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Missmossy:
Nawa ooo this is too inhuman, i have missed a lot. Thumbs up Lleigh, such a captivating piece.

Hi missMossy long time. Thank you for reading and commenting.

Kaycee625:
those bidders are inhuman
money gives power
power intoxicates

exactly Kaycee625 we see that happening all over the world.

Thank you for reading and commenting, much appreciated.

stephenGee12:
Title: The Last-Gang Standing (crime)
Producer: meneski
Starring: apollux, solohu19, stephenGee12, evajael, mhizgap, biafrabushboy,chipapii, oyinprince, leigh01, rachaelfst, theblessedman, jimkardashian, bibi234, pamelB and many more NL writers untold.
https://www.nairaland.com/3854102/last-gang-standing-crime/11#58062157
Abuout: the first ever write along of its kind. The story is about guns, blood, love, betrayal, drugs, fight for power, survival of the fittest, maintaining order, family life and many more.

Williams a No.1 assasin is hired by the alliance of five Dons to take down a common enemy. But he his betrayed by the people who hired him. With his ego all botched up from the betrayal. The assassin sets out to take out his contract, his client and anyone who stands in his way.
Five dons fight for power but must unite to take down three common enemies(williams the assassin they betrayed, Isaac Nystrom the target who somehow resurrects from a headshot by a .50 caliber bullet[yeah u guessed right a armour piercing bullet] and the C.I.A baby agency S.A.T.A.N) before they can resume the battle for turfs.
An enraged upcoming Don of hardware that has control of gun flow anywhere in the world. Now he must take down the five dons, the assassin and S.A.T.A.N.
S.A.T.A.N an agency set out to stop the oncoming fued and probably nab out all the criminals from their book.
Which group would suceed, which group will unite to take down a common enemy.
Watch out in this breatgtaking write along first if its kind ever on nairaland.

stephenGee12 my moniker is Lleigh not leigh01 thanks

Chapter 40

Lucien had given precise instructions on how the three of them should be presented to the bidders. He wanted a repeat of the performance she had put on with the three Dubai men, if she could top that would even be better.

Her two companions were the offspring of the tallest dog in the world, he stood at 7ft on his hind legs, and these two beat their father by an inch. They were an impressive sight to witness, their vicious streak came from their mother’s genes. No surprise there, he thought wryly.

The two coming together had created beautiful offspring, one of their siblings had just been sold for $1.3million.

Hennessey and Coke had not seen Linda for three days, so they were cranky, frustrated and desperately needed to unload. They had become used to having their needs met during the time she had spent with them and they needed that right now.

Their balls were full and they desperately needed to empty them, they were not used to abstaining. Males whatever the species were the same, when it came to unloading, Lucien thought to himself a rare smile on his face.

While she had been in and out of sleep on the journey he delivered the news.

‘Linda you will be on your own when we get to our destination,’ he had said to her.

‘What do you mean?’ she had asked.

He could also see also the panic in her eyes.

He didn’t not respond to the question and decided to keep quiet.

When they arrived at the warehouse where the auction was taking place he led her to a quiet corner and left her there for a few minutes.

‘It’s time to say goodbye Linda.’ He said to her quietly.

She had looked at him in confusion.

‘Goodbye?’

‘What is happening to me Lucien’ she asked.

‘You are the person being auctioned Linda, you better pray you get bought by a humane person and not a sadist’ he had told her.

‘Actually you should hope you don’t get bought by someone like you’ he grimaced.

'Imagine if someone like you bought you and had a tantrum?' he asked her.

‘What?’ she had screamed.

‘Why, why are you people doing this to me?’

‘I did everything you told me to do.’ She started crying desperately.

He almost felt sorry for her, until he saw him glaring at him. That had been enough for him to firmly and swiftly say his goodbyes and leave Linda wondering what had happened to her.

He dragged his mind and focus back to what was going on onstage. He had asked for the last batch of pheromones to be used on her 20 minutes before she went out and he had ensured there was something extra in the food she ate that day.

A powerful aphrodisiac, Linda would have no choice but to perform as her body would be in a super enhanced state.

Whether Linda liked it or not she would be giving the performance of her life tonight.

This lot, LOT 66 would be the Lot auction people would talk about for years to come.

Well only certain people of course, this auction was not open to members of the public.

Lucien wanted a quick frenzied action packed bid war. That would only happen if the buyers were made to believe that what they saw was something they craved. And he was sure they would, when they saw the three of them together.

He had asked for Linda to be placed near a table in the middle of the stage.

Lucien signalled that they should be let out and there was a stampede as two 60kg 7ft animals rushed to the stage to where Linda was standing.

They both reached her at the same time, knocking her down on the stage floor, next to the table. They both put their front legs on her at the same time, each one trying to claim ownership. They snarled viciously baring their teeth and pushed each other around, with Linda the one caught between them as they fought.

It was akin to watching the two of them fight over a doll, only in this case the doll was Linda.

Due to the time they had spent away from her, the pecking order had been lost and the fight for dominance soon ensued again.

The room gradually fell silent, even the auctioneer did not have to give a running commentary. The ensuing fight in progress was enough to relay to them what was happening. The men watched in awe the fight for dominance unfolding in front of them.

It held significant relevance to the men in the room as most of them would be having such battles with their new merchandise; showing them who the boss was.

This would be the last time such a fight would happen as henceforth they would always be together.

But for now each one wanted to go first as they both tried to pin her down.

The room was deathly silent, the only thing marring it was Linda’s sobbing. With no Charles or Lucien to beg or scream a, all she could do was sob.

This did not have the effect she wanted; as in the perverted world of human trafficking sobbing was a ‘must have’ requirement.

When it finally dawned on the men in the room what was happening before their eyes the bids started in earnest.

By the time the first one had forcefully mounted her and entered her from behind the bids were 300K. When the second one pulled out the steak from Linda, while the first was still going strong, making Linda moan in pleasure, the bids had reached 800k.

The bidding war matched the frenzied activity being played out on the stage.

The girls in the room who had just been sold to their new owners were repulsed, a few fainted, and a few threw up.

The rest were in a temporary state of shock and awe, the awe stemming from could this really be happening? They hoped and prayed nothing like that would ever happen to them.

A few of the girls were threatened with that kind of treatment, if they did not s8ck their new owners there and then to satisfaction as the men enjoyed the show happening on stage. None of them wanted that kind of treatment and swiftly got on with the demands that had been placed on them.

By the time the other one had its way and Linda was moaning again in ecstasy the bid was at 1.2 million.

When Linda screamed wildly with her multiple orgasms the bids hit 1.8million when the two finished and pissed on Linda marking her as theirs the closing bid was standing at 2.3million dollars.

The room went silent and all eyes turned to the man on the phone at the back of the room.

When the bid reached 800k Lucien noticed that someone at the back of the room kept on upping the bid, he was on the phone which meant that he was an agent for the real bidder.

This continued until the bid closed at 2.3 million dollars, whoever bought Linda and her companions must have seen something special in the trio. It did not bode well for her as the person would want their money’s worth from such a big investment.

‘Oh well, that is Linda’s problem now,’ he thought.

The auctioneer looked at Lucien in shock, he hadn’t expected it. Lucien hadn’t either, shame he could not retire just yet.

Lucien looked at the buyer with interest, the face filed away for future reference; he went into the side room with the auctioneer to get his fee and left.


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The successful bidder, who was jet lagged from his recent trip to New York had initially called up his boss to say he had found something special and surreptitiously started to record the auction when Linda had arrived on the stage.

‘Wow that is interesting,' the voice on the other end of the phone said.

‘I want them.’ The voice said when Linda’s companions jumped out.

'OMG, that is so erotic' the voice continued.

‘Who are we bidding against?’ the voice asked.

The agent replied, ‘The men from our part of the world.’

‘Shit’ the voice said, ‘that means they are going to keep on going till they get them.’

‘They are perverted bunch.’

The agent muttered in agreement, ‘I couldn’t agree more boss.’

It was obvious to the agent, by the heavy breathing on the other end of the phone, that the owner of the voice was getting excited with what was being relayed via the internet.

The agent wasn’t surprised when he heard the voice say ‘Lola get over here and come and sVck me off.’

He had a good idea as to who was performing that particular job, from what he had been told she was getting very good at it.

The frenzied bids continued as they watched woman on the stage entertain them.

The agent kept on upping the bid, at $1.5 million there were only 4 of them left.

At $1.8 million there were 2 of them left.

At $2 million it was still the same two.

Till the voice at the other end of the phone told him to go to $2.3 million, the other bidder dropped out. All eyes turned to the bidder, wondering who the man was on the other end of the phone.

‘Going, going, gone. Sold for 2.3 million, to the man at the back.’ They heard the auctioneer confirm.

‘Lot 66, sold for $2.3 million.’

‘Wow, just look at that performance, my parties will now become legendary’ the new owner said excitedly.

‘I can confirm we have the bid.’ The agent said into the phone.

‘Great, how long is it going to take you to bring my new playthings back home?’ the woman on the end of the phone asked.

‘By the way, I want her branded, tell them to put ‘2dogs b!tch’ on her arse, she continued.

‘Get back here as soon as you can.’

‘Lola get back here and sVck me again’ he heard her say as she ended the call.

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The next update is being uploaded thanks

hormobolanle:
Humans can b heartless o. imagine d kind of maltreatment Linda is going through even if she has done evil in d past deris a word called MERCY
pls mercy I plead on her behalf

Weldon Lleigh

Thanks hormobolanle

mutuality:
Am wowed.... I mean, this is a brilliant writeup... You'd hardly find me comment on any thread as am part of the chop and clean mouth crew ... But this is just wonderful... The suspense ehn... My heart was just beating anyhow... Nice work here miss... Lemme head over to 'the club' and see wat you've got in store.....

Hi mutuality thank you for coming up for air. I appreciate it.

I will be back to the club soon to erm....whip Remi into shape

ladyverere:
Wow! Babe you came back with a resounding bang!! I am so speechless. I only saw your mention last night and it took me a while to get back into the story and I have been reading ever since.

That such horrendous and sadistic pleasures of the flesh exist boggles my mind. Human beings! Goodness!

Charles or Lucien, whether one and the same or not are both demons I think. And I also believe Lleigh is referring to dogs as the beasts Linda has unwittingly attached herself to.

However, 1 thing I do know is that, though God has given a lot of power to Lucifer, that power does not include seeing into our minds. Only God has that power. Only Him can really discern our thoughts even before we think it. So I believe Charles is merely reading Linda's thoughts through her facial expressions.

All in all, I doff my lawyer's wig for you dear Lleigh. Such a great, sustainable talent.

ladyverere
Thank you for coming back to the story.

Human beings are fascinating creatures is all I can say. My mind boggles.

Linda she is something else

Oyindawealth:
wow!! Welcome madam Leigh. You actually won the award of 'the most Torturous personality of Nairaland' Wit dat ur story 'The Auction' lol wow!! Welcome madam Leigh. You actually won the award of 'the most Tortuous personality of Nairaland' Wit dat ur story 'The Auction' lol

I know...i better go and lift some more iron

1marking:
Hmm still waiting 4 more updates

1marking you always want updates...

SlimBae:
Is that where her story ends? I thought Linda was her only child, she must be feeling miserable.

Slimbae linda has a sister and mum at home in owerri.
The mum had thought she had been speaking to her daughter.

If only she knew what her daughter has been upto

The Auction by Lleigh

https://www.nairaland.com/3447082/auction

It is a story of revenge, deceit, murder, the supernatural and betrayal.

LINDA: The biggest runs girl in town, since runs began. She has done some evil things in the past and present in the name of RUNS. She uses strong juju to enslave her men. She has 4 men in her juju enabled clutches. Then she meets the ‘One’ Charles, who turns out to be anything but the ‘one’.

CHARLES: A hedge fund Director; with a house on Banana Island. Who wooed Linda before he turned against her and started torturing her. He knows everything about Linda, but why is he torturing her? Who is he? He has now left her.

LUCIEN: Sounds like Charles, acts like Charles, but does not look like Charles. He also knows everything about Linda. Who is he? He is about to Auction her.

The Auction: We are now at the Auction, who will Linda be sold to and what price will she go for?

PS.......Contains scenes some people might find disturbing.

surddick:
buh seriously if the babalawo juju was potent, she should be able to control those dogs abi if the juju were to be for a real man would he jst be for the sex alone? Atleast she wud control the man so she shud be able to control the animals jare. Jst saying.

Very true observation surddick.....

However..........

SlimBae:
What about Linda's mum?

Hi Slimbae her Mum is back home.
Remember she told Tunde her Father is sick and he went looking for her

Adesina12:
Lleigh please don't stop torturing Linda I beg

Let her companions tear her apart

Adesina12 I fear you o

EvaJael:
Me too.Lleigh,I braved up a bit

Hi EvaJael....thank you.

Kimkardashain:
oh i weep 4 linda,

Hi Kim....

Well we all do, she has been a bit silly.

Adesina12:


My favorite kind of lifting is that no one must talk while I am doing it.
I have two presentations in my workplace
I'm kinda busy....popcorn l8ta

I am just protecting myself from Charles with the lifting. Plus to make sure Remi is doing his 'cough' lifting too

Lexxyla:
Here i am not even knowing what to type or saw.

This is judgement season for Linda. E don pass normal payback

Lleigh, you are a rare breed among nairaland writers. I dey fear you biko.

i am just a little girl o.................

but thank you Lexxyla

jagugu88li:
Vladimir Putin once said "It is not my job to forgive, but that of God. My responsibility is to deliver you to God"

Charles is doing exactly that here.

jagugu88li I definitely like Vladimir's way of thinking....

tonye72:
You do fascinating work, do consider commercialising your Art

Ciao

Hi tonye72 thank you for your kind words.

I will, thank you.

Tinu02:
@lleigh I don't know why you are apologetic about ur work... writing is an art you can be crazy with it. Dan Brown is not apologetic, your story is not for the faint hearted. You are doing an amazing job.

Hi Tinu02.... thank you for your kind words...

I also thank you for coming to read and comment

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Lucien watched dispassionately off-stage, as the other items of stock went under the hammer, it was a shame but he could not help them.

Some other time maybe, all those poor girls being sold to the highest bidder, as if they were objects or items to be traded with like cards.

It was a soul destroying business not for the sellers or the buyers; only the merchandise. Some of the girls, had really been just that, girls, young enough to still be in school.

He was focused and had to on the mission at hand and that mission was to sell Linda and Company to the highest bidder, get out of here and prepare for the next one.

He stopped his mind wandering and turned his eyes back to the stage.

‘We will now have a break, gentlemen.’ The auctioneer said.

That word was really out of place where they were, Lucien thought wryly. None of these men were gentlemen. They would not be gentle breaking in the girls they had just bought.

No, they were not gentlemen at all.

‘If you want to put a sign of ownership on your new piece of merchandise, we can offer barcoding, branding or tattooing. Please feel free to take up our offer, it’s on the house.’

‘Once you have decided on which one to go for, please go over to John in the next room and tell him what you want.’ The auctioneer said.

The lights dimmed and some men dragged their new playthings to John. The option they chose dependent greatly on their degree of sadism.

Lucien turned his attention back to Linda, where she was standing looking confused as to what was going on.

Lucien had separated Linda from her companions; he wanted to ensure that they travelled separately to the auction. It had taken them two days to get to the location of the auction.

When they had arrived onsite, he had placed them in crate close enough to Linda, so they could smell her but not touch her. That was making them crazy, they had been making strange noises either in frustration or from being kept in an enclosed space. He wanted them that way, as it would help to showcase her in the best possible way later on when her spot was up.

She was dripping in expensive jewels and he wanted to recoup the cost of that at least.

After that fateful night with the three Dubai men, he had moved Linda into the room for two days so that she would get acclimatised to the world she would be living once she was auctioned off.

She had believed Charles when he said that her time with them was limited, if only she knew.

She had come out that day looking weak and exhausted; the other two occupants on the other hand had looked jovial, happy, friendly and sated; it was obvious who had been on the receiving end of exertions.

The male animal irrespective of the species were definitely more amenable when they had their fill of s£x.

They would go crazy when they saw her and hopefully they would give the people in the room another spectacular performance tonight.

He had told the handlers what to do, after today there would be no need to use the pheromones any more as they had been together in the same room, day in and day out. They had eaten and slept together, so they should be used to each other.

Linda still hated them, she was blaming them for something they had not been involved in. He really could not understand the ladies who tried to force men with spells, it was so wrong. He never professed to understand woman anyway, they were just way too complicated.

Unfortunately for Linda, the spell her unscrupulous babalawo had done was extremely potent, what he had promised her was that the ‘he’ would never leave her, would always be by her side, would be protective and look after her was true.

Linda just hadn’t reckoned on there being two of them or of the'he', not being human.

What was that Babalawo thinking?

The current generation of Babalawo’s would do that just for the fun of it, to see if it would work. Human beings were naturally curious.
If he could take part in an experiment like this, Lucien was certain that most bored unscrupulous Babalawo’s would have jumped at the chance for their own private entertainment.

They certainly don’t make Babalawo’s like they used to in the old days, Lucien thought.

He wouldn’t be surprised if he didn’t not come across an app for one soon.

The charm that was made for Linda, was soo powerful it would take death for it to be broken, the foolish girl had given up some of her own body fluids for the potion.

Lucien actually felt pity for Linda at that moment as her watched her on the stage, but he had been summoned and he had to do the job he had been tasked with.

He just wanted to get it over with and go back to his peaceful life with his roses, without people calling upon him for help.

He sighed deeply and made a note to look into a new rose he had found on the internet.

He sighed again and looked towards the auctioneer.

‘And now, gentlemen, the highlight of the evening,’ the man was saying.

Linda was led onto the stage, the shock on her face was priceless.

She had been stripped of her clothes, Lucien had told the stage hands she wouldn’t need them. Her breasts piercings had a chain looped through them, the same chain was looped through the piercings on her labia.

Her other piercing glinted under the light, the chain ended on the black collar around her neck. Her legs were still in chains, Lucien had insisted on them as he did not want her getting any ideas. Plus it could get messy if her companions thought she was running away.

Lucien could tell that Linda had not expected to be on stage. To be honest she would not know where she was.

He had taken her out of ‘the room’ and sent her back to her room and told her to wash and eat. The food had contained a mild sedative that had kept her out of it for the two days it had taken them to travel here.

‘Where is Charles?’ Linda had asked him.

As he waited for the sedative to kick in, he wasn’t really in the mood for talking.

‘He is gone Linda, you will never see him again.’ Lucien said.

She looked sad and weary, when he said that.

‘I thought you would be happy. You got what you wanted.’

‘Why are you looking so sad Linda?’ He had remarked at her sad expression.

He took his mind off the past and returned to the proceedings on stage as he heard the auctioneer talk again.

‘Gentlemen, I bring to you Lot 66.’

‘A bit of an unusual piece, she comes fully pierced for her new owner’s pleasure.’

He pointed to all the piercings Linda had on her.

Some of the men looked disinterested, they had been to a lot of these auctions and most of them were jaded.

‘There is nothing overly special about her,’ were the comments that floated over to Lucien off stage.

‘However the piece de resistance, are the two companions she comes with, they are being sold together as..one lot.’ The auctioneer said, as he watched their reaction.

The men in the warehouse perked up, thinking that they were going to get three items for the price of one.

‘The three of them will make a great entertainment piece or even a legendary party feature. Your parties will never be the same with this trio. Or better still rent out the trio from time to time.’

‘The options of use are not limited at the moment. Or just use her on her own, the decision is yours.’ The auctioneer stated, as he warmed to his theme.

‘You could even make a return on investment if rented out in the right fashion.’ He continued.

A few of the men in the room perked up at the word ROI, who wouldn’t.

Lucien smiled, wow this man can sell anything he thought. I bet he can sell ice to the Eskimo’s he thought.

‘Bids for Lot 66 will start at $150k.’

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Chapter 39

THE AUCTION

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just to let you know Linda must have tried to do something to me, as my document would not load in word. It said file corrupted this document can't be opened.

believe you, I nearly cried. But I called Charles and Lucien sort out my corrupted files and I found a way.

I said, NO. Linda your story will be told and I found a way to retrieve my work.

Coincidence OR.....................

anyway here it goes...

jagugu88li come see juju. Adesina12 please bring popcorn

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TBC

Adesina12 i see you.

where is my popcorn? or else.........................................

marvwhite:
Lleigh how can you let such grave suffering befall someone?

She might have done some grave things,but dont you think she has suffered enough? Two days banging

now she's going to be sold off like some rag(well,she's now a rag)

anyways,you warned us(me in particular ) not to continue the story if we cant stand human torture(but this is HELL),but i did yield to your advice(when you done carry go meet babalawo make i nor leave your story so)............

ALL AM TRYING TO SAY IS YOU ARE DOING A GOOD WORK......keep it up ma'am


#fromYOurBiggestFan

Hi marvwhite I laughed at your babalawo pun

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.

1marking:
more updates pls

1marking updates coming...soon.

Today or tomorrow evening I am part of the auction envoy.

Kimkardashain:
Lleigh cum and update oh,
where is dat my sister?

Erm....Charles is talking to me at the moment please bear with

ladySuperb:
OP ...
The advice I will give u is that delete some of the parts of the story.......remove them...

That's what TiffanyJ does.

Hi ladysuperb

Is that delete pivotal parts from here on nairaland.

It is so maddening to see your work somewhere else. Now you see why stories don't get finished here.

Maybelconor I hope you sort it out

Lexxyla:
Nice storyline kim. Stop giving attention to haters. Their hatred is just a form of their acceptance of your being better than them and should serve only to encourage you on the need to improve on some few obvious lapses of yours.

You are still doing great considering the fact that you are not a writer. Not so many people who just write for fun can summon the courage to start a project like you did.

Divepen1 has highlighted the things you need to improve on. It will help you build your skill and boost your rating here on nairaland. You might also want to adopt Lleigh's (that girl ehn) approach of mentioning your readers on every update, dem no go get choice than to comment.

Let me go look for somewhere to buy popcorn and beer. I dey follow.

Lexxyla thanks for telling me off I was only doing what I saw others do. Believe I was scratching my head why people were not reading it or commenting.

As I said Kim if you like writing continue, it will help you improve.
Off for some tea

Jman3:
Hi Lleigh....glad you will be back VERY soon. I have missed this thread so much. Hope Remi doesnt have a potbelly now.

Never Jman3...i have been working out with him at the gym

Jman3:
Wow! Stunning! Lleigh! What a mind you have! Steven King has found a partner!
It is shocking the things Linda has done (the few that have been revealed). Nevertheless, the level of systematic breakdown and destruction of her mental, emotional and physical condition by Charles/Lucien is staggering! Diabolical ! She has been reduced to less than nothing! Even socially no one would believe her even if she is able to live through the ordeal and tell. Charles/Lucien must be grandmaster chess players.
I am almost upset at her level of sufferring! Almost but not quite. Instead i feel sorry for her.
Lleigh, you should be running out of ideas now, but i suspect you still have a few surprises! Where is Charlene?

Hi Jman3 how are you?

A few people are feeling sorry for Linda.

We will move into the auction this coming week. Some questions will be answered. (Some ....)

Ah Charlene.......where is she

But I appreciate you stopping by and taking the time to comment.