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Nmeri17:
boss tori don finish naa will try to be elucidate better next time

Isn't that ending a little bit abrupt?

Well, you've got a good sense of description, sir.

Rating: 4.3/10

stuff46:
Happy Birthday Sire. Wishing you all the best that life can offer IJN. Hurray!!!

Thank you, sir. I really appreciate your stopping to drop some words.

An0nimus:
Happy birthday Larrysun.

Thank you so much, sir.

Andrew114:
HBD LARRY

Thank you, Sir Andrew.

PrettySpicey:
Happy birthday, Larry Sun

Big sister! Thank you, ma'am. God bless you.

timpaker:
Happy birthday Larrysun..

Wishing you many more fruitful years ahead.

One day, I will grow up to write just like you

The great bard! Thanks a lot.

BobUg28:
Happy birthday LarrySun(the man with the golden pen). I have been an ardent follower to all your threads on Nairaland,tweeter and facebook page hence I must commend your effort, you are incredible , exceptional, extraordinary and incomparable.However, my prayer for you as you celebrate your birthday today is that God 'll continue to enhance your intellectual prowess beyond your imagination.Moreover, I pray that all your dreams and aspirations shall come true InJN...

Amen! Phew! This is awesome! Thank you so much, sir. I feel honoured to have your attention with my works.

Neyoor:
HBD 2 a fellow-pen pusher, may ur pen continue to glow..... Above all, may u live long to witness more of this

Thank you so much, sir. God bless you.

OMA4U:
Happy birthday, the great and ever brilliant writer, Larry Sun. May you know joy all the days of your life. Sound Mind shall not depart from you. Love shall abide with you forever.

Happy Birthday once again.

Awww!!! Thank you so much, brother! You're awesome! I'm so lucky to know you. Thanks a million and two times. God bless you, sir.

Wow! My Jumizie! Thank you so much, sis.

You're an awesome sister! And ! My picture!!! That's me! That's me! Oh, my God!

Cheers!

Wooooooow!!! I'm-I'm-I'm...Christ! I'M. SPEECHLESS!

Thronekid, knowing you is a great Blessing. This planet is so lucky to have you in it...and I'm luckier.

Thank you so much for this; it feels like you were present when I was conceived. You've known more about me than my diary.

I'm glad I've made a little influence; and it's a great joy to see you blossom into this amazing human being.

Your writing skill glitters by the day; it gets to a time when I feel like I'm reading my own work each time I come across your writings. You've proven your worth, sir. You're someone to reckon with.

God bless you, sir. And thank you.

Cheers,

Olanrewaju Oluwadamilola Sunmola
(Larry Sun)


P.S.: I'm not a chartered accountant. I've never prayed to become one.

Nmeri17:
^^^ cc eno ishilove larrysun kingzpen

you all esteemed ladies and gentlemen have been employed as critics of the above short story

Kindly continue the story. I'm yet to get a full hang of it.

adeh39:
At last! Basket and Black are now students, I guess Black will enjoy going to school after some months.......But well who knows? I might be wrong.....

Still keeping my fingers crossed.


Larrysun the great writer........ Thumbs up for you ooo

Following till d end

You're awesome, ma'am.

labaski:
thanks larrysun and welcome back. hopefully, we'll get d updates in due time.. we understand u v issues outside NL and its important u settle dem as well.. we ll definitely wait for d next updates.. cheers..

Thanks for understanding, ma'am.

Slimzjoe:
Thinking of Robbing his Vice principal?? The Mr. Is in Trouble!

I don't like the man.

afamjb:
confirm....tank u for dis update

You're welcome, sir. Thank you for reading.

ojjp:
Larry u r a creative writer, and wt ur humility n courtesy, u ll go far in life.
Great wrk.

Thank you so much, sir. I was brought up like that.

arabaribiti:
So people no go church I no mention name but thank God for the origin dat was given to larrysun, after 2 bottles he came back to his senses

God gracious!

Coldfaya:
Play; proceed. Nice one LarrySun

Thank you, bro!

Acekidc4:
Following You Bumper to Bumper Ogbeni Larrysun!!


Cool and Interesting Story!!

Thank you so much, sir.

Andrew114:
gud job lawrenzo(larrysun)

Lawrenzo? Lol! Thank you, sir.

COMPLETE BOOK NOW AVAILABLE FOR DOWNLOAD HERE:

http://okadabooks.com/book/about/black_maria_book_one/20094

larrysundynasty@gmail.com

Skimpledawg:
Tnx for d update boss.. More mb to ya brain...

And #btw, less replies and more updates

I didn't want to annoy anyone by ignoring their comments.

Niwdog:
You are welcome back larry. But i believe your hands were not tied cause you have been updating on your facebook fan page

I've actually been updating my complete first story The Brand of Cain.

ibnbazz:
Yay FTC after a long while of updates. Thanks man. I appreciate you. Thumbs up

More thanks to you, sir.

WHIZKIDEFE:
Larrysun. You are a blessed writer. Keep the good work on. Thanks for the new updates in anticipation..

Thanks so much for reading, sir.

arabaribiti:
Bros I really love you story but most time you don't finish one before starting another one pls watch it bro

I'm so sorry about that, sir. Actually, the other one I currently started is just a short story. It's not going to affect this one in any way.

I've made it a mission to always write a short story after every completed chapter of Black Maria.

May God give me the strength.

Kitme:
Hi, Larrysun!
This is one hell of a story, I spent less than three hours to savour it all.
I like the way you syntactically construct your sentences, you do have a good way of stringing words together. Your imageries are so on point.
I don't know if you're working or studying, but finding a way to write and update this story, despite your busy schedules is amazing.
Did I tell you, that you're incredible? Like very very incredible? Well you are!!
Most writers would give their audience the 'I have a life outside NL' when people pestered for updates, the way you humbly replied those followers/reader was great!
I'm here to learn from you, Boss! The plot is enthralling, and your description was very nice!
More intellects! And that ink of yours will be refilled always, Your wisdom would never dwindle. Greater heights (I mean greater heights!) awaits you!
You're one fiery burning ball of talent, and WE ARE pleased to have you here on NL
So much love!
KIT!

WOW!!! I'm sooooo speechless! This is too much for me alone. Kitme, you're an awesome person. I'm so glad to have you here, ma'am.

Thank you so much, ma'am. You have no idea how much your comment has lifted my spirit. I'm indebted to you, ma'am. Your encouragements has renewed my strength. Thank you so much! I promise never to disappoint you with this story.

domido:
Dis story, oti wa pa ju.

Thank you, Dom.

benzics:
Wow Larry. You are there!

Thank you, sir.

Rapfrick:
I have a feeling d@t Rohda is mr salami's only child

I don't have such feeling.

Dahprech:
Hey larrysun kom and update o;-)

I've updated.