any girl any lesson.

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nimat158:
Oga Larrysun pls check adeeyo Victor on Facebook.

Checked. What should I be looking for?

Pearl05:
Pls which group are you talking about? Is the story not running here anymore?

It is.

Pearl05:
Larry please permit me to ask, is this story fiction or non-fiction. I strongly see it as non fiction.


You are talented indeed. Keep it up.

Cbella, come over here dear, am sure you will love this.

It's fiction. Thanks for following.

Darkcrisp:
But still, won't you be tempted to change direction? (just wondering)

I won't.

uniqueogo:
seriously I don't know why they are busy disturbing themselves and distracting Larry Cus this will make him think twice about the direction the story is taking but I hope not

No comment can affect my plot. It's good to discuss but the story has a definite pattern it's following. Readers can only guess what will happen next.

EfemenaXY:
In & out, on & off, neither here nor there

Any thing interesting happening in these parts?

Nothing big. Just doing what I enjoy best. How is life on your end? I've really missed you. Is there any way we can chat more comfortably?

treelz:
Larry try do mek dem use dat money na... D money go jaz devalue kpata kpata.....d way larry describe karo breast ehn..........dnt worry

Everything in its time.

grinface98:
What an intriguing story this has been so far. Well done, Larrysun!

Thank you.

Eddyella:
I pity basket,if he later find out dat rhoda is not faithful 2 him.

You can imagine, right?

ladeturner69:
at last I meet up oga Larry sun I dey feel you

abeg I fit put am for IG

Put what?

Adasun:
choi omo hw many men can love like basket





Ur hands up let me make count

Hands up.

EfemenaXY:
Hello Larry

Efemena!

Where have you been?

Darkcrisp:
So, I'm finally able to log in. The fault was from me, forgot my password. Thanks a lot for this very delicious book. The first chapters are such an epic start. Can't wait to see how this book ends. You're the best.
Five huge stars for B-square. (*) (*) (*) (*) (*)
You new fan, D. L. Biranen

P. S: Your diction is epic.

Thanks dear. We shall always discuss better backstage. It's nice having you here.

AlamienDagash:
is OK boss
you're one in a million

You're one in a billion.

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caspervenice:
I'm privileged to have met you at FOS
thank you sire

The feeling is mutual.

Koolcat01:
Kudos .... Mr larry no vez o , abeg add ds number to ur whatsapp library (LSD)..... 08160524821

Okay, sir.

AlamienDagash:
Great ¡!¡!¡!¡!¡

Larrysun pls I beg you not to cease updating regularly
still following up like Instagram

I'm trying my best, sir. Thanks for following...against all odds.

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This thread is getting interesting.

hardeygbolar:
Prologue

The loud echoes of incessant wails and cries hovered (resonated) all over (across) the four corners of the dimly illuminated room.The echoes although loud with a shrill couldn't be heard even outside the slaughter house (slaughterhouse) (An echo can't be loud with a shrill. Kindly rephrase).obviously,it was the voice of a woman in agony [Make use of the space key before beginning the next sentence, or the next clause after a comma - or any other punctuation mark for that matter] (It was obviously the voice of a woman writhing in agony).But alas,the strong wind blowing outside had made the words of the woman incomprehensible [Another poor choice of words].[s]outside the lone building of torture,the intensity of the winds had drowned the distant hooting of owls and cries of bats.The moon had gone into his hood,firmly hidden and sheathed bowing to mother nature.The tall overgrown trees which stood with great impudence all bowed as if paying some sort of obeisance to mother nature.The loud bolts of thunderclaps sneaked its way into the eerie night and the rain began in earnest pouring in large goblets into the dark night.[/s]

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Happy birthday to the queens. I celebrate your talents. May God bless you abundantly,

Between Skarlett and Gmike2Rule,

The two writers wrote something nice. Not great, but nice. I was actually expecting more from both writers; but I guess that's what a story of very few words does...one shouldn't expect too much.

Well, I have to pick one that I still consider better, so I pick Gmike2Rule. I personally consider it a story with better depth.