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queenitee:
LleighLleigh would help her when it's time

Hmmm Linda o Linda you have been a bad girl.

@KimberlyWest please check your email thanks

jagugu88li:
Lleigh help !! What's the meaning of......say.....watermelon fall on you? That "fall on you".....is it a way a wishing someone to get something in abundance or is it meant to say the watermelon must hit you hard?

Adesina12.....

I have no idea.....it all depends on context
Adesina12 please come out of ghost mode and interpret o

Ansasan:
Oh Linda!!!
Thanks for the mentions lieigh and for
writing.

You're very welcome Ansasan

Precial419:
Thanks 4 d mention, jux saw it. No one deserves dis kind of punishment no matter hw cruel bt dats hw life is even innocent ones suffer unjustly bt dis is unimaginable. kudos to u. disa ya worka isa excellenta.

Hi Precial419 that is so true about the innocent suffering. Don't get me started.

Thank you for reading and commenting

Queensiju:
I think Charles/Lucien is a demon that some people called upon to help punish the killer of their loved ones. But.... Wait ooo, is there no room for repentance or something like dat, ?cuz dis affliction is too much to befall a human and a woman at that. I can't imagine sittin down to write something soooooo..... Horrific, scary, terrifying. Welldone Leigh.

Hi Quernsiju

Women sometimes are not the weaker sex. They have the capacity for evil and violence.

But thank you for reading and commenting. Thank you for your endorsement

emmynku:
Leigh this work is masterful,your suspense creating ability confirms your raw talent. This is a superb short thriller in all sense of it. Even your prolonged and protracted updates is suspense too. Nicework,all the characters have their work cut out for them. Pls note help d readers make sense of it all,do not over prolong. 7.5/10.

emmynku thanks for reading and for my grades
Much appreciated.

It will all become clear in the end.

KimberlyWest please check your email thanks

@KimberlyWest please check your email

AyamConfidence:
Okay I've gatta drop this before retiring... It has been a thrilling read all through.... I've had my heart in my mouth at times...I've been here for hours mehn but I must say it's worth it

Well Linda is finished.... I just thank God it doesn't get this bad in real life...I wouldn't wish her suffering to my worst enemy

Tunde is finished too...good riddance to very bad rubbish

I just hope Enitan and Dele find happiness

Lleigh I thank you

Jagugu88li that kept sharing each episode....danke

Adesina12 a.k.a popcorn chief...I greet you sir

Confidence is riding along till the end of the story

Now lemme catch small sleep before daybreak

AyamConfidence thank you for such a lovely verdict. And also thank you for reading and commenting.

Linda has suffered...life e get as it be sometimes.

5.

Name: Lani Leigh
Location: Lagos
Blog: haven't thought about it, but pondering
Genre: Supernatural thriller/suspense
Books: None yet, hoping to publish
Books I am writing: The River, The Auction, The Club(on nairaland)

we now have nominations for Hennessey and Coke....great

They actually look nice.

update by Lleigh

Continued

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‘Come closer to me little one, let us read that story’ he said, as he held up the book and opened a random page.

He was nice, this Uncle did not have anything that pricked my bum bum.


I moved nearer and basked in the scent of his aftershave, it wasn’t something I had experienced before.

Was this how Daddy’s smelt like?

It was the kind of scent that made me feel warm, safe and protected.
My Mother never spoke about my Dad,

I felt nothing of it when he pulled me closer and lightly brushed his hand across my little hard buds.

I felt a bit strange and light headed, my buds tingled.

He was watching me intently, he saw the confusion on my face.

He brushed against then again.

‘Do you like it? He asked me, while watching me.

Something strange happened they became hard and heavy. I could feel them hardening through the fabric of my top as something stirred between my legs.

I saw him looking at my chest as the erect buds peaked against the fabric of my t shirt.

The area between my legs, where I wee weed felt strange and heavy. It ached, I felt like touching it to help relieve the strange feeling I was experiencing.

The Uncle kept on staring at me, he lifted my chin up so that I could see his face or for him to watch me I couldn't say.

He brushed his hands against them again, this time a bit more firmly. This time the stirring felt like an itch that I just had to scratch. I wiggled around on his thigh, to alleviate the strange itch.

‘How does it feel?’ he asked, watching me intently, as he brushed his hand against my cheek.

Like the child I was.

I felt confused and excited, but I felt good. I wasn’t being slapped or screamed at by my Mum.
‘It is tingling, Uncle. It feels nice.’ I replied.

I thought it was normal.

He moved his hand under my polo shirt and gently pinched my buds. My breathing changed, I felt strange.

But it felt so good, I felt liked.

This man was hugging me and making me feel good.

I was worried about my Mum coming out, but he kept on pinching my buds.

‘Do you like it?’ he asked me again; he spoke gently in my ear while watching me.

The scent of his aftershave intoxicating my awakening senses.

‘Yes,’ I whispered back at loss, I didn't understand what was happening.

Was he my Father? Was this how Fathers made their children feel better when they were sad?

‘Do you need me to touch you here?’ he asked me, as he pointed to the area where the itch was between my legs.

‘Yes please, Daddy please,’ the words unconsciously slipped out of my lips.

I wished he was my Dad, I had such a naïve view of what a Father was.

He put his hand there between my legs, he kept on touching me there, through my pants. Until all of a sudden the most extraordinary feeling came over me. I felt happy as this strange feeling washed over me.

I did not realise or understand what had just happened to me, all I knew was that this man could be my Daddy as he made me feel so nice and special.

While he was touching me right between my pee pee hole, something happened.


TBC

ujuka:
Nice work dear, keep it up

Thank you ujuka thanks for reading

surddick:
so she is seeing ghost for real.

She is seeing a ghost

surddick:
is she hallucinating or are they appearing for real

surddick she isn't hallucinating o.

Oyindawealth got it right

meneski:
critics go use me chop eba

Just write and forget your critics. Everyone has a story in them.

Don't rush ...just write. Even if you start with 500 words a day.

You and queenitee should collaborate. I will book my spot now

jagugu88li:
She said she is coming. Me....I danced all night and now I have given up. Adesina12, even you? You no try sha
***********
What does sha and gbadun mean?

jagugu88li samyfreshsmooth

I am working on it as we speak. Hope to drop update on the next couple of days. Latest Wednesday.

Tuham:
Thanks so much!
I really appreciate for making it to another round

Dedicated to my MOM and all the likes of me out there who are working day and night "in the right way" to survive and become something!

Very sweet Tuham ....more ink to your pen. Or rather more these days, more finger taps on your keyboard

Sonamjs:
Linda made me laugh. Fashion brand, she
is a bit dumb

Sonamjs that made me laugh

Creeza:
The descriptions are always superb. you get to see them in your mind's eye . I'm not too surprised as nobody does it better than the Queen.

Lani is that one rare queen of explicit detailing. More of the fear Factor. more and more.
just more I will say.
power words. She knows what we want and even as we cant get to say it, Linda
's pains keep us refreshing the pages. She gives it to us. Not hardcore though

Bravo! Lani. simply. I salute you.


And as for Linda's ordeal. I comment My reserve.


This story is already a blockbuster.

Thank you Creeza.

Adesina12:
Ohhk !!!

You are now partners in crime abi?
Jagugu88li ore mi o ya come and see your friend here
She don colabooo

Yes I have I hope you my people will come over too

Episode 6 Updated by Lleigh


“Allow the little ones to come to me” that was one of the inscriptions that caught my eyes. I read how he loved little children and how much they meant to him. Just while I was ruminating over this, I saw Mom pack the bed sheet and was moving outside. I later heard the door of the bathroom opening, and I knew she went to the bathroom. After a while, I heard a certain kind of rush. Mom quickly ran to the parlor breathing very hard.

To be Continued…

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I was immersed in my bible stories when I heard footsteps at the door, I laid down my book on the chair.

There was a knock on the door.

I looked through the window, a young handsome man was at the door. I had seen him before, he came to the house to see my Mum sometimes.

Whenever he came he was always nice and kind to me, bringing sweets and chocolates for me.

I walked as quietly as possible and I opened the door.

“Good afternoon Sir” I said, lowering my eyes in respect.

“Is your Mum around?”

“No” I said, forcing my voice to brim with confidence. I delivered the lie with a huge smile.

“Hmmm, are you sure?” He murmured, as his eyes darted into the space behind me.

‘Where did she go?’ he asked me, as he watched my face intently.

“Can I come in?” He asked me, with a soft gentle tone.

There was nobody to ask and since I had already told him that Mummy wasn’t around, I decided to act as Mum for that moment.
My Mum had always told me not to let strangers into the house.

“My Mum will beat me if I allow you inside the house.” I said, holding on to the door as firmly as my little and fragile arm would allow me to.

“Does it mean that your Mum is around?” He asked with his eyes wide open.

“No Sir, she isn’t around” I replied, my voice faltering.

‘I am not a stranger, I know you Mum very well.’ There was something about the way he delivered those words. He never went into her bedroom either, all the time he came to our house they were always in the parlour.

“Then you must allow me inside.” He said, as he pushed the door open and went inside.

I am in trouble, I thought to myself. I hope my Mother does not come out of the room.

I quickly and quietly shut the door and ran after him, hoping my Mum had not come out of the room she was in.

I found him seated in the parlor; he was reading my small book of bible stories. I stood beside the chair he was sitting in and wondered why he was in our house.

‘Here are some sweets I got for you,’ he said. I watched him as he opened his bag and brought out a case with various sweets in it.

‘Thank you, Sir.’ I said, excited at the prospect of having something for me once.

I kept my head bowed, trying to see if I could see footsteps by the door my Mum was in.

“Come and sit close to me and let me tell you a story.” The Uncle said.

I walked up to his side he carried me and placed me on his lap. The same way Fathers had their children on their laps in all the films and books I had seen or read. My legs were over his legs and my bum was not on him, but in the gap between his body and the side of the chair.

He put his hand between my laps and pulled me closer to his side and laid my head on his shoulder.

I felt so happy and loved.

I felt so special in that moment, this was the first time any Uncle had shown interest in me and my welfare and to even read me a story.

I was in heaven.

“Has anybody ever told you that you look beautiful?” He asked.

As his eyes went up and down over my body, I suddenly felt very self-conscious. I tried to wiggle, but he held on to me firmly.

“A lot of people tell me, but I don’t know what it means” I replied.

I wanted to open my box of sweets and see what was in them.

“Wow… it means that you are beautiful and you shouldn’t allow anybody apart from me to touch you. Do you understand?”

I looked at him in confusion.

‘Why would anyone want to touch me Uncle?’ I asked, with the innocence of a ten year old.

He stared at me intently, ‘People will try and take advantage of you.’

Was he my secret Father I thought to myself suddenly?

Was that why he was warning me about other people?

‘Come closer to me little one, let us read that story’ he said, as he held up the book and opened a random page.

He was nice, this Uncle did not have anything that pricked my bum bum.


TBC.........................................

BiafraBushBoy:
Sorry for the delay... I was preparing something great....

Now here is the news!!!

..The memoir of a sex slave was meant to ne a collaboration between myself and Writer Lleigh of 'The Club' and ' The Auction' join us on this exciting adventure. It promises to be a blockbuster!!! ☺.

Stay tuned for the next update!!

next update about to drop

Adesina12:
Dear Lleigh
I am following Bushboy everywhere he goes.
Thanks for calling anyway
I follow him just like I do to you

Adesina12 jagugu88li

Bushboy and I have joined forces on this piece of work...

Well done to everyone who took part.

To write anything is not easy.

But thank you to everyone who took part in the competition.

Please keep writing, we can only get better the more we write

Thanks kinwayne for organising this

BiafraBushBoy:
Sorry for the delay... I was preparing something great....

Now here is the news!!!

..The memoir of a sex slave was meant to ne a collaboration between myself and Writer Lleigh of 'The Club' and ' The Auction' join us on this exciting adventure. It promises to be a blockbuster!!! ☺.

Stay tuned for the next update!!

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queenitee:
Nine tailed fox

queenitee:
Nine tailed fox

I like that queenitee

marychommy:
kai d suffering is too much naaa pls have mercy on her pls am begging on her behalf. she went through all dis and still alive, she must be d cat of nine lives

She has a lot of lives. But she has taken some too

KissCODE:
where this guy?

Hopefully he will be here soon

Kamelot77:
hope Linda will nt suffer again in ur next update

My lips are sealed....